Task 2 - Nowadays, travelling has become a crucial part of life. One of the major reasons that supports this statement is the low cost of airlines. This leads to tourists travelling more than before to experience new places which certainly has its set of advantages and disadvantages. This essay will explain why I agree that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. During the peak seasons, numerous tourists travel to popular destinations. However, this can lead to over crowding during the season which can affect the local people and their daily lives. Additionally, this can also increase traffic. For instance, when there are more people at a place than usual, there is an increase in the number of cars leading to traffic congestion. As a result, this can highly affect the schedule of the local public. The government must ensure that there are alternatives for the domestic public during the peak travel season. In contrast to the disadvantages, tourists can also bring a lot of advantages. Tourists boom the economy of a destination and also promote more job opportunities. It is an opening gate for the local people to interact with people from different parts of the world and educate them about their culture. The more tourists visit, the more jobs are available, the more local culture is promoted and spoken about. For example, when tourists travel, they tend to spend a lot of money without thinking twice. As it is all about the experience for them. This can be a good opportunity for the local public to help tourists gain they experience they are looking for. In conclusion, I would like to argue that even though tourists can bring some disadvantages like environmental impact, overcrowding, ruining some authentic and historic spots, if taken well care and controlled by the local authorities, tourists can bring double the advantages in booming the destination’s economy and promoting cultures worldwide.
My answer!!! *PC 137* Migration has been a major discussion in recent years. Most of this has been from the subject of tourism. In spite of this, the reduced-airlines cost has resulted in allowing many people to journey abroad. In as much as this brings a lot of benefits to a country, its drawbacks cannot be ignored. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of tourism to a country. Firstly, migrants raise the economy of a nation. This happens as a result of the trade they bring to the city having the site attraction. Indigenes see an increase in sales the more foreigners visit their towns. For instance, the USA attributed its raised economy in 2019 to tourism. However, impediments of this overpower the aids. Tourists turn out increasing the crime rate of a country and also magnify the health status thereof. Many robberies have occurred from strangers either than the local people. Many nations have suffered from reduced populations due to the suicide committed by these agents. Again, the spread of contagious and chronic diseases in a place has had a direct connection to tourists. These countries do not screen for the health status of people who enter their land. They mostly concern themselves with the financial profit they gain from these ones over the burdens they come along with. In 2019 - 2022, Ghana saw a significant outburst of Covid-19 cases from these visitors. In conclusion, many countries enjoy the socialisation these travellers bring to them. Nevertheless, there are invaluable adverse effects that overcome these good sides.
Introductory Nowadays tourism rates are rapidly rising because people are traveling aboard more than ever due to the recent reasonable price reduction on airline tickets. This affects the locals both positively, since the tourists have so much to offer, and negatively, on the grounds that tourists could also bring harm to the locals. In this essay, we will break down how tourism can be advantages and at the same time disadvantages to the locals.
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Dear Sir, I am writing to request for a refund for the arm chair I bought from your website. I ordered for the chair three weeks ago and was told it will be delivered within the next 7 working days. It has been 2 weeks after the stipulated time and I am yey to receive the delivery. I called your office and spoke with one of your customer service assistant, who confirmed that the arm chair has been shipped. This is does not align with the values that your organization claims on your advertisement. I would be waiting for your response on when the refund will be made. Thank You. Yours Faithfully, Yemisi A
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Task 2 -
Nowadays, travelling has become a crucial part of life. One of the major reasons that supports this statement is the low cost of airlines. This leads to tourists travelling more than before to experience new places which certainly has its set of advantages and disadvantages. This essay will explain why I agree that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
During the peak seasons, numerous tourists travel to popular destinations. However, this can lead to over crowding during the season which can affect the local people and their daily lives. Additionally, this can also increase traffic. For instance, when there are more people at a place than usual, there is an increase in the number of cars leading to traffic congestion. As a result, this can highly affect the schedule of the local public. The government must ensure that there are alternatives for the domestic public during the peak travel season.
In contrast to the disadvantages, tourists can also bring a lot of advantages. Tourists boom the economy of a destination and also promote more job opportunities. It is an opening gate for the local people to interact with people from different parts of the world and educate them about their culture. The more tourists visit, the more jobs are available, the more local culture is promoted and spoken about. For example, when tourists travel, they tend to spend a lot of money without thinking twice. As it is all about the experience for them. This can be a good opportunity for the local public to help tourists gain they experience they are looking for.
In conclusion, I would like to argue that even though tourists can bring some disadvantages like environmental impact, overcrowding, ruining some authentic and historic spots, if taken well care and controlled by the local authorities, tourists can bring double the advantages in booming the destination’s economy and promoting cultures worldwide.
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My answer!!!
*PC 137*
Migration has been a major discussion in recent years. Most of this has been from the subject of tourism. In spite of this, the reduced-airlines cost has resulted in allowing many people to journey abroad. In as much as this brings a lot of benefits to a country, its drawbacks cannot be ignored. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of tourism to a country.
Firstly, migrants raise the economy of a nation. This happens as a result of the trade they bring to the city having the site attraction. Indigenes see an increase in sales the more foreigners visit their towns. For instance, the USA attributed its raised economy in 2019 to tourism.
However, impediments of this overpower the aids. Tourists turn out increasing the crime rate of a country and also magnify the health status thereof. Many robberies have occurred from strangers either than the local people. Many nations have suffered from reduced populations due to the suicide committed by these agents.
Again, the spread of contagious and chronic diseases in a place has had a direct connection to tourists. These countries do not screen for the health status of people who enter their land. They mostly concern themselves with the financial profit they gain from these ones over the burdens they come along with. In 2019 - 2022, Ghana saw a significant outburst of Covid-19 cases from these visitors.
In conclusion, many countries enjoy the socialisation these travellers bring to them. Nevertheless, there are invaluable adverse effects that overcome these good sides.
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Introductory
Nowadays tourism rates are rapidly rising because people are traveling aboard more than ever due to the recent reasonable price reduction on airline tickets. This affects the locals both positively, since the tourists have so much to offer, and negatively, on the grounds that tourists could also bring harm to the locals. In this essay, we will break down how tourism can be advantages and at the same time disadvantages to the locals.
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Please wish to know is task 2 is written in the general ielts test?
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Dear Sir,
I am writing to request for a refund for the arm chair I bought from your website.
I ordered for the chair three weeks ago and was told it will be delivered within the next 7 working days.
It has been 2 weeks after the stipulated time and I am yey to receive the delivery.
I called your office and spoke with one of your customer service assistant, who confirmed that the arm chair has been shipped.
This is does not align with the values that your organization claims on your advertisement.
I would be waiting for your response on when the refund will be made.
Thank You.
Yours Faithfully,
Yemisi A
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