Through the first 20 minutes of the story I was really getting into it. Then, almost like clockwork, the next 13 minutes was a complete repeat of what had already transpired. After about a minute into the repeat of the food conversation I paused and read the comment section. Then I advanced the story 10 minutes and was still repeating. Paused again looking at the timestamp then advanced another 3 minutes letting it play from there until fresh dialogue appeared. I paused again to make this comment. So at this moment I don't know if there will be any more hiccups. AI is not ready to be cut loose yet. These stories still need proofing by real people... just saying. 😒🤔 Hopefully, the story will have a strong finish. 🤨
@@FictionalReimagined Nice. I'll have to listen to it soon. I had already posted a final comment not knowing this had been reworked. I presume it will probably address additional issues I brought up in my last post. Nice to see someone taking the initiative to correct a flawed story. 👍
19 minutes until 33min 30 sec was repeat of beginning. I skipped thru that to not waste time. Then it was at a point far ahead in the story , leaving out a big part. At 37 she is dieing from the battle and died , leaving Alex alone. Then the sad wrap up and end of story. Screwed the pooch on that one.
33:32 Alex & Celera were walking through the catacombs to their destination. 33:40 Jumps straight to "spilt blood, bodies of fallen both friend and foe scattered across the ground like broken dolls." 34:01 Alex knelt beside Celera, her face pale and drawn. Okay, where's the battle that clearly happened between 33:32 and 33:40? Sounds like it would have been intense and dramatic. Is that regurgitated 13 minutes where the battle was supposed to be?🧐 Didn't care for the ending, very depressing. Sounds like Alex will develop a dark persona as his life goes on without Celera 😳
The beginning was good, it gets repeated in the middle and then the ending is told. What happened in the middle of the story to get to Celera dying? How did they find the others? Would have been good to find out.
Well. That was a waste of 40 minutes. To the content creator: About 22 minutes in, it starts over once more, new content starts around the 32 minute mark. But I agree, it's missing 10-20 minutes of story. How the Queen found her brother and all of the fight. Might wanna take this one down, renarrate and listen to it before reposting as fixed. Leaving this one up as is will drive people away.
Uh, Giant plot hole: WHY should she be reinstated? Who cares if she was deposed. For all we know she is evil personified and it is a mercy she is alive instead of dead.
You have good stories, But this constant repeating of the first part of the story gets tired very quickly after several of your stories all have the same issue.
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Here is the story rewritten in a more appropriate and better edited way!
th-cam.com/video/KZePP35Q-As/w-d-xo.html
Maybe they need a human proofreader.
i hate when a story repeats its self like he for got where he was reading the story
The AI probably glitched like Max Headroom and forgot what it was reading
Half way through the story ,AI went back to the beginning lines
Through the first 20 minutes of the story I was really getting into it.
Then, almost like clockwork, the next 13 minutes was a complete repeat of what had already transpired.
After about a minute into the repeat of the food conversation I paused and read the comment section. Then I advanced the story 10 minutes and was still repeating. Paused again looking at the timestamp then advanced another 3 minutes letting it play from there until fresh dialogue appeared.
I paused again to make this comment. So at this moment I don't know if there will be any more hiccups.
AI is not ready to be cut loose yet. These stories still need proofing by real people... just saying. 😒🤔
Hopefully, the story will have a strong finish. 🤨
th-cam.com/video/KZePP35Q-As/w-d-xo.html
I rewrote it here without repetitions!
@@FictionalReimagined Nice. I'll have to listen to it soon. I had already posted a final comment not knowing this had been reworked.
I presume it will probably address additional issues I brought up in my last post.
Nice to see someone taking the initiative to correct a flawed story. 👍
19 minutes until 33min 30 sec was repeat of beginning. I skipped thru that to not waste time. Then it was at a point far ahead in the story , leaving out a big part. At 37 she is dieing from the battle and died , leaving Alex alone. Then the sad wrap up and end of story. Screwed the pooch on that one.
33:32 Alex & Celera were walking through the catacombs to their destination.
33:40 Jumps straight to "spilt blood, bodies of fallen both friend and foe scattered across the ground like broken dolls."
34:01 Alex knelt beside Celera, her face pale and drawn.
Okay, where's the battle that clearly happened between 33:32 and 33:40?
Sounds like it would have been intense and dramatic. Is that regurgitated 13 minutes where the battle was supposed to be?🧐
Didn't care for the ending, very depressing. Sounds like Alex will develop a dark persona as his life goes on without Celera 😳
All the women are always blue
The beginning was good, it gets repeated in the middle and then the ending is told. What happened in the middle of the story to get to Celera dying? How did they find the others? Would have been good to find out.
Or green
Thanks
Well that sucks, it gets half way through and starts over.
I vil have my 40;52 minuts back, the Ai is made.
I rewrote it better here! th-cam.com/video/KZePP35Q-As/w-d-xo.html
Well. That was a waste of 40 minutes.
To the content creator:
About 22 minutes in, it starts over once more, new content starts around the 32 minute mark. But I agree, it's missing 10-20 minutes of story. How the Queen found her brother and all of the fight. Might wanna take this one down, renarrate and listen to it before reposting as fixed. Leaving this one up as is will drive people away.
Uh, Giant plot hole: WHY should she be reinstated? Who cares if she was deposed. For all we know she is evil personified and it is a mercy she is alive instead of dead.
Thumbs down to repeating stories.
th-cam.com/video/KZePP35Q-As/w-d-xo.html
Here is the story without repetitions!
You have good stories, But this constant repeating of the first part of the story gets tired very quickly after several of your stories all have the same issue.
I hope this helps improve my image as an author in front of you!
th-cam.com/video/KZePP35Q-As/w-d-xo.html
So the story looped back, went forward to the climatic battle and picked up after all had been done. Really lousy story-telling.
Boring