Another great story! 👏 👏 👏 kudos to the author and you, jordan. Love the way the killer is described. My only issue is the ending. There is no way bolts almost the size of someones arms; impaled in multiple bodys could be removed. Or so easily ignored as to have police, medical professionals etc, just go "oh they drowned due to drinking" The impact force at which those bolts would be traveling would leave very obvious entry and exit force wounding.
I found Jordan through another channel. He was reading a creepy pasta. Since his channel has started I've read/listened to all his stories! This is just another great one! Can't wait for more!
Not an arrow. A metal rebar. I'm not sure that would even work, but apparently the guy was using make-shift bolts. Still, the police are idiots for thinking this was an accident.
@@Bluesit32 just a stick of rebar wouldn't fly right at all. You'd have better luck throwing it than launching it out of a crossbow. And scaling up the power would only make it worse.
I lived in rural Scotland growing up and we did this regularly when I was a young teen. Thankfully we didn’t have a mad serial killer after us and made some great memories 🤣 Fantastic story & narration, took me back to my youth and I thank you for that 💜
👍👍fantastically incomparable, this was a very suspenseful and thrilling story it was end of your seat exciting, i loved and enjoyed this thrill ride. Thanks Jordan 😇💖
Hey, let's swim out of range? Yes it's a long ass way to get out if range of that Patriot missile launcher, but it's the only shot(maybe the wrong word), but we really don't have much of a choice.
The ending ruined it for me. Spoilers: THEY'VE BEEN IMPALED! ALL OF THE BODIES! With solid rebars! Not even slightly bent ones! The dock was destroyed...as if hit by solid rebar! And everyone concludes that it was some bizarre accident?!
One hell of an adrenaline rush. The author know how to write a gripping scenario.
The story do be grippy
I pulled the best heist here. Skipped yesterday's video to watch it immediately after this gem. Two stories in one day!
You rascal!
Another great story! 👏 👏 👏 kudos to the author and you, jordan. Love the way the killer is described.
My only issue is the ending. There is no way bolts almost the size of someones arms; impaled in multiple bodys could be removed. Or so easily ignored as to have police, medical professionals etc, just go "oh they drowned due to drinking"
The impact force at which those bolts would be traveling would leave very obvious entry and exit force wounding.
You know this stops me having fun with my crossbow 😢
Ooh I was going to start long bow training!!!! Our country just doesn't do g%ns as normal. 😊
Liking and commenting now because I'm at work and won't be able to listen until I get home. ❤❤
Oh man… Mr Helsing finally lost it!
I found Jordan through another channel. He was reading a creepy pasta. Since his channel has started I've read/listened to all his stories! This is just another great one! Can't wait for more!
Really brought this one to life. Loved it. Thanks Jordan!
Missed the live😔but this story was creepy awesome!! Great job!❤️
Police, looking at a dead body with an arrow sticking out of it: "Clearly this is an alcohol-related natural death"
Yeah, that broke the immersion for me
Not an arrow. A metal rebar. I'm not sure that would even work, but apparently the guy was using make-shift bolts. Still, the police are idiots for thinking this was an accident.
@@Bluesit32 just a stick of rebar wouldn't fly right at all. You'd have better luck throwing it than launching it out of a crossbow. And scaling up the power would only make it worse.
@@thomasn3071 Oh, I don't doubt that it wouldn't work. Still, that's what the story said. He was shooting rebar.
The TTRPGer in me was screaming what to do😅
You Saturdead has a channel now he had like only single digits subbed at the moment unbelievable, he’s a legend
I lived in rural Scotland growing up and we did this regularly when I was a young teen.
Thankfully we didn’t have a mad serial killer after us and made some great memories 🤣
Fantastic story & narration, took me back to my youth and I thank you for that 💜
Thank you jordan another kick ass story under the belt right on right on and salute good sir
Great story Jordan.
The story was good, but the end with the cops not investigating 4 dead teenagers because of alcohol in their system is just dumb.
Which isn't entirely unbelievable, but that everyone believes the police report? THAT is stupid. They all just HAPPENED to be impaled on rebar?
Wow that was an insane story for real
Heck of a story. Thanks for sharing! 😊😊
👍👍fantastically incomparable, this was a very suspenseful and thrilling story it was end of your seat exciting, i loved and enjoyed this thrill ride. Thanks Jordan 😇💖
You sound like a chat gpt comment lol
Very good story great stuff bro
Thanks Jordan ❤
Bang! Bang!
No.... That wouldn't mess with your head 😅
Hmm. He picked up all the bolts?... 🤔
I loved it, BUT I STILL HATE IT when villains get away.
Thank you Jordan 👍🏻😃
Thank you for doing this I've seen this pop up and I said oh yeah my sleepy time
Rush!
Excellent story the crossbow is new great narration
Great story keep it coming .
Hey, let's swim out of range? Yes it's a long ass way to get out if range of that Patriot missile launcher, but it's the only shot(maybe the wrong word), but we really don't have much of a choice.
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Love the channel.
The old "alcohol fueled teens went and shot themselves with rebar" trope... not so much.
The story was great, until it wasn't.
You know that old saw: "write what you know"...
Might be good advice for a reason.
Excellent, thank you.
So sick and tired of the oh they never found the guy oh no charges were filed that is stupid
The ending ruined it for me. Spoilers:
THEY'VE BEEN IMPALED! ALL OF THE BODIES! With solid rebars! Not even slightly bent ones! The dock was destroyed...as if hit by solid rebar! And everyone concludes that it was some bizarre accident?!
Sounds like a Friday the 13th movie to me
"He may or may not have made out with his cousin... I can neither confirm nor deny."
It didn't work buddy. We know the truth from nuance. 🤣
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Poo im late.....van you start over plz 🙏.....lol
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