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Lee Know does these! You can hear in skz talkers

I love it❤

Imagine you are sitting in a bus, scrolling through Tiktok and you hear "THRWETHRWETHWRETHERET" 💀🙏

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Hey phillip a question here! Dont 17. Avoid generic language and 15. Keep it simple kind of conflict with each other?

Oh hell nah

I've been imitating you while watching you while I'm at work, and agents came in on me during that 😂😂😂

Good, can you make a video about script writing

Keep it up❤🎉

Good work. It takes time to watch it till end, but it's worth it :)

Love the video! I have been working for two years to create a YT channel in my spare time and I am using some of your tips to make a script for my first episode. Thank you!

how come this video has only 2.5k views????????

That was pretty cool, quick vid and to the point! I will use your pointers in my how to vids and see where it goes! Thx again!

Much better than the last video of yours I watched. Giving a specific example and modifying it is very effective. One note. You have fallen into the trap of maxing things out, specifically the mark. The best grade he ever got in the subject does not equal 100. Getting 100 on a test is also not very stressful for the reader. Ask Hermione. Also different countries have different marking systems. Here it is 1-10, no letters, no 100s. Thus, the story would be more dramatic and more relatable if the stakes were being able to return next year and needing to receive a passing mark. Medical school is not much of an emotional target. The problem is that to get into medical school, you have to be a very good student already. This app is totally inappropriate for such a student because they already learned that skill years ago. This app is aimed for middle of the road students who have to chose between university and community college or community college and McDonalds, not between Harvard and the University of Texas. Therefore, better stakes would be not to disappoint his parents who have always wanted him to get a degree, unlike them.

Love you for this Phillip

For real i was going to check the comments but it was empty(The music)

Nice! Thank you for your time and three lessons! Just Subscribed!! All the best!

The Goat storyteller ❤

11:53 'The Kids' excitement was like this wildfire spreading as they chattered and jumped with enthusiasm.' You have made a couple of mistakes at this point. 1. excitement, enthusiasm are telling words, not showing because the author is interpreting the situation instead of letting the reader do it. This is simply an example of vivid or colourful language, like using dart and vault instead of run and jump. Colourful language helps the reader picture the image you are expressing, but do not let him or her interpret it. 2. Good storytelling is always a blend of showing and telling. The most extreme example is scenes are shown, the events between scenes are told, for example, a dialogue (shown) followed by waiting an hour for the friend to return (told) and a second dialogue (shown). But good writers tell within a scene as well. To a degree, they use showing as a form of colourful language, but they also show the main points in the story and tell lesser points. Showing and telling likewise have unique features such as in the way they can be used to deceive the reader due to the way readers interact with each.

What are some good resources for learning hooks?

Hey Philipp , very good video ! I was wondering if I can help you with more Quality Editing in your videos and make Highly Engaging Thumbnails which will help your videos to get more views and engagement . Please let me know what do you think ?

Thank you! What a great lesson

Look up "Emily McClure Major Tom", the emotions she expressed mirrored how my journey into Deafness unfolded, so I felt a deeeep connection to it. She puts herself directly in it, and not always signing the words exactly, especially the chorus, where she supports the words by playing off of them in other ways, visually structural, an easy example is signing about when I was seven, wading in a lake, seeing how far out I could walk, I used signs that showed exactly how deeeep I was at every step, and still remain oblivious to the danger until the last second, but still show it. Of course, something simple like getting stung by a wasp is far more engaging and interactive, as you don't want to paralyze the audience, but instead get them to jump in with their own easy experience.

Sir make a video about educational Channel script writing

Oh god I just discovered your channel. I can't imagine why YT was not recommending me your channel before. Such a hidden gem.

You help me a lot thanks you

Kudos ❤

Thanks a ton phillip, it means A Lot to me, I can't thank You enough.

Sir this help me alot. from this i change my type of story telling and its get way better ❤

Philipp back with a banger ❤✅

Super Helpful 💚

Which lesson was your favorite? My favorite ones: Lesson #8 & 12

What a smart young man 😊

I love your Chanel ❤

Thank you!

do you script these videos, if yes then how are you able to remember what to say next, or do you use teleprompter

I came here from an Instagram reel by only Zita hat mentioned you. Just this short video and I know why he recommended you. You have a new subscriber 🤗 I've been working time draining 9-5s, but I'm looking to go all in on creating content and doing freelance, so I'm learning storytelling tips to create better videos and captions. Thanks

What if I told you that you can make a billion dollars by the end of this presentation? You can't of course but what I said that wouldn't it be a funny prank

Hi! Do U have any tips how to be more fluent on Camera? I mean Like U during filming video TH-cam on the spot

great vid bro. nice editting and story telling. only one thing missing audio and lighting which stopping you to mill views. you could use lavalier or put you mic closer to the mouth. or freelance your audio.

thank you johnny sins

Brother You are literally fabulous, (not exaggerating), I can definitely put you in the top list of my youTube favourites!, Your content is unique as well as very good,, I couldn't not find any other story telling oriented channel better than yours😂, thanks for investing your times over amateurs like us! May you prosper and your channel gain it's worthy position! ❤❤

The silence, exaclty like the news I was watching when I was a child. I always wondered why are they doing that, what is that silence before the speech starts )) Thanks for the answer. !

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I recently read chapter 5 of your storytelling Book. Could you pls make a video that explains and gives more examples on telling Connection stories?

I liked that you showed the base story and then you enriched it with techniques.

Omo, guy, I agree with you! I've always thought that tip was tr@@sh

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Awesome video - concrete examples and engaging editing!

Yo Phillip can I contact you on instagram??