HOW TO WRITE AN OXBRIDGE PERSONAL STATEMENT

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  • @ElenaHandtrack
    @ElenaHandtrack  4 ปีที่แล้ว +30

    Thank you for clicking on this video🤗
    ⏰Time Stamps for this Video
    02:02 Structure
    04:42 Tips for Writing your Personal Statement
    04:51 Should you do Extra Reading?
    05:40 Extracurriculars & Academic Achievements: Less is more?
    06:23 Extracurriculars & Academic Achievements: Don’t be too General
    07:17 Remember that Everything in your Personal Statement is Fair Game!

  • @EllaGreenwood22
    @EllaGreenwood22 4 ปีที่แล้ว +23

    It’s so interesting hearing what other people’s are like... I have an offer from Oxford,and interestingly mine had a really similar structure (although to start with I was told mine was too academic) despite being for chemistry rather than law, and as a domestic student

    • @ElenaHandtrack
      @ElenaHandtrack  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      OMG congrats on your offer!!

    • @EllaGreenwood22
      @EllaGreenwood22 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Elena Handtrack aw thanks so much!!

    • @sofialancioni6241
      @sofialancioni6241 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      What's a domestic student? Ps: congratulations!!!!

    • @EllaGreenwood22
      @EllaGreenwood22 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Sofia Lancioni domestic is applying to the uni from the country you are from, so I’m from the U.K

    • @sofialancioni6241
      @sofialancioni6241 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@EllaGreenwood22 ahhhh thanks!!!!!!

  • @yuekunliu1735
    @yuekunliu1735 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Elena, you are my inspiration!!! I really liked about the part where you were confidently chose to stick to your mind about personal statement, not the others! --From a Chinese IB DP1 student keen to study sociology in the UK next year!

  • @zahra-kz1dj
    @zahra-kz1dj 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    this is the personal statement advice ive been wanting to hear. thank u sm

  • @natalietan1968
    @natalietan1968 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Hi Elena, this video couldn't have arrived at a better time! I'm now in the process of creating my first draft, and it was really reassuring to hear that you don't have to sound super intellectual :)

    • @ElenaHandtrack
      @ElenaHandtrack  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Wishing you all the best for your applications :)

  • @studylikegranger6428
    @studylikegranger6428 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you for your sharing!! 🙏🏻 Though this video was posted 1 year ago, I still found the tips useful as an international student who wanna apply to the UK unis 😭🤍

  • @ramneetkaur9512
    @ramneetkaur9512 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    OMG..I just needed it rn...THANK YOU SO MUCH ELENA...Lots of love from an indian

  • @muhammadaziztolqinov1526
    @muhammadaziztolqinov1526 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    It is very essential information to me . Thank you So Much Elena

  • @ShaunakSamant2207
    @ShaunakSamant2207 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much Elena. This really helped a lot. I was quite anxious about writing my PS. This really calmed my nerves.

    • @nikola206
      @nikola206 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Shaunak Samant if you need any advice I’d love to help! I start at Oxford this autumn and I know just how hard it’s been for next years applicants to get the help they need from their schools, or even just getting decent feedback. If you need advice or feedback my email is lochlandpoppy@gmail.com. Best of luck with your application!

  • @SamElle
    @SamElle 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Oh jeeeez I was looking back at my personal statement from when I applied to my PhD program at Cornell and I CRINGED

  • @wubbbyyy
    @wubbbyyy 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much for sharing, Elena!

  • @adyray1522
    @adyray1522 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hi Elena, thanks for your advice. Your videos are so useful. You are so pretty and smart.

  • @bernicehccheung
    @bernicehccheung 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    OMG I NEEDED THIS, THANK YOU!!!

  • @Julia-ku5vy
    @Julia-ku5vy 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so much for this video! This will be very useful soon!

    • @ElenaHandtrack
      @ElenaHandtrack  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      all the best for your applications :)

  • @nadia6999
    @nadia6999 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    ahhh yayy i really needed this!!

  • @rababsoni7190
    @rababsoni7190 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Very inspired by you...❤❤

  • @jordananeubhaher1809
    @jordananeubhaher1809 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Elena what MacBook model u have( i’m sorry , my english is really bad)

  • @elifmelisarslan6291
    @elifmelisarslan6291 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Elena❤️ Thank you this video is really helpful...

  • @rusandifernando2580
    @rusandifernando2580 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you so much for this video!!!!!!

  • @flighteaglediy8220
    @flighteaglediy8220 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Does it matter whether you play musical instruments or not? I digging says no, but a friend told me it would matter of UCAS...I play two, so would I still be OK after dropping one? help a fellow human being out!🙃

  • @arkomukherjee3853
    @arkomukherjee3853 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Nice video!
    One quick question- I did not choose history as a GCSE option. Instead, I have chosen Geography, Art ( where lots of research + writing is required surprisingly and therefore provides me with transferrable skills) ,business studies and have to do Religious studies and English language/ literature as compulsory subjects along with several others. Does not choosing history diminish my chances for Cambridge? Are there any extra activities I have to undertake to secure a place at Cambridge?
    Sorry the question turned out to be a long one :/

    • @arkomukherjee3853
      @arkomukherjee3853 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      by extra activities I mean things like Open day/ a pre-Uni course I don't know about, etc? Thanks for the time stamps also- really helpful !

    • @nikola206
      @nikola206 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Arko Mukherjee not having a history gcse does absolutely not affect your application. I didn’t do history either and got into oxford.

    • @nikola206
      @nikola206 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Arko Mukherjee if you need any extra advice from someone with experience of applying to Oxbridge my email is lochlandpoppy@gmail.com

    • @arkomukherjee3853
      @arkomukherjee3853 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      So you're a law student, right? Anyways thank you for the reply. I was expecting someone would only send a 10 word reply and not also their email :), so thank you for taking your time to help !

    • @nikola206
      @nikola206 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Arko Mukherjee no I’m a biology student but I know that Oxbridge do not pick apart exactly which GCSEs you do. They will glance over your gcse grades just to check you have a good track record but they don’t mind which exact ones you do, they care much more about which a levels you do. And while I don’t do law, I do know what the application process is like for Oxbridge and can give objective feedback for your personal statement as someone who has never met you before, just like whoever is reading it when you apply, so I can tell you what my impressions are, and answer any Oxbridge specific questions I can xx

  • @sarajarrar6232
    @sarajarrar6232 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you this video is really amazing and helpful:-)

    • @ElenaHandtrack
      @ElenaHandtrack  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      yay - glad to hear you found it useful :)

    • @sarajarrar6232
      @sarajarrar6232 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@ElenaHandtrack you are one of my favourite youtubers :-)

  • @annkk8989
    @annkk8989 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

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  • @Saihanna
    @Saihanna 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Do you speak German? I speak German, because I live in Switzerland

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  • @นายวิทวัสสุกแสก
    @นายวิทวัสสุกแสก 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

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  • @hananeel3560
    @hananeel3560 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

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    @dharsini9034 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

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    @vriiiii 4 ปีที่แล้ว

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  • @janam85
    @janam85 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

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