way better than your early versions. i still love the sort of crooked waltzy feel it has to it. it gives it a solemn air. the key and scale help too. i like the part where the rubato sort of makes you falter with the rhythm and you try to find it again so you can catch up and hold onto it for security, even if it makes you feel sad once you reach it. very symbolic and moving :3
I cried / Teared up due to the pure beauty of this song.
way better than your early versions. i still love the sort of crooked waltzy feel it has to it. it gives it a solemn air. the key and scale help too. i like the part where the rubato sort of makes you falter with the rhythm and you try to find it again so you can catch up and hold onto it for security, even if it makes you feel sad once you reach it. very symbolic and moving :3
such a sad/beautiful/good song good work
Beautiful work my friend!
annnnnd here comes the tears ;~;
aww *hands tissue ^^
i like most of it, but the ending is kinda abrupt
I enjoyed the original, but it didn't approach the depth of isolation and sadness that this one does.
Nothing wrong with being Gay friend.