Don´t get me wrong but Alara is a commander of the enemy forces and is allowed to roam freely on bord of the captains ship? Seriously stop using AI and start using your brain!
This story is confusing. I get that the captain and the alien commander formed a bond and experienced a lot of exciting things together. But, it would've been beneficial to the story if it was described how and when that bond changed her from an adversary to an allie. Also, there's absolutely no mention of how far or what character their bond developed into.
Ok Ai…….. pay attention to comments. Please learn and adjust your program to make the stories coherent,with less messups in the stories like the mistakes caught.
Nice story of connection, but a seriously far fetched premise. 😜👌
Don´t get me wrong but Alara is a commander of the enemy forces and is allowed to roam freely on bord of the captains ship? Seriously stop using AI and start using your brain!
Or look at the AI draft and correct the weak parts before generate the final story.
This story is confusing. I get that the captain and the alien commander formed a bond and experienced a lot of exciting things together. But, it would've been beneficial to the story if it was described how and when that bond changed her from an adversary to an allie. Also, there's absolutely no mention of how far or what character their bond developed into.
Someone looking to rescue her; she should be doing everything possible to disabled her captors ship.
Ok Ai…….. pay attention to comments. Please learn and adjust your program to make the stories coherent,with less messups in the stories like the mistakes caught.