You're thinking of using each bar as separate parts Make it more fluid Your style reminds me of rustage, quite a good song Keep it up! Hopefully sometime I'll be as good as you and start my own rap channel
Its a good song but you could try getting a little better flow in it, Both the first and second parts are good but just keeping working on the flow and making the song go a little more fluently and it would be much better
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Dude the second half is fire 🔥
Thought u featured rustage 😮😊😅
But as always blue ray never disappoints
Oh hey sh*t, Blue-Ray popped like crazy
You're thinking of using each bar as separate parts
Make it more fluid
Your style reminds me of rustage, quite a good song
Keep it up! Hopefully sometime I'll be as good as you and start my own rap channel
You've got potential if love rapping keep it up. Mate. 👍
Ayo thanks alot for having me💯🔥
This used to be my fav character, not bad Jack.
really good but jack remember you have to stay on beat
second half is actually good
No cap
Why tf you sound like Rustage
Fire track by the way 🔥 🙌 👌
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Its a good song but you could try getting a little better flow in it, Both the first and second parts are good but just keeping working on the flow and making the song go a little more fluently and it would be much better
The rap is good but you really NEED a better mic