No hair damage : Heading: 1) Silky Schruncie prevent hair breakage & damage and keep your hair moisturized. 2) Super soft hair cloud make your hair feel like they are in cloud . 3) Fashion trendy Schruncie makes your hair looks Healthy & shining. Perfect for fine hair and short hair : Heading: 1) Scrunchies are adjustable for fine ,thin, thick ,short to long all types of hair. 2) Scrunchies are perfectionista they have all the quality for women hair needs. - Hi Adrianna, waiting for your feedback :)
Hey! Pay attention to the grammar. Headlines are usually capitalised and without the full stop at the end. Also, the sentences should read in a natural way. For example ¨Fashion trendy¨ doesn´t read smoothly. These two words are similar in meaning. It doesn´t make sense to put them next to each other. In copywriting, you want to use as few words as possible to get as much meaning across as possible. I would probably dissect some headlines for products, newspapers, etc. and try to see how the sentences are formed in English. Keep practicing! Dedicating time to this regularly will help you improve. And well done for giving it a go.
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No hair damage :
Heading:
1) Silky Schruncie prevent hair breakage & damage and keep your hair moisturized.
2) Super soft hair cloud make your hair feel like they are in cloud .
3) Fashion trendy Schruncie makes your hair looks Healthy & shining.
Perfect for fine hair and short hair :
Heading:
1) Scrunchies are adjustable for fine ,thin, thick ,short to long all types of hair.
2) Scrunchies are perfectionista they have all the quality for women hair needs.
- Hi Adrianna, waiting for your feedback :)
Hey! Pay attention to the grammar. Headlines are usually capitalised and without the full stop at the end. Also, the sentences should read in a natural way. For example ¨Fashion trendy¨ doesn´t read smoothly. These two words are similar in meaning. It doesn´t make sense to put them next to each other. In copywriting, you want to use as few words as possible to get as much meaning across as possible. I would probably dissect some headlines for products, newspapers, etc. and try to see how the sentences are formed in English. Keep practicing! Dedicating time to this regularly will help you improve. And well done for giving it a go.