World Building, Setting & Description in Your Novel | PREPTOBER 2023

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  • @HeartBreathings
    @HeartBreathings  ปีที่แล้ว +11

    Another Preptober video for you today! Don't forget to make a copy of the free worldbuilding doc I made to get you started or join my newsletter and get the full resource library free!

  • @jbnorthrup
    @jbnorthrup 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Thanks for all your videos and insights.

  • @EvaWright
    @EvaWright ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I was totally ahead of Nano writing here and there, then I moved a paragraph to another location in the story and it somehow copy and pasted it five different times and I've been a week trying to get it back right. It's still not correct yet.

  • @nettie0376
    @nettie0376 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    i would LOVE for you to do a series on writing magic systems!!

  • @agl5132
    @agl5132 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Exactly where I'm at with my preptober novel planning.

  • @t-helen-price
    @t-helen-price ปีที่แล้ว +12

    Your rich insights on the universality of world-building across genres and the complexity that it embodies were absolutely on point. The need for consistency and realism in world construction, particularly when handling elements like magic and creatures, is really important! I don't tackle it too much in my current wip but for my third manuscript, this was a huge deal. Thanks for the invaluable knowledge. Looking forward to more content like this! :)

    • @HeartBreathings
      @HeartBreathings  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you for the encouragement and kind words!

    • @t-helen-price
      @t-helen-price ปีที่แล้ว

      No thank you!! :) @@HeartBreathings

  • @msmwriter
    @msmwriter ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Catching up on the videos! So behind. Thank you for this, and the Google Doc. I think I have the book you mentioned. Need to go check. 😁

  • @Coco01171
    @Coco01171 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    can you do a video on your writer book/notebook set up for how you are writing your book? I just bought my ring binders and could use the guidance/inspiration on how to set it up.

  • @RemonaGreen
    @RemonaGreen ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you! Great video. I have a very basic world built but now I know based on my story I need much more.😊

  • @sarahhays3503
    @sarahhays3503 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    great video. Thanks!

  • @annahlaineco
    @annahlaineco ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Ahh love your outfit!!

  • @valeriacpla6320
    @valeriacpla6320 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You are looking great! Keep doing what You are doing 😊

  • @princessteach
    @princessteach ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you, a great video as always!!

  • @cecilywolfe4571
    @cecilywolfe4571 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    thank you so much - really appreciate the worksheet as well!

  • @yanettemantro
    @yanettemantro 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    This has been very helpful. I am in the middle of doing some changes to book 2 while I do my edits and I a going back to change some things in book 1. Thank you!

  • @lindaweedmark6025
    @lindaweedmark6025 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    My Act One is way too tangled and spans much time and multiple situations. Not feeling flashbacks and exposition will cover it and was beginning to panic. Edited out my plea for a video on this as I found the series arc section on your website. Thank you so much for indispensable instruction and stimulating videos.
    P.S. I'm loving your visuals and stickers. 💗💗💗😊

    • @HeartBreathings
      @HeartBreathings  ปีที่แล้ว

      So glad you found that playlist!! I hope it's helpful for you!!

  • @nikkijoy597
    @nikkijoy597 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you Sarra - another great Preptober video. :) I'm reading that very book by Ron Rozelle at the moment and am finding it very helpful. I'll be making some notes in the worldbuilding doc later. ;) xx

  • @fralou_sind_kreativ
    @fralou_sind_kreativ ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Awesome video, thank you Sarra!

  • @serene_serein
    @serene_serein ปีที่แล้ว

    I really love your look in this video! Thanks for the tips!

  • @JessicaNWheeler
    @JessicaNWheeler ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Yay you finished your edits! Congrats Sarra!

  • @wackybarnes
    @wackybarnes ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hi there !! I'm fairly new to your content but I subscribed just a few days ago to your newsletter and your workbooks + courses are just AMAZING and so helpful!!! It's helping me so much during this year's preptober, getting stuff ready for nano this november and I wanted to thank your for all your hard work !!💜💜💜

  • @JeremyCouture
    @JeremyCouture ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This was such a great video! I'm so excited for the new book!!!

  • @nikkiguerlain
    @nikkiguerlain ปีที่แล้ว +1

    💗💗💗

  • @spookyfey
    @spookyfey ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hey! I'm a newbie here and I'm in the midst of prepping-- first off, thanks for all your content and tips! Your newsletter and organization tools are a GODSEND for someone like me who cannot stay focused (ADHD problems). Fun question: do you make themed music playlists for when you're writing?

    • @HeartBreathings
      @HeartBreathings  ปีที่แล้ว

      I don't usually but it's something I'd love to do! I have tried to in the past and then I just end up not being able to find the "perfect" songs.

  • @kimlauder6899
    @kimlauder6899 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    What books would you recommend for Magical Systems?

    • @HeartBreathings
      @HeartBreathings  4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      TM Halladay's "The Only WorldBuilding Book You'll Ever Need" is one amzn.to/3Yz4ZwF
      And also "The Magic System Blueprint" by CR Rowenson amzn.to/4fFOoNy

  • @quartkneek3670
    @quartkneek3670 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Great tips but I think you forgot to mention genre expectations. The YA genre requires a lot less explanation of things and often ignores inconvenient aspects of the world. For example, the Hunger Games. Why does Katniss need to know how to read? For all of President Snow's objectives, he would be better served by keeping the districts not only physically and culturally separate but also illiterate. When Peeta talks about singing songs in school, it sounds like a lot of the indoctrination techniques of the Soviet and Maoist eras. This is an inference that adult or more mature readers can make which is one of the reasons why THG is popular with adults. Sci-fi is another genre with a bifurcation of expectations. In hard sci-fi, you have to explain the science behind a warp drive whereas in other sub-genres, you can get away with just saying they jump to another solar system or something.
    It's also okay to get things "wrong" like the money system in the Harry Potter universe. Rowling has admitted in many interviews over the years that she's bad at maths and she wishes she spent more time thinking things through because the denominations don't make logical sense and constantly trip up readers. Wealth creation is never explicitly explored beyond the fact that many people have jobs and old families have inherited wealth. Young readers take such things at face value, but older readers understand that generational wealth is built on investment, compounding interest, and real estate/business holdings that generate a return. You'll get some suspension of disbelief in older readers - especially in the more fantastical genres and there's always creative license about which aspects to cover more in-depth but genre tropes and expectation does dictate certain 'must-haves' and at what level of coverage is required at minimum.

    • @HeartBreathings
      @HeartBreathings  ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Absolutely! Maybe you missed it but I did specifically say that how much world building you do depends greatly on your genre! I give examples between fantasy and contemporary romance but you can substitute any genre into those slots. And as I mention, writing style and voice as well can make a difference. I cover as much as I can in detail in 30 minutes but it's a huge topic that as I say, could be an entire series or course in itself!

  • @pagesofkelly
    @pagesofkelly ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I really found this video encouraging. Thank you for the wonderful insights. Will you be selling any more box sets of your books this year?

    • @HeartBreathings
      @HeartBreathings  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'll do a signup form for books this month during Spooktacular!

    • @pagesofkelly
      @pagesofkelly ปีที่แล้ว

      @@HeartBreathings Okay, great. Thank you so much!

  • @nuriahernandez5388
    @nuriahernandez5388 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hola no puedo descargar el archivo

    • @HeartBreathings
      @HeartBreathings  ปีที่แล้ว

      It should ask you to make a copy, then you can go to "file" and "download" to download or just use in Google docs. If you still can't get it to work, please email me at sarra@heartbreathings.com and I'll send it directly.

    • @nuriahernandez5388
      @nuriahernandez5388 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@HeartBreathings gracias

  • @Beastlango
    @Beastlango ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I know I’m kind of weird for this, but I care more about world building than anything anything else is games, books, and movies.
    If the world isn’t interesting then I usually don’t get far enough to care about characters or just don’t develop it at all. I’ll take sub par characters in an incredible world than amazing characters in a boring world any day.

    • @Megan-id6jm
      @Megan-id6jm 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      💯

  • @Megan-id6jm
    @Megan-id6jm 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    ❤❤❤