MOCKS TOMORROW!!! Binge watching ur Paper 1 Language GCSE playlist. SO HELPFUL! I may be set 1 but English doesn't come easily to me but u have cleared up a lot of my questions/worries!
Life saver !!!! Had this exact paper for homework and I didn't know what to do and wasn't confident with what I was writing but now I feel much happier !! Thankyou Xx
I know! I had been telling my students to always include one, in order to have 'balance' but the exam board examiner says not. In fact they deliberately choose a statement that allows for a strong opinion. Phew!
Mock exams starting for English tomorrow and my real exam is in 2019. Thank you so much!! You have truly helped me with what I need to be looking out for and interpreting into my writing. 😊
Thank you so much your videos help me so much! They are not to long but include the important key things and as I'm in yr 11 i an struggling to manage my time but this helps so much keep up the amazing work!❤️
I have got my exam tomorrow; I was really struggling to understand how to answer this question up to now. You made it much easier. I feel a lot more confident. Thank you very much.🙌🙌
What I personally find difficult is how can we write about the effects on the reader, whilst making points that are linked to the question. I always makes points which are almost identical to the previous, and that, I feel is wrong. I don't know how to make more critical perspective points that are sophisticated and not repeated.
Alenko Rados that's the real challenge here. Really you are evaluating the effectiveness of the writer's methods. So, in saying that you agree with the statement you then need to support with evidence. The 'effects on readers' is the expansion of your agreement/disagreement
So weird i woke up an hour early this morning and was on youtube, i watched this video and later on today I had my English Language mock and this was the exam we had. You helped me so much coincidentally! New subscriber xx
I strongly agree with the students statement as the writer makes it very imperative that Alex has been struggling to cope with his family. The use of the I strongly agree with the students statement as The writer effectively demonstrates that Alex is struggling to cope through his anger towards his family...The writer conveys and shows us that Alex has been isolating himself by lashing at his family which are the people who he is supposed to love the most. We feel sympathy for Alex because the writer makes it obvious that he is struggling with his relationships as a result of this
So for 1 point (of 3) for full marks should I?: 1. Give my viewpoint. 2. Use possible sentence starters like, "The writer shows," Our impression is," and "As the readers we feel". 3. Give my own detailed impression in response with references to the text and using the appropriate language, structure and style. Show what the writer is trying to convey in context with the question giving a sophisticated analysis.
Malika Daniels I would go in order but make sure your paragraphs aren’t too long. Question 4 and 5 need the most time to write. So maybe start with them but make sure you leave enough time for the other questions because you have to find the techniques in the extract to answer
If you were to write a balanced answer, how would you start it? For example I agree with the statement to a certain extent? Would you begin it like that?
Glad I Came across this, even though I'm a gamer, education is even more important! So helpful, taught me things I didn't know, just wanted to clarify, by 'evaluate' can you talk about references from other texts and base your judgement on that. For example, if someone had a fiendish face in an extract, could I link it do being like a mythological demon etc...?
I don't know if this may be hopeful, the way my teacher told me to tackle this question is by doing the rule of the SITE PEEL, SITE IS basically setting, ideas, theme and events, i have to do PEEL of each of the site and link it back to it being successful as the examiner already knows its successful. she also told me do to critical judgment and also how this may effect the reader
RICE GUM Junior omg u need to do well on paper 2 and I got Maths exam on Thursday and Friday English so I have to stay up all night to revise to both of them to get a good grade
I am very confused as how to answer this some people have told me u have to be balanced or consider the other view where as some have told me u get more marks by just agreeing or disagreeing
Hi Mrs Whelan, I want to double check that the writing piece above would be suitable for the AQA 20 mark question. Also, would the question above definitely be at least 17 marks if you did another two paragraphs, even for AQA ? Thanks Mrs Whelan
Inshallah we all get the grades we want
Ameen🤲
Ameen
Ameen
Ameen
inshallah
Ameen
MOCKS TOMORROW!!! Binge watching ur Paper 1 Language GCSE playlist. SO HELPFUL! I may be set 1 but English doesn't come easily to me but u have cleared up a lot of my questions/worries!
Im set 1 yr11 right now still find english hard how can i make it easier
@@user-xl7fn9zf6b same i failed my last test
how did it go? your gcse
Im in year 12 and im doing the resits
I am in year 10 and I have been using ur videos for my mocks
Life saver !!!!
Had this exact paper for homework and I didn't know what to do and wasn't confident with what I was writing but now I feel much happier !!
Thankyou Xx
Lucky asf
paper 1 tomorrow 😭😭😭 #GCSEs2019
Same😢😭
We'll smash it, walk into the exam hall positive :)
You Wantanabe yasss :)
I want to borrow her brain or knowledge. D
Gumiguta Peridot Falun omgg innitttt .. would be great 👍🏻
who else is trying to revise for their mocks after this half-term
I’ve got a resit tmoz I’m doing last minute revision that I should’ve done over the holidays 😭
@@sabrinaaxo9496 I am trying to do the same thing right now... Are you ready though?
@@sabrinaaxo9496 me too
I have no motivation 😭
@Bianca R. same
So glad you said that we don't need to counter argue because i always struggle to think of a reason to go against other points I have made!
I know! I had been telling my students to always include one, in order to have 'balance' but the exam board examiner says not. In fact they deliberately choose a statement that allows for a strong opinion. Phew!
inshallah we'll all do well. (not stolen)
@Ares Menzy same😭😭😭and haven't even received for business
INSHA ALLAH
Good luck to everyone forrr tomorrow
Mock exams starting for English tomorrow and my real exam is in 2019. Thank you so much!! You have truly helped me with what I need to be looking out for and interpreting into my writing. 😊
THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS VIDEO! IT HELPED ME AND AGAIN THANKS!
Happy to help :-)
This exam paper came in my mock today! good job
Hope you did well then!
Fatima M same
Chloe T is this aqa
no its edexcel
lool
OMG THANKS I PASSED MY EXAM FOR THIS VIDEO THANK YOU SO SO MUCH!!! XOXO
i have an exam on this next week and this has reaaly hlped me understaand and guided this throught me slowly thanks
Thank you so much your videos help me so much! They are not to long but include the important key things and as I'm in yr 11 i an struggling to manage my time but this helps so much keep up the amazing work!❤️
Who's watching and ready for tomorrow paper 1 exam 2019 best of luck to us🙏🙏
I am prepared for this exam
Oh my
Thank you babe 😭I hope to make it cus I’m so nervous
how did you do?
What did you get
ay I hope you did well :)
Pray for all of us who is retaking November 2020
Yesss🙏🏾
I have got my exam tomorrow; I was really struggling to understand how to answer this question up to now. You made it much easier. I feel a lot more confident. Thank you very much.🙌🙌
GET READY TO COMEBACK. #gcse
Exam on Tuesday 😭😭😭😭😭 #2018 #gcse
lmao same
Lol same and Friday dreading it
Same ! I'm so nervous
Exactly. I don’t even know what day it is.
Azlafa Mohammed paper 1 this Tuesday and paper 2 this Friday good luck to everyone doing their English gcse
These guides are so helpful!
Thank you i've done this paper! I love your videos please do more.
i have my english language mock exam tomm.. this really helps, thank youuu!!
What’s you get? ;o
thank you for making this video it helped me so much first I was stuck I didnt know how to answer the question now i want to do this exam tommorow x
You are surprisingly good at what you do.Thank you for your videos
What I personally find difficult is how can we write about the effects on the reader, whilst making points that are linked to the question. I always makes points which are almost identical to the previous, and that, I feel is wrong. I don't know how to make more critical perspective points that are sophisticated and not repeated.
Alenko Rados that's the real challenge here. Really you are evaluating the effectiveness of the writer's methods. So, in saying that you agree with the statement you then need to support with evidence. The 'effects on readers' is the expansion of your agreement/disagreement
@@MrsWhelansEnglish you are the best
gcse tests in mid may and june, RIP if u see this thumbs up if u the same and comment xD i wish everyone good luck in revising
Ugh I'm mentally drained. I'm doing my English GCSE in June
@@izzy-qx6kq same😭😭
what grades did you end up getting?
This was truly helpful, thank you. You even explained it better than me English teacher and he used to be an examiner. :)
Marv' The Greatest my*
So weird i woke up an hour early this morning and was on youtube, i watched this video and later on today I had my English Language mock and this was the exam we had. You helped me so much coincidentally!
New subscriber xx
Told to always agree. Great vid
wrong!! YOU HAVE TO AGREE TO A CERTAIN EXTENT
SSJ but your making ur life harder of u don’t agree so always agree
Thank you so much for your tutorials they helped me out so much.
Mehmet Iper so happy to hear that!
Is there a specfic structure for this?
I strongly agree with the students statement as the writer makes it very imperative that Alex has been struggling to cope with his family. The use of the
I strongly agree with the students statement as The writer effectively demonstrates that Alex is struggling to cope through his anger towards his family...The writer conveys and shows us that Alex has been isolating himself by lashing at his family which are the people who he is supposed to love the most. We feel sympathy for Alex because the writer makes it obvious that he is struggling with his relationships as a result of this
I love your videos it really helped me out n looking for more revision stuff to come x
roughly, what grade would this answer be?
Ibrahim Chowdhury the number of likes this comment has
@Mx1air idk if that is 18/20 shes not got enough evidence to even be evaluative as thats only 1 point thats developed and detailed.
grade 8/9
Can u do more videos like these? 🤔🤔
So for 1 point (of 3) for full marks should I?:
1. Give my viewpoint.
2. Use possible sentence starters like, "The writer shows,"
Our impression is," and "As the readers we feel".
3. Give my own detailed impression in response with references to the text and using the appropriate language, structure and style. Show what the writer is trying to convey in context with the question giving a sophisticated analysis.
This exact paper came in my mock exam
Very useful video , thank you so much
Marwan AL Bakri you're welcome! 😃
Year 11 mocks January tomorrow gang gang
danther strike we did Paper 2 English Language and paper 1 Literature in November
Now I’m doing paper 1 Language and paper 2 Literature
Mock tomorrow
Same🤦🏾♀️
yep
Same, today :/
Fantastic video love
Mohammed Ahmed love you more
I have my exams today I pray I do. Well
@Oliver 49 it was calm but the descriptive writing was just not it
do you have to name the technique used? e.g ..presented through the use of.. language, structure, imagery or something? thanks :)
you’re a legend. exam in few hours!😫
if you’re a slow writer like me, which question should you answer first from paper 1?
Malika Daniels I would go in order but make sure your paragraphs aren’t too long. Question 4 and 5 need the most time to write. So maybe start with them but make sure you leave enough time for the other questions because you have to find the techniques in the extract to answer
definitely get question 1 out the way first then move onto wat ever question j find the easiest
Ur videos are really great
Do you have any videos for the Paper 2,Question 5? Great video!
It's next on my list! Hopefully by tomorrow :-)
My teacher says use 30 -35 min and thanks for the help
I swear I love u 🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽
thanks for helping. this was really helpful!
Thx for the video, i'm doing the same text
You are super brilliant, thank you very much.
15:21😂😂😂😂
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If you were to write a balanced answer, how would you start it? For example I agree with the statement to a certain extent? Would you begin it like that?
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Yes
Glad I Came across this, even though I'm a gamer, education is even more important! So helpful, taught me things I didn't know, just wanted to clarify, by 'evaluate' can you talk about references from other texts and base your judgement on that. For example, if someone had a fiendish face in an extract, could I link it do being like a mythological demon etc...?
Hi there,
As long as you're zooming in on what the words make you think of and evaluating their effects you'll be fine!
I don't know if this may be hopeful, the way my teacher told me to tackle this question is by doing the rule of the SITE PEEL, SITE IS basically setting, ideas, theme and events, i have to do PEEL of each of the site and link it back to it being successful as the examiner already knows its successful. she also told me do to critical judgment and also how this may effect the reader
iZestyGamer sounds like you've got a great teacher! Sound advice!
Thanks for the video but could try to improve hand writing. There are lots of words that I don't catch up.
@Mrs Whelan's English do you need to add a technique for this question or not?
Hi Aness,
Yes, writer’s ‘methods’ are needed for this question. If you don’t include any, you can’t get above half marks!
Do you need to include subject terminology and analysis?
This helps me a bit but very thanks anyway
Good luck everyone❤️🙏 I am randomly clicking to any TH-cam video to remember something for tomorrow🤕
same fam Good luck
RICE GUM Junior thank u xx and the exam went alright tbh but I lost so many marks on Q4 cuz I was disagreed with the statement 😭😭😭
Sel Bieber you know that you always have to agree?😭
Sel Bieber I just did one page for q5 😭😭😭
RICE GUM Junior omg u need to do well on paper 2 and I got Maths exam on Thursday and Friday English so I have to stay up all night to revise to both of them to get a good grade
Thank you so much this actually helps
Hi Mrs Whelan, what number out of 80 do you think would be equivalent to a grade 4
Aneesha Jhanji 40
On paper 1 I got 43/80 and 45/80 and I ended up getting a grade 5
From 20-30/80
I learn PETERE
Point
Evidence
Technique
Explain
Refer to question
Effect on reader
Is this better or worse than PEEL??
what do you mean by technique?
Crimson Queen petal is simple
Point
Evidence
Technique
Analysis
Link to Q
shericka eg adjective
Metaphor
Hyperbole
I’m just using PQTA POINT, quote, techniques and analysis way better to use
Please make more videos, these are so helpful, please make videos for paper 2.
S I’m just on with some! Waiting for my year 11 to do their mocks so they’ll be uploaded around the end of Feb
Get out the comment section, the exam is TOMORROW!
Thank you this will help alot
so you do not get marked down for spelling and grammar in paper 1?
Daniel Harding for section B you do (half the marks of the paper)
GUYS THE BEST THING TO DO BEFORE THE EXAM WATCH LOVE ISLAND
HAHAHA!
If the question doesn't mention the writer, just asks something about the character, do I still have to refer back to the writer anyway?
Do you need include language features or is just structure like Q3??
Emme Williams you can
Let's Go We Got This ;-;
This is where it all started learning question 4’s lol
I'm failing my mocks gang 😢
Me
Don't worry me to
I don’t really understand what the context from the text is tho 😅
Too easy, but i know im gonna fail tomorrow
Chaimuki XD init
Hopefully not.
I am trying to also convince my self.
I actually did and have my retake tomorrow 😊
Sonny Bradley same
Thank you!!
why is the category 'comedy'
:) WoW :)
Cus gcses are a joke
TH-cam algorithm is trash since 2019
7:55
how its says comedy on the categry thingy
Just to be clear in the exam ,you do what you just did 2 or 3 times?
This video is really helpful. Can you please send me a link to the paper.
Got my mocks in January, so nervous
let’s goo
Me tooooo
I have mine tomorrow 🥺. I have another in march . I'm really stressing.
This week and next week I have my mocks ❣️
instead of writing the long quote can i just say on line 28.
I dont think so
MOCKS are tomoorow for me too, just 4 year apart.
It will be easy they said… split the question into two different statements they said
Is that enough to get high marks, I reckon you should write more?!
Why did you start the sentence with the?
Is't theat bad?
Do you have to do three of these paragraphs
thanks this helped a lot
If I did 3 detailed PEEL paragraphs including a introduction and conclusion will I be able to get full 20 marks.
probably.
@@shahanabdullah762 Too late response.
I passed English :)
Good luck to everyone tomorrow x
Ellie Greenham you too
Ellie Greenham It was okay i guess thankyou. You?
Yeah it was ok thanks, just tried my hardest, I guess that’s all you can do
Ellie Greenham yeh same as long as we pass 🤞🏽
Ellie you’re supposed to be my internet buddy, why the f** are you chatting to next man :/
I am very confused as how to answer this some people have told me u have to be balanced or consider the other view where as some have told me u get more marks by just agreeing or disagreeing
what grade will u give it and how many marks out of 20
this really helped me! thanks
Glad to help!
Thanks a lot for this!
Hi Mrs Whelan,
I want to double check that the writing piece above would be suitable for the AQA 20 mark question. Also, would the question above definitely be at least 17 marks if you did another two paragraphs, even for AQA ?
Thanks Mrs Whelan
yhyh should be good
Can someone send the link to the mark scheme of the paper