Rudon's Plane (A story about a man who walks down a hallway...)

A short story I wrote on and off over several years. Now finally complete more or less though if you have any suggestions or criticisms feel free to tell me in the comments below.
Music in Order of Appearance:
Skimloop - Multiball Orbit Party [Octatrack + Monologue]
Mustlord - Fragmentary (2017-2021) - 05 Deepspace IV (edit)
BAKGROUND_Memory Card
Mustlord - Fragmentary (2017-2021) - 05 Deepspace IV (edit)
Mustlord - Fragmentary (2017-2021) - 11 O))) (edit)
Mustlord - Fragmentary (2017-2021) - 08 Irradiated (edit)
nobody - liminal space - the endless city
Chris Zabriskie - Short Songs 010923 - 030923 - 11 Short Song 011923
Sound effects by Storyblocks