Agreed. If it was an original story not related to any fandom, this would be a groundbreaking story. Fanfictions aren’t perfect, not all of them are bad or straight up inappropriate but they can teach you what not to do when writing a story.
It’s a good story despite being fanfiction lol. Sometimes fanfiction is a lot better than canon material. Maybe I’m biased since I also write fanfiction but I gotta give props to the writer, they know their stuff
@@Brownie_Toasty At fictional Princeton Plainsboro Teaching Hospital in New Jersey, prickly genius Dr. Gregory House tackles health mysteries as would a medical Sherlock Holmes, all the while playing mind games with colleagues that include his best friend, oncologist James Wilson. House, an acerbic infectious disease specialist, solves medical puzzles with the help of a team of young diagnosticians. Flawless instincts and unconventional thinking help earn House great respect, despite his brutal honesty and antisocial tendencies. -google
Unironically I think this author did a really good job at writing House, Maybe its not 1:1, But the general idea is there, The idea revolving around the fuckin' *Loud House* does bring it down a bit, If you did take this and maybe change the characters, It'd make for a pretty darn good book or something EDIT: THIS ALSO MEANS CHANGING HOUSE TOO 😭😭😭
I don't know how to feel about the fact that I'm invested in this story because it's actually kinda good. Last ep, I wanted more because it was just funny and a fanfic. I want more of this because I'm actually pretty invested. The House stuff really shocked me at how this was in a loud house fic, and I honestly started feeling something (even though those thoughts switched up pretty fast once I remembered what this is)
I love this channel bc it feels like I pulled up at my friends house for a sleepover & she just proceeds to show me the most cursed loud house fandom things in between rounds of button mashing while playing super smash bros
it was pretty easy to tell you were more interested in the story than usual because you werent making little comments in between reading and i honestly cant blame you one bit. the story is actually decent and the writing is pretty good... the only thing that holds it back is the fact it's a loud house fanfic 😭 fun video as always!
Lincoln blaming the doctors for not noticing sooner unironically reminded me of how when i was 11-12 i blamed the doctors for not being able to save my father. I thought they failed him and saw the hospital he died in as a horrible place. HELP WHY DID THIS FUCKING DUMB LOUD HOUSE FANFIC MAKE ME REMEMBER THIS BULLSHIT WTF
Kinda forgot this was Loud House Fanfiction and was all sad over the concept of a child coming to terms with his own Mortality until the Dr House crossover hit me over the head with a fucking chair😭
Sans? Sans! Wake up! What is it, dude? A human has fallen from the surface world! Really? And you got a bone to pick with him? No time for puns! C'mon, that was a real rib-tickler! Ay! Ugh! Enough! Alright, here we go again Welcome to the underground How was the fall? If you wanna look around Give us a call We don't see humans often We're happy you just dropped in I'll be so popular when I show all the monsters what I just brought in Hey, Papyrus, mind your manners Can it Sans, no time for banter! Excuse my brother, he's a bit eccentric And you're just lazy and apathetic! Call me what you want, I got thick skin Another bad joke and I'm finished with him! We are monsters, the awfullest kind! To mess with us takes a lot of spine (ooh) We can relate to your determination Because we monsters have our motivations Humans betrayed us and left us burnin' One day we'll make our way back to the surface Through all your travels your sins will follow Your consequences aren't easy to swallow Who's the real monster, now you should know You've got this story down to the bone Really sans? What? The last line of the chorus is a pun? Yep You imbecile! That was very clever! Ha! Thanks, buddy You're stuck in the underground Thanks to the fall Good luck ever getting out Prepare to brawl You could show mercy to us Or turn all of us to dust Is your heart full of evil? Or full of love? (Nyahaha) I, the great Papyrus Challenge you to try getting by us! Test the human with one of your puzzles Brilliant, Sans! That will leave him befuddled I dare you to try a bite of spaghetti Smells like the creepypasta is ready Stop it sans! I'm done with the jokin' Sounds like someone's funny bone's broken We can relate to your determination Because we monsters have our motivations I am the mastermind, he's my accomplice You're only still alive because I made a promise You'll lose your mind when you wander for hours You might even decide to start talking to flowers Who's the real monster, now you should know You've got this story down to the bone Someday I'll join the Royal Guard When I catch this child, can it be that hard? Look, if I'm being honest My brother ain't nothing but harmless I know you, and all that you want You'll get a lot more from Sans than a font The deeper you go, the messier it gets If I had it my way, you'd already be dead Kidding, if you couldn't tell I get so bored, I amuse myself (wahahahaha) Down here in the underground You're all alone We wanted to tell you now You're kinda bold If you survive this prison You will know nihilism Don't mess around with monsters They're scared of tiny children (ha) You've come far, but soon you'll stumble When I stump you with some Junior Jumble! Not so sure you'll get him with that Alas, I'll hit him with my special attack! Leave me alone! You know I've got a knack, for the trom-bone One more pun, and I'll be done! But ain't two skulls better than one? We can relate to your determination Because we monsters have our motivations You know your story's already been told We can play again if you sell your soul I've got my eye on you, so you just watch it I'll find any skeletons inside your closet Who's the real monster, now you should know You've got this story down to the bone
Literally hardly listening until it mentions the doctor popping a fucking pill with any liquid and I stop just like: “…I’m sorry, was that HOUSE??” And then he introduces himself and yes, it was fucking house. Why is he here?? What??
18:32 Still a better version of the "Why so serious?" meme to think of than the utter SLOP version thats the Joker image but filtered to hell and back with some crazy ass laughing audio
I was thinkin' "wow this is weirdly good" and then some out of pocket phrase like, "They were dressed pretty but not TOO sexy" or the fucking house guy showing up. Cannot tell if this is a tragedy or a comedy
My favorite part was when dr house said "it's on the house" and started housing all over the place
All the tension and seriousness the story could've had faded as soon as fucking HOUSE came in
Not gonna lie, if this wasn't a loud house fanfic, it would be a well written story.
Agreed. If it was an original story not related to any fandom, this would be a groundbreaking story. Fanfictions aren’t perfect, not all of them are bad or straight up inappropriate but they can teach you what not to do when writing a story.
@SodaCider641 💯! This would be the type of story that would be read from a library or for a class assignment.
I'll admit it's one of my favorite stories I've ever read. I like to reread it every now and then and just pretend it isn't a loud house fanfic 😭
It’s a good story despite being fanfiction lol. Sometimes fanfiction is a lot better than canon material.
Maybe I’m biased since I also write fanfiction but I gotta give props to the writer, they know their stuff
I WAS BARELY LISTENING AND TGEN THE NEW DOCTOR CAME IN AND I WAS LIKE "is that... house?" AND IT WAS.... HELPPPPPP
BRO IS THAT ACTUALLY DR HOUSE THEY ACTUALLY PUT DR HOUSE IN THE FANFIC LMAO
DOCTOR HOUSE?
Doctor house :3
Wait who is doctor house?
@@Brownie_Toasty At fictional Princeton Plainsboro Teaching Hospital in New Jersey, prickly genius Dr. Gregory House tackles health mysteries as would a medical Sherlock Holmes, all the while playing mind games with colleagues that include his best friend, oncologist James Wilson. House, an acerbic infectious disease specialist, solves medical puzzles with the help of a team of young diagnosticians. Flawless instincts and unconventional thinking help earn House great respect, despite his brutal honesty and antisocial tendencies. -google
@@ThyFletchrohh, thx for the info!
(Why the flippity flop is he in a loud house fiction)
@@Brownie_Toasty (because it’s a loud house fan fiction. They never care about logic)
The fact that this story is actually good😭
W pfp
@Just_Some_Guy_with_a_Smile yours is just as perfect💋
You know what, this is probably one of the better things to come out of the fandom. It’s certainly better than all the fetish art of literal kids
Unironically I think this author did a really good job at writing House, Maybe its not 1:1, But the general idea is there, The idea revolving around the fuckin' *Loud House* does bring it down a bit, If you did take this and maybe change the characters, It'd make for a pretty darn good book or something
EDIT: THIS ALSO MEANS CHANGING HOUSE TOO 😭😭😭
The Loud House community try to make something wholesome and happy challenge (IMPOSSIBLE‼️💯)
Loud house: happy show,dark and serious community
Breaking bad: Dark and serious show,goofy ahh community
I almost forgot this was a loud house fic with that writing 😭
When House showed up I crode
Who boutta requiem on my loud ❓️❓️🗣🗣🔥🔥
House 🗣🗣
I don't know how to feel about the fact that I'm invested in this story because it's actually kinda good. Last ep, I wanted more because it was just funny and a fanfic. I want more of this because I'm actually pretty invested. The House stuff really shocked me at how this was in a loud house fic, and I honestly started feeling something (even though those thoughts switched up pretty fast once I remembered what this is)
I love this channel bc it feels like I pulled up at my friends house for a sleepover & she just proceeds to show me the most cursed loud house fandom things in between rounds of button mashing while playing super smash bros
it was pretty easy to tell you were more interested in the story than usual because you werent making little comments in between reading and i honestly cant blame you one bit. the story is actually decent and the writing is pretty good... the only thing that holds it back is the fact it's a loud house fanfic 😭 fun video as always!
is dr house part of the loud house bc house is in his name??? what is this LORE
Lincoln blaming the doctors for not noticing sooner unironically reminded me of how when i was 11-12 i blamed the doctors for not being able to save my father. I thought they failed him and saw the hospital he died in as a horrible place. HELP WHY DID THIS FUCKING DUMB LOUD HOUSE FANFIC MAKE ME REMEMBER THIS BULLSHIT WTF
The rock band 'We totally have a name's is likely a play on 'The Who', since the others are opposites.
Kinda forgot this was Loud House Fanfiction and was all sad over the concept of a child coming to terms with his own Mortality until the Dr House crossover hit me over the head with a fucking chair😭
23:33 OMG ME ME I’m the house obsessed friend. Are you guys actually up housing
Do people need to be depressed on the Fandom EVERY SINGLE TIME?
Sans? Sans! Wake up!
What is it, dude?
A human has fallen from the surface world!
Really? And you got a bone to pick with him?
No time for puns!
C'mon, that was a real rib-tickler! Ay!
Ugh! Enough!
Alright, here we go again
Welcome to the underground
How was the fall?
If you wanna look around
Give us a call
We don't see humans often
We're happy you just dropped in
I'll be so popular when I show all the monsters what I just brought in
Hey, Papyrus, mind your manners
Can it Sans, no time for banter!
Excuse my brother, he's a bit eccentric
And you're just lazy and apathetic!
Call me what you want, I got thick skin
Another bad joke and I'm finished with him!
We are monsters, the awfullest kind!
To mess with us takes a lot of spine (ooh)
We can relate to your determination
Because we monsters have our motivations
Humans betrayed us and left us burnin'
One day we'll make our way back to the surface
Through all your travels your sins will follow
Your consequences aren't easy to swallow
Who's the real monster, now you should know
You've got this story down to the bone
Really sans?
What?
The last line of the chorus is a pun?
Yep
You imbecile! That was very clever!
Ha! Thanks, buddy
You're stuck in the underground
Thanks to the fall
Good luck ever getting out
Prepare to brawl
You could show mercy to us
Or turn all of us to dust
Is your heart full of evil?
Or full of love? (Nyahaha)
I, the great Papyrus
Challenge you to try getting by us!
Test the human with one of your puzzles
Brilliant, Sans! That will leave him befuddled
I dare you to try a bite of spaghetti
Smells like the creepypasta is ready
Stop it sans! I'm done with the jokin'
Sounds like someone's funny bone's broken
We can relate to your determination
Because we monsters have our motivations
I am the mastermind, he's my accomplice
You're only still alive because I made a promise
You'll lose your mind when you wander for hours
You might even decide to start talking to flowers
Who's the real monster, now you should know
You've got this story down to the bone
Someday I'll join the Royal Guard
When I catch this child, can it be that hard?
Look, if I'm being honest
My brother ain't nothing but harmless
I know you, and all that you want
You'll get a lot more from Sans than a font
The deeper you go, the messier it gets
If I had it my way, you'd already be dead
Kidding, if you couldn't tell
I get so bored, I amuse myself (wahahahaha)
Down here in the underground
You're all alone
We wanted to tell you now
You're kinda bold
If you survive this prison
You will know nihilism
Don't mess around with monsters
They're scared of tiny children (ha)
You've come far, but soon you'll stumble
When I stump you with some Junior Jumble!
Not so sure you'll get him with that
Alas, I'll hit him with my special attack!
Leave me alone!
You know I've got a knack, for the trom-bone
One more pun, and I'll be done!
But ain't two skulls better than one?
We can relate to your determination
Because we monsters have our motivations
You know your story's already been told
We can play again if you sell your soul
I've got my eye on you, so you just watch it
I'll find any skeletons inside your closet
Who's the real monster, now you should know
You've got this story down to the bone
Literally hardly listening until it mentions the doctor popping a fucking pill with any liquid and I stop just like: “…I’m sorry, was that HOUSE??”
And then he introduces himself and yes, it was fucking house. Why is he here?? What??
as soon as i heard "he takes a pill" i was like is this dr house??
Lincoln be in his Walter White phase rn
Dr FUCKING House in a Loud House fanfic...you can't make this shit up 😭😭
the good lard days
3:35 it may be the band WEEN.
Lincolns in his steely dan arc
Loud house fanfics going in my suicide note
0:02 I hate getting that too, it's annoying.
Same
You invented Lincoln gloop
What's house doing here 😭😭
Oh great heavens, it appears the Loud Lincoln’s situation has gotten worse since we last checked on him! 😨
is it bad that i think this is kinda good i'm actually kinda invested tf
Ur videos are getting better bro u should read fanfics from other series and stuff seeing all the wild shit is really entertaining
8:38 it's usually to be a "better role model" to the younger siblings, or whatever bologna parents like to say.
Nah bruh dr. house
HOLY SHIT, IT'S DOCTOR HOUSE!
I really want an answer for what the fuck the Cheddar weight joke was
Holy mother, th3 thumbnail
👹 why so serious
NOT HOUSE
Who up louding they requiem?🔥🔥🔊🔊🔥🔊🔊🔊
I CAN'T FUCKING ESCAPE HOUSE MD 💀
18:32 Still a better version of the "Why so serious?" meme to think of than the utter SLOP version thats the Joker image but filtered to hell and back with some crazy ass laughing audio
Copper bull+ Easter egg + 1488
Someone pls summarize how this story ends or something. I dont have the attention span to read the entire thing.
I was thinkin' "wow this is weirdly good" and then some out of pocket phrase like, "They were dressed pretty but not TOO sexy" or the fucking house guy showing up. Cannot tell if this is a tragedy or a comedy
I started making videos reading the (prior) longest fanfic bcuz of you 👍
The loud house has usurped super smash bros
who tf does house think he is⁉⁉⁉⁉🗣🗣🗣🗣
you should totes read syngenesophobia next lmao
Why am I actually interested in this story? Why do I actually kinda like the story?
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Welp, im early yet again. (Hell yeah!!-)