Nice story. However, one cannot roll a floating lift chair. How can someone in a lift chair lean against the wall? Just a critique to pay attention to your own story; which I hope there is a part two. So many of these end with the prospect of the next conflict, but there’s never a follow up story.
Wait... who is the counsel?? Why is the father sending men to find her? He threw her away after cutting off her legs....
Nice story. However, one cannot roll a floating lift chair.
How can someone in a lift chair lean against the wall?
Just a critique to pay attention to your own story; which I hope there is a part two. So many of these end with the prospect of the next conflict, but there’s never a follow up story.
Make these audio’s with a female voice please