IELTS Writing: Don't Make These 7 Mistakes!

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  • @E2IELTS
    @E2IELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว +59

    To access the Writing Task 1 Video, sign up for FREE HERE: e2language.com/
    Introduction 00:00
    Mistake #1: Not varying your sentences 01:10
    Mistake #2: Not using subordinate clauses 03:00
    Mistake #3: Not getting writing feedback 04:55
    Mistake #4: Writing less than 250 words or more than 350 words 05:30
    Mistake #5: Only partially answering the essay question 06:51
    Mistake #6: Lacking a 'position' 08:37
    Mistake #7: Over-using or under-using linking words 10:18
    Conclusion 11:45

    • @tomilolaomowumi7156
      @tomilolaomowumi7156 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      I got my result today and I had an overall band of 7.5. I couldn't have achieved this without your videos and advice. I love you guys... Thank you

    • @ornidebswathi5822
      @ornidebswathi5822 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@tomilolaomowumi7156 congratulations dear ...how you achieve this goal please share your experiences with me .. thank you ☺️

    • @FlavourfusionwithPrimrose
      @FlavourfusionwithPrimrose 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Very helpful

    • @ФирдавсАзимов-б7д
      @ФирдавсАзимов-б7д 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@tomilolaomowumi7156 how pls share tips

  • @akinrindelydia5421
    @akinrindelydia5421 2 ปีที่แล้ว +290

    IELTS cleared at first attempt. Reading- 8.5 Speaking- 7.5 Writing- 7.0 Listening- 7.0. I prepared with your videos in a month. Thank you so much for your free videos. Lydia from Nigeria.

    • @valeriyapetrova2724
      @valeriyapetrova2724 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      how did u manage to get 8,5 in reading?

    • @akinrindelydia5421
      @akinrindelydia5421 2 ปีที่แล้ว +16

      @@valeriyapetrova2724 Continuous practice. Just as Jay says. I practiced until I started getting 35/40. Then I knew I was ready.

    • @jethrowunukhen6404
      @jethrowunukhen6404 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Which organization did you register with in Nigeria

    • @akinrindelydia5421
      @akinrindelydia5421 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@jethrowunukhen6404 British council

    • @phyothiha3816
      @phyothiha3816 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Congratulations 🎉🎉🎉👏👏👏

  • @poornimaramesh7960
    @poornimaramesh7960 2 ปีที่แล้ว +69

    I want to thank you guys from the bottom of my heart. I got an overall score of band 8.0, and this is my first attempt. L=8.5, R=8.5, W=7.0, S=8.5. Without your channel this wouldn't have been possible. Thank you so much!

    • @learnwithmaan95
      @learnwithmaan95 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hiii poornima Ramesh can you help me

    • @nitishashrestha2738
      @nitishashrestha2738 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Can you tell me how many time does it consume to prepare for your ielts test

    • @beautifulaccount7440
      @beautifulaccount7440 ปีที่แล้ว

      ​@@nitishashrestha2738 they are scammer won't tell is

  • @dyuthihariprasad3998
    @dyuthihariprasad3998 2 ปีที่แล้ว +26

    IELTS cleared at first attempt. I had only 4 days of prep. I had a 7 in writing which was my requirement.I have an overall 8.5 Thanks a ton, Jay and E2!!!

  • @ishughimire9994
    @ishughimire9994 2 ปีที่แล้ว +32

    Hey Jay! I can’t THANK YOU enough.
    I got my test results today L 9, R 8.5, S 8.5 & W 7. Overall 8.5 !!! ❤️
    While practicing for the test, I was super nervous about writing but thanks heavens I came across structures devised by this channel. I totally relied on E2 IELTS prep videos and aced my test on the very first try. Jay, Alex and Mark - you guys are amazing. And for anyone preparing, follow whatever they say, it works fr! 😭❤️

    • @amit_gharti_chhetri
      @amit_gharti_chhetri 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      How long did you practiced?
      Some reading tips plz.

    • @ornidebswathi5822
      @ornidebswathi5822 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Congratulations dear ... how long did you practiced please share your experiences..☺️

    • @ishughimire9994
      @ishughimire9994 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@amit_gharti_chhetri hey, I prepared for about 20 days!

    • @ishughimire9994
      @ishughimire9994 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@ornidebswathi5822 hey, I prepared for about 20 days!

    • @ishughimire9994
      @ishughimire9994 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@amit_gharti_chhetri For reading:
      Read once but very carefully; the answers are fairly easy to spot!

  • @swetasarkar8055
    @swetasarkar8055 2 ปีที่แล้ว +34

    Hello Jay, I received my IELTS score today. I got L 9.0, R 8.5, S 7.5, W 7.0 with an overall band score 8.0 in my first attempt. I would really like to thank you, Alex and Mark for the remarkable job that you people do here at E2. Your videos are just amazing and they have helped me in recognizing my flaws and work accordingly. I watched almost all your videos available in youtube and within a week I understood, what were the areas where I made most mistakes. E2 is just awesome. Lots of love and respect from India. 😍❤️🤗

    • @monikakarki1225
      @monikakarki1225 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      How did you practice in writing and speaking ?

    • @yusufkaya1393
      @yusufkaya1393 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      hello ive recently started working on ietls writing can you guys give me some advice on this essay that I've written about topic Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways.
      Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
      Pollution is mainly produced by industrial facilities. Several people argued that making the taxes higher on numerous industries may decrease pollution, while others accept that different types of approaches could be made. In this essay, I will look at both arguments and suggest why replacing the regular industries with other types of mechanisms, is a better way to lessen pollution.
      Increasing the value of the product in industries makes it harder for them to purchase, this may result in industries no longer burning those inputs since the percentage of profit will fall. Some believe that this solution is a move as these places work either for producing electricity or heat. To contentiously work, they need to burn coal or fossil fuels which is cheaper compared to other ways of generating electricity. Once this case is implemented hence it will be harder for them to use these materials due to less profit and therefore which will push those to no longer pollute the air. In other words, fewer fabrication areas mean less pollution will occur.
      Constructing Eco-friendly industries alternatively, instead of usual ones, and subsequently closing those working areas could address this issue completely. Since expanding the taxes does not fully do that. some argue that these arguments should take into consideration, as wind power and solar panels do not require any special materials that harm the environment, the only needed source is either wind or sunlight in this solution. This is a better way to combat pollution, owing to not a single item being burned, and also from the point that it is cost-effective on the other hand which also does not require any human control, as a result, it will also save time.
      In this essay, I have discussed the effects of industries on the nation and possible factors caused by this as well as the path that should be followed. I consider that shouting down those facilities and replacing them with solar power and wind could be useful to deal with pollution rather than increasing taxes on them.

    • @125priyankachauhan8
      @125priyankachauhan8 ปีที่แล้ว

      Helloooo

  • @bisolafadekemi1375
    @bisolafadekemi1375 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    All you have to do is listen to Jay and get your desired score. Speaking from experience.

  • @asittewari4791
    @asittewari4791 2 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    Hey Jay, Mark and Alex, a big thanks to you guys. You folks are doing an amazing job at providing useful tips for cracking IELTS. I sat my IELTS on 19th Feb, and scored the following - Speaking 7.5, Listening 8.5, Reading 8.5 and Writing - 8. Once again a big thank you from me guys. Highly appreciated..

  • @sharersale6480
    @sharersale6480 2 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    Jay and Mark, I just wanted to thank you from the bottom of my heart. I followed your advice from ALL (And I mean ALL) your videos on here to the letter. I just got my results, Band 8.5 on the first go!
    L- 8.0 R- 9.0 W- 8.5 S- 8.0. You are lifesavers!
    Thank you so much, guys!!!

    • @homeboyaman8875
      @homeboyaman8875 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Can you help me?

    • @sharersale6480
      @sharersale6480 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@homeboyaman8875 Yes, I can tell you to watch their videos and follow every single thing they advice you to do. Then do as many practice tests as you can.

    • @RS-wp7lt
      @RS-wp7lt 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@sharersale6480 how did u attain such a high mark in writing section...That's the most difficult section for me to Score!!

  • @himanisheth6010
    @himanisheth6010 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Got an 8.5 in my IELTS with just one week of prep using your videos. Thank you so much E2 team!!

    • @samikshyamagar1565
      @samikshyamagar1565 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @himani sheth Can you give any tips on writing and speaking?

    • @himanisheth6010
      @himanisheth6010 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@samikshyamagar1565 For writing, refer to the tips in E2 writing videos and the main point is structure your essay very well. For speaking, think of it as a normal conversation with a person, don't get anxious, it's literally just a conversation!
      Wishing you all the luck :)

    • @samikshyamagar1565
      @samikshyamagar1565 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you

    • @NewName-q2b
      @NewName-q2b ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I understand everything in the video on my mind but when it comes to writing I have nothing to write even on my mind . What should I do😭

  • @MeemMahabubaIslammimi
    @MeemMahabubaIslammimi 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank you so much Jay. I followed your writing structure for task 2 and that brought me a seven with an overall band score 8! This was my first attempt and I had only a month to prepare. Thanks to E2 IELTS.

  • @princessofdoom6540
    @princessofdoom6540 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Sooo I received my IELTS test results yesterday and I would like to thank you Jay and Mark for EVERYTHING! u guys helped me get the score I wanted and I couldn't be happier!! U guys are truly the best 👌

  • @alhana8293
    @alhana8293 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    By far, this is the best channel for IELTS preparation. I found it 2 weeks before my exam. Although I signed up for an IELTS preparation course a while ago, the tips provided by this channel were the best. To anyone preparing for the exam, this channel is so helpful.
    I got my results today:
    Listening: 7.5, reading 8.5, writing:7.5 and speaking:7. Overall band:7.5
    Unfortunately, I did not have time to sign up for one of their courses and get feedback. I am sure I would have gotten a higher score if I did.
    Wishing candidates all the best and thank you E2 IELTS for helping millions achieve their goals and get the best results.

  • @adakuotosi1536
    @adakuotosi1536 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Got my results today!!! Thank you so much Jay!!!
    Got band 6.5 in my last writing which spoilt my results. This time I got writing 7.5!!!
    Passed with an overall band 7.5.

  • @umarolaide3985
    @umarolaide3985 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    This is an appreciation post Jay, I just got my ielts result today and I am so excited..ielts cleared at first trial with overall band of 8; listening 8.5, reading 8.0, writing 7.5,speaking 7.0. I prepared within a month with all your TH-cam videos and practice tests. You are undisputedly the best ielts instructor,thank you.

    • @homeboyaman8875
      @homeboyaman8875 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      How did you prepare?

    • @umarolaide3985
      @umarolaide3985 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@homeboyaman8875 sorry for the late response. I prepared within a month with the E2 ielts instructional videos, practice tests and online materials. I kept doing practice tests to familiarise myself with the exam technique, used Jay's tips for my answers structure and wrote a lot of practice essays too. Overall, I believe my background in arts helped especially in comprehension and synonym switches in the exam; I do love reading books. Best of luck in your exams and please incorporate time management in your practice.

  • @honeylalmj9000
    @honeylalmj9000 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I want to thank you guys, especially Jay. I got an overall score of band 7.0, and this is my second attempt. L=8 R=6.5 W=6.5, S=7.5. Without your channel this wouldn't have been possible. Thank you so much!

  • @SageethChathumadhu
    @SageethChathumadhu 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Hi Jay! Thank you so much for your lessons provided in this channel. I did my academic ielts last January and scored an overall band score of 8. I watched all your videos on academic writing tasks 1 and 2 and they really provided me clear instructions on time management and task response. I discovered E2 IELTS channel randomly only a week prior to my test. I wish I had found your channel way earlier so I would have prepared more. Thank you so much for your guidance ! Love from Sri Lanka 🇱🇰

  • @roshni3028
    @roshni3028 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thank u E2 IELTS for all those videos. I received my IELTS score today and got an overall band of 7.5❤️
    Speaking- 7, Writing- 7.5, Reading- 7.5, Listening- 8.5 😁

  • @oladipupoomobola8877
    @oladipupoomobola8877 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    With just 5days to prepare I got LRWS:5.5,6.5,6,6.5 overall 6bands your videos has really helped a lot I really can’t thank you all enough

  • @hammedmariam9624
    @hammedmariam9624 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    thank you soo much for your teachings! Had 7.0 in my writing😊 and 7.5 in speaking.. thank you

  • @SM91919
    @SM91919 2 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    Hello Jay and the entire E2 IELTS team, I recently cleared my IELTS Academic with Band 8.5 (L-9,R-9,S-8,W-7.5).
    Thanks a lot! Your methods were really effective!
    From Mumbai, India

    • @krishna.panhale
      @krishna.panhale 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Congratulations on your score Sayan, any writing tips please? that would be really helpful.
      Wish you all the best in your future endeavors

    • @SM91919
      @SM91919 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@krishna.panhale Hi Krishna! Thank you for your wishes!
      In my opinion, scoring well in Writing depends on the range of grammar we use. I made a list of grammatical expressions from the sample answers I read on E2 and elsewhere. I didn’t use any uncommon words or phrases. But I made it a point to use Complex sentences extensively in my essay (There’s a video on it on E2). Simple phrases like “in order that”, “From this point onwards” etc are more impactful as compared to uncommon words.
      In addition to grammatical range and accuracy, “topic specific vocabulary” has a sizeable contribution to a good score. You may go through a series on TH-cam called “BBC 6 Minute English”. You can pick up certain phrases such as “Net Zero”, “Circular Economy” which would be useful if you get an essay on Climate Change for instance.
      I wish you all the best for your exam and beyond.

    • @valeriyapetrova2724
      @valeriyapetrova2724 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      tips on the reading?

    • @SM91919
      @SM91919 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@valeriyapetrova2724 For Reading, I made it a point to scan through the passage really fast (taking about 4-5 minutes). After that, I looked at the questions. This approach made it easier to locate answers quickly and effectively. I would also recommend writing a word or two about the contents of the paragraph alongside it for easier localisation of information during answering questions.
      All the best!

  • @nirajshrestha6334
    @nirajshrestha6334 2 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    Hi! I am from Nepal and I would like to extend my gratitude to E2 IELTS for helping me score 8.5 (L-9,R-8.5,W-7,and S-9) just by listening to your TH-cam videos. Your guys are awesome.

    • @zooz9455
      @zooz9455 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Kun kun video haru hernu can u tell me

    • @diwasghimire8861
      @diwasghimire8861 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@zooz9455 kaile ho exam?

    • @zooz9455
      @zooz9455 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      After 11days

    • @diwasghimire8861
      @diwasghimire8861 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@zooz9455 aa mero ta parsi xa yar tension vai raxa vanya

    • @zooz9455
      @zooz9455 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Katiko prepare gryxau

  • @tomilolaomowumi7156
    @tomilolaomowumi7156 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I bless the day I was came across your channel, I got my result today, on my first trial, I got a band 7.5 ...... I love you guys so so much

    • @tomilolaomowumi7156
      @tomilolaomowumi7156 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      It couldn't have been possible without you, couldn't have been

    • @kishanparekh431
      @kishanparekh431 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hey,
      Did you use Interrogative sentence in writing task 2?

    • @samafa7288
      @samafa7288 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      How you prepare for reading? Did you practice from Cambridge books only?

    • @tomilolaomowumi7156
      @tomilolaomowumi7156 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@kishanparekh431 No, I didn't...but I watched alot of E2 writing videos

    • @tomilolaomowumi7156
      @tomilolaomowumi7156 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@kishanparekh431 I also followed the writing structure that E2 advised

  • @okezieadaobisandra9364
    @okezieadaobisandra9364 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Passed IELTS in one sitting..L;7.5,W;7.5,R;8.5,S;8.0
    Your videos on writing were very helpful..Thank you so much E2 team

  • @FirstLast-yi4bq
    @FirstLast-yi4bq 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you, Sir. I was able to get my expected score in IELTS

  • @hassanrizvi4509
    @hassanrizvi4509 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I cleared my IELTS on the first attempt with an overall band score of 8.0, and i cant thank you enough. I religously followed all the tips and pointers you mentioned in your free videos for two weeks, and did really good. i scored 7.5 in both writing and speaking, while 8.0 and 8.5 in listening and reading . I will definetly recommend people to subscribe to your youtube channel.

    • @take_easy3695
      @take_easy3695 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      congrats can you help with writing evaluation?

  • @niekay2886
    @niekay2886 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hello Jay and the entire E2 team!!!!! I just want to share that I've just received and cleared my IELTS (first attempt) with really good scores especially in Writing. All thanks to your tutorials and free lectures here in youtube. I've literally watched every single video and practiced nonstop within a month. More power to your team!!!!!

  • @sajanbajgain2668
    @sajanbajgain2668 2 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    E2 IELTS is always best platform to prepare for IELTS. Love from Nepal.

  • @StAu8390
    @StAu8390 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I joined a review class the last time I took an IELTS exam, but didn't get enough writing support from them. Mainly because I wasn't convinced they knew what's what. Your formats, from the very first time I read them, might just seem to work. I'm here to thank you in advance. 📌

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Good call ☺️

  • @yugendrasekar6570
    @yugendrasekar6570 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks to jay and mark, i was able to snatch a band 8 in IELTS overall

  • @abelchisama5290
    @abelchisama5290 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I just came to say thank you to Jay for helping me pass my IELTS

  • @XthaFF
    @XthaFF 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thankyou E2 family ❤️ i passed my IELTS EXAM 🚀🌻

  • @cynthiaanthony544
    @cynthiaanthony544 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The way you speak is amazing .. crisp and clear!
    Thank you guys for all the efforts you put in to provide us with quality content for IELTS preparation.

  • @praveensandeepa7615
    @praveensandeepa7615 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi, it's Praveen from Sri Lanka. I would like to take this oppurtunity to thank all of the staff at E2 IELTS for helping me passing IELTS exam with less than 2 weeks browsing through youtube. This was one of the channels that i came across and was really helpful in knowing about IELTS. i got overall 7.0 for it. THANK YOU E2 IELTS :)

  • @spkr23
    @spkr23 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you for your amazing and helpful lessons. I took the IELTS test last week and I got 7.

  • @aryangautam7506
    @aryangautam7506 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is the best channel for IELTS

  • @namratasapkota4105
    @namratasapkota4105 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I have my IELTS on 2and 3 rd march wish me luck ❤️ from Nepal

  • @lindahnorah4981
    @lindahnorah4981 ปีที่แล้ว

    THANK YOU SO MUCH THIS IS THE BEST SITE TO PRACTICE IELTS WITH.PRACTISED FOR 2 DAYS AND I'M HAPPY WITH THE RESULTS.THANK YOU. BAND 7.5. READING 8, SPEAKING 8,LISTENING 6.5,WRITING 6.5

  • @marildachiwongah3917
    @marildachiwongah3917 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi! Jay thank u very much,will be writing soon

  • @suhirdsangha
    @suhirdsangha 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi Jay, just wanted to thank you for all the helpful content you put up for us. I achieved my target score on my first attempt. I cannot thank you enough.

  • @habeebadams115
    @habeebadams115 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Thank you Jay and the entire E2 team. Received my IELTS test results yesterday, had an overall band score of 7.5
    Your videos were of great assistance to achieving that!

  • @Nawazali-3737
    @Nawazali-3737 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Hi jay
    Cleared ielts GT at ist attempt watched ur video 4 only 2 nights & got overall 6 & i got 7 speaking
    Thank you so very much jay
    Allah bless u.

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Great job!

  • @deepakkhatri8954
    @deepakkhatri8954 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you Jay for your guidance and strategies. I'm successful in my IELTS test. Thank you and E2 group.

  • @hrithik7784
    @hrithik7784 ปีที่แล้ว

    Give this man 10M subscribers! he deserves it.

  • @hakim6933
    @hakim6933 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank you so much Jay for all the help you've given us! thanks to your tips and advice; I got a band 8! You're truly a great teacher.

  • @peppersensei
    @peppersensei 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I didn’t do IELTS . I did The UKVI speaking,listening,reading and writing at level B1 test yesterday. I got my results now and I passed 💃💃... I only watched your videos and I wasn’t able to use any hard copy materials.. I am so grateful to you Jay. Thank you very much 🥺. Your videos were helpful😁

  • @fatimamohammed3245
    @fatimamohammed3245 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I got an overall 8 Band
    L- 8.5
    R- 8.5
    W- 7
    S-7
    Thank you so much

    • @yusufkaya1393
      @yusufkaya1393 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      hello ive recently started working on ietls writing can you guys give me some advice on this essay that I've written about topic Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways.
      Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
      Pollution is mainly produced by industrial facilities. Several people argued that making the taxes higher on numerous industries may decrease pollution, while others accept that different types of approaches could be made. In this essay, I will look at both arguments and suggest why replacing the regular industries with other types of mechanisms, is a better way to lessen pollution.
      Increasing the value of the product in industries makes it harder for them to purchase, this may result in industries no longer burning those inputs since the percentage of profit will fall. Some believe that this solution is a move as these places work either for producing electricity or heat. To contentiously work, they need to burn coal or fossil fuels which is cheaper compared to other ways of generating electricity. Once this case is implemented hence it will be harder for them to use these materials due to less profit and therefore which will push those to no longer pollute the air. In other words, fewer fabrication areas mean less pollution will occur.
      Constructing Eco-friendly industries alternatively, instead of usual ones, and subsequently closing those working areas could address this issue completely. Since expanding the taxes does not fully do that. some argue that these arguments should take into consideration, as wind power and solar panels do not require any special materials that harm the environment, the only needed source is either wind or sunlight in this solution. This is a better way to combat pollution, owing to not a single item being burned, and also from the point that it is cost-effective on the other hand which also does not require any human control, as a result, it will also save time.
      In this essay, I have discussed the effects of industries on the nation and possible factors caused by this as well as the path that should be followed. I consider that shouting down those facilities and replacing them with solar power and wind could be useful to deal with pollution rather than increasing taxes on them.

  • @sayyedzohaibrizvi2573
    @sayyedzohaibrizvi2573 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The Subordinate Clauses advice is priceless.
    "Despite the fact that one knows how to use them, one may not. Consequently, one may bring his/her bands down. Hence, please follow E2`s suggestions religiously."

  • @sadmansadik3063
    @sadmansadik3063 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    If anyone needs another perspective at the writing essay 2, here's mine:
    Though soceities in some parts of the world consider owning their own home a dream, there are some countries where people would rather pay rent for their accomodation. I believe it's a better decision to rent a house and government should not necessarily be incentivizing families to own a house.
    Owning a house indeed has its own sentimental value but renting one offers more benefits. First of all, buying a house is capital intensive and saving up or paying installments ties an entire family to a single property for years. A family may run low on cash or someone may lose their jobs, in case of which paying off the house loans can become a huge burden over their shoulders for years. On top of that, even if a family owns a property, it's hard to turn it into cash in case they do need money for an emergency. That's why renting is a better option because one can accomodate their changing plans with utmost flexibility over the years.
    If government decides to subsidise property values to help first home buyers, then it would inevitably create some other problems as well. First of all, it would create a trend to buy houses where many families would feel pressured to own a home even if they don't need it. Secondly, many people would use the subsidises to buy a home below fair market price only to sell it off which in turn will disrupt the housing market. Policies like this have previously caused huge economical disasters like the housing market bubble in the early 2000s. So, it's best that the government doesn't implement the policy that will in turn increase the number of people who will end up owning a home even if they don't intend to live in it.
    In conclusion, I believe renting a home offers much more utility than owning one and government considering both the benefits of people and effect on the economy should refrain from actualizing a policy to subsidise first time home owners.

  • @anfariz80
    @anfariz80 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Good day Jay. I’m not a native speaker and Malay is my first language. I’ve sat for my IELTS for the 1st time and passed with 7.5 score. It’s a surprise to me as i just have less than 2 weeks to prepare where I spent a week (during my covid quarantine) watching your videos. Thanks for your amazing guidance.. cheers

  • @anoopnegi5884
    @anoopnegi5884 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Helo Jay and Ron. Thanks for the help you provided through youtube videos. I secured 7.5 bands in IELTS held on 29 January (Delhi). Your teaching methods and tricks are top level. I appreciate the commitment and please keep on doing the great job.

  • @nuremad9431
    @nuremad9431 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    How beautiful your accent is! 🌷
    I do hope I can speak the way you do..

  • @alisadal
    @alisadal 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Jay you are legendary! I only watched your videos 1 day before exam and had no preparation beforehand. I got 7 bands and I only needed 6.5

  • @meghanadarla9304
    @meghanadarla9304 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This channel is legit awesome, and so are Jay, Mark and Alex. Came back to express my gratitude to these wonderful people. Can't thank you enough for these videos which provided a lot of tips and tricks helping me ace my test.❤ I highly recommend test takers to follow their tips and tricks.

  • @shreyanreddyg7113
    @shreyanreddyg7113 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you ❤️ your videos helped me a lot to achive band 7.5 🌸

  • @AbD_47
    @AbD_47 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks for all the IELTS videos. Especially your writing tutorials really helped.

  • @chiraggondaliya5087
    @chiraggondaliya5087 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks E2
    I got L:7.5,W:6,R:8,S:6.5 Overall 7

  • @angeltamang04
    @angeltamang04 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    thank you so much e2 ielts for making such an amazing video to help us out to score higher bands grateful to found your videos thank you

  • @jatinagarwal1
    @jatinagarwal1 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks Alex n Jay for your insightful tutorials, learnt alot through them.

  • @SuperTomci
    @SuperTomci 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Omggggggggggg you are a gem a legitimate gem man, I got my results today L:7.5/R:7.5/W:7.5/S:7.5. I did IELTS in 2019 after taking some guidance classes for three months, which were quite expensive, n got 5.5,6,6.5 sort of score. This time in 2022, I watched your 4-5 videos just before the exam day n BOOM 💥 I got these ☝️scores, such improvement wowwwwwwwwwww. Your r a Wizard man 🙏🙇May ALLAH Almighty bless you with infinite blessings. AMEEN SUMAMEEN ❤️

  • @Amazing_things575
    @Amazing_things575 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks to improve my accent. now,I speak like you ☺️

  • @pharmaceuticsdepartmentku3704
    @pharmaceuticsdepartmentku3704 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    E2 is amazing Mark, Alex and of course Jay you all are fabulous, I watched the videos for just one week and got 7, thanks alot
    You people are doing great job keep it up 👍

  • @abdsalah3588
    @abdsalah3588 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    thanks 👍🏼 for this 😊 great information

  • @siamakalaei1148
    @siamakalaei1148 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks for the tips. Best wishes ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

  • @jonathankam3974
    @jonathankam3974 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank you very much E2 team for helping me and giving me tips to prepare for my Ielts exam. I had 1 week to prepare.
    Writing 6.5
    Listening 9
    Speaking 7
    Reading 9
    Your videos and information do really worked if used. All the best to those who are yet to take the exam!
    :D

    • @kishanparekh431
      @kishanparekh431 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hey, Did you use Interrogative sentence in writing task 2?

    • @sevdesevinc
      @sevdesevinc 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      That's amazing! Did you follow any videos for reading and listening? If so may you name a few that you remember?

    • @jonathankam3974
      @jonathankam3974 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@sevdesevinc I just went to their channel and found the videos listed under listening. Then i just watch as many of them

    • @jonathankam3974
      @jonathankam3974 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@kishanparekh431 I am not sure. I cant recall. However i had no idea what to write bcos i knew nothing really about that topic. Along with some other mistakes probably caused my marks to be lower. But i think i did ok since my first language is chinese

    • @valeriyapetrova2724
      @valeriyapetrova2724 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      how did u prepare for the reading?

  • @poojajana7067
    @poojajana7067 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I am Pooja Janarthanan from India. A student of yours from TH-cam. I have been watching your channel for a month, last week I had my IELTS exam. My results came today and I was amazed by seeing it and clearing it in my first attempt. Your website has helped me so much.
    Over All 7.0
    Listening 8.5
    Reading 7.0
    Writing 6.0
    Speaking 7.0
    Thank you so much for your effort for making students' dreams come true. And I am one of them. There are no words to describe your work. The least I can do is to thank you and pray to god to have a happy life with your family.

  • @apilkarki2946
    @apilkarki2946 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Love from Nepal ❤

  • @AMANDEEPSINGH-su5jz
    @AMANDEEPSINGH-su5jz 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hey Jay,
    Hope you are fine and doing well !
    I have one doubt related to give examples in writing task 2. Which one is recommendable from given below :
    1. Give examples using personal pronunciation like my friend, my family, I or my neighbour (or)
    2. Give examples with standard words such as research, survey or study of University.
    Which one is the best way to exemplify?

  • @ishworghimire2891
    @ishworghimire2891 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sounds good and really practical 😊
    Helped me a lot

  • @kevingb8826
    @kevingb8826 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you E2!

  • @abataylor7765
    @abataylor7765 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I have questions...
    1. Whats the difference between a fully and well developed position?
    2. When answering or addressing the questions or statements given, should you express your side when dealing with each of them or you pick a side in your concluding paragraph?

  • @berovlogs47
    @berovlogs47 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you Soo much..... I was really worried about my writing ...... I watched your videos and they helped me a lot...... Thank you again 💓💮❤️

  • @Adnan-nc9om
    @Adnan-nc9om 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you so much Jay and Alex. Your videos have helped me clear the IELTS exam even with last minute preparation. Watched just few videos for each session and the tips were wonderful.
    L: 8.5
    R: 7.5
    W: 7.5
    S: 7.5

  • @sukhdeepkaur6098
    @sukhdeepkaur6098 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    hey..! jay thanku so much for this video and pls tell me how to make a complex sentence with "while"

  • @MrShagy777
    @MrShagy777 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Glad to see you here

  • @Neha_sharma322
    @Neha_sharma322 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hello dear, Love from NewZealand, by watching your videos I got 7.0 overall R-7.0, L-7.5,S-7.0 W-6.5 which was quite difficult for me. I got it in first attempt. i truly appreciate your efforts and the way you describe methods. God bless you.

  • @shaikarif9773
    @shaikarif9773 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Respected sir your guidelines. is very helpful. to me thanks a lot

  • @shafaatgoraya9089
    @shafaatgoraya9089 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks jay got 7 in writing
    Introduction
    Body paragraphs
    Conclusion
    It works

  • @mandeepgrewal5357
    @mandeepgrewal5357 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Best chanal for ielts

  • @jrtv-orpon353
    @jrtv-orpon353 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thoroughly imprassive💚💚🔥

  • @MuhammadBilal-ts8nq
    @MuhammadBilal-ts8nq 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Kindly tell me how to cover ielts topics and which topics should I cover?

  • @pupbun2849
    @pupbun2849 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hey Jay so in love with your teaching. Well you look alike Robert Downey jr.

  • @kunjpatel2295
    @kunjpatel2295 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you sir!!

  • @shamimahmed1080
    @shamimahmed1080 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I'm on the way for my IELTS exam, pray for me.

  • @nikhilchhabra
    @nikhilchhabra 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Should we take a position even when they haven't asked for our opinion ? What if its a question about just discussing adv and disadv ? pros and cons ?

  • @dieterhansen4890
    @dieterhansen4890 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    can you please use some harder word’s? chast to make learn even more heavier?

  • @drrawlings
    @drrawlings 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks Jay

  • @jrtv-orpon353
    @jrtv-orpon353 ปีที่แล้ว

    Stunning video🤟💥😍🔥

  • @haroonrashidenglishchannel7544
    @haroonrashidenglishchannel7544 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Excellent video!

  • @namajjadinah5859
    @namajjadinah5859 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi Jay how can I get the IELTS materials sir

  • @champadas881
    @champadas881 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello, Would you mind suggesting an advanced English essay writing book?

  • @Steven-jx7ch
    @Steven-jx7ch 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Building subordinate clauses should be a dynamic online game, technology is locking into a book, let it break out!

  • @cerem7505
    @cerem7505 ปีที่แล้ว

    question, how do you take a position when they ask about disadvantages and advantages? don't you have to write about both of them in detail?

  • @zahramanafi4793
    @zahramanafi4793 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    In my last mock exam, I took 4 for task response in writing task 2, and now I understand the reason :(

  • @isabellecaldas5053
    @isabellecaldas5053 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Jay, I love you

  • @mandeepgrewal5357
    @mandeepgrewal5357 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thnks so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so much sir

  • @faisalbashir1717
    @faisalbashir1717 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks

  • @pick7242
    @pick7242 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    If I'm not mistaken we should not fully agree with one side on opinion essays

    • @aljeanpepito7791
      @aljeanpepito7791 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      your ideas, thoughts and opinions carry zero value in ielts writing. All they care is have you responded properly to the task with high grammatical range and accuracy, coherence and cohesion and good vocabulary. That’s it. It’s an English proficiency test…not a test of what you think.

    • @pick7242
      @pick7242 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@aljeanpepito7791 you didn't get me 🤦🏻‍♂️

    • @aljeanpepito7791
      @aljeanpepito7791 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@pick7242 yeah cuz your english probably sucks that you can’t phrase a simple statement or question properly 😂

  • @nirmaldhillon6214
    @nirmaldhillon6214 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Today I got my result L 8.5 R 8.0 S 6.5 W5.5 should I got for eor??
    I got my result after 13 days with .5 increment in writing

  • @pagalshayar629
    @pagalshayar629 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Plz make a video how to make writing sentence as wall as grammar