The Secret to Successful College Application Essays: MIT

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  • (The secret is... there's not really a secret. Just some tips.) ICYW: I'm MIT Class of 2013 and a current Assistant Director of Admissions for MIT, so I have a good sense of what we're looking for ;)
    0:18 A lil' bit about me
    0:36 Why you DON'T need to stress out
    1:21 What "being yourself" means
    3:47 The "what do you do for fun?" essay
    4:37 The "what do you want to study?" essay
    5:17 The "how do you improve the lives of others?" essay
    6:38 The "describe your world" essay
    8:38 The "challenge you've overcome" essay
    10:17 Just breeeeeathe
    My favorite blog posts about the MIT essays:
    This year's prompts: mitadmissions.org/blogs/entry/...
    Advice for last year's prompts (which are the same as this year's) from our former Associate Director of Admissions: mitadmissions.org/blogs/entry/...
    And my favorites from various former students/admissions officers: mitadmissions.org/blogs/entry/...
    mitadmissions.org/blogs/entry/...
    mitadmissions.org/blogs/entry/...
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  • @divyeshkhatri3682
    @divyeshkhatri3682 3 ปีที่แล้ว +33

    lol i used these tips... unfortunately they did not work for MIT but it ended up working out for Stanford! thank you!

    • @isaacmandell-seaver7223
      @isaacmandell-seaver7223 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      congrats!

    • @neelukampani6548
      @neelukampani6548 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Congrats Divyesh!!! Can you pls give yr e-mail id so that my son who is in grade 8 , an aspirant for MIT in CS can connect with you. Thanks.

    • @mr.riccardoandmotieus1681
      @mr.riccardoandmotieus1681 ปีที่แล้ว

      how about your life in standford

  • @fossilfighters101
    @fossilfighters101 6 ปีที่แล้ว +155

    **overthinking in progress**

  • @DatBoi-yu2op
    @DatBoi-yu2op 6 ปีที่แล้ว +40

    I'm not worried about the interview or essay. I'm worried about my score being the deal breaker

  • @ogjonx2376
    @ogjonx2376 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    You’re channel is so great

  • @predovilela
    @predovilela 6 ปีที่แล้ว +114

    Incredibly helpful video! Thanks a lot!
    Last year I applied to MIT as an international (brazilian here) and, unfortunately, got a rejection. I didn't go to the schools that I got in here in Brazil (Unicamp and USP) because I wanted to try again. Wish me luck!

    • @deema162
      @deema162 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      So you're applying again this year?

    • @0xMA
      @0xMA 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      What happened?

    • @shahidajahan1149
      @shahidajahan1149 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      What was your SAT subject test score ?

    • @forzedestiny
      @forzedestiny 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Ei cara, como foi o seu score no SAT SUBJECT e no TOEFL?

    • @laumendcs
      @laumendcs 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Conseguiu??? pls

  • @rogerlima4001
    @rogerlima4001 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Fantastic video.. i feel like am so ready to start the application process and the fear about crafting the essay is really not there.

  • @gregmakov2680
    @gregmakov2680 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    the convention of references, e.g. recommendation letters is the main obstacle for several students. The importance of recommendation letters is undeniable but sometimes the barriers for some one.

    • @emilycarter8922
      @emilycarter8922 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Ypu might want to check this out th-cam.com/video/gNBrdE_CR80/w-d-xo.html

  • @tigerhix
    @tigerhix 6 ปีที่แล้ว +21

    1:32 It's 4am and I legit laughed out loud. Thanks for the great video.

  • @nicoleworoniuk1544
    @nicoleworoniuk1544 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great video, thanks so much!

  • @marwasamy9498
    @marwasamy9498 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I've read many bunch of books about college essays, specifically MIT, and most of them wasn’t as informative as your video, very underrated!

  • @samdavies3092
    @samdavies3092 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great video !!

  • @atsumu5875
    @atsumu5875 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    VERY HELPFUL! MIT is my dream school, and I honestly found this advice very helpful.

    • @jaystarter5144
      @jaystarter5144 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Rawr Its Nemo did u get in 😯

  • @sebastianalvarez1537
    @sebastianalvarez1537 6 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Just finished my maker portfolio and finishing my app! You give me so much hope!

  • @igormedvedev5553
    @igormedvedev5553 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Very helpful! :)

  • @thevinci6717
    @thevinci6717 6 ปีที่แล้ว +16

    See you in MIT

  • @fdist04
    @fdist04 6 ปีที่แล้ว +47

    I wonder if the 1000-ish people who watched this video by the deadline would turn out to be the 1000-ish students who get accepted :)

  • @anutterfool8577
    @anutterfool8577 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I wish I found this before I started writing my essays like a douche but I guess that I should start building myself up to try and transfer despite the terrifying odds (wow, that 6% for the fall and looking like it's dropping) hahahaha I sort of want to cry.

  • @dikshantdulal587
    @dikshantdulal587 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Focus on what she just said, your application essay is not going to make you break through- nothing can unless you have a bunch of Sthg that can make you a break through, Be yourself Show your voice , don't overthink and apply. If you get into MIT that's awesome for you if not it is not going to destroy your life. I am applying in the regular action. This video significantly changed my perspective for application essays. woo thanks!

    • @MSN539
      @MSN539 ปีที่แล้ว

      “Be yourself”😭😭

  • @YouTube_Staff
    @YouTube_Staff 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    hahahaha, I wrote my first supplement based on my passion for computer hardware and software

  • @JesusChrist-tg9qn
    @JesusChrist-tg9qn 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I wanna be a mathematician, whole heartedly, I just want to study Mathematics.

    • @linky6452
      @linky6452 4 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      Thank you Jesus Christ.

  • @ranjitpratapsingh3315
    @ranjitpratapsingh3315 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I have a question could you please answered me does class 10th marks matter in taking admission in universities & getting job email me

  • @karlalaureano6063
    @karlalaureano6063 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    I want to take the ASE, but I need the signed of some teachers to fill the petition form. Would u help me to know how to do it?, I will appreciate that! 😊

  • @Frosty4Rock
    @Frosty4Rock 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    overthinking... my greatest weakness. Well this really helped me, I really appreciate it!

    • @atsumu5875
      @atsumu5875 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Frosty4Rock me! I overthink the simplest things

  • @nnivetha1986
    @nnivetha1986 6 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    My writing style is naturally a mix of sarcastic/poetic. So when I'm writing (especially) the essay on 'what do you do for fun?', I can't help but be poetic. Is that fine, or do we just give straightforward answers?

    • @JohnEthan777
      @JohnEthan777 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Considering the wordlimits its probably better to be straightforward.

  • @leonardoco69
    @leonardoco69 4 ปีที่แล้ว +38

    I cried thinking about how my dreams have been shaped due to being born in a third world country

    • @DiegoEspinoza-mg2rq
      @DiegoEspinoza-mg2rq 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      same

    • @foderking9909
      @foderking9909 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @Sailor Usher even buying a textbook from amazon is not that easy.
      These are the hoops you have to 5o jump through in a 3rd world

    • @atheoristspointofview7059
      @atheoristspointofview7059 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@foderking9909 then hippity hop

  • @wasifamir4908
    @wasifamir4908 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Im more worried about my shortcomings in my ECA's

  • @uzodikeotiji4360
    @uzodikeotiji4360 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    also do I have to take the sat exam,what do I do?

  • @juliannemercado3285
    @juliannemercado3285 6 ปีที่แล้ว +16

    Hi. So I wanted to ask about SAT scores. How important are they to your application? Because I'm not good at standardized testing no matter how hard I try. I'm a straight A student but not a good standardized tester. This is my top school choice so if SAT scores are really important for this school please tell me. I could use all of the help I could get.

    • @Theeducatedexplorers
      @Theeducatedexplorers ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I read a good sat score like 1500 plus will increase your chances by 10 percent of getting accepted to mit

  • @ryanopara-baldwin8565
    @ryanopara-baldwin8565 ปีที่แล้ว

    I do have a question! For essays, how far back would be an appropriate timing? Say I had one essay that was mainly focused when I was 11 years-old, would that be too far back in the past even though the essay still answers the prompt and still impacts me?

    • @alofthat7123
      @alofthat7123 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I'd say if it still impacts you then by all means go for it! Just make sure you relate how those past events connect with your present self once you go over those experiences.

  • @zelani3370
    @zelani3370 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I know I'm like two years late but I wanted to know if my essay about something I had to overcome could be about my grades dropping a lot and how I got them back up as much as I could, and how I did better the following term? Or should I talk about other things than school in my essays? And why am I overthinking right now?

  • @maxprilutsky2209
    @maxprilutsky2209 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Would a moral dilemma work for the significant challenge essay?

  • @umidmuzrapov8860
    @umidmuzrapov8860 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank you for this awesome video ! I have recently taken the SAT physics and scored 770. Do you think there is a point of retaking it , or i should worry about my result?

    • @michaelsteinberg3272
      @michaelsteinberg3272 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I wouldn't bother though make sure you get an 800 on the Math II 🤷

    • @qujohn172
      @qujohn172 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      After a certain point, your scores just get you through the door. Your essays, personality, interview, activities, etc. Matter so much more than just numbers and test scores. You should still score as high as you can but don't stress out about it!
      Not just spitting cliches. I got 710 physics and 770 on Math II and was Accepted Early Action for class of 2023.

    • @brandon-cw9ud
      @brandon-cw9ud ปีที่แล้ว

      @@someone1059 did you get in?

    • @qujohn172
      @qujohn172 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@someone1059 Just saw this, sorry I wasn't able to give advice in time. Hope you got in!

  • @pandulenihaindongo7551
    @pandulenihaindongo7551 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    what time of year do i apply

  • @vrajpanchal4088
    @vrajpanchal4088 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    "Unless you have a bunch of _____ that is a deal breaker" plzzz tell me what did you say over there, I can't understand as I am non-Native of English language.

  • @uzodikeotiji4360
    @uzodikeotiji4360 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Please I school in a university in Canada, and am about to enter my second year due to some medical condition my grade isn't as high as I wanted but that would change within the next year, I wish to transfer to this school after my second year, please what are the steps I am to take.
    Thank you.

  • @zubairmalik613
    @zubairmalik613 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Just an observation I made watching many maker portfolios, any attempt to make a gun (no matter how geeky) ... results in rejection.

  • @kylemamauag8593
    @kylemamauag8593 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Can I get in touch? I really want to know how admissions in MIT work considering I'm foreign, looking for a scholarship in MIT, and an admission. Thank you!

  • @ishapuri5703
    @ishapuri5703 5 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    can people write about their nut allergy as their challenge ( question 5 )

    • @shockban6725
      @shockban6725 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Why not ?Dont they want something exotic ?

    • @mell1657
      @mell1657 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Dude, allergies are totally a challenge. People who doesn't have them don't know how painful life can be, they're lucky.

    • @mell1657
      @mell1657 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      th-cam.com/video/0mTtD5fZQ1E/w-d-xo.html There you go. Literally an essay about allergies, lol.

  • @bartuscieslar6478
    @bartuscieslar6478 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hi, is anime considered ok among admission officers or they rather think it's all h****i?

    • @samg131
      @samg131 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      lmao

    • @jaystarter5144
      @jaystarter5144 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Bartus Cieslar u failed

  • @carlosortega1384
    @carlosortega1384 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    0:55 unless you have a bunch of what?

    • @nirglazer5962
      @nirglazer5962 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      F's, as in failed grades

  • @piyushmore1166
    @piyushmore1166 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    *SUBSCRIBED* your channel,
    looking forward for more helpful videos,
    hey you can even make some Vlogs!

  • @isaackorchenko9609
    @isaackorchenko9609 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Can you read my common app essay lol

  • @sarthak1448
    @sarthak1448 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sis i have 2 doubts that does AP exams help to get into us colleges and does SAT scores matters .

  • @anjaniraina8895
    @anjaniraina8895 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    For the essay about the courses we are interested in
    Is it okay to mention more than one department or course?

    • @tigriscabrera2046
      @tigriscabrera2046 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      I mean in your question, the "courses" is plural so I'd assume, yes.

  • @noby5025
    @noby5025 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I have like 8 F’s on my transcript and I really clicked on this video thinking I could apply. Lmao rip maybe in my next life.

  • @Ashradhs
    @Ashradhs 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Could you speak a little slower and and with less cuts in your edits.. can't really understand some crucial points..

  • @tenpenny234
    @tenpenny234 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    My son likes to make gadgets.he did a p.c built at 13 years.all independently.he made a orange pie.he wants to make many more but parts r really costly.he is 15 right now.he wants to study in mit..

    • @MSN539
      @MSN539 ปีที่แล้ว

      Same

  • @madperk
    @madperk 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    The problem with this video is there is no sample set that has followed her advice and had a significantly higher chance of admissions. I don’t care if you think MIT being one of the best schools in the world for science and math is not the best reason for me wanting to attend. That IS the reason, so it isn’t really that simple is it? You are misleading your audience through this circular logic. Give specific examples of when you decided there was one particular personality that presented itself so often that it became over saturated for the community which lead to a reduced chance of acceptance. You are simply telling the audience to become vulnerable for the college instead of trying to fend for their best interests. Tell them the type of sample set of school you are looking for, if you don’t know, admit there is no standard and make this entire video with a disclaimer that this is entirely your opinion.

    • @dylancotrioa8659
      @dylancotrioa8659 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @Menu Loser this isn't her opinion almost every one says this about how to write an essay

  • @vishalpratihar7293
    @vishalpratihar7293 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    send me messages

  • @jenzhao12
    @jenzhao12 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow this was incredibly unhelpful! No concrete, actionable takeaways. Extremely wishy-washy. But then again, it's not in her interest to actually tell you the truth about what they're looking for.