Pitching the PERFECT Spider-Man Trilogy
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- Pitching the PERFECT Spider-Man Trilogy
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I like how Joe Bagley is a reference to the comic book artist Mark Bagley
Hehehe
Here’s my trilogy:
Film 1: Spider-Man: Born Free.
This story would be about a Spider-Man who’s already started his career as a superhero being so lost in the mask and trying to live up to Uncle Ben’s words “with great power comes great responsibility” so much that he loses touch with his identity as Peter Parker, the villain would be Doc Ock who, like Peter, gets lost in his work of trying to build a machine to change humanity.
Film 2: Spider-Man: New Alliance.
In this film, Peter teams up with Daredevil as a new foe in The Kingpin is introduced, Peter must learn to let others in and let others help him as he helps others, this film would have Harry, MJ, and Felicia become allies to him.
Film 3: Spider-Man: Hands of The Wicked.
This film introduces The Green Goblin as the main threat that the series has been building up to, and will show us how much of a psychological toll he has on Spider-Man. In the end The Goblin is defeated, Felicia and Peter become friends, and Peter married MJ, this film could also introduce Miles Morales as the new Spider-Man as Peter is off with MJ, and Harry could be killed by The Goblin snoring how evil Norman is in killing his own son
Hey I was thinking of something like that if Tim Burton made Spider-Man.
Film 1: Spider-Man: Identity Crisis
Peter has just started College and gets to know Gwen Stacy who he has partnered up with for science class. They go to Coney Island to discuss their project and slowly get to bond. Peter moves out of Aunt Mays house and gets an apartment on his own but quickly loses it. Harry offers to stay with him in his new apartment and Peter accepts. The Chameleon sees Spider-Man on the news while torturing a homeless victim. He decides he wants to ruin Spider-Man’s reputation and he creates a Spider-Man suit. Spider-Man is swinging when his spider sense goes off startling him. He looks into the crowd and sees a random man but he knows that’s the trigger of his spider sense. He follows the man into a warehouse where he finds a dead body. George Stacy walks in and concludes Spider-Man has committed a murder. Spider-Man webs George up and escapes. George goes back to the police but his concerns are ignored. He is later given authority to go after Spider-Man when Chameleon kills the mayor dressed as Spider-Man. Over the course of the film Peter spends less and less time as Peter desperately trying to clear his name. Chameleon knows Peters identity and attacks Harry while disguised as Peter. This causes Peter to be placed under arrest for assault. Gwen visits him knowing there is something wrong and Peter didn’t attack Harry. She vouches for him and George re-examines the evidence finding out there were no fingerprints. Spider-Man goes to the Bar With No Name and talks to his informant Fredrick Foswell the first villain Spider-Man put away. Fredrick tells Spider-Man that the Chameleon is at an abandoned dock. Spider-Man apprehends the thugs and confronts Chameleon. They fight until Spider-Man rips off his mask seeing that Chameleon has no true face and is a mix of all the people he’s shape-shifted into. Chameleon no longer knowing his own identity kills himself leading to Peter feeling extremely guilty. Harry moves out of the apartment and goes back into the care of his father cutting Peter out of his life because he doesn’t want to be reminded of the time he almost died even though he knows it wasn’t Peter who attacked him. Peter meets up with Gwen on the Empire State roof and she gives him an ultimatum. Tell her what’s going on with him or they go their separate ways. Peter reluctantly tells Gwen he’s Spider-Man and Gwen is shocked. She tells Peter that she’s dealing with the loss of her mother Helen and her father has become distant due to Gwen reminding him of his deceased wife. Peter comforts her which leads to them both kissing. Peter vows to spend more time with the people that matter finishing the project with Gwen to Miles Warren his teachers dismay. He visits Aunt May once again and tells her about what happened with Harry. They embrace and she tells Peter that he’ll always be welcome with her. The movie ends on a final monologue from Peter synced up with a swinging scene where he discusses the importance of keeping his identity and being there for his loved ones. He reflects on how Chameleon became so lost in his secret identity that he forgot who he really was and Peter doesn’t want that to happen to himself.
Let me know if you want to hear about my other two movies in the trilogy. I loved your work Lewis and I hope you’re doing well.
What are your other movies???????
if im gonna be honest I thought that it was a fine trilogy my main complaint is that its pretty cliche for a spiderman Story/trilogy like Gwen dying, Harry Becoming the Goblin and Peter getting married to Mj
That’s fair, but that’s why I also started with Gwens death and didn’t end with it
@@LewisFanFictionyeah and that Spider-Man cinematic universe because we definitely need some changes as it would repetitive,stall and predictable
My perfect trilogy:
Movie #1:
Origin story. Peter is in college. Mary Jane is love interest. Villains are doc Ock (who would be Peter’s mentor), Scorpion (who would be uncle Ben’s killer), and rhino (Doc Ock’s pawn). Harry is his best friend and would find out his identity and be important in the story. MJ also finds out his identity
Movie #2:
Electro would be the villain at first. MJ would break up with Peter because he is overprotective and she wants to be a brave journalist. Mysterio has his origin and becomes the main villain… Time jump… Peter would now be dating Gwen who worked for Octavius alongside Peter. Mysterio would get defeated again by Spider-Man making him rethink his strategy. He creates the Goblin out of hate for Norman and Spider-Man. Goblin and Mysterio team up. Gwen dies (obviously😂). At the end Peter gets the Symbiote from a lab he works at. Post credit scene shows Kraven who works for Norman Osborn and he organizes the Sinister Six alongside Doc Ock who he broke out of prison.
Movie #3: Peter has the Symbiote. Sinister Six are main villains. Peter would have moral decline. MJ would fight to help bring him back but he keeps rejecting her. Peter rejects the Symbiote after realizing its effects. He defeats the sinister six who work for Norman. Goblin is put in prison at the end. Peter reconciles with MJ. The end. The future is meant to be up in the air.
I’m sorry, but this sounds like a mashup of the original Sam Raimi trilogy and the Andrew Garfield version just with different villains
Not my ideal Spider-Man trilogy but, it’s still a dam good one. I always have a hard time thinking of my ideal Spider-Man trilogy, mostly because he would work better in tv. One thing I know for sure I would love to see a Spidey movie set in the 70s. Anyways, loved the pitch keep of the great work💪
My perfect trilogy would be
Film 1: it would be set one year after Peter Became spider man he hasn’t fought any big supervillains yet just small crooks and chameleon would be the villain of the movie and after spider man puts him in jail he breaks out and frames spidey for various crimes destroying his reputation before it even began it would be revealed that chameleon is working for someone called the master planner along with four other villains rhino, the prowler, shocker and scorpion spider man has to clear his name for the crimes that chameleon framed him for the master planners plan is to get spider man into jail so that no one can stop them from committing as many crimes as they want and steal a powerful substance from oscorp that the master planner wants to use to rule New York City. Spider man gets put in jail but escapes to stop the chameleon and the crime spree he succeeds but the powerful substance they where trying to get turns out to be the venom symbiote which bonds with Peter ending the movie with a final swing in the black suit also his love interest would be mj and he would be going to high school and taking photos for the bugle
Movie 2: with the newfound power of the symbiote Peter would try to find out who and where the master planner is black cat would be in the movie and miles would start coming to peters school. Curt connors determined to grow his arm back turns himself into the lizard and wreaks havoc on New York spider man would try and track him down and cure him but during that spider man stops a heist where he meets black cat and they end up falling in love put Peter doesn’t agree with black cats methods and tries to make her become a hero instead of a criminal she disagree but wants to help spider man with the lizard and tracks him down for him they find the lizard and see him tied up and unconscious being studied by fritz von Meyer who had been studying mutated creatures such as a strange mutated bee species and wanted to study the lizard’s blood but spider man stopped him and cured the lizard but in the process broke the mutated bees out of containment and they attacked meyer and he became swarm furious at spider man for doing this to him he attacked spider man and they have a battle all throughout the city with black cat helping spider man. Swarm ends up killing black cat and out of rage made worse from the symbiote spider man kills swarm spider man retreats back to curt conners to see if he’s okay curt figures out that the symbiote is an alien and was alive, horrified from what he did and the fact it was alive spider man determined the suit is corrupting him and he figures out it’s weakness to sound and goes to the nearby church and removes it using the Bell in the tower the symbiote gets off him and goes onto Eddie brock who Peter makes lose his job and ruins his reputation earlier in the movie making him become venom who now wants to kill Peter Parker that thanks to the symbiote he now knows is spider man end credits scene: the master planner and the other villains are planning revenge against spider man and venom appears and tells them he has some info for them about spider man. Also during the movie Peter would be very rude to all his Friends and push them away.
Movie 3: spider man would go against the sinister six of venom, shocker, rhino, the prowler, scorpion and the master planner revealed to be peters childhood idol when it comes to science Otto octavious they now know Peter is spider man thanks to venom and they attack his school and attempt to kill peters friends and spider man tries to stop them but they are to powerful and rip of his mask on live tv revealing his identity to the world Peter builds a stronger suit made of metal the iron spider suit to try and beat them and defeats the shocker, prowler, rhino and scorpion but is still overpowered by doc ock and venom who split up to attack aunt may and mj and spider man has to chose who to save because if he goes to save one he might no be able to save the other he goes to save mj believing he could beat doc ock faster then he could venom and rushes over he ends up saving mj and beats doc ock he arrived home to save aunt may but by the time he gets there aunt may is dead on the floor and venom is laughing in spider man’s face he stops holding back and beats venom half to death but he then realises he can’t let his anger control him and kill another person so he gets the symbiote off Eddie and gets him into jail and destroys the symbiote for good
There would be more to it like more stuff related to high school and miles but I couldn’t think of it and just wanted to focus on the main spider man story
For me I would make the trilogy kinda similar to how Assassin’s creed has the ezio trilogy
Like the first part would start with an inexperienced spiderman who is still in high school
Part 2 could be a story set with a college aged Peter who would eventually find his place as a hero
And the final part being an already experienced spiderman who will eventually pass on the mantle to Miles Morales
Well if I was going to do a Spider-Man movie like Miles I’m going to do my own thing, Joe Bagley very impressive because I have felt that Peter deserves a better friend that is loyal to him like Ned from the MCU unlike Harry as I always felt that he comes off as Self pity and entitlement.
I would have thought that you would use Scorpion for Spider-Man 4 in phase 2 of the Spider-Man cinematic universe.
You know, I'd like you to do a Spider-Man crossover with Wonder Woman.
Spidey already had a couple of encounters with Superman and Batman in the comics, but not with the third member of the DC trinity.
Vulture is literally the perfect villain for an origin story, a man who is empathetic and in some storylines related to Ben which could end with him realizing with great power comes great responsibility ultimately letting vulture live and putting him in jail, vulture could also be Mj’s dad
I still think the best Spider-Man trilogy is Slightly Insulting’s Minecraft Friend or Foe series ❤
I wouldn't have Harry be Green Goblin but maybe Hobgoblin again.
i only wished that both sony and disney merged together...in order to get the spectactular spider man series back
My ideas are actually for a 5-film saga
Movie One:
• Peter would already be established as Spider-Man, that means no origin story flashbacks
• Peter is in his freshman year of college, and will initially be living in a dorm room with 2 other friends: Felicia Hardy and Randy Robertson.
• Felicia would secretly be a cat burglar and hacker called The Black Cat, and she would be stealing thousands of dollars from various crime lords throughout NYC, one of them being Lonnie Lincoln a.k.a. Tombstone
• Tombstone would hire 5 supervillains to bring in Felicia alive
• These 5 villains would include Herman Schultz a.k.a. Shocker, Fred Myers a.k.a. Boomerang, James Sanders a.k.a. Speed Demon, James Beverley a.k.a. Overdrive, and finally, Janice Lincoln a.k.a. Beetle, who would of course, be Tombstone's own daughter
• Film would end with Peter and Felicia defeating Tombstone and his assassins, and Felicia giving up her life of crime to be an ally to Spider-Man
• Film ends with Final Swing
Movie Two:
• Spider-Man is lambasted by the media for seemingly working with a notorious criminal, and J. Jonah Jameson uses this as proof that Spider-Man is a criminal
• Peter still works at The Daily Bugle, (as it helps pay for his rent) and Jonah hires Mac Gargan, a private investigator, to stalk Peter and find out why Peter takes such good pictures of Spider-Man, and in turn, fugure out why Peter is so defensive of him.
• Peter's spider-sense warns him of Gargan, and he fails to find the info he was tasked with finding, Jonah is initially furious with Mac, but he decides to give him one last chance
• Jonah signs Gargan up for an experiment that will create a person capable of defeating Spider-Man, a kind of super-powered police officer. Jonah introduces Mac to Alastair Smythe, who also shares J.J.J.'s belief that Spider-Man is a menace to society.
• Alastair agrees to conduct a procedure on Gargan that will imbue him with the proportionate strength and speed of a Scorpion.
• Gargan is injected with mutiple super-steriods, and is fitted with a green suit of armor, designed by Smythe himself, and is also given an laser blasting tail, and The Scorpion is born. Alastair also gives Gargan a small army of robots called Spider-Slayers
• Peter and the Scorpion fight mutiple times throughout the film, with Gargan's mental stability progressively getting worse, eventually leading Gargan to go completely insane and turn on his creators, paralyzing Alastair, and almost killing Jameson. Spider-Man destroys the Spider-Slayer robots, saves J.J.J., and defeats Scorpion by short-circuiting his suit and ripping off his cyborg tail.
• Final Swing at the end of the movie
Movie 3:
• Kraven the Hunter would be the main antagonist of this film
• Kraven would come from a long line of big-game hunters, but would eventually become bored with hunting the same creatures, and wanted a bigger challenge
• Kraven would be informed by his wife Calypso of Spider-Man and other vigilantes in New York, giving Kraven the challenge he desperately needed in his old age
• Peter would be in his sophomore year of college, and would rent his own apartment, though he would still keep in touch with Felicia and Randy
• Kraven would first attack Daredevil, but before he could kill the Devil of Hell's Kitchen, Spider-Man intervenes and fights Kraven for the first time
• Kraven would be defeated by Spider-Man and Daredevil, and would meet back up with Calypso, who would supply him with various herbs and potions that would give Kraven the power to take down not just Spider-Man, but anyone else who stands in his way
• A powered-up Kraven would once again fight against Spider-Man, and would actually win this time, shooting Peter with a tranquilizer dart and burying him underground
• Peter would eventually burst out of his grave by reminding himself of his friends and family, and would be determined to defeat Kraven
• Spider-Man would finally defeat Kraven in the end, and he would be sent to prison with Tombstone, Scorpion, and others
Movie 4:
• The Hobgoblin would be the main antagonist of the film, with the Chameleon as secondary antagonist
• Roderick Kingsley would be introduced as a fashion conglomerate who secretly conducts arms deals to various crime lords throughout the world
• Roderick would be inspired by Norman Osborn's tenure as The Green Goblin, and would create a persona that mimicks the late Osborn's dual identity, and thus, The Hobgoblin is born
• Roderick would also hire a Russian mercenary called The Chameleon as a personal bodyguard who disguises himself as Roderick when the real Roderick Kingsley poses as the Hobgoblin
• Hobgoblin would leave Spider-Man with mutiple red herrings as to who he really is like in the comics
• When Roderick is finally revealed to be the man behind the Hobgoblin mask, another Roderick Kingsley walks into the room, causing much confusion to Spider-Man
• Peter figures out that this other Roderick Kingsley is a fake, and the fake Roderick reveals himself as the Chameleon, who in turn, reveals himself to be the half-brother of Kraven the Hunter. Roderick hired Chameleon to be his imposter because he promised to Chameleon that he would have Kraven released from prison
• Spider-Man defeats Chameleon and Hobgoblin, but a post credits scene shows Spider-Man finding a dead body in an alleyway with two words written on the wall in blood:
"Carnage Rules"
Movie 5:
• Carnage would be the main villain of the movie
• Peter would be in his senior year of college at this point in time
• He would help Jean DeWolff and Stan Carter catch a notorious serial killer named Cletus Kasady, the man responsible for the killings and the "Carnage Rules" messages
• Cletus would become cell mates with none other than Eddie Brock, formerly known as Venom
• The Venom Symbiote was separated from Brock before the series, and would basically be on the brink of death, as his symbiote's bond was so strong, that separating it from him would slowly kill him
• The Symbiote would enter their cell through a faucet in a sink in their cell
• The Symbiote would recombine with Eddie, turning him once again into Venom, Cletus would attack Venom in self defense, and cut off a piece of the symbiote
• This piece would actually be an entirely new symbiote offspring from Venom, as symbiotes of course reproduce asexually. Cletus would bond to the newborn Symbiote, transforming into Carnage.
• Carnage would actually team up with Venom at first, as Venom thinks he would be a valuable asset to help him kill Spider-Man
• Venom and Carnage both defeat Spider-Man, and even think they both killed him, so Carnage betrays Venom by beginning to randomly kill innocent people
• This enrages Venom, as Spider-Man was the only person he believed needed to die, and this leads to a fight between Venom and Carnage, Venom loses
• Spider-Man reveals himself to be alive, and Venom realizes that Spider-Man is, in his mind, the lesser of two evils, and Spidey and Venom team up to take Carnage down
• Carnage begins killing people left, right, and center, and consumes their blood to stay alive and grow larger
• Peter and Eddie join up with Felicia, Daredevil, and Micheal Morbius, who creates a synthetic symbiote called Anti-Venom, designed specifically to combat Carnage, who has now grown to the size of a small building from the amount of victims he's killed
• Morbius gives the Anti-Venom suit to Peter, and he, Felicia, Venom, Daredevil, and Morbius set off to defeat Carnage
• Carnage defeats Venom, Felicia, Daredevil, and Morbius, leaving Peter to be the last one standing
• Peter, in the Anti-Venom suit, dives into Carnage's body, and disintegrates the Carnage Symbiote from the inside, leaving only Cletus Kasady
• Cletus is sent back to prison, and Peter parts ways with Daredevil and Morbius before striking a deal with Venom where Eddie promises to not go after Peter if he doesn't go after them. Eddie promptly leaves for San Francisco, opening the door for potential Venom solo adventures
• We have one last scene where Peter and Felicia graduate from ESU, and promise to keep in touch with each other as Spider-Man and Black Cat
• We end this film saga with one final swing from our Friendly Neighborhood Spider-Man
The End
Movie 1: Spiderman: the spider and the cat
Movie 2: Spiderman: attack of the spider slayers
Movie 3: Spiderman: kravens first haunt
Movie 4: Spiderman vs the hob goblin
Movie 5: Spiderman and the lethal protector
Hey can you do a follow up to this with the next trilogy after Peter and MJ get married?
I don’t have a perfect Spider-Man trilogy, but I have a perfect Spider-Man film with Spider-Man going through the public hatred from everyone and JJJ. Scorpion’s the villain.
Seriously?! Do you write for film or television? You have serious talent!!!! The villains, the character arc, and relationship growth. It has everything
Would've been fun to watch
I loved this fanfiction! I think it's really cool how you referenced certain spidey comics and panels! Great job! 👏👏👏
Thank you! 😄
I knew you would knock this video outta the park! I almost want to see what happened earlier in this Spider-Man’s career, especially if you include more OC’s like Joe Bagley. Also, the first movie is my favorite because that’s how I would have made a “Spider-Man Returns” movie, I just could never figure out which villain worked the best, but you did!
Nice, man! Very dope!
I wondered if J jonah Jameson ever faced consequences on his actions since Scorpion killed everyone just to get to Spider-Man like in life story annual where he does go to jail for his creation and spends almost the rest of his life there because of what he did to destroy Spider-Man which failed terribly or like in every universe he faces no justices then gets away for what he's done something I hated so much about him tell me?
The Hobgoblin tried to extort him by revealing the truth but he eventually stepped down as Editor-In-Chief.
@@burtonversejoker195 I wished thst extortion had succeed and got his sorry as in jail like in life story but sadly that is not what he got at least he would've rot in jail for creating Scorpion leading to some of his kills on him and even the spider slayer so yeah I wished he got served to justice for simply those he makes he is not a hero he never will be he deserves to be forgotten over time by people Miguel was right all along about thst he is no good man he never will be!
@@edrianraneses5864 Yeah. It is weird how Scorpion never got Jameson sent to jail to avoid a heavier sentence in the main continuity.
@@burtonversejoker195 yeah that only happens in the life story annual I hoped that moment from that ai comic gets adapted into the main continuety soon or even in marvel's spider ma timeline despite being dead he could eventually get enough evidence about thr way he became who is on him and succeeded in doing just that rat him up that he cannot escape or hide from
@@edrianraneses5864 Indeed. I like how Life Story deconstructed the Jameson Scorpion plot by sending Jameson to life for his crimes.
Wow, what a pitch!
What surprised me the most was that I had a very similar way of incorporating Scorpion into my trilogy. It was almost identical, which means that it is probably the best direction to take the character.
The sequel is where we part ways with story and characters. I liked that you made Peter and MJ parallel each other. It makes their connection much more meaningful, and using Hydro-Man as the space that keeps their lives separate as well as the thing that brings them closer by revealing more about MJ was well thought out.
The final film was a culmination of the previous two, and I enjoy the idea of the story coming full circle. A story that rhymes, where the hero is put to the test again to see if they have learned their lesson. A great way of wrapping everything up and doing it with care.
I like when the characters are either mirroring the hero or are directly caused by the inaction or action of the hero.
Overall, your trilogy is perfect for you, and I think they are excellent for me. I would love to watch these as films. I obviously think differently when it comes to crafting my own three-part story, but I would not be upset or nit picky with this lineup. I hope your writing makes it to the big screen one day!
Thank you very much! Will have to check out your pitch at some point!
@@LewisFanFiction it would be awesome to have you read it and get your thoughts
The insomniac games are the perfect trilogy
Absolutely not
@@awesomebrosinc.2160Someone's mad
@@awesomebrosinc.2160 Yeah I agree as much as I love those games I won't lie they have major flaws
@@The_Blue_OtakuOn that I can agree on they are not a blueprint for a perfect trilogy due to some story flaws it often has like in marvel's spider man 2