IELTS Writing Task 1 Table | Lesson 2: How to Write a Band 9

IELTS Writing Task 1 Table | How to Write a Band 9
Hi everyone,
In this video, you can see how to write a band 9. You’ll see the techniques and thought processes that you need to get a higher IELTS writing score.
In the first video, I shared with you the general process for writing task 1 and how to apply it in each type of chart or graph. If you have not seen this clip yet, click the link below:
► • IELTS Writing Task 1 L...
IELTS Writing Task 1 Pie Chart | Lesson 3: How to Write a Band 9
► • IELTS Writing Task 1 P...
So, the second video will show you how to analyze the data for the second type: “TABLE”. Remember to follow the 3 steps that I mentioned before in the first video for the line graph.
Step 1: Read the topic carefully and identify important information:
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[@wendykash975]

Please don't have loud music background it's super annoying when one is trying to grasp information

[@Phe_nom]

The music isn't loud especially when she starts talking. FOH.

[@jayroseville58]

The table illustrates information about the underground railway systems in six cities. These cities are London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles.
Overall, the railway system of London is longer than all the cities, whereas Kyoto has the shortest railway system length.
Interestingly, yearly train passengers in Tokyo were higher than London's railway commuters. Despite that Tokyo's railway system is shorter than London's, the former was 1927 yearly passengers, while the latter was 775. The same behavior was evident while comparing French passengers with London's. The total length of the Paris railway system is 199 kilometers, but the yearly French passengers were 1191. On the contrary, Washington DC's commuters were 144 only. Meanwhile, Kyoto's annual train passengers were 45, and Los Angeles commuters were 50.
The passengers for Kyoto and Los Angeles signify that the length of the railway system might contribute to their low yearly passengers, as the former has 11 kilometers while the latter has only 28 kilometers train system. In addition, Washington DC's railway length is 126 kilometers, as this length is also lower than London's with about 394 kilometers railway length.

[@sherlockwatson8322]

Thank you ,l got 7,7,6.5&7 in listening, reading,writing &speaking respectively because of ur invaluable exam tips.

[@TonyIELTSBox]

Hi, congratulation. Thank you for your cmt. And don't forget to share our channel with everyone. !

[@mansirana7414]

Really??

[@xamidullaevaxrol1456]

On the third paragraph, when you talked about "passengers per year" of Tokyo, it's mentioned that "with 1927 million passengers per year"
Question is, how do we know if it's "million" because "million" isn't mentioned in the question.

[@ksupraja2837]

well same doubt hhah

[@ironmancivilwar15]

Same question 😂

[@moea4014]

there shouldn't be a conclusion in task 1.

[@davidvalencia8823]

Its not actually a conclusion. Its more like a summary without your opinion. It improves your task 1 to an extra 0.5

[@mandeepprajapati2625]

@@davidvalencia8823
0.5 out of 3 ?

[@jashuah9993]

@@mandeepprajapati2625 I think he meant out of nine

[@duleensiriwardena9966]

Thank you very much for the amazing explanation dear Teacher. This extremely outstanding guidance

[@TonyIELTSBox]

Don't forget to share with friends in your country. Thank you!

[@cmpstylesp1859]

Great presentation and simple background. Despite the music being too loud and distracting, I love it. I want to know the name of it. If you could pls tell me the genre and the name of this music.

[@christan1826]

Thank a lot, it helps me a lot in learning writing. Thank again

[@euph0rya672]

Things bad about this video:
1. She talks way too slow
2. Too many ads
3. Video could’ve been reduced to few mins rather than 12
4. music was kind of distracting
5. Too many pauses
6. Monotone voice, (needs some enthusiasm and needs to sound more human rather than a robot)
7. Overall flow of the video is very slow
8. Video stretched out for 12 mins while it could’ve been less if she just would talk normally and not some robot held at gun point forced to read a script
Next time please make it a short summary and not some college lecture

[@romasaupan4455]

I thought if the report is in the past, then use the past tense. Instead of using IS, WAS should use in the sentence. Am i right? Please correct if im wrong🙂

[@er.yagyapanchal9085]

Bro this networks are still there in the cities 🥰🥰

[@lucykei6041]

You make this look so complex!

[@kafkaz3320]

yeah i think so it is easy indeed ))

[@Ss-ck7ix]

Its compelx because its for 9 band 😂

[@tanyakaur3448]

Why this answer is in present tense.. May be we use past tense words like was, were, has, have... Please reply? Quite confused 😕

[@tanyakaur3448]

@@arsalansajad8109 yeah ryt

[@tanyakaur3448]

@@arsalansajad8109 i gave that

[@tanyakaur3448]

@@arsalansajad8109 6.5 bands

[@tanyakaur3448]

@@arsalansajad8109 u want any help

[@tanyakaur3448]

@@arsalansajad8109 where you live

[@coldrain7265]

omg i watched minimum 6 advertisements during this video

[@videosfromtiktok4564]

Thats why the video is free

[@haleh7691]

I'm listening to your voice and watching your texts, now. Your explanations is good, but the words and sentences aren't clearly.
Can you correct this problem? Thanks a lot

[@olakunleadewole4272]

Thanks for the video. The clause I see in your video is that it is too blurred.

[@nguyenvan1240]

I have a little question. I was taught that when I state 2 or more figures at the same time ( for example: compared to 25% and 35% for the A and B company), I must use "respectively" to clarify what I mean. But in this video, I can see that you didn't write the word "respectively "?
So is it optional and won't make the sentence vague when it's removed? Thanks a lot 👍

[@dhruvshukla2389]

U must write "respectively".

[@muazamali5854]

Can we write overview/conclusion in second paragraph after introduction???

[@SurYa_Yadav66]

Absolutely fantastic one.

[@slepoir27]

Thank you for your videos!

[@TonyIELTSBox]

You're welcome. we appreciate if this video is shared with everyone in your country. It makes us get inspired to produce more video

[@babbaljeetkaurdhaliwal9270]

Very nyc explanation mam but mam why u use million word because it is not mentioned in table that data given in millions....

[@gulalykhan719]

Great way of teaching Madum

[@mahmoudtammam1880]

Thanks so much for your help

[@TonyIELTSBox]

You're welcome. we appreciate if this video is shared with everyone in your country. It makes us get inspired to produce more video

[@itzkaur1704]

That's what I want thanku soo much mam God bless u

[@TonyIELTSBox]

You're welcome. we appreciate if this video is shared with everyone in your country. It makes us get inspired to produce more video

[@euph0rya672]

I had to watch the vid at 1.5x speed, too slow

[@nethmiyashara9218]

Good recommend videos

[@thuyma3042]

Many thanks 😍 however plz explain the use of the adverb 'easily' in the sentence 'Tokyo is easily the most used'

[@maribeldahan5302]

I like the background music hahaha I feel like I watched a cartoon movie 😂

[@VISAKH9496693959]

upload task 1 videos daily please

[@TonyIELTSBox]

We will try more...

[@gunelhasanova9073]

Thanky very much for explonation

[@khushkaranjassal3401]

Thank you mam it helps me in learning all graph from your

[@townshiplover5588]

Good job and thank you

[@rahatulbanna3935]

Where did you find Washington DC as the most expensive city?

[@gulsumkerim87]

Thank you❤️

[@huongmai1748]

What the differences give information about and give information on. Thanks a lot!

[@anchalsharma8765]

Thanku but all the data in the past in lieu of present so why should use is in the place of was?

[@MuzaffarMuzaffar-kn3hx]

Thanks 😊

[@cilocacecilia32]

Hi I appreciate it God bless 👏🏾🙏🏾🧡

[@nikhatbegum3058]

Thank you so much

[@sardorxojayev278]

Perfect.brst of luck

[@user-ju4ct8gm8r]

Outstanding

[@nemerem.A]

is there no overview for a table type of question ?

[@Pythongirl_]

She has described overview also.. 😊

[@swostika9743]

I am confused with one thing 😑 anybody plz tell me how she knew the passengers per year is given in "millions"😶 I don't get it

[@MuhammadIqbal-kb6dy]

Why are u using present simple tense

[@poojamehmi2144]

Very nice thanku so much

[@HangThuy-mg9ju]

8:30 "while only third in terms of size", not its not "the third"?

[@sardortojiyev1768]

So useful information

[@rupali4197]

Thanks

[@saif1710]

But that's brilliant!

[@monirulislam-km5qi]

Thanks a lot sister

[@shirleyhalliwell8993]

Thank you for the tips and strategies, but your website is full of advertisement I cannot watch and click on any videos without being bombarded with advertisements.

[@newmoviehindidubbed2428]

Where is conclusion

[@khangtranminh2800]

Thank you help me a lot

[@TonyIELTSBox]

Hi, Thank you and don't forget to share with everyone in your country

[@sushmitagurung760]

Thank you so much for the video 🥀

[@teoteotokios550]

the lesson is excellent, the music is too loud and terrible

[@TonyIELTSBox]

Thank you!

[@adubimpong4095]

You just keep saying click on the description below

[@sandysandy1596]

thks 🙏

[@gesangwibawono7570]

thanks maam, it helps me to make template when i have no idea to compose it

[@esthermumba525]

The only challenge is knowing which particular city is new or old especially if you have never heard of such names .It's like me telling someone from a EU country about cities in Africa when he has neve even heard of such places and does not even know which one is new.Tricky situation and this makes grouping difficult.

[@manpreetkaurmasoothe2589]

Correct

[@wabeiwamundila4997]

She was using the years indicated on the table to tell which one is older

[@iamricky5024]

She used the years in the table

[@karmsidhu1699]

Very usey👍

[@navdeepkaur174]

Thnkuuuuu dear

[@Sky-kc4sx]

Helpful 👍

[@wonkrulyrics3004]

thank u🤍

[@dudetrolls6974]

Kilometres--- size??
Can Distance be used.
right??

[@HiuIELTS]

length is a good option, too.

[@nallabhiruduramakrishna5233]

The table didn't mention whether the passengers were in millions or lakhs.

[@abdora7mandawood199]

you are so mohannnnnk

[@user-ln6ne4xe9v]

Thanks a lot i'll follw your channel.

[@TonyIELTSBox]

You're welcome. we appreciate if this video is shared with everyone in your country. It makes us get inspired to produce more video

[@daler1865]

@@TonyIELTSBox i don't think he did

[@maryamrezaasa6098]

First of all,I appreciate your help since the tutorial is quite helpful.However, in terms of your voice, I've got this weird feeling from your tone that you are giving commands than explanation.Besides, the background music is way too loud and it is totally irritating that makes a viewer pretty uncomfortable.

[@maanjimmy3530]

Is it really worth for 9 band ?

[@naveedmushtaq8176]

No i dont think so because of overuse of simple sentences. Rather few good quality complex sentences can easly be formulated by joining these sentence with the help of conjunctions.
overall, this is a reasonable try to explain the table;however, if you add some complex sentences, the score will surely improve.

[@soniakhan9045]

Background music disturb a lot

[@shubhampathare930]

why tf there is background music where in such topics we have to concentrate

[@TonyIELTSBox]

We are very sory for that. Thank you for your sharing!

[@ajaj1120]

Thank you, great video . Well explained.

[@TonyIELTSBox]

Thank you, and visit our blog ieltssharebox.com/ to learn more

[@soniakazi4381]

I am going to be giving my IELTS test for the first time in just a few days and I still can't manage to write this I hope this will help. I am very nervous but thank u for this video anyways

[@alidashti1363]

sonia kazi good luck

[@nguwahkhine]

wow same as me. I'm also very nervous and going to take test on this Saturday. i only left one day now and don't know what to write and how to write.

[@nguwahkhine]

@Rajee K I got overall 5.5 only.😢

[@sabrinazinia5407]

Why it is in present tense???? Plzzz clarify....

[@mubeenkhan5581]

Same question

[@ekamjotkaurdhillon9606]

Is this for academic

[@sukhrobdjuraev7091]

Band 9 ?

[@kunjanvlogeranddancer5408]

My first comment

[@Arshsingh-vr9zt]

Where is overview ??

[@AvtarSingh-pd9rh]

Its nt countries dear...

[@areej2658]

i would simply die if this was my 1st task

[@manpreetkaurmasoothe2589]

Same me to

[@attosamy6524]

song name please :)

[@sukhsandhu2346]

No properly visible

[@ramaswamym7309]

Thank you so much for the very detailed explanation.

[@kamaldeepkaur2605]

It is too difficult

[@rakeshpatwa456]

Those are not countries but cities :-)

[@kaurman6206]

Wrong tense use

[@mohamadalzein743]

Anyone has their exam tomorrow?

[@navjotkaur2575]

How was your exam

[@mohamadalzein743]

Thanks to this channel, I think I did well in writing. Listening was moderately hard. Speaking was easy. Reading was hard!

[@debekydza8543]

DON'T write a conclusion in task 1 table!!! It's wrong explanation !!!

[@commentreadertopchannel7000]

1927 million????

[@Iv95071]

This one is misleading don't refer this

[@user-hb7tu9cq5x]

Up

[@harmanthind1673]

such dump explaintion

[@abdulazizalhammadi3805]

Harman Thind such dumb spelling

[@euph0rya672]

I agree

[@BoleToComedy]

Lapodo

[@yicai7]

I hate that bgm

[@RanjeetSah-my6zz]

😂ranjit

[@candlemen0072]

Not understandable

[@Iv95071]

Not good,

[@griseldacuka4071]

Thank you so much for your video

[@TonyIELTSBox]

Thank you so much, and don't forget to share our channel with everyone in your country