And apparently got wasted and left a baby in an unchanged diaper for the weekend... But "didn't mean no harm" wtf yea try that line with family court...
Just trying to scare him, but they were willing to smash his wrist, his ankle, and his fingers in the trunk while he screamed hysterically in the trunk?... I don't know. Sounds pretty depraved from the start.
Yea reminds me of those type of bullies who spends their entire youth tormenting others and then grows up to live a normal life and then look back at it like it was normal and nothing bad ever came of it. Psychologically its insane all the strategies your brain can come up with to shield you from the consequences of your actions
Everyone in this story sucks and I only feel pity for the ones that had nothing to do with it in the first place. There comes a point when the suffering you cause outweighs what was done unto you, and just about every "protagonist" in this story has already danced over that line.
The character Michael doesn't want pity and he's not really doing this for revenge. He's doing it just because it makes him happy. He killed his sister just to get Andy. He convinced the main character to not kill himself so he can keep giving him more playthings.
Main character: literally bullies a kid all his life and eventually demolishes him, shoving him into the trunk of his car "I didn't mean no harm." Yeah, you keep telling yourself that. Lol
If this title was like the rest: "A few years ago i had a claustrophobic friend who we picked on and now I must give him what he wants. What he wants will haunt me forever, and here's why..."
When the mc was saying I did this I didn't mean no harm, when I did that I didn't mean no harm, etc was how it was showing time pass. It wasn't coming out and saying hey 3 years passed. Idk the technical name of it but it's a way to show something without directly saying it. Then it did say weeks had gone by after he put Dave in the car motor. You don't have to just say time went by in a story to show that it has. It's actually good writing to not have to for the reader to know it has.
@@christyfielding7498 I think it would have worked better if you were reading it in a written format. A lot gets lost in translation sometimes during narrations. Like there could have been a specific bolded word or paragraph spacing that indicates the passage of time, but you can’t really see that if someone is telling the story to you.
17:46 is where the first time concussion starts in this story. There’s nothing to indicate time has passed. I thought it was still the same night. Had to listen to a few times to figure it out. Great story, but could have been even better with something to indicate times, even when recalling childhood memory. I was not sure which character was having the memory.
@@keonkla Andy had been driven to sacrifice his entire family. Of course they’d begin to follow a crooked line of logic. How on earth would anyone remain logical after committing such an act?
@@keonkla They were drunk and stupid and they roughed him up a little, and forced him into a claustrophobic space. The only reason he died was because of the paranormal circumstances, they were not going to kill him.
Why the fuck are you people so obsessed with the titles of stories clearly written by 15 year olds. The stories themselves are rarely that good, let alone the titles.
It’s kinda hard to believe he didn’t mean any harm when he forced someone into the trunk of a car. When someone is panicking like that they can easily die of affixation due to the cramped space and lack of air. I know this because there was an incident in my hometown of some kids playing hide and seek in an old car lot
Damn, I’m still trying to figure out if it was all in Alex’s head, or real as it can be. Either way that man (Alex) suffered the greatest and his shame will haunt him forever. The strange part is he was the most sorry for what they had done. But I guess that didn’t matter. What REALLY gets me is where the hell did Michael go? How? Do trunks of all cars contain secret wormholes or passages to Narnia? Hmm, looks like I’m gonna have to find out. Definitely an original work, and the author should be proud of this one!
It's sort of like a pseudo-afterlife that you can somehow reach by being in a dark place for a long time. Doesn't make much sense, but it's very creepy.
I love the shadow people stories- those and the religious type ones are my favs. I'm terrified of getting sleep paralysis or seeing demons/shadow people so I don't listen to those ones anymore 😔 they are the ghost peppers of the creepypasta world
Main character: Real life has consequences. Main character: *performs multiple acts of assault that would definently have landed him in "real world" prison.*
Sleep paralysis: Why don’t you listen to these at night? Me:... Me again: Does it really matter? You come whenever you want, day or night. Sleep paralysis: *laughs*
This story is both very good and stupid. I mean...wtf even a dying turtle has more will than this guy. He really had nothing else to give, might as well find a way in that abyss and torture that nerd for eternity.
I know this is this whole point, but this story was EXTREMELY creepy. I love these and I experience varying degrees of unease when I listen to them. But I just kept thinking that this story is *specifically* creepy. Good job (I guess, lol)
So he was eaten or trapped by shadow beings in their realm because he was locked in the trunk? Then he took revenge and killed his own sister brutally when they tried to use her against him never explaining how or why he became what he did.
i dont like the protagonist but we can't forget Michael went out of his way to fuck with them throughout high school, its not like they knew this would happen to him and doing one bad thing to Mickael doesn't equal to the years of shit he did to them
That scene is partially why this story is cemented as one of my all time favs. The paranormal monster-esque aspect is so like, idk, it feels fairly unique compared to many current stories, and the depth of like body horror in a lot of it is really, gah. I just really enjoy this story, lol.
I'm 9 minutes in.... I will feel no pity for these f*kas at the end🤷♀️ Edit: welllllllll.....damnit Michael why'd ya involve some innocent ppl,, 😭 I don't feel bad for the guys🤷♀️
The guy claimed this guy did nothing but harass them so one day they got into an argument and got revenge. The guy brought up their fathers having a shitty one himself. They locked him in a trunk. All parties are wrong and no one deserved what they got since deserving is an opinion not a fact so it shouldn't change disposition. It is odd to see how many people try to measure who is in the wrong.
It’s sucks what they did but in reality people who constantly snitch on people and get pleasure out of getting people in trouble in a controlled environment should never hang around with the people you snitched on cause this is what happens
"I didn't mean no harm" YOU SLAMMED HIS WRISTS, ANKLES, AND FINGERS IN THE TRUNK AS A "PRANK".
The “I didnt mean no harm” line filled me with so much rage and annoyance like you’re not 6 years old anymore you dumb protag
And apparently got wasted and left a baby in an unchanged diaper for the weekend... But "didn't mean no harm" wtf yea try that line with family court...
Just a prank bro XD
@@slaymyface1357 I wish that was what he said instead of I didn't mean no harm.
@@Potatocrime24-7 nah "just a prank bro, y u mad? I just kidnapped you for my sick youtube channel"
Just trying to scare him, but they were willing to smash his wrist, his ankle, and his fingers in the trunk while he screamed hysterically in the trunk?... I don't know. Sounds pretty depraved from the start.
Yea reminds me of those type of bullies who spends their entire youth tormenting others and then grows up to live a normal life and then look back at it like it was normal and nothing bad ever came of it. Psychologically its insane all the strategies your brain can come up with to shield you from the consequences of your actions
@@Simon-ot6yn true but Micheal shouldn’t have said that about their fathers
@@oisinlynch8427 no excuse to break someone's bones and force someone into a damn trunk.
@@dawnmidnightsun2521 I don’t encourage that either I just meant since Micheal was the smart 1 he should have just ignored them
@@oisinlynch8427 yes, ignore the beer bottles thrown at him and the blatant harrassment
Its very hard to find pity for the protagonist
I was with fhe bad guy until he sacrificed his sister like she was nothing. Something about that is worse than the other kills.
@@johnDoe-gv8si I really don't think its him, he's basically ate or absorbed him and is using his likeness and memories to solicit nourishment.
@@johnDoe-gv8si I still think Micheal should have ignored them when they called him names
It’s hard to pity the bad guy as well since he was calling them names as well
@@oisinlynch8427 the guy was scared.
From the title, I thought this was going to be a first-person horror narrative from the perspective of Caillou's parents.
Nice lol
XDDD
(Demon voice sings)
I'm just a kid who's four
Each day I grow some more
I like exploring
I'm Caillou
@@jonah666 I'm one of Horsemen, Four,
Death, Conquest, Famine, War,
Hear those Trumpets Roaring?
I'm Caillou!
@@izarian42yo that actually kinda funny
The main character was such a pushover lol
A weakling who didnt want to be in the same position.
Nah, pushovers actually need to be pushed. This Main character layed down from the beginning.
he’s a bottom
He is a push over but towards the middle it seems like Michael has the power to influence people.
@@skyshaymin8851 *exactly*
Everyone in this story sucks and I only feel pity for the ones that had nothing to do with it in the first place. There comes a point when the suffering you cause outweighs what was done unto you, and just about every "protagonist" in this story has already danced over that line.
The character Michael doesn't want pity and he's not really doing this for revenge. He's doing it just because it makes him happy. He killed his sister just to get Andy. He convinced the main character to not kill himself so he can keep giving him more playthings.
Michael especially sucks and is the worst type of person, but yea it’s not like the protagonists are good people either.
Edit: yea they’re all evil
The only actually good person was the old lady 😭 and even she was take
oh my God hilarious the way he just said
"smoke a little dope,
get a little drunk,
feel each other up"....
Like it was a country song...
Do a little dance, make a little love, get down tonight 🕺🏻
Bars
Don't you just hate it when you bully someone so hard you accidentally create a powerful supernatural entity?!
5 minutes in, I'm too pissed to wanna finish.
I have not finished yet, so @ 2:20 does Foster The People -"Pumped up Kicks" play?
Lol did you finish it? Because it did get better.
" did you chop him up and feed him to his family at the town barbecue? "
Freaking Priceless...
South Park reference
This would make a great movie, with a few touch ups and consistency in the rules it would be a full on masterpieces.
Main character: literally bullies a kid all his life and eventually demolishes him, shoving him into the trunk of his car "I didn't mean no harm." Yeah, you keep telling yourself that. Lol
That was the entire point of that mantra, they were aware that it doesn't mean anything.
Bullied all his life? Nah not true the kid himself was a pos little tattle tale
If this title was like the rest:
"A few years ago i had a claustrophobic friend who we picked on and now I must give him what he wants. What he wants will haunt me forever, and here's why..."
Blech, reddit
creepypasta titles be like:
"i stuffed a kid into a trunk for a prank. Here's why we shouldnt have done it. PART 5/50000000000"
@@creepycassette they accidentally put the subject in the title line
Or its a Dhaar Man Video: "Jocks bully nerd, Immediately regret it...."
It was really hard to keep track what was happening. Time passed without being said.
I agree! Very confusing and hard to follow.
Agreed. Awfully written story with an unlikeable protagonist to boot. Woeful listening.
yeah this one was disjointed
When the mc was saying I did this I didn't mean no harm, when I did that I didn't mean no harm, etc was how it was showing time pass. It wasn't coming out and saying hey 3 years passed. Idk the technical name of it but it's a way to show something without directly saying it. Then it did say weeks had gone by after he put Dave in the car motor. You don't have to just say time went by in a story to show that it has. It's actually good writing to not have to for the reader to know it has.
@@christyfielding7498 I think it would have worked better if you were reading it in a written format. A lot gets lost in translation sometimes during narrations. Like there could have been a specific bolded word or paragraph spacing that indicates the passage of time, but you can’t really see that if someone is telling the story to you.
17:46 is where the first time concussion starts in this story. There’s nothing to indicate time has passed. I thought it was still the same night. Had to listen to a few times to figure it out. Great story, but could have been even better with something to indicate times, even when recalling childhood memory. I was not sure which character was having the memory.
*Alex:* _does a kinda shitty thing_ "I didn't mean no harm."
*Michael:* *"TURURURURURURURU~"*
So he *did* mean harm.
Goodnight guys,imma listen to my bedtime story now ◉‿◉
These are bedtime stories
Literally just woke up and now I'm chilling listening to this ~.~
This story made me so damn mad
same
Its like they think killing somebody is right just because you dislike a guy. Dumb asf
@@keonkla Andy had been driven to sacrifice his entire family. Of course they’d begin to follow a crooked line of logic. How on earth would anyone remain logical after committing such an act?
@@keonkla They were drunk and stupid and they roughed him up a little, and forced him into a claustrophobic space. The only reason he died was because of the paranormal circumstances, they were not going to kill him.
This is how you're supposed to do a creepypasta title short, ominous and foreboding 😏
This is almost an hour long.
@@squeaktheswan2007 I said title not the actual Creepypasta they can be as long as they want 😏
@@bizzyizzy9526 Oh, okay.
Why the fuck are you people so obsessed with the titles of stories clearly written by 15 year olds. The stories themselves are rarely that good, let alone the titles.
@@TheSCPStudio did you come up with that title yourself?
here we go! back to my creepy pasta addiction! haven’t been here in a few months.
Ten minutes in.
Ima say the main character and his friends deserve anything that happens to them.
I don’t think a fake story has ever pissed me off as much as this one has
This guy has no accountability for his actions, he deserves it all
reminds me of IT if georgie was the main villain and was bullied by everyone.
It’s kinda hard to believe he didn’t mean any harm when he forced someone into the trunk of a car. When someone is panicking like that they can easily die of affixation due to the cramped space and lack of air. I know this because there was an incident in my hometown of some kids playing hide and seek in an old car lot
Ugh I hate the fact that people like this actually exist, people that “feel mean today” that get a sick kick out of other peoples misery
Losers on the prowl for a power trip
Wow, that was disgusting... I loved it! Haven't heard a story that good in quite some time, thanks for sharing it Creeps!
Damn, I’m still trying to figure out if it was all in Alex’s head, or real as it can be. Either way that man (Alex) suffered the greatest and his shame will haunt him forever. The strange part is he was the most sorry for what they had done. But I guess that didn’t matter. What REALLY gets me is where the hell did Michael go? How? Do trunks of all cars contain secret wormholes or passages to Narnia? Hmm, looks like I’m gonna have to find out. Definitely an original work, and the author should be proud of this one!
It's sort of like a pseudo-afterlife that you can somehow reach by being in a dark place for a long time. Doesn't make much sense, but it's very creepy.
Late reply but I think it’s something like the backrooms where you just “glitch” into it and can’t get out
Not first,
Not last,
See Creeps,
Click fast.
Nice✔️
Cringe
I love the shadow people stories- those and the religious type ones are my favs. I'm terrified of getting sleep paralysis or seeing demons/shadow people so I don't listen to those ones anymore 😔 they are the ghost peppers of the creepypasta world
How does this not have more views its so good
Main character: Real life has consequences.
Main character: *performs multiple acts of assault that would definently have landed him in "real world" prison.*
Sleep paralysis: Why don’t you listen to these at night?
Me:...
Me again: Does it really matter? You come whenever you want, day or night.
Sleep paralysis: *laughs*
the nobody line is unnecessary for the joke
I agree with ken
Lol
"hanging around outside a school, waiting for my girlfriend to get out" nope, no thank you, that's the horror right there
What if she's a teacher?
"Give him what he wants"
Me: Ok this title sounds a bit-
rapy
@@samsom4122 haha I was gonna write the same response... honestly glad you beat me to it.
@@samsom4122 rapey*
Sus
*@ @*
*# ~ #*
This story is both very good and stupid. I mean...wtf even a dying turtle has more will than this guy. He really had nothing else to give, might as well find a way in that abyss and torture that nerd for eternity.
But Mike
There is another option
To live between the abyss and reality. That's what us insomniacs do :)
The name looks amazing excited to watch this
The protagonist of this story is such a horrible person it made this story so aggravating
Yup I agree
I know this is this whole point, but this story was EXTREMELY creepy. I love these and I experience varying degrees of unease when I listen to them. But I just kept thinking that this story is *specifically* creepy. Good job (I guess, lol)
Just like the number one rule of Showbiz always give the audience what they want 🤔
And CreepyMcPasta always delivers!👍❤
@88 88 I was just making an analyzation of the title itself not of the Creepypasta 🤨
More like the "executive producer" amirite
"public lice"
Hard to follow...but fairly worthwhile listening to.
Kinda gives a Steven King kind of vibe
Roses are red
The pasta is creepy
Good ol CreepsMcPasta
Keeps me from getting sleepy
41 minutes? Wow, thanks.
Am I the only one who heard the opening piano chord and expected to hear the rest of I Will Survive play after it? Yeah, probably just me
This one just annoyed me, the shit repetition, the unlikeable characters and no reason to care
Thank you Creeps ❤️
When he hit the homeless dude I instantly hated him
I was not expecting the thing with the sister. I know what it is but I'm afraid to say it...
What is it? I'm curious as to how and why she knew what Micheal had been up to.
Can you say it? What is it?
I kinda didn't get why Micheal killed his sister. She had already known what Micheal was doing so had he been haunting her too?
Thank you for new pasta!
And he wants Taco Bell CrunchWrap Supreme ™
And I want bread with dark chocolate...
First thought at seeing the title was, "return the slab, or suffer my curse."
The perfect title for childish dirty jokes
Try showering in the candlelight to these stories. I dare u
Don't publically call me out on my practices
Interesting.
That sounds freaking horrifying
I must try it!
Such a creepy story, good karma lesson though 😳😳😳
He’s gonna have to take it😡
2021 was the year of creepypastas, god DAMN 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯👏🏿
Lmao am I supposed to feel bad for the protagonist??
This one was darkkkkkk 😈
Great story!
why? what would that leave me with?
hell implies there's an option is bloody powerful
This guy should give his son whatever he wants
LOL ily omg
So he was eaten or trapped by shadow beings in their realm because he was locked in the trunk? Then he took revenge and killed his own sister brutally when they tried to use her against him never explaining how or why he became what he did.
Agreed that’s fucked up
i dont like the protagonist but we can't forget Michael went out of his way to fuck with them throughout high school, its not like they knew this would happen to him and doing one bad thing to Mickael doesn't equal to the years of shit he did to them
This is one of the best I have heard and I've listened to 100s. I listen every night to fall asleep. So creepy
Wow...
This was absolutely incredible...
Holy shit.
So how did Michael escape from the car? How in the world did he get from there to the “shadows”?
imagining a man getting sucked inside of a can is horrifying
Fr. It seems like a steven king story
That scene is partially why this story is cemented as one of my all time favs. The paranormal monster-esque aspect is so like, idk, it feels fairly unique compared to many current stories, and the depth of like body horror in a lot of it is really, gah. I just really enjoy this story, lol.
These are oddly horrifyingly specific details 😅👌
"didn't mean no harm" ..so he DID mean harm. That shit has always irked me, lol
I LOVE U CREEPS! PLZ WRITE ANOTHER ASBERGO MAN! OR WOMAN THAT WOULD BE SUPER SCARY TOO!
Monster: Give me whut I want
Deadpool: A girl?
This is my favorite creepypasta.
Reminds me of a nightmare I had as a kid. This is thinking outside the can.
Pff. Fantastic wording.
This is what happened when hurt kids, deal with other hurt kids that handled their pain differently. Fuckin awful that this stuff happens.
Its like 6.20am but did i just hear public lice at 14:20
Loved the vid dude
Did michaels sister get killed in the end. I was confused about what happened after the hand came out
Pretty sure she did. She had a cavity in her chest and looked like a crushed statue.
Wasn't able to finish it about what happened
"public lice" made me laugh.
That poor drifter
I'm 9 minutes in.... I will feel no pity for these f*kas at the end🤷♀️
Edit: welllllllll.....damnit Michael why'd ya involve some innocent ppl,, 😭 I don't feel bad for the guys🤷♀️
Dude u deserve so more subscribers 😭
The guy claimed this guy did nothing but harass them so one day they got into an argument and got revenge.
The guy brought up their fathers having a shitty one himself.
They locked him in a trunk.
All parties are wrong and no one deserved what they got since deserving is an opinion not a fact so it shouldn't change disposition.
It is odd to see how many people try to measure who is in the wrong.
Is nobody gonna acknowledge this is absolutely horrifying?
when you give a freak a cookie...
Wow. What a story...That ending
I'm such a vengeful person if I were in Michael's shoes I'd probably turn into an entity too and ruin those bullies lives
I've never heard a MC who deserved what he got more.
I have not finished yet, so @ 2:20 does Foster The People -"Pumped up Kicks" play?
The title of this story is what i demand from those who have what I want.
It’s sucks what they did but in reality people who constantly snitch on people and get pleasure out of getting people in trouble in a controlled environment should never hang around with the people you snitched on cause this is what happens
Fantastic story.
I don't feel bad. The whole time I'm rooting for Alex to get his!
Wow, that was surprisingly Lovecraftian.
About 10 minutes in and all I have to say is karma.
Never have I ever wished death upon a MC so fast in my life..