I am honestly just astounded at this being 11 and a half hours long from chapter 1 to 25, I didn't think its was THAT long of a story. Still, worth every second
Thanks for sharing . I agree , Sci -Fi without all the technojargon, but just enough, very refreshing and entertaining. I can't remember a well more engaging, paid for, broadcast!! Thank you so much. SciFiStories! 💓 💗 💛
Because they only reward each other. If you aren't in their click, you don't exist. That's why their creativity has become completely bankrupt. Now they are doomed to doing remakes and producing woke garbage.
Remakes and sequels are low risk. The material is already known to be liked, so there's a built-in audience. That's why they feel safe blowing hundreds of millions of dollars on each show/movie. New material means risk, people may or may not like it, and the big studios have grown too fat and risk averse to try that.
As a tech engineer I can appreciate the technician being a tad pissed off about the ship being wrecked after the days of work on it and then having to rebuild it
Ignorance is bliss as they say. If the tech had realized that it was because of Wyatt's actions that he was still alive it might have made him change his tune... naw, knowing techs he would still be pissed.
Honestly, i believe i heard "head tilt" "smirk" "chuckle" and a few other words more in this video, than in my entire life. That said, this is probably one of the best stories i came across so far on these channels. And i kinda want another 100 hours of it, at least.
Noble commoner noble commoner noble commoner noble commoner.... You can say what you want about the author but you cant say he does not like his nobles and commoners
This is MAGNIFICENT book/story. I'm addicted. The Black Ship is a must listen to if you are a Syfy fan. The characters are well developed. I'm not exaggerating when I say I have listen to this story at 10 times. I had rather relisten to this story than watch TV.
I found this story 2 months ago and binged everything you had... Then waited for each episode to come out... I've actually never done that with a TH-cam story before. Hopefully we get to see more of Wyatt soon!
for this type of story its very good. you might look for murderbot diaries or red rising - read by sonny burton. or the weekly stories by p.e. rowe to name 3. there are many others too, but there is a lot of crap out there too. btw pe rowe puts out a story every thursday. or a chapter in an on going stpry. he writes it. reads it ,and even makes his own thumbnails. give him a shot 1st. amazing guy. also teaches writing.
idk - The sonny burton version is the better one i think, But. id give it a rest try it again sometime later. That can make a difference. Other good YTubers are Gerald Kilby, Craig A Falconer, LARS, Lyssa Dream and the Sentience Wars saga on Aeon 14 channel. Also ASN - agro squirrel narrates. with his non stop scifi radio. and other stories. and others. Also DUST - for some good low budget videos. There is a lot of good stuff, but eventually the really good stuff will dry up unfortunately. Some gets removed too.
It's being written, and each chapter released in the book two playlist: The Black Ship - Book two: th-cam.com/play/PLkBGMBYRr0mFZxigTYVNAA9MtfSH4o8Ox.html Enjoy...
After listening to the first 15 minutes of this story, I immediately went to Audible and searched for it. I was disappointed to not find it there. I'd happily pay for a downloadable copy.
Sometimes when I find a really good story on YT I use a program called 'free you tube downloader.' It's simple, and easy to choose MP3 as the desired output file. But it doesn't divide it into chapters, unfortunately.
After making a kofi donation or giving a YT Channel Subscription to the author,... There are allegedly a few good online convertors for 320 Kbps Mp3's, that are reasonably safe to use (infrequently) 'YT video to mp3 online ripper' sites online, plus a few others if you especially have a pop-up blocker,... Ignore the converter sites that just spam alternating DL site pages in a Mobius Loop of spam links, or try to force you to install some sort of app, windows fix or dake page warning. and ignore those which ask for details or membership logins, ..all those ones are definite criminal laundering/phishing scam sites.
This stories plot is so intricate that if I close my eyes, I could believe I was there experiencing it in person. It also brings to the forefront that not one is better than anyone else. Kudos
I have read just about any good SciFi book that I could ever get my hands on for the last 60 years, and this is as good as any of them. Thank you for a brilliantly written work.
This has a proper classic heroes journey story arc, like a mix of Dune, Sharp and Battlestar Galactica! 3hrs in and I am well and truly hooked! This would make an amazing TV show with the budget of the expanse!
This is the fifth time I'm listened to this WONDERFUL STORY from the 1st Chapter to the last! THIS IS A GREAT STORY AND WORTHY OF FAR MORE THAN THIS TH-cam CHANNEL. By the way did anyone know about the pathetic copycat youtube channels of the original Black Ship story? YES, THEY'VE PERVERTED EVEN THE MAIN CHARACTER of Wyatt Staples...disgusting !!!
Congratulations on your accomplishment of writing such a very popular story/. As you know we’re all waiting excitedly for Book Two. Thanks for your continuing work.
Amazing!! Listened to 10 hours straight, with only a handful of 1-5 minute breaks, then listened to the rest the morning after. Thank You for the amazing audio book!!
Finally, a top talent author. Too many “authors” don’t understand the english language. Imagination is only half of what it takes to be an author. Sometimes I wonder if they even graduated to middle school.
Finally an excellent story Love the writing, can relate to Wyatt, when he said I'm not a pessimist I said out loud his next sentence as I heard his next sentence, really nice
I just binged Listened this today, and it literally took me to the end to realize this isn't a book! I was looking for the rest of it and was horribly disappointed, but elated this is someone's content! I the 40k vibe sits there, but it has a bit of a softer appeal instead of brutal grimdark, As much as I love 40k, It's nice to have an apprieve. I imagine that this can be taxing, but I'll echo everyone else's request for Book 2 Plz When, but with the caveat that I'm more than happy to wait for you to write it well, or if they're are delays, I'm sure we'll all understand. TLDR: Great Job bro, Can't wait (But don't rush.)
There is 40k vibes in this story, particularly with the Royal Marines. Back in chapter 13 part 2 when I mentioned Royal Marines gave me Warhammer 40k Space Marines or Adeptus Custodes vibes when talking with EkhidnaWritez. EkhidnaWritez wrote back saying the closest to Tempestus Scions.
ah yes, outsmarting the *"Kobiyashi Maru"* Test and he lived to tell the tail. This is a clear case of *"Too much IQ, not Enough Supervision"* or Thinking outside the box.
I have enjoyed this story, putting what everyone who wants to be in space, a lot of conflict ship battles. I get annoyed by the interpersonal clashes by social class but look at the reality that media pushes now a days. Classic talent and hard-working verses I was born this way and with this family name.
Thank you, SciFi Stories and EkhidnaWritez truely bringing this Awesome story to complete a novel comparable in length to Harry Potter and the Socerer Stone. Keep up the Awesome work SciFi Stories and EkhidnaWritez.
Well thats a first for me listening to entyre book one from beginning to end. That is very rare for me to keep me interest in for anylonger then 20 min this is the best Thank You Hoping for more💥😻💖💖💖
This is a good book. It’s the AI voice that cracks me up. How it changes the voice for the same characters at times. It’s has like an outburst or puts emotion where it doesn’t belong. I mean it’s just funny to listen to. Lol. Sounds like it’s suffering from some sort of mental issues at times. Still the stories worth a listen.
I absolutely love the story and really appreciate the author's advice of warnings of different segments of the story that could be upsetting, thank you all🙏👍💖
Just finished chapter 15, so about half way through what this video contains. I have to say, I think it's brilliantly done. As an HFY, it leans into the space opera genre in a good way. It has real "classic scifi" vibe but doesn't hang onto played out troupes. It reminds me of Gordon Dickson, or even some of Clark's later stuff. This is a series I'll continue to follow.
Awesome story. We'll written and great story line. There are so many directions this story could go, I'm looking forward to more chapters and books. Thanks.
When I started listening to this story, I wasn't sure if it get passed 20 minutes without getting bored but I'm gripped. Great story telling and I commend the author 👏
Sadly since the author posted it on the Internet it's now part of public domain which means he no longer has any publishing rights to it. There are a few promising authors that I really think should publish their work instead of going public domain but to each their own 😓
@@KarterBigs Well the thing that complicates matters more is that neither Scifi Stories or EkhidnaWritez were the original person started to write this story. The original Author wrote this for chapters 1 -4, then lost motivation to continue writing this story. So if they were make it into something more like a book, they would probably need that person's ok, to avoid potential mess court room drama.
@Soundwave119 Honestly makes me curious where the orginal author was going with the story. I mean E has done a stunning job with it but still makes me curious
When the story continues, I'd like an aside with Wyatt approaching Jincho asking him if Jincho and his team could design a special two/three seat fighter/escape craft that would carry Clara, Cynthia and either Wyatt or another pilot to safety in the event of the Noir Navea being boarded. Wyatt's instructions would be to make the fighter the fastest, most heavily armed craft in its class. Jincho would take the instructions as a challenge and immediately go to work with his team. Secretly Wyatt intends to teach both Cynthia and Clara to fly the new escape fighter. While Clara immediately takes to flying the little craft, Cynthia proves less adept at flying. Clara treats the small nimble craft as a personnal gift from Wyatt and Jincho, Her very own fighter which Wyatt names Reaper's Blade.
I've been listening to a lot of really bad sci Fi on TH-cam lately. This isn't one of them. A lot of creativity with the characters and I love the class system and the mingling of the nobles with the serfdom. You've built a great architecture in your storyline, so keep up the good work. Don't get lazy like most authors.
At the 7.5 hr mark and totally hooked. I'm a die hard military space opera fan. Read much of the aeon 14 sagas. This has amazing potential. Very nicely developed. Thank you for the journey!😎🤝
I'm very happy to say that after listening to the 2 latest parts of book 2 I'm starting over for the 3rd time as I wait for more of the story to drop. Brings me back to the early 2000's wait for the latest episodes of dragon ball z
several of those types of mistakes throughout. it was a decent story but the grammar used was that of a young writer, sometimes being hyperbolic when there was no reason to be. several examples of mixing metric and standard measurements with the ships typically being measured in meters but human(oids) in feet/inches.
I'm still howling over retorted, except when it comes up on screen it's definitely a different word. I enjoyed this, but I had to stop for a day because every time I hear or read retort now, it's entirely changed.
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The next chapter of "the Black Ship" can be found here: th-cam.com/video/Xw4mPYl7Mkg/w-d-xo.html
You are a saint and a scholar, thanks
could you up lode some warhammer 40k audeobooks please?
Thanx.
😅@@AncientRylanor69
Many thanks!!
The black ship is the best thing to ever happen on TH-cam, please, please, please, a book two 🙏
Yeah I need book two to have been released yesterday lol
@@michaelmetcalfe639 I agree, best thing I have read/heard in years!
I agree, best thing I have read or heaard in years!
Why is book 2 not out yet!!?
@@davidbresee3642 th-cam.com/video/Xw4mPYl7Mkg/w-d-xo.htmlsi=av2rItu-2PXkw2dp
I am honestly just astounded at this being 11 and a half hours long from chapter 1 to 25, I didn't think its was THAT long of a story. Still, worth every second
i remember listening to 1st drop on day 1, wish i could binge for the first time! very good series.
Thanks for sharing . I agree , Sci -Fi without all the technojargon, but just enough, very refreshing and entertaining. I can't remember a well more engaging, paid for, broadcast!! Thank you so much. SciFiStories! 💓 💗 💛
I've listened to the full book. At least 8 times, as I work on my classic cars.
@@steveb6103 listening to it for the first time while I limp on my classic ankles o0
still not long enough fir me bc of how good it is
One of the better stories that I have listened to on TH-cam
for HFY it is well written. i will complete it soon - but today is Thursday and that Means PE Rowe drops his weekly genius.
Its stories like this that makes me wonder why Hollywood are constantly remaking things instead of searching for new materials.
Because they only reward each other. If you aren't in their click, you don't exist. That's why their creativity has become completely bankrupt. Now they are doomed to doing remakes and producing woke garbage.
They are the nobility in this story
Also, the nobles of hollywood are more interested in the movies they produce as platforms to preach and lecture us commoners.
1984.
Remakes and sequels are low risk. The material is already known to be liked, so there's a built-in audience. That's why they feel safe blowing hundreds of millions of dollars on each show/movie.
New material means risk, people may or may not like it, and the big studios have grown too fat and risk averse to try that.
Fabulous story looking forward to book 2
when does it come out?
As a tech engineer I can appreciate the technician being a tad pissed off about the ship being wrecked after the days of work on it and then having to rebuild it
I completely agree with you I thought that added a very personal touch to the entire book!
It's what every aircraft mechanic wants to say, but never do.
Ignorance is bliss as they say. If the tech had realized that it was because of Wyatt's actions that he was still alive it might have made him change his tune... naw, knowing techs he would still be pissed.
I think anyone with some degree of knowledge and appreciation of it is with you lol
I have trouble with finding good stories labeled HFY, but this one is a genuine gem
Honestly, i believe i heard "head tilt" "smirk" "chuckle" and a few other words more in this video, than in my entire life.
That said, this is probably one of the best stories i came across so far on these channels.
And i kinda want another 100 hours of it, at least.
and the word "palpable" is only used twice well past book 2. I think, "testament" is maybe used once.
Noble commoner noble commoner noble commoner noble commoner.... You can say what you want about the author but you cant say he does not like his nobles and commoners
This is MAGNIFICENT book/story. I'm addicted. The Black Ship is a must listen to if you are a Syfy fan. The characters are well developed. I'm not exaggerating when I say I have listen to this story at 10 times. I had rather relisten to this story than watch TV.
I found this story 2 months ago and binged everything you had... Then waited for each episode to come out... I've actually never done that with a TH-cam story before. Hopefully we get to see more of Wyatt soon!
Same here. It's a good story. And some decent science fiction.
Same Here, same here… beautiful story 👍🏻
for this type of story its very good. you might look for murderbot diaries or red rising - read by sonny burton. or the weekly stories by p.e. rowe to name 3. there are many others too, but there is a lot of crap out there too. btw pe rowe puts out a story every thursday. or a chapter in an on going stpry. he writes it. reads it ,and even makes his own thumbnails. give him a shot 1st. amazing guy. also teaches writing.
@MrIzzyDizzy tried red rising a few times just can't get into it. Don't know why should be exactly what I like
idk - The sonny burton version is the better one i think, But. id give it a rest try it again sometime later. That can make a difference.
Other good YTubers are Gerald Kilby, Craig A Falconer, LARS, Lyssa Dream and the Sentience Wars saga on Aeon 14 channel. Also ASN - agro squirrel narrates. with his non stop scifi radio. and other stories. and others. Also DUST - for some good low budget videos. There is a lot of good stuff, but eventually the really good stuff will dry up unfortunately. Some gets removed too.
Bring on Book 2! Waiting waiting
11 hrs and its only 1 book?
@@jasomkovac9115 11.5 hours and it's worth listening to every minute it's roughly the equivalent of a long novel in length, thus book 1
Yep beauty of a story
What is the title of book 2?
@@pranavdwivedi3962i think its not out yet
This is my 3rd time listening to book 1 and I have to say it gets better every time!
Impressive. I was lost in reality as I was immersed in the story
This should be a TV series, it is simply amazing.
They would ruin it
@@Kowkiller87depends who gets it and how much creative freedom they receive
Dear God please give me book 2.... I was so absorbed into this story that I listen to it in two days.
Please, please please
Give me more
It's being written, and each chapter released in the book two playlist:
The Black Ship - Book two: th-cam.com/play/PLkBGMBYRr0mFZxigTYVNAA9MtfSH4o8Ox.html
Enjoy...
I have read more than 1000 books. This is a great story. I'm not some kind of expert but I do know what I like.
That good sir makes you an expert
The Black Ship is the best content I've found on this channel. Thoroughly enjoying this channel.
2 hours in and it only feels like 30 minutes. Now I have no choice but to binge this. Amazing work!
After listening to the first 15 minutes of this story, I immediately went to Audible and searched for it. I was disappointed to not find it there. I'd happily pay for a downloadable copy.
Sometimes when I find a really good story on YT I use a program called 'free you tube downloader.' It's simple, and easy to choose MP3 as the desired output file. But it doesn't divide it into chapters, unfortunately.
Same
After making a kofi donation or giving a YT Channel Subscription to the author,...
There are allegedly a few good online convertors for 320 Kbps Mp3's, that are reasonably safe to use (infrequently) 'YT video to mp3 online ripper' sites online, plus a few others if you especially have a pop-up blocker,...
Ignore the converter sites that just spam alternating DL site pages in a Mobius Loop of spam links, or try to force you to install some sort of app, windows fix or dake page warning.
and
ignore those which ask for details or membership logins,
..all those ones are definite criminal laundering/phishing scam sites.
Not me! I want a hard copy. First addition and signed!
I want to know the author
Back to rewatch this for the 4th time while I wait for the next episode
This stories plot is so intricate that if I close my eyes, I could believe I was there experiencing it in person. It also brings to the forefront that not one is better than anyone else. Kudos
I have read just about any good SciFi book that I could ever get my hands on for the last 60 years, and this is as good as any of them. Thank you for a brilliantly written work.
I found this story on reddit and followed it here when it ended there. Great story, I can't wait to see what happens in Book 2.
This needs to be a movie
I Say series. Movie will cut out alot.
Series for sure or a mini movie series
A cartoon or aime series
@@SurenderGAthis would be a great anime
I enjoyed it and look forward to the next Blackship next book(s).
New chapters are being written and released in this playlist:
The Black Ship - Book two: th-cam.com/play/PLkBGMBYRr0mFZxigTYVNAA9MtfSH4o8Ox.html
The characters in this book are brilliantly written. It's a joy to watch their story unfold.
A surprising lack of aliens for this channel, but this book was still an absolute banger. Eagerly anticipating further continuations
This has a proper classic heroes journey story arc, like a mix of Dune, Sharp and Battlestar Galactica! 3hrs in and I am well and truly hooked! This would make an amazing TV show with the budget of the expanse!
This is hands down one of the best, if not the best HFY books I’ve listened too. Definitely will need Book Two immediately!!!!!
What a great book. Thank you so much.
Wow! Excellent narration from one person, you sir kept me focused on the story from start to finish.
This has easily become my favorite story on TH-cam. I wait in great anticipation for each chapter. Keep the story coming.
Great writing! Awesome characters, amazing plot!
Looking forward for the sequel!
This is the fifth time I'm listened to this WONDERFUL STORY from the 1st Chapter to the last! THIS IS A GREAT STORY AND WORTHY OF FAR MORE THAN THIS TH-cam CHANNEL. By the way did anyone know about the pathetic copycat youtube channels of the original Black Ship story? YES, THEY'VE PERVERTED EVEN THE MAIN CHARACTER of Wyatt Staples...disgusting !!!
58 yrs old and this is my third time starting over.
I really like the narrator. It makes it believable and fun. And it actually pronounced words properly.
This is actually an AI voice from elevenlabs. Brian if I remember correctly.
I was completely immersed in this book.
it does that to everyone who listens!
Congratulations on your accomplishment of writing such a very popular story/. As you know we’re all waiting excitedly for Book Two. Thanks for your continuing work.
Amazing!! Listened to 10 hours straight, with only a handful of 1-5 minute breaks, then listened to the rest the morning after. Thank You for the amazing audio book!!
Finally, a top talent author. Too many “authors” don’t understand the english language. Imagination is only half of what it takes to be an author. Sometimes I wonder if they even graduated to middle school.
I think this ai but idk for sure
Most of the channel content is Ai generated rubbish, this is actually good.
What an AMAZING STORY!!!!! I've just started and am HOOKED!!!!!!
Finally an excellent story
Love the writing, can relate to Wyatt, when he said I'm not a pessimist I said out loud his next sentence as I heard his next sentence, really nice
I just binged Listened this today, and it literally took me to the end to realize this isn't a book! I was looking for the rest of it and was horribly disappointed, but elated this is someone's content! I the 40k vibe sits there, but it has a bit of a softer appeal instead of brutal grimdark, As much as I love 40k, It's nice to have an apprieve. I imagine that this can be taxing, but I'll echo everyone else's request for Book 2 Plz When, but with the caveat that I'm more than happy to wait for you to write it well, or if they're are delays, I'm sure we'll all understand.
TLDR: Great Job bro, Can't wait (But don't rush.)
There is 40k vibes in this story, particularly with the Royal Marines. Back in chapter 13 part 2 when I mentioned Royal Marines gave me Warhammer 40k Space Marines or Adeptus Custodes vibes when talking with EkhidnaWritez. EkhidnaWritez wrote back saying the closest to Tempestus Scions.
Awesome book, really hope there's a continuing sequel.
Thanks for putting this togather! Looking forward to the next book!
I truly enjoyed this.
Combination of Very well written story and Good storytelling Ai..
Thank You...
actually one of the best things I've ever seen or read
Ok this is way better than I expected, I'm hooked, obsessed and I'm so happy. Thank you
ah yes, outsmarting the *"Kobiyashi Maru"* Test and he lived to tell the tail. This is a clear case of *"Too much IQ, not Enough Supervision"* or Thinking outside the box.
Thanks
Thanks, Gary! Much appreciated.
Outstanding read. Keeps your attention, basic story interesting and keeps you wanting more.
I have enjoyed this story, putting what everyone who wants to be in space, a lot of conflict ship battles. I get annoyed by the interpersonal clashes by social class but look at the reality that media pushes now a days. Classic talent and hard-working verses I was born this way and with this family name.
Thank you, SciFi Stories and EkhidnaWritez truely bringing this Awesome story to complete a novel comparable in length to Harry Potter and the Socerer Stone. Keep up the Awesome work SciFi Stories and EkhidnaWritez.
This is by far the best story I've ever listened to on TH-cam. Hopefully book 2 won't be too far away 🤞🤞🤞
Thanks Ekhidna for writing this story! I love binging on it and always look forward to what come next!
Well thats a first for me listening to entyre book one from beginning to end. That is very rare for me to keep me interest in for anylonger then 20 min this is the best Thank You Hoping for more💥😻💖💖💖
This is a good book. It’s the AI voice that cracks me up. How it changes the voice for the same characters at times. It’s has like an outburst or puts emotion where it doesn’t belong. I mean it’s just funny to listen to. Lol. Sounds like it’s suffering from some sort of mental issues at times. Still the stories worth a listen.
Loving this story. Very well written.
I absolutely love the story and really appreciate the author's advice of warnings of different segments of the story that could be upsetting, thank you all🙏👍💖
Can't wait for book 2 to start
Just finished chapter 15, so about half way through what this video contains. I have to say, I think it's brilliantly done. As an HFY, it leans into the space opera genre in a good way. It has real "classic scifi" vibe but doesn't hang onto played out troupes. It reminds me of Gordon Dickson, or even some of Clark's later stuff. This is a series I'll continue to follow.
The author really should publish this in book format! Such an incredible piece of work!
Awesome story. We'll written and great story line. There are so many directions this story could go, I'm looking forward to more chapters and books. Thanks.
LOVE IT! Hope for more! Thank you so much!!❤🎉
When I started listening to this story, I wasn't sure if it get passed 20 minutes without getting bored but I'm gripped. Great story telling and I commend the author 👏
I listened this all day at work and now I'm up till 12:45 am finishing book one. I can't wait till book 2 this is such a good story!!!
This should really be a book one can buy.
Sadly since the author posted it on the Internet it's now part of public domain which means he no longer has any publishing rights to it. There are a few promising authors that I really think should publish their work instead of going public domain but to each their own 😓
@@KarterBigs Well the thing that complicates matters more is that neither Scifi Stories or EkhidnaWritez were the original person started to write this story. The original Author wrote this for chapters 1 -4, then lost motivation to continue writing this story. So if they were make it into something more like a book, they would probably need that person's ok, to avoid potential mess court room drama.
@Soundwave119 Honestly makes me curious where the orginal author was going with the story. I mean E has done a stunning job with it but still makes me curious
@@Soundwave119 i did not know that. Huh. Makes sense, in that case.
An excellent story. I hope there is a book 2 in the works.
It's being written as we speak! Here is the playlist: The Black Ship - Book two: th-cam.com/play/PLkBGMBYRr0mFZxigTYVNAA9MtfSH4o8Ox.html
I listened for the whole video all 11 and a half hour and all I can say is damn I want to hear book 2! That was good.
Many chapters of book two are available on my channel if you haven't found them yet. Up to chapter 41 so far...
This is so well done. First time I've ever listened to an audio book for hours on end. Found my new favorite channel.
This is an excellent story!!! Very good storytelling.
I work 14 hour shifts. This story is fantastic!
This is the best story I have ever found. I am hooked. Definitely going to follow it to the end.
Thanks!
Thank you very much, Sheldon!
All I can say is WOW AWESOME, very well written. Thanks you for sharing. This story with us.
03:00:00 · What power is forcing the Duke's hand?
If known as level-headed, the Duke must be a pawn of this new/old foe.
I've stumbled across this and am loving it. The author of this book ravels those big name authors.
When the story continues, I'd like an aside with Wyatt approaching Jincho asking him if Jincho and his team could design a special two/three seat fighter/escape craft that would carry Clara, Cynthia and either Wyatt or another pilot to safety in the event of the Noir Navea being boarded. Wyatt's instructions would be to make the fighter the fastest, most heavily armed craft in its class. Jincho would take the instructions as a challenge and immediately go to work with his team. Secretly Wyatt intends to teach both Cynthia and Clara to fly the new escape fighter. While Clara immediately takes to flying the little craft, Cynthia proves less adept at flying. Clara treats the small nimble craft as a personnal gift from Wyatt and Jincho, Her very own fighter which Wyatt names Reaper's Blade.
This story is so good I’m watching this again from the start so more chapters come out. 5 stars
This story actually fits a time in history in a different sci-fi story it's cool how it comes to together even though they're completely different
2 hrs into it and wow, not 1 dull moment. This is a masterpiece
I've been listening to a lot of really bad sci Fi on TH-cam lately. This isn't one of them. A lot of creativity with the characters and I love the class system and the mingling of the nobles with the serfdom. You've built a great architecture in your storyline, so keep up the good work. Don't get lazy like most authors.
I'm 1/4 in and very much enjoying it. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Oh my gosh! I am already 3hrs in and it felt like mins, fantastic story!
At the 7.5 hr mark and totally hooked. I'm a die hard military space opera fan. Read much of the aeon 14 sagas. This has amazing potential. Very nicely developed. Thank you for the journey!😎🤝
I followed this from the posting of the 5th, or 6th story. Glad to see it all in one spot. A good tale to be sure. Thank you for sharing your work.
I'm very happy to say that after listening to the 2 latest parts of book 2 I'm starting over for the 3rd time as I wait for more of the story to drop. Brings me back to the early 2000's wait for the latest episodes of dragon ball z
Fantastic story and excellent narrator!
Loved it, thanks!
Thanks, Mic!
I’m a dedicated fan. Looking forward to book two
What is the title of book 2?
“Standing at an imposing height of 6ft 12in” LOL
several of those types of mistakes throughout. it was a decent story but the grammar used was that of a young writer, sometimes being hyperbolic when there was no reason to be. several examples of mixing metric and standard measurements with the ships typically being measured in meters but human(oids) in feet/inches.
Possibly a British author. We mix them regularly @@ChuckHickl
I'm still howling over retorted, except when it comes up on screen it's definitely a different word.
I enjoyed this, but I had to stop for a day because every time I hear or read retort now, it's entirely changed.
It was written by an AI@@ChuckHickl
@@domsterish I figured that was why it was better than what we usually get from amateur writers.
Started this last night the story so far is awesome got to catch all the new chapters
Great story 💖
Loved the Rise of the Guardians reference ❤
Thank you for not adding the 18+ chapter. Dread was rising as soon as the flashback began.
Honestly the best story, looking forward to more.
This is better than television. Why am I just now finding this channel?
Treats are all he needed to give his life for the prince 😂😂😂
This is the second time listening to this great story and enjoyable as it was the first time. And time well spent it is. I am glad to hear it again.
I am on my fourth time. After listening to other stories and run out of the ones I listen to I come back to this one.
Very few errors, great TTS. Great story too.
Awesome story, It would be even better with voice actors