Hey! Fellow filmmaker here. I loved what you did with the intro. It set up the story very well and got be intrigued. Writing was pretty solid as well. Loved the red lighting and sound effects at the end. Your signature click sound or in this case typewriter sound is fantastic. Absolutely love it! Hope you're doing well. I'd love to connect some time.
I love the lighting, plus that opening shot is just perfect imo. The camera work in general really did it for me, like when the person on the phone stops making sense and the camera gets up close on the ladies' face and begins to shake slightly. Little things like that really made this work for me. Keep up the good work man, can't wait to see more.
i'm watching through your films, and the pace of this is waaaaay better then your previous work, though i've only watched smithereens and fruitcake so far. keep it up! edit: i say this because i've been asking myself the question "what does this scene achieve? what does it being so slow tell me?"
Love the variety of content on this channel. Need more short films from you though. Keep up the good work.
Hey! Fellow filmmaker here. I loved what you did with the intro. It set up the story very well and got be intrigued. Writing was pretty solid as well. Loved the red lighting and sound effects at the end. Your signature click sound or in this case typewriter sound is fantastic. Absolutely love it! Hope you're doing well. I'd love to connect some time.
This is so cool
I love the lighting, plus that opening shot is just perfect imo. The camera work in general really did it for me, like when the person on the phone stops making sense and the camera gets up close on the ladies' face and begins to shake slightly. Little things like that really made this work for me. Keep up the good work man, can't wait to see more.
Pretty fun short! Wouldn’t mind seeing more of it
i'm watching through your films, and the pace of this is waaaaay better then your previous work, though i've only watched smithereens and fruitcake so far. keep it up!
edit: i say this because i've been asking myself the question "what does this scene achieve? what does it being so slow tell me?"
Promo SM 💪