Touching Teen Dramatic Monologue - Mystic River
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- Hey People! It's me, Solomon Cazer, and I am doing a dramatic monologue from the movie called Mystic River. I am playing a character whose daughter died. :( I am sixteen and this is my first monologue. Any Criticism is Good Criticism! :) Thanks!!!
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I felt the authenticity of It. You have real potential. As a young black man I'm so proud and lets chase the dream together you have the talent I see it!
Damn, I got chills. I better see you in a movie soon, damn.
Dude, this is really great. Your pausing in between phrases was well placed and the way you controlled your emotion was awesome! Keep it up man.
Sophia and Talia Thank ya!!! :) I appreciate it! Im going to be posting another video within the next few days!! :) But again, Thank you! :)
From this I could tell you really put a lot of heart into your work, and it just blew me away. Everything seemed to come so naturally to you and you just nailed it!
Thank you! :)
Omg, I felt the emotion! You are so good!!!! You literally should be in a movie!!!! You would bring so much emotion!!!!
Wow bro, Very solid! All kinds of monologues/auditions etc on youtube, but this one sold me! Keep it up :)
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Thanks man! I truly appreciate it bro! Ill be posting more stuff! Thanks again though! :)
That was brilliant! Great job, well done man!
This is amazing so much emotion in this scene!!! great job!!!
Thank you!
Keep it up man, and you'll go places
keep going brotha your almost at a successful point. I'm nowhere near your level but I'm well on my way in studying and building my craft. this is an awesome piece. Much love -jervis d young
Right on man! Thanks Jervis!
This is really amazing! Honestly incredible! I've never seen the movie, but you portrayed emotions so well; reminded me a lot of a Will Smith style in a way, but also very much your own! Hope to see more from you soon (:
Angel Lane Wow, Thank you! That's a very big compliment! I appreciate it! :)
No problem!! (:
Angel Lane Got a second, please check out mines. Thanks!
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It's really great to see how popular this video has become Solo. The moment I can I'm calling you up for a part in a feature film or TV show if I can get one. Stick to it brother. Your dreams will come true.
Michael Collins Thanks Bud! that means a lot!
Soli Studios No problem dude!
I loved it. The only thing I would say is that (and you probably already know this) you need to find something traumatic (or extremely painful) and fully lose yourself in that hurt. Surrender to the pain, let it take over. When you say "I want to hug her one last time", I want to believe it a little more. But seriously…. for your first monologue.. this is amazing. You can only go up from here. You have great instincts. I need to work on the same things I am critiquing you on!
Yes, thank you for the criticism... I really appreciate it... I hope to post another one soon and apply criticism such as the kind you gave me, in future monologues. thanks again! ☺
dude this is amazing im looking @ good examples for an audition i have and this is the best one
thanks! that means alot!
This is impressive. You've got talent, that's for sure.
Thanks! :)
Thnanks for the idea dude!!! Good scene
Hey Solomon, wow, thank you so much for sharing this with me. You did great, really great. PM- where do you live?
Hey I do drama as well and your really good 👏🏾 very impressed, with drama you have to think about your whole body and it looks like you did it I can tell because of your hand gestures, well done
thank you very much! :)
You Did a Really Awesome 👏 Job! I Like How You Acted.
Very good. Where do you live? If it is in LA or New York I hope you are getting lots of work. I was wondering why you chose a monologue about a father who has a daughter who is older then you are? I personally don't care but as you probably know, casting directors always want you to do something you could play. Also I am confused when you say you can't cry over her and you are crying. In closing there wasn't one moment that I could say"He is acting",which is good because every moment was real. Well done.
Dang man this is impressive! I am 16 myself and other than doing TH-cam, I really don't have experience in acting. I do want to try it though and apply for an agency and make a video to send them. Any tips? How did you practice acting?
Thanks!
Thankss:)..the only advice I can give ya is to stay focused on what you want.... and observe people in your life ... not the greatest advice hahaa but that's what came to mind. ..but thanks again... I'll be posting more videos soon hopefully
It's great but it's a little bit rushed , maybe next time try taking longer pauses even tho it might seem like forever in you're head , leaving longer pauses just makes the scene seem a lot more authentic and in a way connects with the audience! You're emotions throughout were perfect. A lot of great actors show too much emotion , like in scenes like this were you're supposed to cry/ get teary you delivered it beautifully in a way that shows the character as being a little embarrassed to be crying in that moment! Well done and keep it up :)
Wow. Just wow.
You’re really good!
This was great!
Wow! Awesome bro!!
holy mother of gandalf that was amazing! Literally no constructive criticism needed
Hannah Combs hahaha thanks!
Sooooo good
you're great man!
Wow! so good!!!!
Really good
good job bro
wow dude this is really good!
***** Thanks Man! I appreciate it bro!
haha dude your voice is deeper than mine now
Dude you poppin
This was good! I jumped at 2:33
can I get the lines to this monologue please?!
omg that was great
This was very well executed. I hope you stick with this. I think you could go somewhere.
thanks man.. and definetly.. I love film and acting... it's a passion... I'm definitely gonna stick with it!
Soli Studios As do I. When I'm in a better position in my life, I hope to pursue it relentlessly. It's been a dream of mine since I was a child. Sometimes I like to get on youtube and look up monologue videos so I can see who's really got it and who slips up. I didn't expect you to be this good. A mistake I see a lot of amateur actors make is that they don't usually pause long enough to make their character seem like they were really thinking about a line, and those who do make those pauses, make them unrealistic based on their body language and facial expressions. I think performing that pause and think action is a critical part of any role, and it has to be done just right. You nailed it. Absolutely nailed it.
+SimmadownBro wow! thanks! I appreciate it.. :)
how many words is it
thank you for your feedback on my video and your video is amazing.
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Awesome man, next.. Walter White from Breaking Bad, plus add more emotion, you're going to go far dude!
Matty Gadeke Wow! Thanks man! :) I honestly appreciate it... plus.. Breaking Bad was a great series with some great monologues. Thanks again man!
Soli Studios My pleasure man, always willing to help others from the 'Film Industry' plus Bryan Cranston is one of the best actors so if you nail that you're an amazing actor!
He definitely is... and I'll make sure to do that. Not necessarily next but I will do a breaking bad monologue soon... :) Thanks bro!! Short films coming soon too!
Soli Studios Awesome dude can't wait, i'm in the middle of making a shot film right now man, look at my videos they're all cinematography type things, might like them!
yeah, Ill subscribe bro.. I already checked it out... Great camera work man.. :) I hope your short film goes well.. :)
Big future
Aren't you too young for that piece? ;)
Keep up man, it's good :)
lolll! Yup, haha! And thank you!
Wow. that’s all I can say
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Can u teach me so audition tips on via Skype or Facetime asap ??
no wtf are you saying my nigga
Not bad at all, you could benefit a lot from a performing arts school or acting workshop
haha it was great
I bet all of the views are bots
PS you will never come close to Jake Paul Jake paulers for Lyfe