I think this essay should focus on the type of the information that is mentioned on the task, not only whether these information is freely sharing or not. Ex: Sharing scientific information can promote the development of a whole country, so it worth spreading the knowledge. However, in bussiness, strategies or plans of a company should not be spoiled freely, as it can due to a loss of benefits on its economy and losing the advantages against the competitor's one.( Sorry for any errors in gramma or words, I just want inform the idea about this essay)
I think this essay should focus on the type of the information that is mentioned on the task, not only whether these information is freely sharing or not. Ex: Sharing scientific information can promote the development of a whole country, so it worth spreading the knowledge. However, in bussiness, strategies or plans of a company should not be spoiled freely, as it can due to a loss of benefits on its economy and losing the advantages against the competitor's one.( Sorry for any errors in gramma or words, I just want inform the idea about this essay)
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