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The internet has reshaped the way in which information is distributed and used, and at the same time, it has had unprecedented problems in the past. The main two issues related to the internet are unreliability and less security.
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thank you for this very helpful video creation. an addition I suggested creating a playlist for task 1 and task 2 separated video. thank you once again.
The primary concern of sharing information is that private data may now be more vulnerable to theft. This is because electronically storing data has been increasing compared to previous days where data was kept in a physical form, which means that electronic data can be stolen by any hacker who infiltrates a website by sitting any corner of the world, but this was a limited case when data stored physically. Consequently, more news stories in today's media relate to online security breaches than to physical robberies. To handle this issue, companies that store sensitive information must be legally required to run the most effective anti-hacking programs and update them regularly. This will lead to secure data by cybercrime criminals.
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The internet has reshaped the way in which information is distributed and used, and at the same time, it has had unprecedented problems in the past. The main two issues related to the internet are unreliability and less security.
I have seen a lot of writing task 2 videos
Of those TH-camrs who have thousands of subscribers but among them you did the best
Its more practical than those who just give you tips...
I learned deeply how to make the structure of sentence, rephrasing
You give us idea how should we think of words and sentences while we write
Saw a lot of videos, but no one used this type of strategy! Thank you! Very helpful
This is awesome. I'll be taking the exam in few days. Wish me luck 🙏❤
All the best ❤️
@@amalbiju7149 me too on 13 of March 2021, wish me luck :)
What is the result?
Good day! thanks for the share, just wondering what are those mnemonics you itemized? thanks again. God bless you.
Could anyone tell me where the second part of this video is?
The best IELTS Teacher
Kindly correct me.
1. Paraphrase the title. Introduction. (2 lines)
2. Elaborating the problem/situation with examples(4-5 lines), the consequences ( 2 lines).
3. Solution with examples. (4-5 lines with examples.)
4. Conclusion (4-5 lines)
It's better to write problem and its solution in one paragraph as u dont get confused☺
Why have you avoided the latter part of the question statement in your introduction answer
thank you for this very helpful video creation. an addition I suggested creating a playlist for task 1 and task 2 separated video. thank you once again.
The primary concern of sharing information is that private data may now be more vulnerable to theft. This is because electronically storing data has been increasing compared to previous days where data was kept in a physical form, which means that electronic data can be stolen by any hacker who infiltrates a website by sitting any corner of the world, but this was a limited case when data stored physically. Consequently, more news stories in today's media relate to online security breaches than to physical robberies. To handle this issue, companies that store sensitive information must be legally required to run the most effective anti-hacking programs and update them regularly. This will lead to secure data by cybercrime criminals.
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Where is part 2 of this writing tadk..you are amazing
Best teaching hats off ielts teacher. Thank you very much
Where is the second part
Sir. How about tips to write agree-disagree essay. Any assistance given. Thanks in advance.
full essay, please! It is so so amazing
Thank you so much my best tutor Matt
Write Approaching it from the another angle instead of on the other hand
can anyone please tell me what are these abbreviation below stands for?
BP
T
S
R
Sol
R-sol
Body Paragraph
Topic Sentence
(S) - not sure of this one.
Result
Solution
Result of the solution.
Araai Ruka R- reason
@@taragrace6309 @Araai Ruka S stands for support (example).
Arunita Paul reason doesn’t seem to fit with the pattern. 🤔
@@taragrace6309 R stands for result (conclusive statement of the Body paragraph, usually the last statement)
Is this ielts general or academic test practice?
Academic
Hi can i get you as my personal tutor for writing? How can i avail your services?
Thank you.
Hii
I also have eagerness towards that
Hello sir. Is it always necessary to give examples in the essay. Or if we have supported fully, we can skip
Where's the other part??
do you think that we can destroy the historical building
Where is the second part of video?
can u explain me , how to approach agree or disagree questions (especially for Body Of The Paragraph)
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install or implement !?
Is it important to write 250 words for essay and 150 for letter
YES. Otherwise your band score will suffer.
where is part 2?
Academic or general?
what does the words T S E Sol. and R-Sol stand for
Vikrant Karmahapatra perhaps
Topic sentence
Supporting sentence
Results
Solutions
Excellent body paragraph
thank you!
forget about part 2.. that is sad he did not let it go over here ... Other teachers they show many videos with full explanation then they have something special for money so if you are rich you can buy if you have no enough money they already helped you with nice information
Is this ielts general or academic test practice?
Task 2 is the same for both academic and general