Reviewing your cinematography

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  • The AOD sale ends today at midnight! Last chance to get our early bird pricing until Aug 2024 theartofdocumentary.com
    Graded with my Cinema Pro Luts: bit.ly/2UUKAjC
    CHAPTERS:
    0:00 - Intro
    0:47 - Footage review: Creating pockets of shadows
    3:06 - Don’t be afraid to push your blacks for contrast
    5:55 - Make a good shot selection
    7:14 - How to be a better cinematographer & filmmaker
    9:49 - Using color contrast
    11:56 - Be careful with your storytelling
    13:35 - Get all the coverage you need to tell the story
    15:48 - Final thoughts
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  • @BryceDocherty
    @BryceDocherty 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +20

    I think it's fine to talk about AOD cause its excellent. Best filmmaking community I've ever been a part of. Ill be excited to update my reel at the end of the year to have way more diversity than I do now.

    • @maunud9495
      @maunud9495 10 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Whut is AOD?

  • @TomVetterl
    @TomVetterl 25 วันที่ผ่านมา +34

    Oof, almost got a heart attack when I saw the beginning of this video, with @markbone shouting "what are you doing!!!" over my film :D
    Glad you liked most of the shots, the one said shot is already removed :D Thx for the feedback!

    • @markbone
      @markbone  25 วันที่ผ่านมา +17

      your footage is stunning, it’s why I went after you hard, you’re a pro I knew someone like yourself would want to hear/ could stomach some blunt feedback

    • @TomVetterl
      @TomVetterl 16 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      In case yours interested, this is the trailer for the film, we’re releasing the film next week. :)
      th-cam.com/video/bin45_lGbO4/w-d-xo.htmlsi=KQ50o1k34o5eTnoW

  • @jamesmccullough1162
    @jamesmccullough1162 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +13

    First of all, Akira. Great movie, great shirt. Second, I love that you don’t hold back your criticism in these videos. That, more than anything, is what has helped my work grow. When I was working directly with a mentor whose opinion I valued, and who respected me enough to be honest and say where my skills were falling short - that made me learn more than any technical tutorial/class could’ve ever taught me. Great stuff as always, Mark.

  • @BeingWillAllen
    @BeingWillAllen 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +22

    Mark! Thanks so much for the kind words on Zach and I’s work! That is a great critique on the flatness, it’s a mistake I will be trying to avoid making again and one we were trying to be conscious of for so much of the shoot, but it slipped away lol! love the content and all the great bits of advice from you and the inspiration from everyone here!

  • @monellifilms
    @monellifilms 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +38

    Oh shit you reviewed my ROAR football doc footage as well! Thank you, Mark! I’d shoot your next sports doc for sure

    • @thyerriwolf
      @thyerriwolf 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      where can I whatch pal? looks amazing

    • @monellifilms
      @monellifilms 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      @@thyerriwolf thanks! I think my last response was deleted for some reason. It’s called ROAR: The Story of the Southern Columbia Football Tigers. It’s on prime under pbs documentaries

    • @thyerriwolf
      @thyerriwolf 26 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@monellifilms thanks man, I'll check it out

    • @Akirasenjuuu
      @Akirasenjuuu 22 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@monellifilms It was insane bro well done

  • @markbone
    @markbone  26 วันที่ผ่านมา +20

    i'll do more of these review videos again if you guys let me know in the comments. I can do them long form also if you'd like? I recognize i talk a lot about AOD in this one, BUT our huge sale ends tonight and someone out there needed to know that! Doors close in just a few days theartofdocumentary.com/

    • @Premier-Media-Group
      @Premier-Media-Group 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      longer please...

    • @jarrodbarker
      @jarrodbarker 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      For the football shot, you don't need to adjust luminance to add contrast to your shot. If the film maker wanted a faded, "print black" look, you easily could have added some saturation depth to increase contrast as well. Don't be afraid of lifted blacks, Mark, you need to be aware of the many ways to increase contrast in a shot without adjusting luminance, which will protect your shadows. It will make you a better colorist over time.

    • @WanderlustVP
      @WanderlustVP 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      How to we submit?

    • @Videofilealways
      @Videofilealways 26 วันที่ผ่านมา

      please do more - always learn from these kind of videos

    • @blakefilmco
      @blakefilmco 26 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Please do more videos like this! I would love for you to rip my videos apart! 😂

  • @TheAaronalden
    @TheAaronalden วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    This is so very helpful. I see a lot of these errors in my own work, and it really gives me things to look out for on future projects.

  • @regularguyrevolution9455
    @regularguyrevolution9455 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +7

    This was a fabulous help! I did not submit footage here but I definitely took notes regarding all of your suggestions! Thanks so much for all you do! Cheers to you and the team! 👍

  • @VishalDey
    @VishalDey 25 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Need more of these!!! I learn from these reviews more than anything else. Thanks for the great content Mark! ❤

  • @ThomasFransson
    @ThomasFransson 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

    We all make mistakes and have things we should be improving on or just be reminded of. These videos are super good for all those things.

  • @zacharias21
    @zacharias21 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

    Lets gooo ! Thanks for reviewing our short film skyhook loved the critiques!

  • @vektor8
    @vektor8 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

    the cinematography black lol, I almost died hahahaha. Love your humour! These reviewing vids are awesome

  • @LiteShaper1
    @LiteShaper1 23 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Excellent, excellent analysis here. So valuable to have an objective, informed and insightful perspective on one’s work.

  • @BlakeDavis42
    @BlakeDavis42 7 วันที่ผ่านมา

    The counter shots tip at the end was so practical and helpful. An easy solution to a problem I've ran into many times.

  • @AesirViking
    @AesirViking 25 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    I enrolled in the course the moment the door opened and I can assure everyone undecided - it's totally worth it!

  • @drmatthewhorkey
    @drmatthewhorkey 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    These videos are SOOO useful! I have to get better with learning how to use s-curves

  • @artroomx
    @artroomx 19 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Love this video bro! I'll make sure I stay tuned for part two and submit my clips haha

  • @mrscampbell16
    @mrscampbell16 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    Watching these are so helpful! More please!

  • @abdellahcodes
    @abdellahcodes 24 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    That listen and nod is a genius idea!

  • @mukisaelijah12
    @mukisaelijah12 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

    Great video.. loved the breakdowns thanks for sharing Mark 🌆👊

  • @HeathClark
    @HeathClark 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +6

    Just joined AOD, Super pumped for the One Day Doc and growing my business! Thanks Mark!

    • @markbone
      @markbone  26 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      Heck yeah! See you on the inside!

  • @Stevebuk123
    @Stevebuk123 25 วันที่ผ่านมา

    As someone who’s mostly self-taught (through TH-cam), I’ve always been taught that ‘crushing the blacks’ was a bad thing so it’s nice to see someone encouraging it and showing the great effect it can have on footage.

    • @markbone
      @markbone  25 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      I dunno why people are so scared, also as you can see from the footage I’m not even reaching 0 half the time

    • @eliaciamei8892
      @eliaciamei8892 9 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@markbone Bro u can see literally all the noise u created crushing the blacks, this is crazy incorrect advice

  • @MarkIdiomas
    @MarkIdiomas 19 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    I enjoy these videos. Thank you for sharing. More videos like these, please!

  • @SumonBose
    @SumonBose 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    Man this is awesome! i have learned so much already

  • @BATTLEHAWKMEDIA
    @BATTLEHAWKMEDIA 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Where did you get that Akira shirt mark!!?

  • @AllenRReid
    @AllenRReid 26 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I understand bringing down the black levels, but shouldn't overall exposures still be near 100%? Can you explain the balance between the two?

  • @bo_r_eal1974
    @bo_r_eal1974 25 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Anyone knows the font used at 6;29? It's awesome!!

  • @flochfitness
    @flochfitness 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

    Awesome stuff!!!! My two cents:
    2:40 the first two shots are "flat" compared to next two shots which have much more light to dark and draws the eye into the important parts without having to "work" for it. If this is an intense trailer, match the intensity of the contrast in shots
    5:30 sometimes, we get caught in what we know and we want to let the viewer know that. And sometimes we just want to look at how cool something is...
    7:00 you're work will 10x if you had a warm body with you to hold up a neg.
    11:07 you front lit this shot. creating, less contrast. Crab left three feet and that shot is MUCH more interesting
    12:50 less is more. It's hard to tell from being too close to your piece if shots belong or not. Show it to someone who has NO IDEA about the project (but knows about filmmaking) and ask, "does this feel cohesive?" then consider cutting that stuff that doesn't fit. Additionally, this will help your next project as you will be shooting for the edit, as you seem limited by your creation by the available shots
    14:40 that's HUGE mark. Love that idea. Now that is shooting for the edit!

  • @karolmcgonigle1689
    @karolmcgonigle1689 16 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    The advice regarding the blacks was very helpful - it made a huge difference to that person's footage.

  • @tonyvargas18
    @tonyvargas18 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Hi Mark, would you recommend your AOD course if I just want to learn how to film commercials or Product videos and not really documentaries?

    • @markbone
      @markbone  26 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Yes. We speak about this lots in create & earn and cinematic eye.

    • @markbone
      @markbone  26 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Although I would say getting a good grip on storytelling will benefit any commercial filmmaker

  • @Nidakhan.mbilal
    @Nidakhan.mbilal 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

    love videos like this!

    • @markbone
      @markbone  26 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      I can do more

    • @Nidakhan.mbilal
      @Nidakhan.mbilal 26 วันที่ผ่านมา

      That would be a treat ✨️

  • @jabarih_1
    @jabarih_1 23 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Dang coach thanks this was great advice for sure!

  • @saad-ul4mr
    @saad-ul4mr 26 วันที่ผ่านมา

    mark how much do u charge per doc/movie and based on what ? what about length of the movie of the duration of directing etc..

    • @markbone
      @markbone  26 วันที่ผ่านมา

      There is no formula for that, there is many more factors than just video length

  • @PhillGraaf
    @PhillGraaf 25 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    This is SO valuable... man.
    So where do I see the call to action for these? This was just one for a 60 Sec clip of one of your projects? I'm in the community, but I did not hear about this.

    • @markbone
      @markbone  25 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I post them on my TH-cam community tab and on my instagram. So follow me on insta and make sure to have TH-cam notifications on

  • @belikdaria
    @belikdaria 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Hi Mark, I have some problem with the website, when I clean Enroll now button it’s just get stuck, I have tried several times, doesn’t work

    • @markbone
      @markbone  18 วันที่ผ่านมา

      We’ll get that fixed!!

  • @HarrisonBender
    @HarrisonBender 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    🌄 gang. Keep these critiques coming. So good! Would love to see more content of you showing what you'd change in regards to colouring (like you did in the football submission) 🔥

    • @markbone
      @markbone  26 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Yeah it’s fun colour correcting on the fly

  • @a1001_
    @a1001_ 25 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    everybody has at least heard of Akiry by now

    • @markbone
      @markbone  25 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      Not the young folks

    • @TJUC123
      @TJUC123 13 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I was so confused on what you were talking about until I realize you meant Akira. I thought you were talking about a software. 😂

  • @phantomcorps3373
    @phantomcorps3373 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Good notes on the clips. Cheers.🌄

  • @MosaicArtizt
    @MosaicArtizt 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    I love Akira!!!

  • @Taps2faced
    @Taps2faced 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Love from South Africa, what application do u use to edit on ur laptop?

    • @markbone
      @markbone  26 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Adobe Premiere

    • @Taps2faced
      @Taps2faced 25 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@markboneoh thanks what about da Vinci ?

  • @SamWelker
    @SamWelker 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    🌄🌅 Thank you Mark

  • @CodyMadewell
    @CodyMadewell 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    let me color for some of y"all 😂 great video

  • @eleventhvision
    @eleventhvision 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Loved it all except for the end , Parking tickets!!! Classic Canadian battles.

    • @markbone
      @markbone  26 วันที่ผ่านมา

      The worst

  • @retroelectrical
    @retroelectrical 22 วันที่ผ่านมา

    would be cool in the future if the shorts/videos were linked with credits.

  • @soshaibu
    @soshaibu 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

    This is really gooood.
    Please how can I get my work reviewed?

  • @DanPand
    @DanPand 12 วันที่ผ่านมา

    whats ur mic and please make a video how to edit your voices!

  • @merccciii
    @merccciii 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Hope one day I can produce something worthwhile enough to participate in this :)

  • @user-ef9cl3bd4y
    @user-ef9cl3bd4y 18 วันที่ผ่านมา

    MARK GET SOME REST!!!!YOU LOOK EXHAUSTED FRIEND! we appreciate you and need you in good health!

    • @markbone
      @markbone  18 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I took an extra nap this morning before reading this fyi

  • @LikeButtahApparel
    @LikeButtahApparel 13 วันที่ผ่านมา

    The Akira film was made from like the middle of the manga, so very random lol

  • @noahjstein
    @noahjstein 24 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    U rock mark

    • @markbone
      @markbone  24 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Rock Bone

  • @johanwagner_sweden
    @johanwagner_sweden 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Master Mark

  • @Squatrecords
    @Squatrecords 24 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Video about music and audio please ! 🙏🏼

  • @jaysslows
    @jaysslows 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    Awesome content

    • @markbone
      @markbone  26 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Thank you kindly

  • @riffbaama
    @riffbaama 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

    German man advising to crush your blacks 😂😂😂

  • @gabrielsauceda_
    @gabrielsauceda_ 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    🌄

  • @WhySteve
    @WhySteve 21 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    🌇close enough

  • @broskies2598
    @broskies2598 9 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Go watch any classic movie nice and bright 🌞 little rascals, sandlot, rookie of the year, mighty ducks, ninja 3 dom, back to the future all bright fk that dark contrast shit

  • @iWicky
    @iWicky 26 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Won't be able to join AOD this time but I'll be joining in August!

    • @markbone
      @markbone  26 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      See you then!!

    • @iWicky
      @iWicky 26 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@markbone actually was at the zoom call and working with Kim now to join next week!

  • @JosephFutsum
    @JosephFutsum 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

    any chance I can get your AOD stickers :)

    • @markbone
      @markbone  16 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Where do you live?

  • @clumsystudios69
    @clumsystudios69 24 วันที่ผ่านมา

    🌅

  • @seanmcnamara4030
    @seanmcnamara4030 25 วันที่ผ่านมา

    "And crush your blacks...The cinematography blacks..." hahahaha

  • @aaronhider7666
    @aaronhider7666 25 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Can I intern for you?

    • @bbqking3908
      @bbqking3908 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Respectfully why would he consider you to intern for him? You haven't said anything about yourself or your experience to suggest why you would be qualified or deserving to have an intern postion. You don't even have a portfolio on your channel to show any work.

    • @aaronhider7666
      @aaronhider7666 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@bbqking3908 Respectfully, I wasn’t talking to you.

    • @bbqking3908
      @bbqking3908 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@aaronhider7666 believe it or not, when you post on a public forum, it doesn't matter who you think you're talking to. You're talking to everyone.

  • @broskies2598
    @broskies2598 9 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Sick of everything being dark. Watch movies at home and like I'm yelling why the f is it so dark what's going on damn wtf every movie is so dark....leave it bright

  • @knio1
    @knio1 25 วันที่ผ่านมา +22

    Come on... Everything is about AOD now... It`s get tired to see you talk about in every video

    • @markbone
      @markbone  25 วันที่ผ่านมา +28

      I’ll never stop talking about. We have seen insane change in so many filmmakers careers, films and business. It’s also either I mention AOD or do an ad-read for a product you likely do want to buy. I created a product I truly believe in so I don’t have to push other things that I don’t. :) It’s also launch season so I talk about it heaps

    • @pedromarquez114
      @pedromarquez114 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +7

      Welcome to TH-cam man, stop crying

  • @zanderwilll
    @zanderwilll 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    idk if I would take advice from a guy that can't pronounce fresnel

    • @markbone
      @markbone  26 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      lol. Go make a film.

  • @x1928
    @x1928 26 วันที่ผ่านมา

    You're wrong, and here's why, chicken nuggets.

    • @markbone
      @markbone  26 วันที่ผ่านมา

      😂

  • @Premier-Media-Group
    @Premier-Media-Group 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    "The cinematography blacks..." lmao😂

  • @bentomlin
    @bentomlin 22 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Sorry Mark, I know you want to make money from your course but how many times are you going to interrupt the promise of your video (reviewing people's videos) with your own ads... As a viewer I lose trust that I'm going to get to see what you say I'm going to see. Frustrating

    • @markbone
      @markbone  22 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Commercial breaks are never fun, but help me understand the difference of talking about my own product vs another paid sponsorship? I make these videos for free of course that I make on TH-cam, so it’s necessary to pay for them somehow :) thanks for the feedback

    • @bentomlin
      @bentomlin 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      ​@@markbone The difference is the frequency and duration. I spend a lot of time on TH-cam (especially on long commutes) and watch many many videos with sponsor slots, and have never felt compelled to mention it before now. These somehow feel quite disruptive and persistent. With just shy of 300k subs, TH-cam is presumably also paying you money for your videos. Love your content, but something to work on perhaps

  • @omg9261
    @omg9261 26 วันที่ผ่านมา

    4:30 "Much more stronger"
    Jesus, I'm not even a native speaker and I was watching the video on 1.5 speed, but I couldn't help noticing.
    I'm appaled by people who don't even know their own language. Did you manage to make it through high school or you dropped out to pursue your "dream" of being some illitirate youtube blogger?

    • @Videofilealways
      @Videofilealways 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      from someone who spelled appalled and illiterate wrong ! 🤭

    • @markbone
      @markbone  26 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      😂 lolz sry 4 ma grammerrrr

    • @dumblicker7024
      @dumblicker7024 26 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Why bro hatin on some random thing

  • @JoshWilliams-mf9fc
    @JoshWilliams-mf9fc 10 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I find it hilarious that this guy thinks he is some expert

    • @Videofilealways
      @Videofilealways 7 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I'm one of a few thousand AOD members who have benefitted from his expertise

  • @seanmacdougallsm
    @seanmacdougallsm 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    🌄

  • @matt.gillispie
    @matt.gillispie 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    🌄

  • @RUBENDELGADODRONES
    @RUBENDELGADODRONES 25 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    🌄