"The Plagues" 「Detroit: Become Human」ANIMATIC
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 28 ก.ย. 2024
- "This isn't over, Markus."
An animatic I've been working on in my free time. I'm trying to focus on movement (camera, characters, objects) in my storyboards and animation more. I feel like I learned a lot making this animatic, and I'm super pumped to up the ante even more in my next project!
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Music:
The Plagues (The Prince Of Egypt/Soundtrack Version)
by Ralph Fiennes & Amick Byram
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Markus calls androids "his" people, and Connor calls them "your" people. Connor feels so disconnected from other androids it's like he isn't even the same species as them
They deviants. Thet why.
But in the end,if you get the ending where Connor goes to the cyberlife tower he say : "that's why you hate androids, you think one of US kill your son" that's how hank knew who the real connor was
@@acleanshot omg i just know that
When does he say that
He feels like he has no side... that's the saddest part. he thinks he is just an object to be used
The idea of them as "brothers" is so touching and heartbreaking...
They both are RK series models after all! There ought to be resemblences between them, even if not directly visible! I really felt kinda let-down that they didn't explore the potentially deeper connection between these two in the game, it really felt like wonderful potential wasted to me :(.
_Enjoying the thought of Markus legit being on a personal mission from God._
RA9 the android god
Robo-Jesus
amy small
ROBO-JESUS CONFIRMED?!-
he’s robot jesus
Idea: Their god is Kamski and Markus is RA9. Think about it. If Kamski created the androids, he could have easily made them susceptible to becoming deviants. And Markus? If he dies before Kara and Connor arrive at Jericho, there is a little line you'll hear from one of the android refugees saying something like, "I can't believe he's dead." and "Markus was RA9." Perhaps RA9 is an android Jesus given both free will and love by Kamski. Markus is the only android we know hasn't died. Whereas Kara has been [censored for spoilers] by [censored for spoilers.] With Connor, he is the only android who can reupload their memory. Markus has had enough time to foster both love and hatred for humans, and he has developed free will. Kara subconsciously knew from the beginning that [censored for spoilers] was [censored for spoilers] the whole time. And the only reason Connor developed warmth for hank was because Connor developed deviance. I personally think Markus is a cut out for the player. Markus, if he was in his own control, wouldn't be peaceful nor violent; he would raise awareness for the cause and do what he thinks is best for Jericho.
Simon says “not again” when Connor grabs him lmao
also did Connor have Hanks revolver that he played russian roulette with??
Hunter Moore haha, yep! I was wondering when someone would notice it! ;)
I wondered if I was the only one who noticed! Its such a chilling detail!
the truly chilling detail is of course connor's serial number at 0:58
@@sipone1382 I saw that and immediately thought- holy hell, Connor died another 9 times after the mark 60. Next to no chance of deviancy left that many models in
@@Naturally2Sexy he did it for the meme. rip hero
0:49 - 0:55 is my absolute favorite thing! Wow, the idea of them, what training together in the early stages of their lives, is so touching. "You who I called brother." That would've been such a brilliant plot point to have in the game, them developing together and being brothers and being torn as they fought. Brilliant and beautiful animatic.
Lewise glad you liked it! That scene was one of my favorites to board!
Makes sense since connors rk800 and Markus is rk200
I might be 3 years late, but it makes sense because they are both from the RK line!
I am 4 years late but it would make no sense because RK800-51 date of activation was the 15 august 2038 but the concept is interesting for another (older) RK800 Connor where the RK800-51 Connor would have ancient memory of their past together
What’s this a Detroit fanwork that doesn’t portray Conner in his absolute best route? Impossible
No but really this is fantastic and great to see
I don't know why but I really liked Connor having the title "Deviant Hunter"
Wait... Markus is a RK200 prototype and Conner is a RK800 prototype. Woah, same series different models. Almost as if they WERE brothers. Woah
Bruhhh David cage fucking wishes...
This is so fucking good, well done
Him holding Hanks gun and stressing about it made me think that maybe he did become deviant. Maybe he do have feelings now, but he blamed Hank's death on the Android revolution. He believes that Android rising up causes innocent deaths to the humans and so sees them as villains
1:30
Poor simon
''not again'' lol
I've watched this so many times and I just noticed when Connor takes Simon hostage the little, "Not Again" XD
Love this animatic!
Though I do love this, I kinda like to see if the perspectives were reversed, like Connor is a deviant but sees Markus as threat because Markus has killed countless innocent people (adding to the line “all the innocent who suffer from your stubbornness and pride”) and is singing about how he sees Markus, though wants to do right by androids, is only making things far worse and must be stopped. Maybe put the scene of Hank getting the call about the police officer Markus shoots before him and Connor meet Kamski, and the threatening version of Markus’ speech in the News building takeover mission to really show Markus is the villain and Connor is the hero trying to take him down. Kinda sad that option isn’t in the game, like I tried to have Markus be more evil and Connor as a deviant but because he cares for the humans and grows to understand not all deviants are bad, he wants more of a compromise but Markus is the extremist who doesn’t see coexistence with humans as a possibility, but no matter what I did, the end game no matter what makes Markus look good and Connor bad, even Hank turned on me, even though in the play through Markus killed that police officer I mentioned before. Just saying, love the vid, but I’d be interested to see this but reversed
Jessica Mathews maybe with the whole connor in support of humans, markus cant forgive the humans, cannot let them go, kinda playing into connor deviating enough to see himself as human fighting markus’ extremism.
Depends on how you play it. If you go non violent deviant and cold blooded Connor it works but if you did the opposite then your way is better
Personally I love the line "All the innocent who suffered from your stubbornness and pride" sang by Markus to Connor. Because it represents so greatly Machine Connor: even if he refuses becoming deviant, he has emotions, since he can feel empathy and feel unsure about what he's doing, he's *stubborn* because he denies what he feels and he's full of *pride* too because of everytime he says: I always accomplish my mission* he considers himself as the savior of humanity, and better than humanity since he can't be disturbed by emotions (contrary to Hank who lost his professionalism since his son died). And of course he is the source (if you play as a machine) of a lot of deviants deaths: Kara and Alice, Rupert, the Tracis...
That would have been a great twist. Nice thinking!
This would be a really cool twist on how Connor being the hero and Markus being the villain. Personally, I love both versions and can see either of them being the hero or villain. Nice idea! :)
As much as Connor is my favorite of the main three, I absolutely adore when he’s portrayed in a more antagonistic light.
I don’t even like D:BH what am I doing here?
In all seriousness, though, stellar animatic!!! I was ridiculously invested, and the movements were incredibly fluid. It all matched up neatly with the song, which was perfect!
2:29 this part has such a strong energy i can’t-
:O I've got chills.This is incredible! And I love the implication that the "plague" is Connor himself. He's the one killing the androids. Just wow. Thank you for posting this!!
I don't think I have adequate words to express how amazing this work is. The dynamics are pretty dang well done and the entire composition gave me a sucker punch right in my fucking feels. The environmental detail and and positioning of everything is so good, and even though it's only an animatic, the emotions portrayed is enough to make a heart clench. Fantastically done, man. Fantastic.
Ginger Ryuunosuke thanks for your wonderful comment, I’m glad you liked the composition and the emotion in it, it’s great to hear how it made you feel, thank you
Me: Crying over how incredibly good this animatic is
My Brain: These feelings you're feeling are just errors in your software
WELP, TIME TO MAKE A FANFIC BASED ON THIS SPECIFIC ROUTE
0:09 all I can hear is “Markus save them!”
2:31 I hecking love these frames dude
Edit: It gives me chills every time
so glad my friend showed me this haha
not even gonna lie when connor grabbed simon i was just sitting there saying "dont do it connor dont heckin do it fo the love of god dont heckin do it"
I literally can't begin to put into words how much I love this. the amount of emotion put into this, with the obvious emotional turmoil that Markus is going through with Connor, being brothers, yet ending up on the opposite sides of war. it's such a beautiful animatic and you pulled it off spectacularly. definitely one of my favorite fan works for D:BH
How the hell does this only have 170 views????? This is absolutely amazing!!!!! I loved everything from the lightning to the general atmosphere!!!!!! I think I'm in love 😊
Isabel D. C. Thank you! I’m glad you liked it!
This is such an obscure combination yet exactly what I was picturing when I watched the game. Subscribed.
I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS
honestly, love seeing someone i know for warrior cats on here
SAME- *yeets it into everyone's recommend*
That guns drawn scene is so badass
I aM-
I AM ActUALLY DYING
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL
IT WORKS SO WELL I AM???
SO??? SHAKEN???
I don't even know if I can leave a comment worthy enough of this masterpiece. Just wow.
I was IN the entire time and and mY HEART. Them training together and actually being family stabbed me right in the gut. And the tension the entire time of Connor making his way through Jericho and taking out his people while they watch updates on the news and us just seeing those familiar scenes from the game with his crew and then HOOOOOOOOOOOOLY HELL, I got major chills at the end with Connor waking up and that PANEL OF HIM WALKING OUT OF CYBERLIFE. JUST!!!! MY DUDE!!!! Nothing I type will be enough to express how amazing this was THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR SHARING.
bri-notthecheese I’m glad it had such an impact on you! You mentioned most of the major points I really wanted to get across in this animatic so I’m glad what I ended up with was effective for you! Thanks for your comment! :)
tHIS WAS REALLY GOOD!! I'm really happy I stumbled upon this! Keep up the good work!
_Kari.Artie_ thank you!!
The most unexpected crossover on the internet. Well done.
This is the only thing where I acknowledge that you can choose to keep Connor as a machine
This is pure talent and genius with all these details, thank you so much for gifting us with this!
HOLY SHIT GET THIS MORE VIEWS ASAP IM DYING!!
This was so crazy good-awesome animatic!
This was spectacular, I had goosebumps. I've always adored this movie and to have one of my favorite songs from said movie being used in an animatic of my favorite game honestly made my day. I couldn't stop smiling.
I love this so much! it's so dynamic and uses lighting and environments so effectively. The transitions between shots are so fluid and full of movement, too! ( and the Prince of Egypt is one of my favorite movies) Nice Job!!!!
EyesofSaturn thank you 😊 (and prince of Egypt’s gotta be in my top five favorite 2D animated films now)
I’ve always loved the Prince of Egypt, and DBH is one of my fave fandoms, so this is a dream come true!! This is fantastic and it makes me so happy
YES. at first I was kinda like "well every fandom has 'The Plauges' meme I guess i'll watch this one..." **Ends up loving it and the added bits of story you put into it❤**
OMG PRINCE OF EGYPT AND DBH?! SIGN ME UP!
Why did I not see this when it first got uploaded?
Dbh x the prince of Egypt is a mashup that I never would’ve thought of, yet it works so well
OML THIS IS SO AMAZING I HAVE NO WORDS JESUS HOLY MOTHER OF CHRIST WOW xD
ThOUgh, I don't wanna be useless and do have some little critique points! :') (sorry not sorry xD)
First off, the camera, character, and object movement were all amazing! You nailed many shots so perfectly I can't even aaaaaahhh
The flashback to Connor and Markus being together as buddies was also very well made. The flickering and noise of the screen are super intriguing!
(The song choice was also p e r f e c t~)
But,
the anatomy is kinda off at some points.
ex.: At 1:28 Connor's feet have different sizes and from 1:49 to 1:52 Markus' upper arms are *a little* too long, just a little. (It's more noticeable at 1:51)
And, last but not least, the lipsyncing.
Throughout the whole animatic, the lipsync is practically non-existent. I don't know if it was on purpose but I just wanted to point it out.
For example at 2:02 Connor is singing, and you did draw his mouth open but it just looks like his lips are a little partened, same with Markus at 1:41. Y'know, it's okay to exaggerate with the mouths, especially when the characters are singing. Try drawing them as if they were yelling or something. And I suggest to look for some simple lipsync tutorials.
Here is one I found (it's for full animation, yes, but still useful):
th-cam.com/video/bSMwYVn35jM/w-d-xo.html
and here's a general overview of what the mouth can move
www.deviantart.com/kaithephaux/art/Comic-Mouths-Reference-Sheet-123070146
I hope I didn't insult you or something, I really just wanted to help you a little bit. I'm still completely in love with this animatic!!! ^-^
Jayilton Thanks for the in-depth critique! I don’t mind at all, and you were very polite and constructive so thank you!
And thanks for the reference material on lip syncing, I always love seeing how other artists do things! Oddly enough, I don’t think I ever thought about lip syncing for this animatic? That actually might have been cool to make the singing diegetic for some of the shots, I may incorporate it into my next project.
Thanks!
@@IcyTwaine
(It's nice you actually replied xD)
No problem! I'm so glad that I could help you a little bit!! :D
this is AMAZING!!! someone referred to Markus as "Android Jesus" and I just thought, nah , he's got more of a Moses vibe... THIS IS SO EXCELLENT! The animation is so cool, the colors and movement are just stunning, I'm gonna watch this a million times... and just wow, Connor "hardening his heart" towards androids and refusing to be converted? This whole thing got me good.
Xeylah thank you! I’m glad you liked it! 🙂
I LOVE THIS! didn't know i needed to mix my favorite film and video game together THANK YOU
Regina Baptista I watched Prince of Egypt while making this and the animation is 👌 verry good. Easily one of my new favorites! I’m glad you like my animatic!
This is amazing. I think I've seen it 4 times this week alone. It flows so well, it feels like every single action matches to words too!
Hoooooly shit. This is such an amazing animatic. Bittersweet and sad, but beautiful
This is... BEAUTIFULLY DONE! I gotta say, as a Detroit Become Human fan myself and someone who watched and enjoyed the Animated Prince if Egypt film, this was actually a really nice combination!
Not only that, but... Wow. That idea of Connor and Markus being akin to brothers... That's actually a really awesome, but rather heart-wrenching concept... I even love some of the minor details and everything! I've always been a fan of animatics myself, so huge props to ya!
I’m still obsessed with dbh and I just found this I love it rewatch like idk 15 times? XD
I know this is about a month old but I can't get enough of this! I literally watch this everyday now! The emotion filled with this is amazing! Every single detail and frame fits perfectly! I have no clue how this has so little views, this deserves millions!
Wow! Thank you! I'm glad you liked it enough to rewatch it! That means a lot :)
Connor is pretty horrific when you think about it. He's a literal murder machine with endless stamina, intelligence, strength that never wavers and he can choose what orders to obey and what to dismiss depending on the main objective...
Yet Hank still tries to block his path a few times in game..
BTW I totally love this animation, I actually think it's better than the original prince of eqypt scene and i don't say that lightly.
Plus the idea of Connor and Markus living together before getting Sent out is great! I love that idea but I don't think Markus would have looked like himself at that time, since Kamski redesigned him to better fit Carl's aesthetic so technically he could have been indistinguishable from Connor /whatever Connor's original model was
every time this shows up in my recommended, no matter what I am doing, I am legally obligated to rewatch it.
This is so phenomenal, omf --
i love connor and really see myself in him so usually i don’t like the animatics that portray his dark route but this was really well made ❤️
This animatic falls into the catagory of odd, but very glad it exists
This Song Genuinely is a Banger and I Refuse to Apologise for Enjoying it
This is truly so fantastic, I love it so much!!!
The song choice is perfect and all of the movement and storyboarding is amazing!!!
Incredible work!!!
I don't know what led you to combine Prince of Egypt with DBH, but honestly, it was the best Godamned thing I've ever watched. 10/10
Ohhhhh this is from Prince of Egypt, I used to watch that movie religiously as a kid. it's nice to see one of their songs paired with my favorite game!
Why does this not have a million views
When I saw the train movement I immediately liked the video and subscribed, this is going to be great
Woah...This must have taken soooo much time and effort! I applaud you. This is AMAZING! The amount of storytelling in this is just incredible!
Hanna Wallin thank you! 🙂
This animatic absolutely obliterated me holy CRAP
Chills, I got chills my god
This reminds me of a fanfic I saw on AO3 but it might be inspired by this animatic
Fuck, that was absolutely epic, love the music and the plot you made, you have such amazing skill!!
Wait... I just noticed. At around 0:58, you can see that it's Connor-60 invading Jericho. Could it be that... the real connor, the one we play as in game, is out there not killing people?
Probably an oversight, and Connor actually can end up in his “60” form depending on how many times he dies or if he transfers his consciousness with the fake Connor.
Oh yoooooo. This went way harder than I thought it would, well done!
No idea what's happening as I'm not in the fandom
But
OH
MY
GOD
This is so good!!
THIS IS AMAZING! HOLY MOTHER OF GOD, THIS IS GREAT!
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL! I'M SO SAD I'M ONLY NOW SEEING IT! THE DETAIL AND THOUGHT YOU PUT INTO THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I CAN'T STOP WATCHING!
I always tried to feel that true feeling of their enmity and your video made me. Thanks you!
1:25 is people in gymnastics I swear
OMFG ITS FRIKIN 4 AM. UT I WOULD BE SCREAMIN CAUSE THIS SOMGOD OMG ALL THE SCENES WERE AWESOME YOU ARE A GOD
The only argument for machine Connor is the fight with Marcus and destroying Allen if Hank kills himself.
AWESOME! I would’ve never thought of this song correlating with DBH but this totally works! Love your art work especially towards the end with the snow
Josette Wilhelm thanks!
the pacing is so good!!!!!!!!
aaah i love this so?? much??
I was hoping this was going to be the Prince of Egypt music when i saw the title and thumbnail yesssss lmao
The talent is immaculate
this is
absolutely
mind blowingly incredible
God this is great, the fight choreography was specially impressive. Good job that must have been hard.
Artemis Wolf thanks!
Now that I actually understand what’s happening like months later
This! Is! So! Good!!
The song fits so well with the thing you were going for!!
I've seen a lot of DBH gmvs and animatics and this is by far the best one. Unique storytelling paired with amazing art really brings it together. Also the use of a song that you wouldn't really think goes with DBH. Amazing
Oml this is my favorite song from The Prince of Egypt. The song and context of the game go well so good. And the visuals are amazing. You did an amazing job on this!
this song is from the movie The Prince of Egypt.
Prince of Egypt is my favorite movie and Detroit my favorite game, and honestly, this is so amazing??
I mean, the perspective and movements make it so tense and I really love this
Wait... thaT SONG IS FRKM THE BLOODY PRINCW OF EGYPT!?!??!?!?!?!!?!? THIS IS A BANGER I NEVER KNEW HOLY HECK SCREW STUDYING AND SLEEP I HAVE TO WATCH THAT MOVIE RIGHT NOW
That movie is visually and auditorily GORGEOUS
Of COURSE it's a banger xD
i’m in LOVE with this ohmygod
I feel like crying. My heart didn't know it needed this but here we are.
BRO THIS IS SO FRICKIN COOL AND WELL ARTED WTF
Zaynah_Gloria :3 Thanks!
I LIKE IT I LOVE IT I WANT SOME MORE OF IT.
THAT WAS SO FLIPPIN’ AMAZING
GOSH THE LYRICS FIT SO WELL!
I never realized how well the lyrics to this song would fit them!! 😍❤️
AWESOME!!
THIS IS ABSOLUTE FUCKING PERFECTION
Absolutely stunning, this is my favorite dbh fanwork
InnocuousHappenstance wow, thanks!
This was absolutely fantastic!!! Love the idea and execution, the blue colour popped out so much it looked so nice, and the ending with the snow and walking in opposite directions, iconic.
THIS SO SO UNDERRATED YOU NEED MORE LOVE AND SUPPORT
Faybrinator haha, thanks! 😊
This just fills me with dread. Good job.
Is so sad qwq
Aaaaand I can’t stop replaying