The Social Network - Sorkin, Structure, and Collaboration

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  • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
    @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +1009

    Thank you so much to all my Patreon supporters for making this video and this channel possible! I have some exciting things planned for this year, so be sure to subscribe so you don't miss those. And, as always: What screenplays should I do in the future?! Let me know!

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +21

      I still need to see Nocturnal Animals! La La Land definitely on the list.

    • @kingofwakanda6899
      @kingofwakanda6899 7 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Lessons from the Screenplay La La Land just because I love that film so much.

    • @mandaloriancrusader3746
      @mandaloriancrusader3746 7 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Lessons from the Screenplay La La land was seriously great! You NEED to watch it!

    • @quaestiofest7710
      @quaestiofest7710 7 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Lessons from the Screenplay capo Michael please make vídeo of the Truman show!! saludos desde Argentina tus vídeos son geniales. abrazo

    • @ethantang4358
      @ethantang4358 7 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      La La Land, Nocturnal Animals, Manchester by the Sea!

  • @fragr33f74
    @fragr33f74 7 ปีที่แล้ว +4889

    I'd actually be really interested if you did an analysis of a bad or average script and broke down where and how it failed.
    Anyone else feel the same way?

    • @TheJenSolo
      @TheJenSolo 7 ปีที่แล้ว +131

      fragr33f Doesn't even have to be where it failed, though that's a clear lesson also. Calling out missed opportunities to be better will elevate average writers by helping them recognize how to improve character development, pacing, calls backs, etc.
      When I was 13 or so, I saw Ridley Scott's Legend in the theater, and I came out so disappointed that I wanted to rewrite the screenplay for him. I saw so many missed opportunities to [edit: removed the word 'make'] allow us to care for the characters, I was frustrated that the movie failed to use them and it came out 'meh'. Cuz it's a gorgeous film, with a solid cast and creative ideas executed with style. Years later, when we finally got the director's cut on DVD, now I understand that it was a hack edit job by the studio to try to tailor for U.S. markets -- that was unnecessary anyways, since audiences are smarter than most studios think, and will watch longer films, if given a good story with juicy characters.
      TL;DR, What I'm saying is, there's a lot more to be learned from average screenplays than from complete failures.

    • @moesomething1314
      @moesomething1314 7 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      that'd be great

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +523

      A popular request...I plan on doing this, just have to find the right film.

    • @fragr33f74
      @fragr33f74 7 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      TheJenSolo really great point

    • @ktownshutdown21
      @ktownshutdown21 7 ปีที่แล้ว +43

      I got the perfect bad script video idea for you, homie...three words:
      M A N
      O F
      S T E E L

  • @monkey363
    @monkey363 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1791

    nobody talks about the soundtrack of this film. Amazing.

    • @aidabaida6076
      @aidabaida6076 7 ปีที่แล้ว +38

      (No need to agree with me if you don't, just there's only a few people who even notice soundtracks, so I try to reply to them)
      Few people talk about this soundtrack? That's because a lot of people (like me) think this soundtrack officially marked the beginning of an era of film music based on ambience rather than melody, on ambiguity rather than emotion. I can't tell you how influential this score was, and how badly it has hurt the art of film music.

    • @monkey363
      @monkey363 7 ปีที่แล้ว +85

      How has it hurt film music?

    • @aidabaida6076
      @aidabaida6076 7 ปีที่แล้ว +20

      Well, I think its led to a lot of drama scores that just provide ambient sound design and thumping electronic beats rather than actually helping the movie become more than it is. A lot of the scores being nominated for awards are just long ambient sounds and one note at a time piano music - that started with The Social Network. Anyway, that's just my taste in music - I was just here to answer your question :)

    • @monkey363
      @monkey363 7 ปีที่แล้ว +71

      alright. i definitely see what you mean. and i guess i agree. i think the social networks soundtrack definitely displayed the feelings of the characters though. when mark is hacking the houses facebooks and that song "in motion" plays, it adds to the rigid perfectionism of marks character and how hes determined to pull of an extremely difficult while drunk at 2 in the moring. it also adds to the pacing. the whole score fits the movie but its hard to see it in other ones. so i definitely agree.

    • @aidabaida6076
      @aidabaida6076 7 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Sure, it might've worked here, but everyone started copying it.

  • @devinholmgren7986
    @devinholmgren7986 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2381

    Your editing during the Erica/Mark is impeccable, really engaging and easy to follow

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +100

      Thanks Devin! That's great to hear because I was worried it would be a bit difficult to follow.

    • @jonnybaynham1689
      @jonnybaynham1689 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      @@LessonsfromtheScreenplay You made it easier to follow from the film and really pick up the nuances so thank you!

    • @arislanbekkosnazarov9644
      @arislanbekkosnazarov9644 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@LessonsfromtheScreenplay Well, for the purpose it served, you indeed made it digestible

    • @4ourty5ive
      @4ourty5ive 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      On the same note, I was thinking something similar while listening to it; thank you for editing in some café sounds behind your own voice so the jump between your explanation and their audio did not sound very extreme it was easy on the ears and the mind

  • @FakeAnarchist
    @FakeAnarchist 7 ปีที่แล้ว +928

    I will never understand how this brilliant film could lose best picture to The King's Speech. The drama and writing from these pages still hold up today.

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +322

      I think there's no use in trying to make sense of the Oscars.

    • @Septiviumexe
      @Septiviumexe 4 ปีที่แล้ว +63

      The Kings Speech catered to a societal problem The Social Network catered to a reptile problem

    • @tdreamgmail
      @tdreamgmail 4 ปีที่แล้ว +23

      I don't understand either. The social network actually in my opinion is the best movie of the decade.

    • @isaacdelarosa3349
      @isaacdelarosa3349 4 ปีที่แล้ว +23

      This movie and inception both lost to the kings speech what a disappointment

    • @sirliridon.4419
      @sirliridon.4419 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      King‘s Speech is an amazing movies

  • @katriinaeskelinen2061
    @katriinaeskelinen2061 5 ปีที่แล้ว +292

    I love the scene where Eduardo barges in from the doors, the amount of MOMENTUM, Christ, it builds up so beautifully. Great video! Learned a lot :D

    • @kingstonherbert1519
      @kingstonherbert1519 4 ปีที่แล้ว +13

      there's a youtube video where Andrew Garfield talks about how many takes he had to do of that scene and how painful yet fulfilling it is. Fincher's directing style is pretty spectacular

    • @GarveyToure
      @GarveyToure ปีที่แล้ว

      The way he smashes Zuckerbergs laptop 😢 so good

  • @kingofwakanda6899
    @kingofwakanda6899 7 ปีที่แล้ว +518

    Yes!!! Finally a new video! And about one of the best screenplays in recent memory!!! Aaron Sorkin is definitely one of the stars of this film.

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +22

      That's a good way to put it! And yes, sorry this one took me awhile :)

    • @marcelodrummond8906
      @marcelodrummond8906 7 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      King of Wakanda maaan you are everywhere! i bet there are multiples kings of wakanda, that isn't possible lol 😂 the

    • @kingofwakanda6899
      @kingofwakanda6899 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Marcelo Drummond nope, check the subscribers and the subscriptions every time you see me! It's me all the time!

    • @_Cato_
      @_Cato_ 7 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      King of Wakanda
      Why do I fucking see you on every TH-cam channel?

    • @AFilmbyCarlosLuvgood
      @AFilmbyCarlosLuvgood 7 ปีที่แล้ว

      Isiskos similar interests

  • @1080TJ
    @1080TJ 7 ปีที่แล้ว +733

    This film blew me away when I first saw it. I was about 13 when it came out and I saw it because I heard it was about Facebook (this was of course 2010 when Facebook was still cool with 13-year-olds). I expected a standard success story biopic. What I got was a masterpiece of filmmaking where everyone involved seemed to be at the top of their game. It was my first exposure to David Fincher and his perfectionist style of directing. Trent Reznor and Atticus Ross's score is one of my all-time favorite soundtracks and was a big part of getting me into electronic/ambient music. This movie made me take Jesse Eisenberg and Justin Timberlake seriously as actors. It was the first time pretty much everyone saw the amazing talents of Andrew Garfield and Rooney Mara. But above everything else Sorkin is the star of this movie. It's hard to give a truly bad performance with material this good. It was one of the first times I remember rewatching a movie just because I liked hearing the way the characters talked. Every single scene in The Social Network has more than one line that would be the best line in any other movie. People often criticize Sorkin by saying that people don't actually talk like that. True, but wouldn't it be great if they did? It's a movie. If directors can have a signature style then so can screenwriters. And it's not like the snappy dialogue is compensating for a lack of everything else. This movie's story and characters are incredibly compelling to the very end, it's paced perfectly, and it makes masterful use of nonlinear storytelling by cutting back to the courtroom scenes and using them to move the story forward. This movie is part of what made me want to be a screenwriter.
    Sorry for rambling. I just love this movie so fucking much. If this isn't a 10/10 I don't know what is.

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +63

      I totally agree! And the argument that "people don't talk like that" doesn't make sense, because no one speaks like characters in any movie. My one asterisk on that, is that I think the filmmaking style has to support his kind of dialogue. The Newsroom didn't work as well for me because it was shot documentary-style and tried to feel very authentic...which did clash with Sorkin's dialogue.
      But yeah, this film is a masterpiece. And so fun to see Rooney Mara in the role that first brought attention to her...knowing that shortly after they finished this they started on The Girl With The Dragon Tattoo..!

    • @1080TJ
      @1080TJ 7 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      Lessons from the Screenplay True. Fincher did a great job at helping to make the dialogue feel believable. It also helps that all the characters are clearly of above average intelligence and adults. The scene in Steve Jobs where his daughter is around 9 and saying things like "if I had another ruler, I'd measure this ruler" took me out of the movie a bit. I don't care how smart this kid is, she's still 9 years old.

    • @123paramorefan
      @123paramorefan 7 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      ambient/electronic music sounds awesome. I love the theme for the social network, could you point me to some similar music?

    • @1080TJ
      @1080TJ 7 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      Silk Trent Reznor and Atticus Ross's other film scores are great. Some other favorite artists in the genre are Aphex Twin, Tim Hecker, Brian Eno, Boards of Canada, Stars of the Lid, Taylor Deupree, Oneohtrix Point Never, Rafael Anton Irisarri, and Jon Hopkins. Other similar soundtracks would be Blade Runner by Vangelis, Upstream Color by Shane Carruth and pretty much anything by Cliff Martinez.

    • @1080TJ
      @1080TJ 7 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Silk also this isn't the same genre but if you like The Social Network soundtrack you'll probably like the album Mezzanine by Massive Attack

  • @Killernaut16
    @Killernaut16 7 ปีที่แล้ว +975

    Holy fuck, I can't wait for you to do a video on Pulp Fiction.

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +88

      I can only imagine doing that one will be nuts. So much to talk about!

    • @Killernaut16
      @Killernaut16 7 ปีที่แล้ว +21

      Lessons from the Screenplay In my opinion it's Tarantino's best film.

    • @eppursimuove3119
      @eppursimuove3119 7 ปีที่แล้ว +32

      I have to say I think structurally Inglorious is better. But I'd like to see LFTS weigh in!

    • @film_magician
      @film_magician 7 ปีที่แล้ว +30

      The hard thing about analzing that script is that there's so much that's already been said and dissected from that movie. Hard to shine a new light on it. Hopefully we learn something new from this channel taking a closer look at it.

    • @BoonMcNougat
      @BoonMcNougat 7 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      I am 100% sure that something new can be found. Every person that views a film views it through their own unique filter, and time is an important aspect. What I am keen to learn about is how Pulp Fiction maintained its cult status for twenty years, a phenomenon no critic in the mid 90s could have any real insight into. I hope that looking at why Pulp Fiction is considered a classic two decades on while something like True Romance isn't is part of Lessons from the Screenplay's analysis.

  • @Omkar-ey3ls
    @Omkar-ey3ls 7 ปีที่แล้ว +127

    the social network soundtrack is pure gold

  • @Paint
    @Paint 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1209

    another excellent video from you! there was one year where the academy awards showed bits from the nominated screenplays and it was some of the most fascinating TV for me. this scratched my itch! haha

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +48

      Awesome! I think I remember that. It was pretty cool.

    • @eliselucia2361
      @eliselucia2361 7 ปีที่แล้ว +13

      Oh well hey there Jon! Didn’t expect you here 😂

    • @mozartpizza8287
      @mozartpizza8287 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @Param Shah yeah same

  • @dylancurry1178
    @dylancurry1178 7 ปีที่แล้ว +438

    People always look at me funny when I say The Social Network is my favorite movie...but it is good to know I'm definitely not alone based on the comments I'm reading!

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +32

      Oh yeah, definitely not alone :)

    • @hamidhimself
      @hamidhimself 4 ปีที่แล้ว +14

      Tarantino said it's the best film of the decade. "It crushes all competition."

    • @ledues3336
      @ledues3336 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Mine too, along with Matrix

    • @l1mbo69
      @l1mbo69 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@hamidhimself even better than his own films?

  • @TheIreneFly
    @TheIreneFly 7 ปีที่แล้ว +228

    I'm very glad that you mentioned David Fincher's influence on the movie. His cinematic choices give much more substance to the script as, in my opinion, he is a master of creating tension and bringing it to a breaking point. Exactly how you demonstrated in the case of Social Network with "If you guys were the inventors of Facebook you'd have invented Facebook" and in Gone Girl, as you beautifully pointed out, the moment where Nick asks for the lawyer and dialogue leading up to that.

  • @reneurban3521
    @reneurban3521 7 ปีที่แล้ว +402

    Am I the only one who thinks that there should be an award show, like the Oscars or Emmys, for TH-camrs? I mean, this video essay for example, is a truly masterpiece and should get much more recognition.
    You guys (I can hardly imagine it's just one person behind these videos) from 'Lessons from the Screenplay' are all geniuses and deserve a bigger audience than you already have.

    • @1l0veGod
      @1l0veGod 7 ปีที่แล้ว

      Exactly.

    • @jayarnalabozzetta6991
      @jayarnalabozzetta6991 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      From what I can tell its just Michael! Which is the insane part

    • @Udontkno7
      @Udontkno7 4 ปีที่แล้ว +23

      The streamys?

    • @lavieenrose3272
      @lavieenrose3272 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      photosynthesisprototype the streamys are rigged

  • @xSamDGK
    @xSamDGK 6 ปีที่แล้ว +46

    I'm so glad he pointed this out at 11:59. Every actor knows the difficult part about acting is not the happy ending or dramatic crying scenes, but things like that. Little nuances that we do every day that we never notice. So hard to make that look natural and Jesse does it so well.

  • @habibbialikafe339
    @habibbialikafe339 5 ปีที่แล้ว +58

    My uncle owned the bar the first scene of the movie was filmed with mark and his girl. He opened up another restaurant in my hometown. RIP Uncle, I miss you man, i looked up to u :)

    • @TomEyeTheSFMguy
      @TomEyeTheSFMguy 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      F to pay respects

    • @ledues3336
      @ledues3336 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Rip

    • @habibbialikafe339
      @habibbialikafe339 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@TomEyeTheSFMguy thanks yall, i appreciate the condolensces

  • @bennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
    @bennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 6 ปีที่แล้ว +75

    I was in college and 19 when the movie came out, so roughly the same age as the characters in the film... I had been slightly obsessed with Fincher's past films and was eagerly waiting to see what his follow up to 'Benjamin Button' would be... when I found out it was a movie about 'Facebook', I was actually slightly disappointed at first, because I honestly had no idea how Fincher could make a dark gritty, Fincher-esque movie about Facebook of all things.... but when I saw it in theaters with my friend, we literally spent the rest of the night trying to come up with our own ideas for a successful website we could make (neither of us had an iota of the software, or creative skills required), but the movie had entranced us so much that we thought we were going to create the next best thing... my favorite movies are the ones that I can't stop thinking about for days, even weeks after seeing it... this was definitely one of those

    • @utsgotnoguts
      @utsgotnoguts 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Glad to hear that! Just wanted to leave this comment here in case you want to share what you've been upto lately (any startup..ish)

    • @bennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
      @bennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@utsgotnoguts I ended up graduating in mechanical engineering.. I started a family, but never started a business, though it's never too late... after seeing this movie in 2010, the thought that I had was "how can we make the next best website?", in other words, how can I compete with Facebook and TH-cam... Instead I wish my thought had been "How can I start a TH-cam channel?"... If I had started a TH-cam channel back in 2010, that could've certainly led to something, and I certainly had no skills to create a fantastic website, but any average joe can start a TH-cam channel and see where it leads.. Unfortunately, "being a TH-camr" wasn't thought of as a career choice at that time.. there just weren't as many big TH-camrs making good money, or if there were, I just didn't know about it

    • @utsgotnoguts
      @utsgotnoguts 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@bennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn no worries. Family first!

  • @vincentadultman8527
    @vincentadultman8527 7 ปีที่แล้ว +521

    Sorkin ad before a Sorkin video. Illuminati confirmed.

    • @nateds7326
      @nateds7326 5 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      I got a fucking condom ad.

    • @goldeneddie
      @goldeneddie 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Dammit!

    • @mayurdhanwani6664
      @mayurdhanwani6664 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Let me guess, Sorkin's masterclass

    • @mariagraziela3196
      @mariagraziela3196 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@mayurdhanwani6664 i literally got the same thing wth

  • @Andrew_Franklin
    @Andrew_Franklin 7 ปีที่แล้ว +136

    Has there ever been such a combination of writing and direction as Sorkin and Fincher?

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +19

      I'm sure there have...I just can't think of any at the moment.

    • @amanda-vm7wv
      @amanda-vm7wv 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      i would say, in a different sense of course, maybe ivory and guadagnino? i think that their styles complement each other in the same ways that fincher’s and sorkin’s do, except instead of being cerebral and witty, the product is a beautiful, hyper-new-wave natural romanticism

    • @TheTonyEntertainment
      @TheTonyEntertainment 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      The Godfather?

    • @toma6068
      @toma6068 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Schrader and Scorsese on Taxi Driver/Raging Bull, Robert Towne and Polanski on Chinatown

    • @Crowbar
      @Crowbar ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Quentin Tarantino and Quentin Tarantino

  • @forwordbloc12
    @forwordbloc12 7 ปีที่แล้ว +47

    I am India based film maker/writer, and I a would like to congratulate Michael for the way he has managed decoding some of the most tough screenplay structures and present it for aspiring writers and filmakers. A great work indeed.

  • @MasterAppels
    @MasterAppels 7 ปีที่แล้ว +190

    One of my favourite movies. Probably top 5, easily top 10!

  • @CYMotorsport
    @CYMotorsport 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Noticed the brilliant use of ambient background noise from the film in the 4:40 sequence which you had to have manually manipulated and extended to continue while you interjected. Very nice touch!

  • @IsaacAbunu
    @IsaacAbunu 3 ปีที่แล้ว +29

    Fincher and Sorkin should collaborate more often because based on the social network, they can make the greatest movies of all time.

  • @francedeguzman510
    @francedeguzman510 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    I'm 4 years late but I think this is testament to how greatly you've analyzed this movie. I've been watching multiple video essays these past months to make sense of my timeless fascination with this movie. Yours just blows every other analysis out of the water. My favorite is how you dissected the classic beginning scene. Easily my all-time fave scenes ever.

  • @eunderscorevuki
    @eunderscorevuki 6 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    Still one of my favorite videos on TH-cam. Your combination of high-level research, detailed preparation, thoughtful insight and impeccable editing make for exhilarating videos for movie (screenplay) lovers such as myself - by far #1 channel on TH-cam for this subject matter. Your subscribers count reflects this. Keep it going, and keep in mind that your hard work does not go unnoticed. Thanks!

  • @dangerousaniimals
    @dangerousaniimals 7 ปีที่แล้ว +228

    Would you be down to do a Pixar movie? Perhaps, The Incredibles or Toy Story? They have such awesome scripts but are often under appreciated because they're "kids movies".

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +74

      For sure! There's a lot to say about Pixar's storytelling.

    • @HAL-vm3wn
      @HAL-vm3wn 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Lessons from the Screenplay please do up first
      pleeeeeaaaaase!!!!!!

    • @Panconciovedder
      @Panconciovedder 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      please eeeeeeee do Monsters Inc :")

  • @OMGYasuke
    @OMGYasuke 7 ปีที่แล้ว +60

    HOLY SHIT YES! Aaron Sorkin inspires me so much!

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +49

      He's the reason I first started paying attention to screenwriting.

    • @OMGYasuke
      @OMGYasuke 7 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Lessons from the Screenplay same. He's great

    • @Vikrant333luk
      @Vikrant333luk 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      pls do 'Manchester by the Sea'

  • @houstonpaquette
    @houstonpaquette 7 ปีที่แล้ว +128

    congrats on breaking another patreon goal man, it's been a pleasure supporting your channel. Always looking forward to your next video!

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      Thank you! I really appreciate it. It really means a lot to me that people are willing to support the channel, so I wanted to make this as good as possible. I may have gotten a little too nit picky, which is why it took so long. Hopefully will be making videos at a faster pace moving forward!

    • @houstonpaquette
      @houstonpaquette 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      No worries man, I can totally understand the nit pickiness haha. Some of the larger videos I've made have taken 400-500 hours. Quality>Quantity, keep doing what your doing, at whatever pace it takes. As long as you keep making kick ass videos like this i'm happy :)

  • @saikatbanerjee9612
    @saikatbanerjee9612 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The superb background score made the dialogues more impactful for the viewer

  • @larryFWD
    @larryFWD 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    How can a video be so cool? Well executed, loved this tut...

  • @AKMRULES48
    @AKMRULES48 7 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    The most wonderful thing for a writer is to find a director with same equation and understanding of life.

  • @kerimalpaltuncu97
    @kerimalpaltuncu97 7 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    As a filmmaker, I'd like to thank you for sharing such dense and well-structured information with us.

  • @seafog
    @seafog 7 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I really love the way you talk, not too slow or fast, clear but relaxing. I don't know much about screenplays so I appreciate the way you explain everything easy to understand but also nice and concise. Thank you so much!

  • @markburkholder6022
    @markburkholder6022 7 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    In all the years TH-cam has existed and the thousands (tens of thousands?) of videos I must have watched--- this was the first time I've actually logged in and subbed to a channel. Time to watch everything you've done. Really fantastic stuff.

  • @gemis8
    @gemis8 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is an exceptional video you could go on for hours I'm sure with this dense film. Great job!

  • @lets.get.intoit.
    @lets.get.intoit. 7 ปีที่แล้ว +40

    This was incredible. As was this film. Several more videos could probably be made about it, taking apart the script. Thanks for this one :)

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +16

      It's true...the first version of this video was almost 20 minutes long...but tried to touch on too many things and wasn't cohesive. Editing can be painful sometimes, especially when there is so much more to say!

    • @lets.get.intoit.
      @lets.get.intoit. 7 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      I can imagine! I often had the same issues with Film essays. That being said, I don't think we'd complain about a Part 2 ;)

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Perhaps one day ;)

    • @fragr33f74
      @fragr33f74 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Lessons from the Screenplay Or part 2 with Steve Jobs, I think Sorkin and Boyles collaboration was energetic too.

    • @kaingates
      @kaingates 7 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Put the editors cut on patreon! No doubt people will storm your patreon.

  • @Rudahms
    @Rudahms 7 ปีที่แล้ว +91

    Brilliant essay as usual, Michael. Would love to see you tackle a Kaufman script?

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +20

      Thank you! And yes. This will definitely happen.

    • @colyhat
      @colyhat 7 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      Lessons from the Screenplay Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind, duh!

  • @robbobb4050
    @robbobb4050 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I've watched this movie three times already and I keep wanting to watch it again and again. It's so beautifully well made.

  • @lizzygrant02
    @lizzygrant02 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    i’m LOVING your videos

  • @themonifier
    @themonifier 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    You are amongst many people who have inspired me to write again and for that, I must thank you sir! Keep up the great work, you’re content is engaging while being both informative and entertaining all at once! I love how we are taken on a journey through the films from the perspective of the literature and the challenges screenwriters face when attempting to match their original intentions in the script with their ability to effectively communicate them on screen is very interesting!

  • @emmetkowler
    @emmetkowler 7 ปีที่แล้ว +366

    The Incredibles please?

    • @1080TJ
      @1080TJ 7 ปีที่แล้ว +60

      Best-written superhero movie ever IMO

    • @WarpedHorizon
      @WarpedHorizon 7 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      TJ Hastie Incredibles or Dark Knight. Tough call. Visual storytelling or characters?

    • @samwallaceart288
      @samwallaceart288 7 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      The Dark Knight doesn't actually have that strong of a script; it's mostly the filming of it and the acting that makes it good ... that and it's a superhero movie that both has an *actual* amount of action in it and it isn't tacky; it's more about what the Dark Knight *ISN'T* than what it actually is.

    • @WarpedHorizon
      @WarpedHorizon 7 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Samuel Wallace Ah, I'm still learning how to tell good writing from good directing from good acting.

    • @ImMatrixor
      @ImMatrixor 7 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      +Samuel Wallace In what way did The Dark Knight lack a strong script? I thought Harvey Dent's arch was brilliant. The Joker's ideology was disturbing smart. Rachel's decision between Bruce and Harvey was also very introspective. The concise dialogue was also very admirable.

  • @Cocoalamocoa
    @Cocoalamocoa 7 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    These analyses really let me appreciate how amazing films can be!

  • @comsatteur6893
    @comsatteur6893 7 ปีที่แล้ว +147

    Great video once again! Can I suggest maybe at least once, you pick a really bad film and discuss why it failed in terms of writing?

    • @comsatteur6893
      @comsatteur6893 7 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      for example, Nine (starring Daniel day-Lewis and Marion Cotillard); the screenplay for it is terrible af but everything else in that film is perfect

    • @adrienchauvel531
      @adrienchauvel531 7 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      i agree with you 100% !

    • @bluecollarlit
      @bluecollarlit 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hezekiah Pabico interesting idea

  • @TauregTariq
    @TauregTariq 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    That was actually a very brilliant breakdown. Good work!

  • @rehansrivastava
    @rehansrivastava 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    From the bottom of my heart i would like to you thank you for making this masterpiece.... You deserve all the love and appreciation in the world my Friend.

  • @mickey7989
    @mickey7989 7 ปีที่แล้ว +61

    Absolutely love this channel, I'm never disappointed. Have you taken a look at Sorkin's MasterClass on screenwriting? Also - I'd like to see a lesson on a fantasy screenplay, maybe Pan's Labyrinth?

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +34

      A fantasy screenplay would be cool. And I have not done his MasterClass...I am curious, but didn't want to influence this video and end up just repeating what he says or something.

    • @boloman4891
      @boloman4891 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Mickey really curios about this as well. I'm thinking about taking that class but I'm not sure if it's worth it

  • @allanlopez3276
    @allanlopez3276 7 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    SO happy to see that you uploaded a new video, especially one a lot of us have been anticipating like crazy! Thanks so much for actually taking into consideration what your audience wants but also taking time to make it worth doing. As for suggestions, a look into how you see 12 Angry Men would be something I would really be excited for.

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      A great suggestion! And I'm glad you enjoyed it! I definitely wanted to make it as good as possible since it was such a frequently-requested one.

  • @Michealjohnson2
    @Michealjohnson2 7 ปีที่แล้ว +33

    500 Days of Summer! PLEASE! Or even maybe TV like The Office?

  • @joryiansmith
    @joryiansmith 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You may not have written a super successful screenplay Michael, but you have the most successful channel on TH-cam about analyzing how to tell stories. You sir, are unparalleled in capturing the key insights of telling the most engaging and rewarding story. I'm lucky to have found your channel.

  • @Abhi_B
    @Abhi_B 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Brilliant Insightful Analysis. And very helpful how you broke down the different elements and explained them so well with the scenes themselves. I've been on a Sorkin interviews binge and it was brilliant to see a lot of the stuff he said being translated, elaborated on and explained in the context of this film. Big fan of your work :)
    This movie was the first movie where I truly noticed the Screenplay. I was actually just blown away by how brilliant it was and, for the first time, made an effort to find out who wrote it, what other things they've written etc. I then read the screenplay on it's own to truly appreciate how great it was.

  • @benjaunceyyy
    @benjaunceyyy 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Best film score I ever heard too, seriously this film might be the most clean-cut, hard-hitting masterpiece of all time

  • @FairEnoughDude
    @FairEnoughDude 7 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I could've watched a whole hour of this, I envy your ability to precisely analyze the strong points in screenplays. As a writer these videos are very helpful! Keep up the great work!

  • @TheJaz0427
    @TheJaz0427 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    absolutely amazing! you are able to capture each thing that makes a certain movie great even down to the slightest details. fincher is one of my favorite directors, and i truly fell deeper in love with his work due to your video. watching your videos inspired me to pursue a career in film production! you are my favorite channel! :D

  • @gavinpatmore5548
    @gavinpatmore5548 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Actually incredible analysis. I've watched a few of these videos relentlessly for the past hour or so. I feel they've really impacted my writing, and I'm talking about fiction. So I just want you to know that I appreciate how many lessons are layered within each of yours videos. Keep it up.

  • @michaelgelfeld4906
    @michaelgelfeld4906 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is the first time I've watched one of your videos and watched the film you discussed immediately afterward. I can't tell you how much it changed my viewing experience for the better! Already loved this movie and I just felt like I got so much more from it with your commentary fresh in my mind. Keep up the great work. You allow films to give me so much more and I am so grateful for that!

  • @storytellers1
    @storytellers1 7 ปีที่แล้ว +30

    Great video Lessons, We did on on the Social Network as well, curious what you think about it.

  • @eucart
    @eucart 7 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I would LOVE it if you did "Moonlight", one of my favorites movies from last year, and I think it has a pretty tight script. Love your channel thank you!!

  • @cassandrashelley6114
    @cassandrashelley6114 7 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I loved this! I think this is my favorite of the videos you've done so far. It's so insightful and I love feeling like I've actually left TH-cam smarter!

  • @PrinceOfPersia8888
    @PrinceOfPersia8888 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you for this. Just re-watched this the other night by chance, and seeing this pop up on my recommended videos was like a godsend. Truly insightful content.

  • @JeffManes123
    @JeffManes123 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I just love your editing. It's very clear that you put a lot of effort into these videos and they're so engaging.

  • @PauLtus_B
    @PauLtus_B 7 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I'm not saying it's easy but looking at it like this it's actually beautifully simple.

  • @bruhdabones
    @bruhdabones 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I watched this movie for a class multiple times a few years ago, this scene was so fun to watch. I figured it out on the second watching lol. Amazing movie, very inspiring in some ways.

  • @JohnnyBRad
    @JohnnyBRad 4 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    Sorkin and Fincher together could be one of the greatest combinations in film history. I remember hearing about this movie thinking “how are they gonna make the creation of Facebook any kind of interesting?” I’ve never been happier to be proven wrong

  • @lia7847
    @lia7847 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    I just want to say thank you for this Channel, honestly. You have aided me in every step of the way in the short films I post on this platform, especially my most recent one. You've helped me have an idea of how to formulate a script and characters. Especially with action that describe the characters thoughts and feelings. Your channel is so original and great. Thank you so much , you've helped a generation of filmmakers make their art.

  • @RR-ir6ss
    @RR-ir6ss 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Excellent video, man. You're a master at analyzing screenplays. The Social Network is one of the best screenplays of the decade. It's not only the dialogue, it's the way a very complex story is told and how smoothly it blends together. That is so hard to do.
    Anyway, I'm hoping to see Her sometime soon.
    Thanks for the videos! Keep it up!

  • @prabhatdreamz
    @prabhatdreamz 7 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Really enjoyed your deconstruction of Sorkin's writing on this one. Admittedly, I'm already in awe of Aaron Sorkin's hyper-paced and relentless writing style, and the rich dialogues. More so now, after Steve Jobs. This brings me to a humble request: Please deconstruct any of the many beautiful scenes from Steve Jobs. Perhaps, one of the numerous heated exchanges between Jobs and his mentor Scully, or between Jobs and his work-wife Joanna.

  • @Reymon72
    @Reymon72 7 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This was so great, I enjoyed the way you analyzed every single detail from beginning to the end.

  • @drimdrimz
    @drimdrimz 7 ปีที่แล้ว +97

    DO Memento

  • @azrilshah4663
    @azrilshah4663 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This has to be your best work yet! (and that's saying a lot)
    I've never felt so astounded at screenplay, really really good job and keep it up

  • @mirzabaig2004
    @mirzabaig2004 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is your first video I’ve seen and must say it’s awesome. Love how you distilled each auteur’s idiosyncrasies into a clear and concise video.

  • @Jorge_Ambruster
    @Jorge_Ambruster 7 ปีที่แล้ว +16

    Please do a Pulp Fiction analysis

  • @HanCalderOld
    @HanCalderOld 7 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I "thumbs up" your videos before I watch them. I just love you so much!

  • @CristianNicolae
    @CristianNicolae 7 ปีที่แล้ว +34

    Can you do something from Lars Von Trier? Dogville for instance.

  • @conservativemovement
    @conservativemovement ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Excellent... Thank you - - - and...congratulations!

  • @TomiEluwoleLive
    @TomiEluwoleLive 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    I’m watching this video days after watching Molly’s Game.The non-linear structure in storytelling was also used there and I loved it. The essays are so well written on this channel. I Love Aaron Sorkin and I love this channel

  • @jp3813
    @jp3813 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    7:10 The stage version of A Few Good Men has flashbacks though; even the movie has some. Lots of plays are non-linear.

  • @Seeattle
    @Seeattle 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    It took me a long time to watch this movie. The premise seemed boring and I couldn't imagine how a movie about that subject matter could be interesting. Its one of the best movies ive ever seen, ever.

  • @mertinho
    @mertinho 7 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Incredible editing and extraordinary content! I love this channel, keep up the good work, Michael!

  • @supersonicsaahil
    @supersonicsaahil 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This video is a piece of art. Everytime I come back to it I wanna watch the movie again.

  • @write-minded3921
    @write-minded3921 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you so much for this, man. This is such a great film, and dialogue is also my specialty and passion. So this speaks to me on a very personal level and has given me some fantastic new techniques to work on and incorporate into future works.

  • @neifert7
    @neifert7 7 ปีที่แล้ว +40

    I would love to get your analysis of the screenplay of Good Will Hunting. It's one of my favorite movies and I think Matt Damon and Ben Affleck wrote beautiful dialogue.

    • @1l0veGod
      @1l0veGod 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Agreed. That movie is pretty great. :)

  • @user-dn4nj8le4b
    @user-dn4nj8le4b 7 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Not going to lie, I always get a bit giddy when I see a new one of these go up, the quality is always fantastic. I like how you touched on the collaboration between creative minds to better the end product. As Dalton Trumbo once said, being a screenwriter is like building a ship, and directing is like being the captain, and holy shit can you ever tell that ship was made for Fincher to sail.
    Also: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH PULP FICTION!

  • @BatmanHQYT
    @BatmanHQYT ปีที่แล้ว +3

    The Social Network is as close to perfect as a movie can get. You just want to live inside of its world forever.

  • @Andrew-jw4vc
    @Andrew-jw4vc 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    It really is amazing when you think about it, how two distinctive styles, Fincher's and Sorkin's, managed to meld together so perfectly. Truly shows how talented the two of them really are.

  • @Jacob.Sharpie
    @Jacob.Sharpie 7 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    When I saw the first scene of the Social Network, I was so confused. Like they were talking so fast, now that I can read it it makes so much sense. Thank you for showing me this👍

  • @EntertainTheElk
    @EntertainTheElk 7 ปีที่แล้ว +32

    Fantastic video, as always! Question -- How do you animate the audio levels in your video (11:52) when you're matching it to someone's narration/VO? I can never figure that out!

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +13

      Thanks! There's a built-in effect called "Audio Spectrum." Here's a tutorial on one way to do it: th-cam.com/video/8J3JJoA7NYU/w-d-xo.html

  • @XV74302
    @XV74302 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I really don't understand why Fincher always is marked as a "visual director", because: his shots are actually very down-to-earth and classic in the most time. Also his color grading is very calm. What's actually really unique is the timing and rhythm. in this respect he is a genius and perfectionist !

  • @Reionder
    @Reionder 7 ปีที่แล้ว +78

    Hey, can you do something on City of God or any Kurosawa movie?

    • @LessonsfromtheScreenplay
      @LessonsfromtheScreenplay  7 ปีที่แล้ว +16

      Ooh, good suggestions!

    • @Hayder96
      @Hayder96 7 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      Yes please, +1 on City of god

    • @scouts1998
      @scouts1998 7 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      High and Low, Rashomon of course Seven Samurai would all make great videos.

  • @losalfajoresok
    @losalfajoresok 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I feel the temptation of standing up and clap every time I watch any of your videos man. Amazing, amazing job.

  • @treyharshaw7276
    @treyharshaw7276 7 ปีที่แล้ว

    I can't tell which is better, the movie or the video you make about them. Thank you for showing me that no matter how much I love a movie there is always more to love. Loved this movie, loved this video, loving you channel; please never stop making videos!

  • @animalunae
    @animalunae 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Studio 60 is SO underrated, I don't like all of the cast and the comedy performed on the Studio 60 stage falls flat at times, but I love this series so much!

  • @aelaredo
    @aelaredo 7 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    i think you should do Locke (2013). It's amazing how you can do a 85 min film with only an actor and a car. Plus it's a overlooked film.

  • @brandonparris1668
    @brandonparris1668 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    I would just like to say that this is one of my favorite channels on youtube. It honestly makes me look at films in a completely different perspective and for that I thank you.

  • @andzrit
    @andzrit 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Sorkin + Fincher = masterpiece.
    Great breakdown of Sorkin's technique!

  • @williamhlaing
    @williamhlaing 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Just finished Trials of Chicago 7. Would love to see you do another one on Sorkin!

  • @adiahaalexander9359
    @adiahaalexander9359 7 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I wish this channel, Every Frame a Painting and Now you See Me could all collaborate on one massive project. Like have a topic and all give their opinion thru their unique perspectives.

  • @domonicdecoco2410
    @domonicdecoco2410 7 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Brilliant editing. Your videos are beyond excellent. You should do a video on the silly brilliance of The Perks Of Being A Wallflower

  • @crabbySm4ck3r
    @crabbySm4ck3r 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Dude, you have your style down better than anyone else on TH-cam. And it works so perfectly for what you’re talking about. That kinda sensibility is what rakes in the views, I bet.

  • @vincentknight27
    @vincentknight27 7 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Yes!!!! The Social Network is one of my fav screenplays of all time so I buy this video so much! Awesome.

  • @mallenwho
    @mallenwho 7 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    Oh, if we take suggestions, that i recommend with all my heart the first ten minutes of Serenity. It is the PERFECT opening of a film, without flaw or blemish. And among the best 10 minutes of cinema ever. Heck, i'll write the episode for you if you want.