the loud house: revamped is a torture device disguised as a fanfiction

แชร์
ฝัง
  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 1 ม.ค. 2025

ความคิดเห็น • 71

  • @DavidTheCoolDudeUTTP
    @DavidTheCoolDudeUTTP หลายเดือนก่อน +20

    The author actually finished making this fanfiction just a few months ago, and he immediately started working on a sequel. I respect the dedication this guy has.

  • @Imjustwilliam2024
    @Imjustwilliam2024 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +101

    Reading the fanfic is like spending 10 hours on a maze

  • @Olivilivv
    @Olivilivv 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +66

    The fact that this fanfic is even longer than the Bible makes me chuckle a little, this is possibly one of the most craziest fanfic that I ever heard

  • @JAYZ-47465
    @JAYZ-47465 19 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

    Although the fanfic is pretty torturous, I can’t help but find it so fascinating and almost cool on HOW MUCH DEDICATION the guy put into this fanfic for it to be this long. How the hell does he not have writer’s block???

  • @andersonkomori5776
    @andersonkomori5776 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +31

    The majority of the chapters is just actual scripts from the episode but just inserted himself in it if you look closely

    • @PerfectionReincatnated
      @PerfectionReincatnated 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      Yeah the first one is chapter 5: The butterfly effect, seen in this video.

  • @CounterUnit
    @CounterUnit 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +77

    “Holy shit this is hot garbage but I can’t stop listening to it” ahh video

  • @CAT-2323
    @CAT-2323 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +34

    Special interests are no joke man

  • @Numbuh900
    @Numbuh900 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +62

    I won't lie. This writer has determination and is focused on his fanfic to have it be this long. I really tend to slack off with my own stories, but it's mostly because of writers block.

    • @okjeffy6581
      @okjeffy6581 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      Why does that look like Fred Fredburger dressed up as Johnny Test.

    • @CAT-2323
      @CAT-2323 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      So real. I got so much to write but it feels like my brain is a rock sometimes.

    • @Numbuh900
      @Numbuh900 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@CAT-2323 I know, right?

    • @ERRORDownBad
      @ERRORDownBad 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      ​@@okjeffy6581That's because it is

    • @destroyerofyorks
      @destroyerofyorks หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      To be fair, that's probably because you try on your stories. I've skimmed through some of the chapters and a good majority of it is literally just copy and pasted writing from wiki pages or earlier chapters. Not to mention just long, complex descriptions of the characters appearance or design. I mean, the author's dedication is certainly admirable, but it's not like like the chapters are incredibly high effort, either...

  • @lother1111
    @lother1111 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +24

    You know that feeling when you don't want to do anything so you just mindlessly scroll on your phone? That's what it feels like listening to this fanfic. The worst part? I don't even have to be paying attention to the screen, I could be doing other stuff while listening but I felt too zoned out to focus on anything. May the moss overtake me

  • @floralpikmin99
    @floralpikmin99 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    This fic is so fascinating to me. The first handful of chapters are basically ripped scripts from actual episodes, and then it starts going off the rails. Even though "The Loud House Revamped" is 'complete' there's a second part that is updated almost daily. It's insane.
    Once you get past the rewritten episodes it does start to get really repetitive.
    Chapter 20 is the first crossover and deviation from actual episodes. I believe you can tell what's an altered episode and what's a unique chapter based on bolded character names. He copied a fan script someone made from official episodes and reworked them into his fic. Unique dialogue is unbolded.
    Every single character talks the exact same way once you get deeper in. More and more characters stick around. And once you get REALLY deep in you get walls of text explaining characters (Which seem to ripped straight from wikis) and massive paragraphs repetitively describing power-ups or transformations.
    Props to you if you stick with this project. I know I'll be watching.

  • @diegodankquixote-wry3242
    @diegodankquixote-wry3242 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

    I can't wait to the part were peter griffin enters the story.

  • @autism-chan2517
    @autism-chan2517 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    I feel like this story's biggest sin, isn't how long it is, but more how dull and boring it is. Reading a single chapter just makes me want to fall asleep.

    • @Cubeytheawesome
      @Cubeytheawesome หลายเดือนก่อน

      As someone who read this out of sheer boredom, yeah, it’s hard finding some of the stuff that stands out.
      You just have to go through them in order, by skimming them at a moderate pace.

  • @holeofdarn
    @holeofdarn 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    I’m so glad that J.D., Jeez Duts is saving the Loud family 🙏

  • @Adrian-hs4gi
    @Adrian-hs4gi หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    We need Lincoln lard in this story

  • @estelar0067
    @estelar0067 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +20

    Watching your last video about it yesterday actually made me look it up and read some of it. I mostly just read the chapter titles I think I got up until around chapter 1700 before I got tired. Only chapter I actually read was the one where Riley from inside out was in the title because inside out was in my mind. Most of the chapter was just the loud sisters showing off their powers to Riley the inside out characters barely did anything lmao.

    • @Jesse_Productions09
      @Jesse_Productions09 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Inside out is probably the only best chapter problem is, the chapter lets Riley STAY in minnesota and that defeats the purpose of the movie

    • @Jesse_Productions09
      @Jesse_Productions09 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I made a error while typing but you get what I mean

    • @okjeffy6581
      @okjeffy6581 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Random, but there is a goanimate video where Caillou, is married to Leni. And nobody questions a thing. Everyone plays along with it.

  • @idonthaveanideabutilikecolor
    @idonthaveanideabutilikecolor 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Great way to start my morning

  • @HarleQuill
    @HarleQuill 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +52

    Fun fact: The loud house Revamped is at the time of writing about 16.7 mil words long (16,777,215 to be exact)
    For reference, Homestuck, a story infamous for being extremely long an convoluted, is only 1.2 mil (by most estimates)
    The loud house revamped is longer than Homestuck fourteen times over.
    Just food for thought. ::::>

    • @armoredsquirrel
      @armoredsquirrel 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      And 16 mil is actually the limit of words a computer can have

    • @LavenderTea-lr3hc
      @LavenderTea-lr3hc 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      it's actually not 16mil that's a bug with the website's word counter, it's way longer

    • @Delbert.mp2
      @Delbert.mp2 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@LavenderTea-lr3hc apparently the number is over 30 million.

  • @randolfducanes1028
    @randolfducanes1028 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +13

    I'm finna revamped on my loud house til i loud house revamped

  • @Mow2012-Shmdiddy
    @Mow2012-Shmdiddy 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

    this fanfic gives me nightmares at night

    • @Mow2012-Shmdiddy
      @Mow2012-Shmdiddy 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @BalloraXBabyUwU fr tho

  • @inserthahafunniusername9656
    @inserthahafunniusername9656 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    I love how much you hate jd 😭💀

  • @Goobient
    @Goobient 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +19

    The Loud House: Revamped is really a revamped [The Loud House: Revamped] of The Loud House: Revamped and The Loud House: Revamped is very The Loud House: Revamped theas...The Loud House: Revamped. [im slowly going insaneastujioat]

  • @MACHOLOR
    @MACHOLOR 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    33:55 we learn something new every day. Better Business Bureau is actually real. It's really important here.

    • @gregonmyheffley
      @gregonmyheffley  2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      @@MACHOLOR ohh my bad i just thought it was another thing he made up 😭

    • @MACHOLOR
      @MACHOLOR 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@gregonmyheffley that's actually really believable 😭😭

  • @karastears
    @karastears 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +18

    This fanfic makes my tummy churn ☹️😞

  • @lackybracky8414
    @lackybracky8414 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    the fic's average word count per chapter is 7206. it takes a while to type 7 thousand words, jesus christ

  • @okjeffy6581
    @okjeffy6581 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Glad people are making videos about this topic.

  • @GothieStarSuki
    @GothieStarSuki 5 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Fun Fact: It's not dedication- he copy and pasted it all. Just added his OC's

  • @Cubeytheawesome
    @Cubeytheawesome 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I just read the newest chapter in the sequel (yes there is a sequel), and they fucking had Sam & Max in it.

  • @indigoguy12
    @indigoguy12 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Not so funfact: idk if you already know but a lot of the chapters are just regular episodes of the show but with that cringey OC and Laney shoved in there

  • @ronispadez
    @ronispadez 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    I literally just finished watching the last one 😭

  • @rabbitpunk_
    @rabbitpunk_ 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    he's so alpha

  • @undisclosedidentity9893
    @undisclosedidentity9893 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    How TF is this longer than the bible??

    • @Delbert.mp2
      @Delbert.mp2 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      blud just has a shite ton of freetime
      plus some parts are pasted from what i have heard

  • @nickgadson266
    @nickgadson266 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Even Chris Savino is aware that this fanfic exists 😂

  • @JorArg-c7s
    @JorArg-c7s 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    hey man some chapters are just scripts of the lh episodes so you can skip those

    • @gregonmyheffley
      @gregonmyheffley  2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      i can maybe try, problem is ive never watched the show so i cant really tell which ones are episodes and which ones arent 😭

  • @KairiMorin
    @KairiMorin 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Give this video more likes. They need something in return for the lost brain cells!

  • @Zacharyboy08
    @Zacharyboy08 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Goddamn, we're still covering this shit? I didn't see the last video, so I thought you read the whole thing in that one.

    • @gregonmyheffley
      @gregonmyheffley  2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@Zacharyboy08 nope, it’s gonna take about 2000 parts or something 😭😭😭

    • @Zacharyboy08
      @Zacharyboy08 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @gregonmyheffley Goddamn! I'll be 23 years old by the time the last video was uploaded and I'll probably be on my fifth album by then!

    • @LavenderTea-lr3hc
      @LavenderTea-lr3hc 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      THE FACT YOU THOUGH IT WAS THAT SHORT

  • @user-saraswatidevi
    @user-saraswatidevi 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Where is part 3 i love this series

  • @Black072YT72
    @Black072YT72 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Its atleast one of the better ones

  • @Jakepearl13
    @Jakepearl13 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This would power word kill a Victorian child

  • @BizzareDudelol
    @BizzareDudelol 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    It's called a tilde 13:56 , and it isn't always weird, it could just mean a slight tone change or nasialization.(You could already know this and I'm just being dumb, good video to listen to though.)

  • @thy_enigmus
    @thy_enigmus 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Yoooo congrats for 1K!

  • @crimson77productions
    @crimson77productions 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Thank you for doing god's work! Btw, do you have Discord?

    • @gregonmyheffley
      @gregonmyheffley  2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@crimson77productions no, sorry :(

    • @crimson77productions
      @crimson77productions 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@gregonmyheffley I think you should make one.