The Black Ship (Chapter 21) | HFY | A short Sci-Fi Story

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    The Black ship continues...
    If you've just found this story, I implore you check this playlist and start from the beginning: • The Black Ship
    This is the continuation of the story "The Black Ship" from Reddit. The original story ended abruptly, and no other chapters could be found. I hope you enjoy these new chapters.
    Author: u/EkhidnaWritez
    Link to chapter 2: / the_black_ship_chapter_2
    I'd love to know what you think of the story in the comments.
    The original Story details:
    author: u/[deleted]
    original story link: / oc_the_black_ship
    #scifi #hfy #scifistories1977

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  • @davidorf3921
    @davidorf3921 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +63

    And so a few select nobles cause Wyatt to realise he truly isn't a worthless commoner, nor is he any longer without friends, somewhere in the fleet a traitor is unknowingly approaching a tactical mine - A very nice chapter indeed

    • @tehpw7574
      @tehpw7574 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      *raises hand* What if the Traitor was present, all along? (and the term, "Traitor" itself is possibly misleading)? It would be too convenient for the Traitor to be one of the commanders in the meeting at the beginning of this episode... What if it was one of the girls (again, using the word 'Traitor' very lithely)?

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      @@tehpw7574 nope can't see it, well I suppose it could just possibly be the Princess but I find that highly unlikely, we had an insight into Redford's mind not long ago so it's clearly not him, If it were Cynthia she would have almost certainly done something to cause their mission to catch the Noirnavio to fail, likewise Clara would not have sent them to perform such a mission or would have done something at Woodshaft to disrupt the negotiations

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      Next chapter should be done soon!

    • @Soundwave119
      @Soundwave119 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I do find it interesting that Lucax is not part of the cabal. After all if 1 of the traitor's is 1 of 2 main people doing the searching for traitor's it would be easier to escape detection. There's too much evidence against either Cynthia or Clara being tratiors. It's unlikely that Juliana is a tratior due to how much she's trying to protect Wyatt and is a Windfield. A house that's seems to be eternally loyal to house Astor.
      If I were playing devils advocate I would say that if Juliana is a tratior, she wants to have Wyatt join Cornelius's side.

  • @pauldwalker
    @pauldwalker 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +44

    this is a satisfying chapter. Wyatt is not going to be a tool, but a willing participant.
    no doubt he’s going to surprise them all.

    • @R151NG5UN
      @R151NG5UN 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      No doubt he's going to ruffle more than a few feathers lol

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@R151NG5UN Maybe singe a few even, after all he might need to capture the traitor alive but he has knocked out a noble already with a single punch

    • @Soundwave119
      @Soundwave119 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      ​@R151NG5UN Wyatt rumb nobles the wrong way, never! 😂 It is not like he has bothered most nobles in the loyalist fleet getting so much attention from the royals when he is a commoner. 😊

    • @BertramRiedacher
      @BertramRiedacher 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Not just a tool, a weapon.

    • @pauldwalker
      @pauldwalker 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@BertramRiedacher I suspect his acting is going to be so good, that he'll fool his new friends.

  • @zachmorgan8988
    @zachmorgan8988 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +34

    Best line " instead of a decoy, how about a tactical mine"

    • @pauldwalker
      @pauldwalker 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      you just know that with this line, Wyatt is going to jump into the role with both feet forward.

    • @ThrobinHood34
      @ThrobinHood34 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      ​@@pauldwalkeroh he's definitely gonna hit the ground running with insults flying like an Eminem track 😂

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      Wyatt: I'm about to do what is called a pro gamer move.

  • @R151NG5UN
    @R151NG5UN 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +36

    On the train, heading to work and this video becomes available just as I lose reception.. longest 25 minutes of my life waiting to be able to listen to this awesome story!! 😅😂

    • @Erin-Thor
      @Erin-Thor 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      MOVE‼️ 🤣

    • @Odd_Interaction
      @Odd_Interaction 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      I’ve been staying close to the places where there is a strong data signal and strong WiFi.
      Unfortunately going between those places means intermittent data signal and WiFi.
      It’s like nails on a chalkboard……

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Chapter 22 is nearly complete!

  • @rickmyers3334
    @rickmyers3334 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +26

    I love the creative mind behind this series. Well written!

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Thank you, mate!

  • @Madsklb
    @Madsklb 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +24

    The Black Ship is one of the best stories if not the best stories ive ever listen to, maybe only beaten by "The Last Humans" and i hope that the writer would prioritze this storie above others seeing its soo good and well written

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      Chapter 22 is nearly complete!

  • @pajaf0341
    @pajaf0341 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Nice to come back to this after the relevations from Chapter 23. I wonder, if anybody following The Black Ship up until this point can catch any possible clues about the possible outcome of the traitor-plot... I seriously doubt it, even if in retrospect all postions in the council DO seem to be thougth throug in a sensible and cunningly realistc manner by the author. NO AI COULD COME UP WITH THAT KIND OF INTELLIGENT CONSITENCY chapters in advance... Nor could less talented writers compose such convincing webs of interests. I am impressed.

  • @evanbeers1644
    @evanbeers1644 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +19

    Yo that moment when he realizes is GOLD

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Thanks!

  • @jakubw.2779
    @jakubw.2779 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +13

    Nooooo, the cliffhanger...With such a badass words... jesus this series is so good. Can't wait for the next chapter

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Chapter 22 is nearly complete!

    • @jakubw.2779
      @jakubw.2779 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@ekhidna4 nice!

    • @Soundwave119
      @Soundwave119 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      This chapter's cliffhanger is tame compared to other cliffhangers in this story.

    • @jakubw.2779
      @jakubw.2779 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@Soundwave119 well i binge watched it till chapter 20, so didn't paid much attention to cliffhangers ;p

    • @Soundwave119
      @Soundwave119 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@jakubw.2779 the 2 biggest cliffhangers so far were on chapter 15p2 were it ends with Wyatt in critical condition and possibly dying. The 2nd one is chapter 20p2 were it looks like a Drazin is about to kill Wyatt but we know he must somehow survive.

  • @asiseeit2041
    @asiseeit2041 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Boom boom boom! The author has laid the tracks. Woodshaft ace, that’s perfect. Fact he’s almost healed great. This lil twist on the traitor great. Him being recognized, Winfield noble speaking out are all good builds. Love the story

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Chapter 22 is nearly complete!

  • @jdmajor3447
    @jdmajor3447 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +22

    MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEE As someone who has read 1000.s of books this is a awesome story :)

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Chapter 22 is nearly complete!

    • @daveturnbull7221
      @daveturnbull7221 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I'm the same - this for me ranks alongside any of the classic sci-fi/fantasy books I've read.

    • @johncasanova3047
      @johncasanova3047 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

      An awsome

  • @solidsteel3634
    @solidsteel3634 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    I wouldn't have thought that there would be so many incredibly talented writers on Reddit. I've spent the last four days listening to all the stories. But I also have to compliment @SciFi Stories , This channel is one of two where I have the bell activated. Highest respect to the writers and the operator of the channel.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Thank you! Scifi Stories truly deserves all the love he can get, too!

    • @solidsteel3634
      @solidsteel3634 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@ekhidna4You are the writer right? This is a real Space opera like the classic ones. It's awesome!!!!

  • @Spacemanlacey1
    @Spacemanlacey1 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    This whole series is excellent. Well written, well read & throughly captivating 👍

    • @scifistories1977
      @scifistories1977  8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      I'm glad you enjoy it! It's one of the best stories on the channel.

  • @danwhiteman2529
    @danwhiteman2529 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

    u/EkhidnaWritez 👍 Some mighty fine writing, you always leave us wanting more.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Thank you, mate!

  • @robertbemis9800
    @robertbemis9800 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +25

    Gordian knot meet Wyat Staples
    Wyat Staples meet…(snick)
    Sigh…
    We lose so many knots that way

    • @RebelMerc
      @RebelMerc 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      LOL that was a good one!

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Good one, mate!

  • @Shadow.Dragon
    @Shadow.Dragon 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Great episode! I can hardly wait to see the "tactical mine" go off! LOL!!!

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Next chapter will be done soon!

  • @Bwana_01
    @Bwana_01 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

    Someone tried making Wyatt a patsy. Called it!

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      Yup and Clara is not going to let that happen which I called LOL

    • @Soundwave119
      @Soundwave119 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I know several people back in chapter 17 thought Wyatt would be likely be implicated. I thought it was a possibility but more likely that the writers was messing with us. After all he more often than not in the like 8 chapters has been reading our comments.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Chapter 22 is nearly complete!

  • @stratometal
    @stratometal 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Excellent! Man this story just cranked its dial for intrigue a couple of notches. Love it.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Next chapter will be done soon!

    • @stratometal
      @stratometal 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@ekhidna4 Nice, thanks for the notification. Cheers!

  • @Revittize
    @Revittize 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    This was yet another great chapter. Didn't like the Nobels being stupid nobles at the beginning. I liked them including Wyatt in their little cabal. Wyatt's reaction was the Wyatt I came to know and love. His mask is back on. His tactical mind will be the tactical mine the Prince needs, just who will be injured when that mine goes off will be great to discover.
    Keep it up.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Glad you liked it! Chapter 22 is nearly complete!

  • @baracuda645
    @baracuda645 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Love this story! I've listened to it repeatedly in eager anticipation of the next chapter

  • @Wise4HarvestTime
    @Wise4HarvestTime 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Noice!!! The best chapter yet!!! The author is setting a really high bar for himself with this level of intrigue... I really want to hear about the drazan captains interrogation and I wonder how they could use the captured nobles from the black ship who had little choice but to do what duke draymore wants

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Next chapter will be done soon!

  • @juice6459
    @juice6459 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Absolutely loving this series!

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank you!

  • @davidturner4824
    @davidturner4824 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Great story, it has lots of imagination and even a possible romance.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Next chapter will be done soon!

  • @darrelleaf
    @darrelleaf 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    What? You left the best part until the end. Come on man..... This story... I don't know weather to laugh or cry. Wyatt is a crazy man but Loyal to the end.. Awesome chapter

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      They call me, Hanger. Cliffhanger.
      Next chapter will be done soon!

  • @davidstowe5652
    @davidstowe5652 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Episode 21 of the dark ship very interesting and I’m looking forward for 22, great work keep up the good job👍⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👍

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Chapter 22 is nearly complete!

  • @johncunningham4820
    @johncunningham4820 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    GREAT EPISODE . So much just happened , despite the lack of real action .

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Next chapter will be done soon!

  • @Soundwave119
    @Soundwave119 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    It's interesting to see how this chapter starts with the leading command staff that the Prince has having a meeting starting with the captured Drazin destroyer. I do love how Juliana roasts George Lintare about all his talking is torturing them. 😂😂
    Well I am somewhat surprised that 1 persons suspudion that the Quantum entanglement communication device was found in Wyatt's room turned out right. Interesting how Prince, Redford, Juliana, Cynthia and Clara are using this sloppy move to there advantage on the tratior. It's interesting that Lucax is not part of this secret plan.
    It was smart for Prince for not taking part of the meeting yo help keep the act up more effectively.
    I should have not been suprised that Wyatt's recounting his experience of being captured by the Drazin was recorded by Cynthia.
    I am in agreement with Juliana in thats a miracle that Wyatt is as fundamental as he is due to his PTSD. In different circumstances Wyatt would make a good Royal Marine. Now Redford, Clara and Prince can better help guide and mold Wyatt into a champion of the Principality and House Astor.
    I do like how Clara decides to take a page out of Wyatt's hand book by treating there situation with the traitors. By deciding to have Wyatt included in their plan to reveal the tratior. Especially since they would never expect Prince to include in him in his plan.
    I do like the funny scene where Juliana asks Prince if she can recruit Wyatt into her house and the Prince denied her request. Basically implying that he is intending to bring Wyatt into his house. It's hilarious how Redford teasing Clara for insisting to coming with him to explain there plan to Wyatt. 😂 It truly seems that Clara's catch phrase is "Shush you!"
    Wyatt's lucky his implant replacement was done while asleep. I do like Wyatt's thoughts on Clara and Cynthia after being with them for few weeks. I do love how surprised Wyatt is when he has a title as Woodshaft's Ace.
    I do like how Redford, Clara and Cynthia can better deal with Wyatt's emotional baggage with knowing it.
    I do love Wyatt's dumbfounded reaction that Redford bows his head to him showing his thanks for his actions controlling the Noir. I do love how Clara orders him not to blindly obay her brothers order. I do love how Wyatt almost to has a blue screen of death realizing that they consider him valuable to them and there using starfighter tactics.
    Great way to end the chapter with Wyatt deciding to put his own spin on their sneaky plan. 😊

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      I think the "Shush you" is the phrase Clara uses when she is embarrassed by others

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Chapter 22 is nearly complete!

    • @Soundwave119
      @Soundwave119 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      ​@davidorf3921 I agree it's a phrase Clara uses when she's embarrassed. Though at the same time, it's a phrase she often has used in the series and she's the only person to it. 😊

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@Soundwave119 I think she uses it kindly with people she trusts, she could order them as a princess but instead it's more of a request in a friendly manner so as to not really draw attention to her embarrassment. Also I think those that she uses that phrase with are not being rude it's more that they are quietly pointing out to her what might be small faults

  • @codyayres
    @codyayres 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    this is the best story i have heard in a long time and i keep wanting more. keep up the good work.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Next chapter will be done soon!

  • @stevebowman421
    @stevebowman421 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Great story, but damned if I'd fight for any of these "nobles".

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      A few maybe but not the ones Shafting Wyatt

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Next chapter will be done soon!

  • @sowhats.6100
    @sowhats.6100 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Thank you for another great chapter, very well thought out! I hope chapter 22 is out sooner than later... such a fantastic story.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Chapter 22 should be done soon!

    • @sowhats.6100
      @sowhats.6100 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@ekhidna4 So looking forward to it, thank you for all your work. Very talented.

  • @thisissparta1690
    @thisissparta1690 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    So many views and so few likes? I just don't get it? Incredible story each time I listen to it.

  • @pauldwalker
    @pauldwalker 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I did promise to buy the author a coffee, and I just created a ko-fi account to do so right now. Thanks to the author for writing the story and thanks to SciFi stories to bringing the story here for us to enjoy.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Next chapter will be done soon! I appreciate it, mate!

  • @RebelMerc
    @RebelMerc 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Another excellent chapter. The machinations of the nobles who hate Waytt and those that are the true traitors will come to bite them in the ass by the teeth of a commoner. While the intrigue and plans of the Royals and noble who have come to see Waytt as a friend are shining light within the stuffy upper class of nobleility. Whose ranks, for the most part, have become so bloated with arrogance, power-mad, over-bearing, self-absorbed, selfish, and disrespectful of those they should appreciate. In the end they wouldn't know what being truly noble really means if it punched them in their up-turned snoot.
    I wonder if a revolution is coming to the nobles... Of course, that would mean a true civil war as the very entrenched nobles fear losing their posh postisions of power. Which is not something the prince nor the principality could ill afford after the treachery of his uncle. It would be nice to see the nobles as a whole, actually learn a thing or two from Waytt about what it truly means to be noble.
    The future of Waytt is in the hands of our vaulted author and since he has yet to let us down I am positive that the further adventures of Waytt Staples will continue to a satisfying conclusion after many, many more chapters and much more intregue. It is a good thing our much loved author has created Waytt as such a strong main character for his strength of character will outshine most nobles and his honor will be one day seen without question or so one can hope.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Chapter 22 is nearly complete!

    • @RebelMerc
      @RebelMerc 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@ekhidna4Looking foward to it as always and thanks for keeping me updated!

  • @jefflytle5799
    @jefflytle5799 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I so enjoy this. was such reward to hear after a bad day at work

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Then I hope the next chapter will cheer you up more!

  • @nm0reira
    @nm0reira 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    What he is going to do next will make the 1 Vs 30 fighter dog fight look like the most "normal" and "basic" behaviour in the principality }:-)

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Chapter 22 is nearly complete!

  • @USMC0311CplJackson
    @USMC0311CplJackson 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Best cliff hanger so far!

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Next chapter will be done soon!

  • @MarkSmith-zg5hq
    @MarkSmith-zg5hq 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

    A bit of Wyatt Derangement Syndrome amongst the Royals.

    • @danwhiteman2529
      @danwhiteman2529 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      WDS 🤣🤣👍

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      Clara: We are being Wyattfied.

    • @Soundwave119
      @Soundwave119 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@ekhidna4 good one LOL! 😆 😂🤣

  • @yomogami4561
    @yomogami4561 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    enjoyed this chapter
    honestly this is my favorite story on this channel
    thanks

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Next chapter will be done soon!

    • @yomogami4561
      @yomogami4561 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@ekhidna4groovy

  • @lucasfitcher1983
    @lucasfitcher1983 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I don't comment much on TH-cam but i do look forward to hearing more of this story. Keep it up!

  • @maxfitz5977
    @maxfitz5977 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Who ever writing this keep it up I love this story

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Thank you, mate! I will!

  • @andrewlatex950
    @andrewlatex950 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    On MS Rotterdam heading to Aruba, purchased wifi plan so I would not miss the next chapter. This chapter was a better dessert than the chocolate soufflé in the grill room. Thank You for another fabulous installment, impatiently waiting for the next chapter. 😎😎😎😎

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I am happy that the story is enjoyed by so many! Next chapter will be done soon!

  • @viniciuslopesmodena
    @viniciuslopesmodena 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    A good day

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Next chapter will be done soon!

  • @rbishop9062
    @rbishop9062 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Tactical mine... yeah I think I like that.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Next chapter will be done soon!

  • @lotmyle5465
    @lotmyle5465 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    another great episode

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Next chapter will be done soon!

  • @arandomsystemglitch2398
    @arandomsystemglitch2398 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Wyatt really needs to notice more that with his abilitys and just the 1v30 if he got killed for it then the Woodside station or whatever it's called would gladly fully go against every noble no one wants to see someone like him go for some bs

  • @patbrownlee5274
    @patbrownlee5274 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I am realy loving the game play coming afoot, egaly waitng for next chapter best so far🙀🙀🙀🙀😻😻😻😻

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank you!

  • @elvisalpha
    @elvisalpha 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Another great chapter.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Next chapter will be done soon!

  • @snowwolf8186
    @snowwolf8186 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I am betting on Lukax being the trader. He said after Interrogating the comander of the battle cruiser, he knew nothing of the black ship's. But we found out from Urial hoax otherwise that the battle cruiser was most likely escorting the Nora navio. Also he could enter Wyatts room and hide it and find it at the same time. So computer records would show him entering only once. Much less be able to wipe them should it be necessary.
    As to why Wyatt shot Samuel Cayston. It reminded him of what he saw as a child. A noble selling out people to save his skin. And we all know happen after that.
    I do hope the Intrigue last for a while so we can see how many Wyatt gets.😊

  • @918_xDx
    @918_xDx 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    the first deep cover commoner

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Hah! Good one!

  • @Flintt123
    @Flintt123 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Very good Story, pls make much more. Im Addicted!!

  • @ik7578
    @ik7578 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I needed this today! Ty!

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      You're welcome!

  • @slowbutstilllearning9938
    @slowbutstilllearning9938 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Loving it , I need more!

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Next chapter will be done soon!

  • @Odd_Interaction
    @Odd_Interaction 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Okay, I will admit at the beginning when it seemed they were going to use Wyatt as an a mere tool I was raging mad.
    As a gesture of respect, I gladly and willingly bend a knee.

    • @LittleRed256
      @LittleRed256 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Well said, at the beginning I was speakless, upset then things changed I couldn't be happier. It's truly a roller-coaster ride for the mind. Nicely done, sir!

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Competent nobles are as scarce as honest politicians. Chapter 22 is nearly complete!

  • @allwaysriden7564
    @allwaysriden7564 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    One of the better stories thank you

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thanks!

  • @Ainos4ynot
    @Ainos4ynot 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    It's another awesome chapter... Thanks

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Thank you, mate! Chapter 22 should be done soon!

    • @scifistories1977
      @scifistories1977  5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      sorry for the late reply on this. Thank you so much for your super-thanks!

  • @daveturnbull7221
    @daveturnbull7221 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    This has got my poor braincell trying to do somersaults in two different directions at once... what the heck is Wyatt planning and how the devil is the author able to push my buttons so precisely?

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Chapter 22 is nearly complete!

    • @daveturnbull7221
      @daveturnbull7221 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@ekhidna4 I'm currently re-reading the 'Clan of The Cave Bear' series - IMHO this ranks alongside in how I find myself transported to the various locations.

  • @KrK-EST
    @KrK-EST 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Damit❗
    Allways wnding the episode on a good spot and it takes so long for another eppisode, thought all is a good spot 😅
    Definetyl my all time favorite story of all YT (only one other chan. story, tottally different type is close 2cond but everything else in YT is far far behind).
    Please have this stories episode 2 per week.
    (I will try to introduce this story to others, though YT is the only even remotly social networking site i am on. I also with no money aka only income is my diaability and it only covers rent and meds, try to find a way to donate to the creator as soon as i am able)
    FANTASTIC story.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Next chapter will be done soon!

  • @Riflemen123
    @Riflemen123 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    (Chapter 21)
    Redford: Wyatt we want to use you as bait to catch a traitor.
    Wyatt: So you want to use me as living decoy!
    Everyone: Yes...
    Wyatt: Can I be a tactical mine instead.
    (Chapter 22)
    Wyatt: Commander Redford can I have a vest and some explosives?
    Redford: Wyatt no, this can not be what you meant by "be a mine".
    Wyatt: For the Principality!!!
    Redford: Can you please go back to your more reserve self.

    • @scifistories1977
      @scifistories1977  8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      For the PRINCIPALITY!!! 🤣🤣

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      HAHA! Nice!

  • @nerysalguero3956
    @nerysalguero3956 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Holy shit I need more. This is so good

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Next chapter will be done soon!

  • @ashleykerridge8776
    @ashleykerridge8776 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I fel like its George whos the traitor or one of the commanders or its just some random member of the bridge crew

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Chapter 22 should be done soon!

    • @Soundwave119
      @Soundwave119 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Honestly, I think it might be Luhax. Its interesting that 1 of the 2 main people thats investigating for traitors, that he's not in the Prince's cabal.

  • @kazwright1233
    @kazwright1233 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Thank you ♥

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      😄

  • @AlphaNumerically
    @AlphaNumerically 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Oh yeah new episode time

  • @damirserbanovic
    @damirserbanovic 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    hohhhhh this is way to short we want more... more !

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Chapter 22 should be done soon!

  • @davidorf3921
    @davidorf3921 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Just in case anyone missed it the author has sais "Chapter 22 should be done soon!" so based on previous times they've said this 2 maybe 3 days (allowing time for #scifistories1977 to do the voice and images)

    • @scifistories1977
      @scifistories1977  8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I'm hoping to get chapter 22 either today or tomorrow.

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@scifistories1977 Out of curiosity assuming it's not an epic 1 hour plus chapter how long does it take you to turn to speech and add pictures and then upload ?

  • @frankmoore3598
    @frankmoore3598 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Just can’t believe a society could move forward with that mentality.

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Pretty much Russia under the Tzars

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      There's a reason why the Principality is one of the weakest human nations.

  • @r156pahlke
    @r156pahlke 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Wonder what tactical mine means????
    cant wait to find out.

    • @calvineulalio6654
      @calvineulalio6654 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Wyatt loves using tactical mines when he fights in his fighter. So he is saying he'll be a tactical mine by being launched by the Prince and waiting for the time the traitors shall reveal themselves and like a mine he shall lock unto them, and explode or bring them down.
      *Tactical mines: explosives that can be set in place usually in water to block a certain water way. To prevent ships from passing through. In Wyatts case its in space. It can be placed in a certain area for traffic and can use electro-magnetism to attach itself to a hull of a ship. To cause damage or cripple it.
      Hope this helped, sorry, so long...Aloha!

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Chapter 22 should be done soon!

  • @RustyEcks
    @RustyEcks 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Loving it!

  • @no_future9026
    @no_future9026 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    An indication of good writing is the evocation of an emotional response and dear god do these fucking royals boil my blood.

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      The Royals well Clara at least seems to be ok, someo the Nobles however could inspire a revolution

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Chapter 22 should be done soon!

  • @brettmciver432
    @brettmciver432 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Dan it I left my blue tooth ear plugs at home gaaaaahhh

    • @Erin-Thor
      @Erin-Thor 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      Fire Dan immediately. 😂

    • @brettmciver432
      @brettmciver432 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      @Erin-Thor
      Nice play on my fat finger miss tap bawahahaha

    • @Erin-Thor
      @Erin-Thor 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@brettmciver432 - My apologies for my sense of humor, by brother says I have Tourette’s syndrome. 🤣

    • @brettmciver432
      @brettmciver432 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@Erin-Thor
      What's wrong with your sense of humor?
      I thought it was brilliant.😅🤟🤟

    • @Erin-Thor
      @Erin-Thor 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@brettmciver432 - I get myself in trouble all the time. We had a training meeting at work about a new halon fire suppression system in our switch. Someone asked if it deploys, how long until it’s safe to enter. They said immediately so long as the fire is contained it’s safe. So I asked them if both had been inside a test, they said several times as part of testing. I asked if they had any side effects at all? No, we are both fine. So I asked, so it’s just a coincidence both of you are bald?

  • @jackedup8790
    @jackedup8790 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This is an excellent story.
    Thanks for the entertainment.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Chapter 22 should be done soon!

  • @terrywilson1226
    @terrywilson1226 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Hmmm i wonder if there were security cameras in hallways any common areas on a warship so it would be easy to find who planted the qec. Clara is a very manipulative person, I'd hate to be on her bad side😂

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Chapter 22 should be done soon!

    • @terrywilson1226
      @terrywilson1226 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@ekhidna4 I hope you are enjoying our comments and speculations 😂

  • @sigmar4564
    @sigmar4564 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Great Video

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      😀

  • @shaunbrown6973
    @shaunbrown6973 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Excellent

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Chapter 22 should be done soon!

  • @davidorf3921
    @davidorf3921 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    So as of around 3am UK time this morning the Author tells me that Chapter 22 is done, allowing time for #scifistories1977 to convert to speech, add pictures and upload I hope to be able to listen to it later today or worst case tomorrow, there was apparently a delay due to a fault with the Authors PC which is now fixed. I'm just hoping that Wyatts "Tactical Mine" is as effective in this field of subterfuge and politics as the ones he drops from his raptor in space.

    • @scifistories1977
      @scifistories1977  7 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Chapter 22 is 37 minutes long. It will be released in 2 parts on Monday and Tuesday.

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@scifistories1977 Sad face but thanks for responding

  • @parkedfamily
    @parkedfamily 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    We need more of these and faster.. 👌🏼👌🏼

  • @Mercurio-Morat-Goes-Bughunting
    @Mercurio-Morat-Goes-Bughunting 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    26:18 Drow (dark elves) has the same singular and plural form ... of, wait, this isn't a Salvatore tale! Maybe you were talking about the Drazzan...? :^)

  • @blackstar8999
    @blackstar8999 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    God dammit ah love itttttttttttt staples is the man

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thanks! Chapter 22 should be done soon!

  • @WilferdR-bl6hn
    @WilferdR-bl6hn 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I love this story he orshe right❤❤❤

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Chapter 22 should be done soon!

  • @deplorable1-2
    @deplorable1-2 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Yet another cliffhanger tease. Tune in next week and remember to drink more Ovaltine.

    • @scifistories1977
      @scifistories1977  7 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Chapter 22 will be split into 2 parts over Monday and Tuesday.

    • @deplorable1-2
      @deplorable1-2 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@scifistories1977 Two parts! Two days! You are Ming the Merciless.

  • @jacobholmes4117
    @jacobholmes4117 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Let’s goooo!!!!!

  • @hsaulog
    @hsaulog 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Thanks!

    • @scifistories1977
      @scifistories1977  8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Much appreciated! Thank you.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank you, mate!

  • @halo12390
    @halo12390 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I await eagerly for the next episode

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Chapter 22 should be done soon!

    • @halo12390
      @halo12390 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@ekhidna4 *happy excited noises*

  • @davidlynch8955
    @davidlynch8955 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Here is the big question how will the nobles react to the prince relying on Wyatt? Do they accept the princes judgement or do they also start rebellious actions or do they learn about Wyatt and then become enamored with him like the other 5 are

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Chapter 22 should be done soon!

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Well they are going to court martial him already, assuming that all charges are dismissed the only real options for them are assassination, of course if Wyatt ever gets enobled they could come up with a fake pretext to challenge him to a duel, for honours sake but let us remember that Wyatt is being trained by the close combat monster that is Cynthia Winfield, Wyatt might not think he is doing well against her but just staying alive when fighting her is damn near impossible so ....

  • @snowwolf8186
    @snowwolf8186 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Sweet 😊❤

  • @harvey9277
    @harvey9277 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Too short 😢

  • @WilfredRubalcaba
    @WilfredRubalcaba 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Love it all say 😊❤

  • @davidlynch8955
    @davidlynch8955 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    At this point with the Winfield's talking about wanting to make him a knight I assume the prince has a much better reward in mind maybe something along the line of making him a knight of the royal house also since we have something along the lines of royal marines maybe the royal fighter squad kind of like the rebellion from star wars rogue squadron the best of the best only can join based on talent alone

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I'm with you on this, by al lthe normal considerations Wyatt has certainly earned an enoblement, I'm going to guess and say this turn of events will ... upset a bunch more nobles. So when it's done they need to either at a minimum knight him or send him off on a mission far away from others or both. I'm still hoping he gets to be a Knight Banneret as traditionally that was a form of knighthood earned by incredible heroics and witnessed directly by the ruler or his immediate representative, Wyatt qualifies for this twice. (a recording these days would be sufficient). So I'm hoping when this "episode" is over that Wyatt gets knighted but I would not be surprised if he gets sent off in the Black Ship, as an Aid to Clara and Cynthia with some of the old crew who he saved, plus maybe some from Woodshaft on some secret behind the lines type work with Clara making contact with potential allies essentially under the very nose of the Duke . The alternative is that Cynthia gets lent out a bit more until she finishes teaching Wyatt about duelling. Because no one in their right mind is going to fight her LOL

    • @davidlynch8955
      @davidlynch8955 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Actually a new position created for commoners would be the most excellent way of dealing with nobles too. Order of knights of the principality. This can only be given to a commoner who has achieved merit good enough to enter. This order can have nobles, royalty and existing order members vote to have new members be included but a member of the royal family agree to the recommendation. Members of the order would have all the rights of nobles without the ability to inherit in your generation. If a second generation were to join this order the family then could be converted to noble status. Unless a noble or royal married the knight that would be the only way of a first generation getting noble status. Of course the knights still have to answer to royalty. But creating this gives wyatt something that will prevent the nobles from touching him. At same time of few rules to protect the nobles and their ability to control territory which the knights can't might go along way to lessen their fears

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Chapter 22 should be done soon!

    • @davidlynch8955
      @davidlynch8955 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      I'm looking forward to how Wyatt becomes a tactical mine

  • @seethecoolman2695
    @seethecoolman2695 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    LETSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS GO

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Chapter 22 should be done soon!

  • @guitarlover42
    @guitarlover42 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Anyone else rooting against the prince? This noble system is trash they don’t deserve our goat Wyatt. #istandwiththeduke. He carries the team and all these lame nobles want to get him in trouble.

  • @borispavlovic655
    @borispavlovic655 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    👌

  • @brentbellamy5861
    @brentbellamy5861 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This is a really good story

  • @davidlynch8955
    @davidlynch8955 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Question when should we expect the next chapter which day ?

    • @scifistories1977
      @scifistories1977  8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      The author is writing this story chapter by chapter, so it's being written live.
      As soon as he makes the next chapter available to me, I get it ready and loaded onto the channel for your viewing pleasure.
      Unfortunately, I'm not able to give a day when the chapter will be ready. But... the author has been in touch, and the next part is almost ready.

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Apparently Monday ...... And Tuesday, another 37 minute two parter

  • @0987brian
    @0987brian 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

  • @tom-nl7fg
    @tom-nl7fg 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    for the algorithm a useless comment

  • @tommcl8548
    @tommcl8548 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    👊👍

  • @MRFlackAttack1
    @MRFlackAttack1 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    What is the deal with all the commoner names starting with a W?

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      It will be revealed later. It is a very specific reason that happens on Volantis, Wyatt's homeworld.

  • @butterg9535
    @butterg9535 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Wow, the parallels - trump's inflated opinion of himself, and his contempt for military members.

  • @Tupsx57
    @Tupsx57 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Another great chapter.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Chapter 22 should be done soon!

    • @Tupsx57
      @Tupsx57 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@ekhidna4 Cant wait. Thank you so much.

  • @andrewlatex950
    @andrewlatex950 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Thanks!

    • @scifistories1977
      @scifistories1977  8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thanks you Andrew! Your super-thanks is very much appreciated.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank you, mate!

  • @LittleRed256
    @LittleRed256 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Thanks!

    • @scifistories1977
      @scifistories1977  8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Thank you again! You're very kind.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank you, mate! Chapter 22 should be done soon!

    • @LittleRed256
      @LittleRed256 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @ekhidna4 Outstanding, I'm looking forward to it.