That's a mean cliff to leave a person hanging on! That said, it's an intriguing piece of a story and would like to know where they are portalling to and more importantly what punishment does she have in store for him? Good job with hooking your readers to the story by the way!
Good story needs to continue ❤
Great story. Please do a continuation of this story
just found this channel and very nice story and hope you do a part 2 and more
Interesting will there more
Hope there's more to follow!
Nice story ❤
That's a mean cliff to leave a person hanging on! That said, it's an intriguing piece of a story and would like to know where they are portalling to and more importantly what punishment does she have in store for him? Good job with hooking your readers to the story by the way!
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