This is a story I could get into as it is very James Bond meets the Expendables. A 1980’s Arnold Schwarzenegger - Conan the Barbarian where the female thief was his partner and shared a purpose that went beyond gathering wealth. No mention of the word quantum. No alien cross breeding with accelerated pregnancy producing a demi-god child. Just a wonderful story that could continue with them dismantling the Kore and Syndicate.
I like story well enough but I found myself easily distracted, when I would've or should've been listening, due to the lack of any real romance. The alien gal on the cover slide doesn't really match description of her in the story. May be if we(and by 'we', I mean, 'you' were to add a cosmetic surgery to the story. A gift from him too her. Allowing to be the way she always dreamed of being, not what everyone else thought she should be. I have to believe cosmetic surgery has to have come very long way by this point of the story. )Vanity is a very real thing amidst most societies.
Truly an enjoyable story. Thank You!
Super👌👌👌
This is a story I could get into as it is very James Bond meets the Expendables. A 1980’s Arnold Schwarzenegger - Conan the Barbarian where the female thief was his partner and shared a purpose that went beyond gathering wealth.
No mention of the word quantum. No alien cross breeding with accelerated pregnancy producing a demi-god child. Just a wonderful story that could continue with them dismantling the Kore and Syndicate.
Like this one 👍😊...
who is that stunning woman,real,or from someones mind!!
"This video is truly amazing! The way you build the plot is so creative. 7:50 was incredibly tense! 🔪
The Kore........sounds like a present-day group whose name starts with a "K",,,,, GREAT Story!
It was okay. It was a complete story.
How do they breathe on the asteroid?
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
I like story well enough but I found myself easily distracted, when I would've or should've been listening, due to the lack of any real romance. The alien gal on the cover slide doesn't really match description of her in the story. May be if we(and by 'we', I mean, 'you' were to add a cosmetic surgery to the story. A gift from him too her. Allowing to be the way she always dreamed of being, not what everyone else thought she should be. I have to believe cosmetic surgery has to have come very long way by this point of the story. )Vanity is a very real thing amidst most societies.
I really enjoyed the deep dialogues between the characters