Megha and her team had worked on a solar powered small scale boat as their final year project. After conducting it's test in a small water body they took it to river for better testing they were conducting the test while the model boat started sinking megha instructed teammate who was a good swimmer to take it out...he immediately jumped and took it out. Later analyzed shortcoming and worked to improve. Again tested and got it working.
My second story as follows Jatin who is a forest ranger was posted in karbari grant area of dehradun. This area is surrounded by rajaji national park on one side. One day jatin was informed by local people of karbari that a deer has entered into the local area , he had been running all around the locality since so long and may had forgot he way back to forest. Jatin immediately came with his team. Catched the deer and carried him to forest area
It is not simple to comment on stories comprehensively. That is why, I do not do so. You should watch our videos in which I have discussed these with our students. You can get our book where I have explained the methodology of writing stories as also given some sample stories. Good luck!
Sir I made a story as follows On a fine evening day aman and his parents as always were going for an evening walk in the outskirts of near by forest area in there locality. While walking aman suddenly saw that a man fell on the ground , he immediately told his parents. They went to the man , picked him up and then cleaned the dust on his clothes and made sure if he was fine.
Sir I have some problem , in speaking English while I write a good story but when I speak, I don't speak what I have written Please tell me something sir because I have cleared the acc exam
The best idea is to join my guidance program. However, it will be very important for you to regularly attend our group sessions to improve your oral expression and keep sending to me written work to improve the written expression. Unfortunately, most of our ACC aspirant students have not been regular in doing so. nofrillsacademy.com/enrol-now/
I think the tents were in the background, if we look there I can see there are 2 tent like structure, so do look for the direction in which they were running
@@ashishshous2699 don't take any offense but if you have seen any camp in real... Tents are erected in a circular manner and allotted to different Camapnies
Megha and her team had worked on a solar powered small scale boat as their final year project. After conducting it's test in a small water body they took it to river for better testing they were conducting the test while the model boat started sinking megha instructed teammate who was a good swimmer to take it out...he immediately jumped and took it out. Later analyzed shortcoming and worked to improve. Again tested and got it working.
1 st story....Audience is in shock.... Someone drawned..... He is saving life
Thank you sir, After this class I became to know that there is always a situation behind the scenes
Sir kindly continue this series
We will do so.
My second story as follows
Jatin who is a forest ranger was posted in karbari grant area of dehradun. This area is surrounded by rajaji national park on one side. One day jatin was informed by local people of karbari that a deer has entered into the local area , he had been running all around the locality since so long and may had forgot he way back to forest. Jatin immediately came with his team. Catched the deer and carried him to forest area
Sir plz rply if my stories are ok or not
It is not simple to comment on stories comprehensively. That is why, I do not do so. You should watch our videos in which I have discussed these with our students. You can get our book where I have explained the methodology of writing stories as also given some sample stories. Good luck!
Sir I made a story as follows
On a fine evening day aman and his parents as always were going for an evening walk in the outskirts of near by forest area in there locality. While walking aman suddenly saw that a man fell on the ground , he immediately told his parents. They went to the man , picked him up and then cleaned the dust on his clothes and made sure if he was fine.
Very helpful Video, please upload more Videos on GP, TAT, WAT, also make video on how to write SD, PIQ Thinks to remmeber & common mistakes.
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Amazing video sir, really helpful
This gives what are mistakes that sometimes we do ,
Please make more videos like this
Thanks. We will keep making more videos.
And also sir I didn't percieve any pool or lake. Is my story fine or noy
really helpful sir.......
Sir's NDA Batchmates must be reunited in DECEMBER 2022.......because it's written on his T-shirt
Sir I have some problem , in speaking English while I write a good story but when I speak, I don't speak what I have written
Please tell me something sir because I have cleared the acc exam
The best idea is to join my guidance program. However, it will be very important for you to regularly attend our group sessions to improve your oral expression and keep sending to me written work to improve the written expression. Unfortunately, most of our ACC aspirant students have not been regular in doing so. nofrillsacademy.com/enrol-now/
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2nd story NCC camp..... Tents caught fire.... Everybody rushed and extinguished it
I think the tents were in the background, if we look there I can see there are 2 tent like structure, so do look for the direction in which they were running
@@ashishshous2699 don't take any offense but if you have seen any camp in real... Tents are erected in a circular manner and allotted to different Camapnies
@@AkshayA1184 no bro, just i don't have any real time experience regards to this , thanks for giving information
@@ashishshous2699 thank you
@@AkshayA1184can we write story related to forest ranger?