Hi everyone. This video is a few years old now. I am well aware of the audio problems. I still get comments on this video and other videos from 2014-15, from people asking me to draw their MLP OC. I am a self employed freelance artist. I don't just make MLP stuff. If you are interested in a commission, visit my main youtube page and watch my trailer video. That has all the information you need about how to get a commission. Please do not ask for a drawing in the youtube comments.
I want to ask if my oc is a Mary sue and if there is anything I could fix. Nothing more or less. Name:Cloud Age:5-10 Species:Pegasus Fur color:Cool grey Hair color: light grey, short Back story: it took place in 192X where there were very few ponies left in ponyvile. Every day they would bring hopeless earth ponies, unicorns that had they're horns torn off, or Pegasi that failed flights test up in the rainbow factory were they ripped out their insides and made them into rainbow merchandise . Cloud's parents were already sent and never came back. At school there was a competition between cloud and her sister sky, which never had loved or cared for cloud. The winner gets out alive but has too in the rainbow factory. The loser obviously gets sent to the rainbow factory to be executed. When cloud was about to win, sky pushed her as cloud fell into the ground of ponyvile. Hours later, cloud woke up to see ponies guts and blood splattered all over the floor. Then it was her turn, the last thing she saw was the vengful eyes and smile of her careless sister before she died. It was already 195X when she woke up again but as a ghost. Ponyvile was already deserted. No unicorns or earth ponies walking around.Not even the Pegasi still exsisted. It was just cloud And the depressing grey atmosphere. Let's say her phantom still walks around looking for other survivors or spirits of murdered ponies. She sometimes actually does find tourists and disguises herself as a shadow to stalk them.
Blackredders are EVERYWHERE people make OCs. I see those abominations all the time in MMORPGs. They are the embodiment of "edgy character, uncreative player": Just throw the armor parts with the most spiky bits together, main color; pitch black, secondary color; pitch black, detail color; glowing neon (when available) red = instant badass. Or so they think. Most people aren't even aware of what a horrible mess they make this way on a visual level, before even getting into the "background" of their characters.
Mad, you wanna know who started the red and black = edgy and evil trope? Shadow the Hedgehog. He's balck and red, and edgy, and, was a villain, and, used guns.. in a kids franchise
i have a red and black pony oc.. but she's not evil.. Her name is Dj Bolting Twist. She's a Pegasus, and I try not to hurt your vid..... But im just telling you ^u^
Sarabeth Gravina I have a red and black oc as well and she's evil, but she has a complete backstory and why she's evil, and she has a name. I'm not trying to hurt the video either, I... I have no idea why I'm telling you this...
I like how people just make their character red and black and automatically assume that they should be evil. Lol if anything, I like it when villains have girly pastel colors since it throws a little curveball.
Well... damn. I know this is literally a 3 year old post.. but I hope that has changed... majorly. I never realized how hated OC’s like this were, with.. ya know, the red and black color palette. I have one, but as a changeling. Sure he has a backstory, but as a pony I couldn’t see him working as well honestly.. it is jarring to look at.
This was awesome and I don't feel insulted having a red and black oc myself. I've loved wearing red and black since long before I got into MLP. I just had a bit of trouble following because the evil pony's voice was too distorted.
Be prepared for the most Mary Sue you have ever been exposed too: Hellu I am princess dark glitter night wing I'm an alicorn. I was born in another universe. I have raven locks and magical, color-changing purple orbs. I have a black coat with neon rainbow hair and rainbow hooves and I'm really elegant My family is like really mean and I'm a social outcast and people hate me because I'm so perfect. I'm the secret daughter of princess Luna and I can control stars and I'm insane and forgotten and kill me kill me kill me kill me...
1:38 "I seen some THINGS and..... STUFF" me:well then welcome to the Internet how are enjoying it so far? terrible? yeah that's what I thought. I think the Internet is messed up in the system. oh wait! it already is!
I have 2 OCs, Yin and Yang (Original Right?) They're sisters that come from a small cloud city farther away from cloudsdale at the moment they both live together in cloudsdale They're designs are being worked on but not done :D (Yin's a Pegasus & Yang's a BatPony)
I actually knew it about a month before it got popular to point of school-popularity, from an LP from a TH-camr I particularly favour. I'm more of a fan of his work in Homestuck, but I still love Undertale. ;P
I have an OC named Wilted Flower. She has a "plant babysitting" business where she takes care of ponies' plants while somepony is away. She is very standoffish because she used to be bullied for her looks. Basically, other fillies found her dull colors ugly. Now that she is grown she's very bitter, and doesn't open up easily. After meeting my other main OC Tiopy and her friends though, she begins opening up again. Tiopy is now Wilted's gf. :3
My mlp OC sorta has a dark backstory when she was born and what her potential was destined to be, at that time. basically she was "made" to destroy this world/kingdom but her father eventually saved her and she had no knowledge about this event until things showed up in her dreams during her mid-life and she went to a wise man to get answers about what they might meant. Her Father has been dead for several years but her "mother" still knows the story. That moment when you faced to ur dark reality. lol
That's like my OC, Sparky Dreamcatcher. I'm still working out the rest of the backstory. But one of the more interesting things in her life was how she met Celestia.
I love how you push back story's so much. I think that is one of the most important ideas of a character. Though sometimes people may do the looks before they create a backstory. It still is the ground on witch the character stands. A solid foundation. I love the way you look at it. That the ponies arnt bad or need to be hated, they need to be worked on. Its an unfinished person to you.
I love this. It's entirely possible to have a dark character, in color and past, and avoid those cliches. Your character CAN be unique while keeping those ideas. I actually have a character with darker colors (not a pony, though) who has gone through some things in his past. Though it's a fanatical world, I try to keep things realistic, things that could happen to any person. And, even though he's mainly darker shades and hues of grey, and despite his past, or rather because of it, he tries to be better than it. He's big, he's grey and he has some serious mental issues from his life, but that doesn't stop him from at least trying to not be what people see him as. He Might not always succeed, but a well rounded character is a thousand times more interesting than a simple cliche. And more people will be rooting for them TO succeed.
Even if someone does not make their black and red pony an alicorn, it's just bad art taste. Those colors do not work together in the context of the show. The only black and red pony in MLP is Sombra, and he is arguably the worst villain. Ponies come in pastels. Even Luna, who uses the darkest or most vivid colors, uses very colorful and friendly colors. Males use even more bland colors than the females. take the female color and add a few shades of gray to it, and you get the male color. It's sad, since there's very little variety that you can do with male characters in that sense, but if you want to make a GOOD character, who looks like they'd actually fit in with the background ponies, that's what you gotta do.
Funstuffahead I don't have an alicorn because my OC is actually tasteful. Can you imagine if Luna were red and black? she'd look terrible. Red and black OC's are just some depressed kids idea of looking "cool".
What!!??... WHAT THE FUCK!!?? How *dare* you say king sombra is the worst villain! People only say that because of his color scheme, which I think is totally out of the question. I am not saying that I like black and red color schemes, but just because a character has that scheme doesn't make them terrible. Sombra had a lot of potential as a villain, but they made his back round so short, the creators simply rushed them selves with the idea of sombra, like, *why* and/or *how* he became evil. Maybe he wasn't always those colors, or maybe he wasn't always a unicorn, who knows. And why do people always think that red and black, when but together, are supposedly evil in any way? Red is the color that represents passion and love, while black is spiritually considered the color of life, or the first color you see before your born. (probably why it's considered the color of life) so when the colors are put together, they could mean "A life full of love and passion..." or something like that. But anyway, all in all, just because king sombra was black and red, doesn't make him a terrible villain. (He's actually my favorite)! :)
Autumn Kalista but it sounds like the things you like about him are all "could've been" things. I don't hate Sombra because of his color scheme (it actually kind of works). I hate him because he was the laziest villain they ever made. Thank goodness they breathed a bit of life into that character in the comic books, but the MLP official stuff on him? very bland. I'm sure the way I phrased my comment made you think I hate Sombra for his color scheme "The only black and red pony in MLP is Sombra, and he is arguably the worst villain." but that's not what I meant. What I meant is that a color scheme or "evil design" does not make an interesting or good villain.
+Schwarzer Ritter I could only understand the ending when he was getting beaten up... I wish i never found out about the mop *shudders* At least i don't know what she did with it
I absolutely fucking HATE recolors and cutting ocs. Recolors are basically just saying "I am an uncreative and lazy person who thinks that this recolored Fluttershy is original!" And cutting ocs are just flat out offensive. They are cool or cute. There are people who actually cut and those cutting ocs treat it like a joke. Sorry for the rant, just wanted to state my opinion! :)
I really do not understand why people hate the black and blood red color your OC has a black mane and tail and really weird hat that looks like it was stolen from disturbed Scarecrow Now you can see how others feel but do not have the balls to say *necromancer's out*
Mad Munchkin someone is angry know that's not good for health shortens life by 10 to 15% and by the way You agree that this giant hat looks weird oh just one more thing, should work on your humor when you do not take a joke
She's not angry she was correcting you, silly goose. Please just don't even try to say anything anymore, it's making you look really unintelligible and holds in.
Jesus Christ, it's like listening to a cheap walkie talkie that has really bad quality while trying to run through a field of corn and the other person is stuck in a giant cave
I'm gonna be honest. I have or well... Had a red and black mare. She was for my father who loved those colors. He was like "Make me a red and black mare!" and so I did. I called her crimson shadow, but I never gave her a backstory because I didn't have her for long so, yes she was a failed attempt at a pony (Plus I was new to the fandom at the time Sooooooo o3o )
Nruss10 AJ/MLP oh, I've never heard of that. I'll have to look at it some time. I just thought they put in sombra for the sake of needing a villian. Thanks!
Even I am guilty of this one. Through rewriting my character over the weeks, I made it so my character wears specially designed suits of a whole variety of colors. He just happens to have a washed out red fur color and a grey suit, along with white, sky blue, gold, silver, and brown. He just picks a suit to wear when going out in public at random.
My character has a dark backstory (don't need to go into it rn) but he doesn't become evil or look evil he just develops depression and doesn't really talk to anyone but the person he buys food from and silver moon (my friends oc)
Learn something new every day, I don't know much about My little pony or what a brownie is, but if you make an antagonist give him or she a reason for doing this.
You ought to review/critique some actual OCs. :) I think you'd be good at it, and it would bring to light some of the less well-known tropes that fans fall into while making OCs.
Rebecca Pucci Yeah, but unfortunately so many people take things as personal attacks these days. Hell, people who make black and red ponies took THIS as a personal attack when she said at the beginning that she doesn't actually have anything against them specifically.
Also the only thing I didn't like about this guy was his voice. Just because he looks scary doesn't mean his voice has to sound hissy and distorted. His voice should be like judgement boy. A scary design, with a calming voice that just makes him scarier. Scary design plus scary voice equals generic demon thing.
Oh my god I laughed so hard. "No I am not evil! I am misunderstood! I am mysterious. I am broken. My name is... My name is a secret. IT is a name so terrible, so vile and so WICKED that if you utter a single syllable, it'll make your ears bleed!" Come on make your characters think they're doing something right. :P That's how most villains are. Also, as for the "evil for the sake of it"... I dunno, that's plausible to me, but then again I went to a Jr. High school full of "at risk" youth and I grew up with my sister. So someone being cruel just because is totally plausible to me. Noooo that's not a jab at my high school. :P If I were to base a character off of me I'd be all "I should watch the world burn but I'm too **nice** to let it burn."
People, can you please stop spamming your OC's on this video? Most of us don't care about your 'awesome' OC, and the few that reply will tell you that they suck anyway. Which 90% of the time, they do.
Mad Munchkin I wouldn't take it that far, I mean people can say whatever they want on the internet. My problem lies more with the idea that people say things about their Red and Black Oc, trying to prove that not all Red and Black Oc's are bad. Which you established you don't have a problem with. However, just because an Oc doesn't fit the archetype of the one shown in the video, doesn't mean it is a well-thoughout Oc. Like you said, what's his/her name and backstory? Even with one, people can mess up, with names that are way too 'edgy' and backstories that are either too depressing to be real, make them royalty or anything else that tries to make characters deeper, but instead makes them paperthin. I recommend anyone to watch Mad Munchkin's "Why I hate Alicorn OCs", as it shows another flaw in decent character creation. And before anyone attacks me, I know there is always going to be an exception to the rule, Alicorns can be interesting and Red and Black OCs can be cool, tragic characters. But I have yet to see one in this video. By The By, OMG MAD MUNCHKIN TALKED TO ME!!!11!
TheDoctorSerious People can say whatever they want on the internet, however this is my youtube account and I want to try and keep the commenting section clear of any obvious trolling or spamming. So far I have only had to disable comments on one video (because it was coming near unmanageable) and I still consider that a last resort. There is always an exception to the rule, but I don't want to start reviewing people's OCs since I want to make sure this account stays eclectic and explores other fandoms as well as MLP. I appreciate everyone sending me a description of their OCs but at the same time I can't reply to them all nor make a decent analysis of each and every one. I may start doing this one day, but for now...I just don't have the time or will power. Perhaps if I had a team, I would do it.
Mad Munchkin I see. I'm sure you know what's best for your channel, so I wish you the best of luck with this. This conversation of epic typing was really fun. Thanks for responding to my comments and I hope your videos and art are gonna be big one day.
So, has Lord Bubbles gotten they're vengeance yet? It's been about a year and a half or something like that. I even thought up a name, hope they like it.
This... This and the alicorn video are just... They get the message out and its something I been trying o figure out how to tell others but you got it.
Honestly I don't know why people associate edgy edgy red and black with evil. Sure you can make a villain all you want, but try to make one that breaks out of the norm. I've seen some people pull off villains with black and red color schemes (Izuru Kamukura from Danganronpa is a good example) but I'm all out for seeing stuff original. Hell, I like the evil side too, I always root for the villains, I just don't want to see the black and red trope get used in every single evil OC out there. Hell, Mario, which is probably the most repetitive series ever doesn't have a black and red main villain (most of the time), if nintendo can pull it off so can you.
Ally Gator Animator She was only a copy so she couldn't be evil. I would like to see mad munchkin's Mary Sue turned into a cannon villain. That would be hilarious. XD
I love the video here, and it is entertaining… But I can't listen to this guy's voice. It is just really hard to understand, and even when I try to it just hurts my head...
And red and black ponies arent always evil. Just someone likes both colours and puts it on a pony doesnt make it evil. Like they say, dont judge a book by its cover. And some may be even be goths.
I have nothing against red and black OCs darling, however I would like to urge you to create a pony with a slightly more creative color scheme? There are tons of colors out there, but there are thousands of red and black OCs and I think it's just not a creative idea. You can even make a goth pony without only using red and black, there are other ways to make a pony look goth. I don't mean to sound like a hater if that is how I am coming across I just think it would be a good idea to come up with something that has not been done many, many times before.
Is a black and white spotted pony okay? Her name has Star in it, as she's based off of myself and I have a HUGE obsession with space (aliens/galaxies/constellations), and she's designed to kinda look like the night sky.
I couldn't help but notice that only 4 videos out of the over 100 videos I've made are about the things I hate. All the time? Sure...judge someone based on 4 videos. Good call.
they aren't exactly hate videos, they are more of "ranting" videos, so to speak. It's not the TYPE of oc she is ranting on, its how sometimes people give no name or backstory to their character whatsoever, and create overpowered gods that must be worshipped, or misunderstood souls that are never explained. One example I can think of for the overpowed god is a fanfiction called The Cassandra Chronicals (which is the BEST trollfic I have ever read, but none the less a mary sue with no personality whatsoever other than being perfect at everything.) Feel free to check it out, It had me laughing at the complete and other mary sueness of it all XD
Hi everyone. This video is a few years old now. I am well aware of the audio problems. I still get comments on this video and other videos from 2014-15, from people asking me to draw their MLP OC. I am a self employed freelance artist. I don't just make MLP stuff. If you are interested in a commission, visit my main youtube page and watch my trailer video. That has all the information you need about how to get a commission. Please do not ask for a drawing in the youtube comments.
Mad Munchkin I was 4 when this came out heh...
Mad Munchkin you hate everything 😤😤
Mad Munchkin what did you use for his voice?
I want to ask if my oc is a Mary sue and if there is anything I could fix. Nothing more or less.
Name:Cloud
Age:5-10
Species:Pegasus
Fur color:Cool grey
Hair color: light grey, short
Back story: it took place in 192X where there were very few ponies left in ponyvile. Every day they would bring hopeless earth ponies, unicorns that had they're horns torn off, or Pegasi that failed flights test up in the rainbow factory were they ripped out their insides and made them into rainbow merchandise . Cloud's parents were already sent and never came back. At school there was a competition between cloud and her sister sky, which never had loved or cared for cloud. The winner gets out alive but has too in the rainbow factory. The loser obviously gets sent to the rainbow factory to be executed. When cloud was about to win, sky pushed her as cloud fell into the ground of ponyvile. Hours later, cloud woke up to see ponies guts and blood splattered all over the floor. Then it was her turn, the last thing she saw was the vengful eyes and smile of her careless sister before she died. It was already 195X when she woke up again but as a ghost. Ponyvile was already deserted. No unicorns or earth ponies walking around.Not even the Pegasi still exsisted. It was just cloud And the depressing grey atmosphere. Let's say her phantom still walks around looking for other survivors or spirits of murdered ponies. She sometimes actually does find tourists and disguises herself as a shadow to stalk them.
Blackredders are EVERYWHERE people make OCs. I see those abominations all the time in MMORPGs. They are the embodiment of "edgy character, uncreative player": Just throw the armor parts with the most spiky bits together, main color; pitch black, secondary color; pitch black, detail color; glowing neon (when available) red = instant badass. Or so they think. Most people aren't even aware of what a horrible mess they make this way on a visual level, before even getting into the "background" of their characters.
My name is SO evil, that if you were to hear it, you'd be slowly sucked into hell in the most painful way possible. My name is...
Snuggle Muffins.
Dear Celestia kill it with Rainbows!
Feed it to the kittens!
Snuggle buddies :D Mines.. Snuggle Shimmer... Much cringe
hahahahahahahahahaha😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO im being dragged slowly into the depths of hells
hey maybe i'll see satan :3
tempted to make an red and black oc who's a sweet little cinnamon bun that loves flowers and glitter.
.......... i want to see it
I am tempted to see it
I am tempted to see it
I have one
It's not an OC, just a drawing of black and red pony who looks like a cinnamon roll
He saw Boku no pico, that's the reason why he's evil. He can't deal with it
lol
NU NOT THE BOKU NO PICO MY EYES MY EYES.....i actually watched the hwole series im messed up
Kawaii Witch KORICHIWA NANAN DO *gouches eyes but can still hear it*
Frostfrau true doe!!
OMG that makes so much sense!
Sometimes is good to have a friend like Mary Sue.
I'd be friends with Mary Sue then Red and black pony person thing.
@@gourmetcheesepizza9006 I'd rather be friends with the red and black pony instead of the 'Plastic' Ponies.
Mad, you wanna know who started the red and black = edgy and evil trope?
Shadow the Hedgehog.
He's balck and red, and edgy, and, was a villain, and, used guns.. in a kids franchise
IKR!
Binary Byter which he stole a lot of those things from vegeta
* :l
not :!
I've never liked Shadow to be honest. I don't understand why everyone else likes him.
Binary Byter yeah but shadow is the only thing that makes it look good, and he's not evil... All the time.
I couldn't hear a damn thing that Edgy McEvil said.
subtitles. that's what I had to do
My backstory is... A secret! (Every lazy Oc maker ever)
Aislyn Likes Puffins I'm just lazy with my ocs boi's XD
Aislyn Last Name I haven't come up with backstories for my oc's yet. Oops.
can relate, sometimes i think about just having no backstory cuz i'm too uncreative 😫
Lord Insertnamehere now has subtitles!
Mad Munchkin Thank you for the subtitles!
i have a red and black pony oc.. but she's not evil.. Her name is Dj Bolting Twist. She's a Pegasus, and I try not to hurt your vid..... But im just telling you ^u^
3:17-3:29 In other words, he hadn't thought of one yet. Right?
Sarabeth Gravina I have a red and black oc as well and she's evil, but she has a complete backstory and why she's evil, and she has a name. I'm not trying to hurt the video either, I... I have no idea why I'm telling you this...
wats your oc's name? and I now wanna kinda hear its back story because you mention it :3
I like how people just make their character red and black and automatically assume that they should be evil. Lol if anything, I like it when villains have girly pastel colors since it throws a little curveball.
Inky Dinky Yes! I did something right with Vanessa by dodging a trope.
My red and black OC is literally the most positive, friendly neko ever. Her name is literally Koneko (kitten in Japanese).
Or normal ponies or heroes with red and black, also throws a curve ball
Inky Dinky umbrige
Two words: cozy. Glow.
red and black OC: no one gets me
me: probably because you're an angsty teen
Alannadoes stuff an angsty,male,emo teen
Icee the Glaceon ,,,l! Jjjjuuķ saßjju6oko
I don't know What I'm doing 0
lamo
Tbh sometimes it's a kid
I've actually asked someone with an edgy OC for a back story. and they blocked me.
Well... damn. I know this is literally a 3 year old post.. but I hope that has changed... majorly. I never realized how hated OC’s like this were, with.. ya know, the red and black color palette. I have one, but as a changeling. Sure he has a backstory, but as a pony I couldn’t see him working as well honestly.. it is jarring to look at.
@@Zal-TheBug
I mean. At least you put in effort into making him interesting aside from looks.
This isn't possible to watch. I don't understand anything of what is being said by the red and black pony.
Captions
Zoey May be the point
ikr
Zoey put subtitles on
Zoey she put subtitles on it like 3 years ago
This was awesome and I don't feel insulted having a red and black oc myself. I've loved wearing red and black since long before I got into MLP.
I just had a bit of trouble following because the evil pony's voice was too distorted.
+setzertrancer There's closed captions, if you can't understand it much. Plus it's only for Lord Insertnamehere, so it's pretty helpful.
Be prepared for the most Mary Sue you have ever been exposed too: Hellu I am princess dark glitter night wing I'm an alicorn. I was born in another universe. I have raven locks and magical, color-changing purple orbs. I have a black coat with neon rainbow hair and rainbow hooves and I'm really elegant My family is like really mean and I'm a social outcast and people hate me because I'm so perfect. I'm the secret daughter of princess Luna and I can control stars and I'm insane and forgotten and kill me kill me kill me kill me...
+LadyEclipsedAura x Still not at Ebony from My Immortal.
+LadyEclipsedAura x Who's the dad? ( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)
+LadyEclipsedAura x I LOVE IT
+Lucas Jessen oh no not Ebony
+LadyEclipsedAura x YES EBONY
1:38 "I seen some THINGS and..... STUFF" me:well then welcome to the Internet how are enjoying it so far? terrible? yeah that's what I thought.
I think the Internet is messed up in the system. oh wait! it already is!
1. Fangirls
2. Terrible quality
3. Furry porn
4. Jake paul
Deredere Cookie ikr
ive seen worse to the point were nothing else is worse
I really like how your OC has furry legs
Zoe Whitecotton Wonder if She’s A furry tooo ??????
When he yelled HATE I spilled my drink on my keyboard
+Primadonna Dragon
I nearly wet my pants!
lol
rip
I choked on my fried rice.
Black and red pony: HATE!
Me: (chokes on fried rice)
My grandma: (WTF face)
Give your keyboard my condolences
Am I the only one that can understand the red and black pony?
Amber Siegel #subtitles
Amber Siegel
Nope, even without the subtitles
Amber Siegel yea i find it easy to understand
i can
I didn't until I turned on captions and read while listening for a little bit. Now I understand.
his name is...
sonic 06.
Cat Meistr sorry, that name is already taken. Would you like sonicshadow9183 or sonic.theedgypony ?
lol
No, it's Superman 64.
I prefer villains that are entertaining to watch. Like Discord. Or the Joker from Dark Knight. They're fun to watch and listen to.
+Marion Ette XD I can't believe that I metioned him before I got to him flipping out about Discord!
+Marion Ette Annnnnd... Harley Quinn? She's probably my favorite villain (she's just hilarious!)
Oh, and Dave from Penguins of Madagascar! He's awesome!
or Vaas Montenegro from fc3
or Pagan Min
my sister's oc is a red and black pony. she's pretty cheerful. do you still hate her?
I have 2 OCs, Yin and Yang (Original Right?) They're sisters that come from a small cloud city farther away from cloudsdale at the moment they both live together in cloudsdale
They're designs are being worked on but not done :D
(Yin's a Pegasus &
Yang's a BatPony)
I'd name him Sylvious... don't know why but, just seems right
Little Lynn •3• yes
Imma go make a character named Sylvious now... just for funzies, probably never going to bring him up again
Little Lynn •3• Press b to pay respects to Sylvious
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FRIENDS?! I DONT NEED FRIENDS! IVE GOT KNIVES! **swing** **dodge** im... out of knives.
+FireTurtle Sounds like Jack Noir, if ya ask me. xD
that was actually a quote from a game called undertale
I know abut Undertale, believe me. :p
undertale is really popular right now. toby is getting a lot of attention
I actually knew it about a month before it got popular to point of school-popularity, from an LP from a TH-camr I particularly favour. I'm more of a fan of his work in Homestuck, but I still love Undertale. ;P
3:32, it's Carl with a K isn't it.
lol
+Yay Person Omg, I knew this one kid who always said, "It's Carl with a K!"
+Gummy Unicorn I think it would be hilarious if I named my future kid Carl Withikay Leonardi.
*_COMMUNISM INTENSIFIES_*
R.I.P all headphone users
yeeep
HELP MEEEEE
My ears are bleeding DX
Ooooooowwwwwww.....😵😵😵😵😵
I'm wearing headphones and I was fine :V maybe your problems are that you all have the volume way too high lol
Mary Sue is actually KP in disguise XD
Okay that's actually pretty funny
I have an OC named Wilted Flower. She has a "plant babysitting" business where she takes care of ponies' plants while somepony is away. She is very standoffish because she used to be bullied for her looks. Basically, other fillies found her dull colors ugly.
Now that she is grown she's very bitter, and doesn't open up easily. After meeting my other main OC Tiopy and her friends though, she begins opening up again. Tiopy is now Wilted's gf. :3
I don't see why a lot of characters that have tragic backstories are villains.
I mean my OC has a tragic backstory but she's not a villain.
+Kristen Turner ya same here
My mlp OC sorta has a dark backstory when she was born and what her potential was destined to be, at that time. basically she was "made" to destroy this world/kingdom but her father eventually saved her and she had no knowledge about this event until things showed up in her dreams during her mid-life and she went to a wise man to get answers about what they might meant. Her Father has been dead for several years but her "mother" still knows the story. That moment when you faced to ur dark reality. lol
That's like my OC, Sparky Dreamcatcher.
I'm still working out the rest of the backstory. But one of the more interesting things in her life was how she met Celestia.
Question: What irish music are you playing i Love Celtic Rock!
It's Scottish.
Mad Munchkin Thanks i love SCottish music, are you from scotland:P
OH MY FUCKING GOD.
iMillek excuse me???
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I love how you push back story's so much. I think that is one of the most important ideas of a character. Though sometimes people may do the looks before they create a backstory. It still is the ground on witch the character stands. A solid foundation. I love the way you look at it. That the ponies arnt bad or need to be hated, they need to be worked on. Its an unfinished person to you.
His names is lord VOLDEMORT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Omg I was thinking the same thing
Christine Davis also the "black knight"... probably the ORGIN of all cartoon villains
You're not suppose to say his name!!!!!
The_walking_skeleton who's name? oh
+Christine Davis I HAVE COME, for pie. gimme my pie
I can tell you had some fun with this video. I couldn't help but laugh near the end, and that sad face is just so adorable on him.
I love this.
It's entirely possible to have a dark character, in color and past, and avoid those cliches. Your character CAN be unique while keeping those ideas.
I actually have a character with darker colors (not a pony, though) who has gone through some things in his past. Though it's a fanatical world, I try to keep things realistic, things that could happen to any person.
And, even though he's mainly darker shades and hues of grey, and despite his past, or rather because of it, he tries to be better than it.
He's big, he's grey and he has some serious mental issues from his life, but that doesn't stop him from at least trying to not be what people see him as.
He Might not always succeed, but a well rounded character is a thousand times more interesting than a simple cliche.
And more people will be rooting for them TO succeed.
Even if someone does not make their black and red pony an alicorn, it's just bad art taste. Those colors do not work together in the context of the show. The only black and red pony in MLP is Sombra, and he is arguably the worst villain. Ponies come in pastels. Even Luna, who uses the darkest or most vivid colors, uses very colorful and friendly colors.
Males use even more bland colors than the females. take the female color and add a few shades of gray to it, and you get the male color. It's sad, since there's very little variety that you can do with male characters in that sense, but if you want to make a GOOD character, who looks like they'd actually fit in with the background ponies, that's what you gotta do.
I feel like I've seen a few background ponies with that color scheme but I get what you are saying and totally agree with you
Umm....it works on my alicorn.if it's not on yours, don't complain about it.
Funstuffahead I don't have an alicorn because my OC is actually tasteful. Can you imagine if Luna were red and black? she'd look terrible.
Red and black OC's are just some depressed kids idea of looking "cool".
What!!??... WHAT THE FUCK!!?? How *dare* you say king sombra is the worst villain! People only say that because of his color scheme, which I think is totally out of the question. I am not saying that I like black and red color schemes, but just because a character has that scheme doesn't make them terrible. Sombra had a lot of potential as a villain, but they made his back round so short, the creators simply rushed them selves with the idea of sombra, like, *why* and/or *how* he became evil. Maybe he wasn't always those colors, or maybe he wasn't always a unicorn, who knows. And why do people always think that red and black, when but together, are supposedly evil in any way? Red is the color that represents passion and love, while black is spiritually considered the color of life, or the first color you see before your born. (probably why it's considered the color of life) so when the colors are put together, they could mean
"A life full of love and passion..." or something like that. But anyway, all in all, just because king sombra was black and red, doesn't make him a terrible villain. (He's actually my favorite)! :)
Autumn Kalista but it sounds like the things you like about him are all "could've been" things. I don't hate Sombra because of his color scheme (it actually kind of works). I hate him because he was the laziest villain they ever made. Thank goodness they breathed a bit of life into that character in the comic books, but the MLP official stuff on him? very bland.
I'm sure the way I phrased my comment made you think I hate Sombra for his color scheme
"The only black and red pony in MLP is Sombra, and he is arguably the worst villain."
but that's not what I meant. What I meant is that a color scheme or "evil design" does not make an interesting or good villain.
2edgy, m8.
needs more linkin park
+Maplebaconz
Limp Biscuit, needs more Limp Biscuit.
CRAWLING IN MY CRAWL
CRAWLING IN MY SKIN! THESE WOUNDS THEY WILL NOT HEAAAAL!
I TRIED SO HARD AND GOT SO FAR!
+Milky Moomoo I GOT IN ONE LITTLE FIGHT AND MY MOM GOT SCARED
I thought he sounded like Flowey
I have a Problem
ok
Am I the only one who could not understand a single word Shadow the Pony was saying?
TheBlarggle turn on subtitles
I understood him saying "things and stuff"
Nope
+Schwarzer Ritter I could only understand the ending when he was getting beaten up...
I wish i never found out about the mop *shudders* At least i don't know what she did with it
The beginning honestly scared the living shit out of me.
like these kids usually say their character relates to them. no they don't have depression but just are trying to be edgy
Have you done an review on recolors? Or cutting ocs (those offend the shit out of me)
No, and I don't really plan to if I'm honest.
Mad Munchkin Ah, okay. Thanks for the info.
I absolutely fucking HATE recolors and cutting ocs. Recolors are basically just saying "I am an uncreative and lazy person who thinks that this recolored Fluttershy is original!" And cutting ocs are just flat out offensive. They are cool or cute. There are people who actually cut and those cutting ocs treat it like a joke. Sorry for the rant, just wanted to state my opinion! :)
+It is goat *arent
It is goat Ditto.
I really do not understand why people hate the black and blood red color your OC has a black mane and tail and really weird hat that looks like it was stolen from disturbed Scarecrow Now you can see how others feel but do not have the balls to say *necromancer's out*
Necromancer King My mane is dark blue ya derp.
Mad Munchkin someone is angry know that's not good for health shortens life by 10 to 15% and by the way You agree that this giant hat looks weird oh just one more thing, should work on your humor when you do not take a joke
She's not angry she was correcting you, silly goose. Please just don't even try to say anything anymore, it's making you look really unintelligible and holds in.
*childish
Necromancer King "Someone is angry" that someone is YOU
Jesus Christ, it's like listening to a cheap walkie talkie that has really bad quality while trying to run through a field of corn and the other person is stuck in a giant cave
I'm gonna be honest. I have or well... Had a red and black mare. She was for my father who loved those colors. He was like "Make me a red and black mare!" and so I did. I called her crimson shadow, but I never gave her a backstory because I didn't have her for long so, yes she was a failed attempt at a pony (Plus I was new to the fandom at the time Sooooooo o3o )
+Lyra's Little crew of oc's and fursonas
They are good colors, it's more about the values associated with such colors.
yeah, I love those colors it's just like you said, it's mire the values
like sombra. evil just to be evil
There is a reason
In the Official MLP comic FIENDship is magic #1 (yeah spell it FIENDship) is sombra's backstory. You can possibly find it on TH-cam.
Nruss10 AJ/MLP oh, I've never heard of that. I'll have to look at it some time. I just thought they put in sombra for the sake of needing a villian. Thanks!
I like sombra... I'm sorry... He has that whole alien thing going on... He's not overpowered... But the stares.... Fuck stares....
Even I am guilty of this one. Through rewriting my character over the weeks, I made it so my character wears specially designed suits of a whole variety of colors. He just happens to have a washed out red fur color and a grey suit, along with white, sky blue, gold, silver, and brown. He just picks a suit to wear when going out in public at random.
I found it funny how a lot of villain OCs are red and black. I mean, be a little more creative.
I had to turn on subtitle to understand the red and black pony am the only one?
Nope
we all did
0:11 RIP HEADPHONE USERS XDD BTW FIRST TIME IN YOUR CHANNEL AND I LOVE YOUR CONTENT AND DRAWINGS!!!
The only reason I'd make a black and red pony is cause I'm into the goth style
My character has a dark backstory (don't need to go into it rn) but he doesn't become evil or look evil he just develops depression and doesn't really talk to anyone but the person he buys food from and silver moon (my friends oc)
My oc is a red and black unicorn named script writer
Rebel Warrior Thats a cool name!
((fire alone will save our clan, sorry not sorry))
Shut up Bluestar im ur medicine cat!!!!1!1
+Cute EEVEE33 no your not. JK I could kill ya in a second kitty. (let's supouse I'm a mewtwo (pokemon))
*Firepaw walks in* Whats a Mewtwo?
Peridot SU (i kno what a mewtwo is, Magikarp is better)
NO! Mary Sue has tasted blood and her thirst will never be quenched!
Get the garlic!
Arcan Folklore don't forget the stake.
grekoy AND THE UV SUN-SABER! -Yes, I watch My Babysitter's A Vampire, but I may have spelled that wrong.-
I have a black and red, my oc has a normal life and stuff, there is no tragic back story, Silver Electric isn't evil either.
Honestly I love this video. It made me want to try to make a evil OC that is evil because it's how they survive. Keep up the good work!~
My OC is red and black and if you even pinch her she bursts out in tears.
So what I'm saying is shes not evil.
Keira Sommer no its worse...
Cheyenne Pool She's talking about her pony OC.
DivineRockStar101 *about her really terrible oc
never go full Pony What do you mean?
This is the first time I ACTUALLY LIKED MARY SUE.
Does this color palette classify as "red and black"? (in order of %) steel, crimson, phalo blue, midnight black. (steel as in the color)
thanks for not using the word emo
You're welcome. :)
Mad Munchkin also i do have a black and red oc so..... sorry
gary sue
gay, sure
It's a male version of a mary sue.
It's actually called a "Gary Stu".
Learn something new every day, I don't know much about My little pony or what a brownie is, but if you make an antagonist give him or she a reason for doing this.
what about Brony?
*Your red and black now. That's my attack.
*Nyeh heh heh!
Worst joke ever... And I like it.
Frisk: OH GOD, OH GOD NO WHY, WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS?!?!?!
LOL
Papyrus's Underfell attack.
and I realized EVERYONE IS RED AND BLACK IN UNDERFELL.
You ought to review/critique some actual OCs. :) I think you'd be good at it, and it would bring to light some of the less well-known tropes that fans fall into while making OCs.
+Rebecca Pucci Agreed.
+Rebecca Pucci I think she's trying to avoid making personal attacks on individuals.
beastgirlsara You can offer constructive criticism without being aggressive.
Rebecca Pucci
Yeah, but unfortunately so many people take things as personal attacks these days. Hell, people who make black and red ponies took THIS as a personal attack when she said at the beginning that she doesn't actually have anything against them specifically.
"Stuff and things and things and stuff" - this is how I describe why I don't socialize to my parents
Pony: My name is a secre-
Me: The doctor
Just how hard you hit home with that Edgy stereotype. It's like you manifested what I initially wanted my OC to be.
This guy is also an alicorn
Well done.
Also the only thing I didn't like about this guy was his voice. Just because he looks scary doesn't mean his voice has to sound hissy and distorted. His voice should be like judgement boy. A scary design, with a calming voice that just makes him scarier. Scary design plus scary voice equals generic demon thing.
One of the definitions for "evil" is "marked by bad luck or bad events" yeah he's definitely evil.
3:20 his name is lord insertnamehere. He's right that is a terrible name.
Oh my god I laughed so hard.
"No I am not evil! I am misunderstood! I am mysterious. I am broken. My name is... My name is a secret. IT is a name so terrible, so vile and so WICKED that if you utter a single syllable, it'll make your ears bleed!"
Come on make your characters think they're doing something right. :P That's how most villains are.
Also, as for the "evil for the sake of it"... I dunno, that's plausible to me, but then again I went to a Jr. High school full of "at risk" youth and I grew up with my sister. So someone being cruel just because is totally plausible to me. Noooo that's not a jab at my high school. :P
If I were to base a character off of me I'd be all "I should watch the world burn but I'm too **nice** to let it burn."
Is the head design similar to jasper pie or am I imagining it?
Who’s Jasper Pie? I don’t remember him/her from the show
@@JamboreeBlackberry he's an Mlp analyst, who is a giant fan of Sam and Max. XD
I couldn't understand anything the red and black pony said.
EDIT : Wait... turned on captions. WOO HOO!
I am glad that I deleted my black and red OC two years ago.
his name... is...
idk prolly dark'ness dementia ebony or whatever
well red and black are my fav colors
and I'm not evil so
same
VENENO GAMING Mine are pastel purple and black!
Nabbo same!!
Mines red and gray dose that count?
+Deathla the mlp fnaf freak Ehhhh kinda
*****
yeah mines a happy bright kind of pony like pinkie and it is kinda a pink kind of red
+Deathla the mlp fnaf freak Well as long as you have a name, backstory, and actual CHARACTER, it's not like... Um.... Heh.... That guy o3o
"And will make you sneeze"
Thank you, for making me sneeze again, it hurts.
Its name is gothbutt
People, can you please stop spamming your OC's on this video? Most of us don't care about your 'awesome' OC, and the few that reply will tell you that they suck anyway. Which 90% of the time, they do.
I don't mind people telling me about their OCs, but my in box is kind of saying; 'please disable comments on that red OC video...' lol...
Mad Munchkin I wouldn't take it that far, I mean people can say whatever they want on the internet. My problem lies more with the idea that people say things about their Red and Black Oc, trying to prove that not all Red and Black Oc's are bad. Which you established you don't have a problem with.
However, just because an Oc doesn't fit the archetype of the one shown in the video, doesn't mean it is a well-thoughout Oc. Like you said, what's his/her name and backstory? Even with one, people can mess up, with names that are way too 'edgy' and backstories that are either too depressing to be real, make them royalty or anything else that tries to make characters deeper, but instead makes them paperthin.
I recommend anyone to watch Mad Munchkin's "Why I hate Alicorn OCs", as it shows another flaw in decent character creation. And before anyone attacks me, I know there is always going to be an exception to the rule, Alicorns can be interesting and Red and Black OCs can be cool, tragic characters. But I have yet to see one in this video.
By The By, OMG MAD MUNCHKIN TALKED TO ME!!!11!
TheDoctorSerious People can say whatever they want on the internet, however this is my youtube account and I want to try and keep the commenting section clear of any obvious trolling or spamming. So far I have only had to disable comments on one video (because it was coming near unmanageable) and I still consider that a last resort.
There is always an exception to the rule, but I don't want to start reviewing people's OCs since I want to make sure this account stays eclectic and explores other fandoms as well as MLP.
I appreciate everyone sending me a description of their OCs but at the same time I can't reply to them all nor make a decent analysis of each and every one. I may start doing this one day, but for now...I just don't have the time or will power. Perhaps if I had a team, I would do it.
Mad Munchkin I see. I'm sure you know what's best for your channel, so I wish you the best of luck with this. This conversation of epic typing was really fun.
Thanks for responding to my comments and I hope your videos and art are gonna be big one day.
My oc is AN AMAZING ROCK THAT I DREW A FLOWER ON THE SIDE
so your saying your name is forbidden to say, let me say it, LORD VOLDEMORT!
*gives Lord Insertnamehere a band-aid*
Ah... An EdgySue... I see
That red and black oc should be a comedian lol I was laughing through almost all of their lines!
I never have made a red-and-black pony.....And I don't want to...The color palate just doesn't fit me. I like the more light colored characters :)
Oooh Same here! I like using different shades of blue and purple for mine usually
:OD
Yas
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*gasps* IT'S TOO MUCH!!! I'VE BEEN DEFEATED!!! GAGHHH! *dies dramatically*
this vid basically say why im not one of those. i prefer deer anyway!
Blueberry Cheesecake/ AntartiCat and I cringe Everytime I see an insane yet misunderstood oc
So, has Lord Bubbles gotten they're vengeance yet? It's been about a year and a half or something like that. I even thought up a name, hope they like it.
you made me love mary sue XD
This... This and the alicorn video are just... They get the message out and its something I been trying o figure out how to tell others but you got it.
I was wondering if you did drawing for OC's and if you or anyone in this amazing comment section would take the time and draw mine!
I just lost it at the mop part.
XD
***** Ha-ha! Greetings!
lookie lookie an evil bat alicorn. just ship him with luna and give him some dead parents and there we go.
I love how the pony is an alicorn batpony changeling with a red and black colour scheme. Truly one of the most stereotypical OCs.
Lord Insertnamehere reminds me of Invader Zim
Honestly I don't know why people associate edgy edgy red and black with evil. Sure you can make a villain all you want, but try to make one that breaks out of the norm. I've seen some people pull off villains with black and red color schemes (Izuru Kamukura from Danganronpa is a good example) but I'm all out for seeing stuff original. Hell, I like the evil side too, I always root for the villains, I just don't want to see the black and red trope get used in every single evil OC out there. Hell, Mario, which is probably the most repetitive series ever doesn't have a black and red main villain (most of the time), if nintendo can pull it off so can you.
I'd like to see a pink and white villain ;) That'd be awesome
MistianThorn What about King Candy? He was the brightest villain I've ever seen (also the goofiest).
Ally Gator Animator I think I was talking about pony OCs, but King Candy is awesome in pink ;)
Ally Gator Animator She was only a copy so she couldn't be evil. I would like to see mad munchkin's Mary Sue turned into a cannon villain. That would be hilarious. XD
"*GASP* Is it discord?! Tell me it's Discord!" - Thanks for the good laugh. xD
I love the video here, and it is entertaining…
But I can't listen to this guy's voice. It is just really hard to understand, and even when I try to it just hurts my head...
There's subtitles available.
my oc is black n red cuz 1 my fave colours 2 cuz there might be something wrong with me 3 #gothponiesFTW
And red and black ponies arent always evil. Just someone likes both colours and puts it on a pony doesnt make it evil. Like they say, dont judge a book by its cover. And some may be even be goths.
What's their backstory? Let me hear it.
Sedina Mahious i dont think you got my message right. And yes my pony DOES have a backstory and is NOT made with the pony generator.
Dragon_Master I don't care, it's just that most black and red ponies have bad pasts and other shit.
I have nothing against red and black OCs darling, however I would like to urge you to create a pony with a slightly more creative color scheme? There are tons of colors out there, but there are thousands of red and black OCs and I think it's just not a creative idea. You can even make a goth pony without only using red and black, there are other ways to make a pony look goth. I don't mean to sound like a hater if that is how I am coming across I just think it would be a good idea to come up with something that has not been done many, many times before.
Is a black and white spotted pony okay? Her name has Star in it, as she's based off of myself and I have a HUGE obsession with space (aliens/galaxies/constellations), and she's designed to kinda look like the night sky.
I couldn't help but notice that all you do is hate. "Why I hate this or that" all the fucking time. So much for love and tolerate.
So ?
I couldn't help but notice that only 4 videos out of the over 100 videos I've made are about the things I hate.
All the time? Sure...judge someone based on 4 videos. Good call.
Someone told me you had like 20 of those videos. Guess it was an early call, whoops
they aren't exactly hate videos, they are more of "ranting" videos, so to speak. It's not the TYPE of oc she is ranting on, its how sometimes people give no name or backstory to their character whatsoever, and create overpowered gods that must be worshipped, or misunderstood souls that are never explained. One example I can think of for the overpowed god is a fanfiction called The Cassandra Chronicals (which is the BEST trollfic I have ever read, but none the less a mary sue with no personality whatsoever other than being perfect at everything.) Feel free to check it out, It had me laughing at the complete and other mary sueness of it all XD
edgy
That's why I don't Play pony cancer I mean pony town
Scorpia: Hey Mad Munchkin, I’m both an alicorn and a red and black OC. Got a problem with me?
Me: Scorpia, don’t anger the Scottish pony.
Found this video in my recommended again, and GODS it threw my back more than a good few years.. classic.