I read this title and laughed. We have invisible Bob in my class. They created him because there was an empty desk. They even ask me to pass things out to him.
just wait till someone does some occult shit and summons a demon who takes the spot of "Bob". it'd be funny if it just acts as a normal student, no demonic fuckery, just bob
We had a bob, but our bob was a ghost 😂 our classroom was weird, markers flying cross the room randomly, projectors cutting on out of no where, sometimes even strange writing after no one had been in the class for a time
Please , please never stop updating this channel. I paint and clean my house listening to this while terrifying my whole family and making them so concerned. I love it .
That was an ending i think i needed. After hearing stories like "The Third Parent", it's good to hear a story that resolves in an original and positive way. If the writer reads this, incredible well done.
I’m a big sucker for the story concept of the Eldritch creature being both dangerous but also sometimes helpful like some sort of wild card. Amazing story. One of the best I’ve heard in a long time.
can't decide if the idea of an eldritch abomination with the mentality of a 3-year-old that grants wishes (that only *sometimes* go horribly wrong) in exchange for play is more wholesome or horrifying, probably a combination of both.
It's kinda sad too if you think about it. It's like a kid who craves for affection and attention and know that the only way it could get it is to give things to these people who only show up if they want something.
yeah tbh like, I don't really understand *anyone* could think that wish was a good idea, especially given what Grenwig had done previously when it came to wishes for complicated things, but like even if every wish he granted had generally turned out as planned...getting a supernatural entity to bring a dead person back to life *never* goes well
@@maypole4003 two things could happen in that situation 1: it won't go well and you won't like the outcome 2: it will go too well and you STILL won't like the outcome.
@@aislynnmari great way to put it. It’s a perfect scary Fair Folk type story. Like if rumplestiltskin and the wish you to the corn rows kid from twilight zone were rolled into one being and cosplayed as wish granters
I love how there are many recognizable building blocks to this story/character and yet it still comes across as totally fresh. Being rooted in familiarity makes it seem both more "real" and more "scary"
Originality? Ok, if you think so I wont argue that it’s a premise as old as time. But if you’ve never heard that any time you make any sort of deal with a malevolent force, it’s not going to go the way you want it to. I guess it’s a first time to everyone at some point.
Dear Creeps, I am having a horrible time without your 24/7 channel. Its the only way I can get any sleep. I have listened to every story you have ever read. You are my drug!
26:38 caught me off guard!! I was not expecting that. I was expecting a bulb to blow, or a lamp to fall over creating a dark area. I dind't consider _that_ dark area.
This will forever be the best creepypasta channel because of the lack of advertisements. Nothing more annoying than going to listen at work and hearing the words "before we begin todays story....."
Eh i don't mind it tbh. Everyone needs money so I get it. I apreshiate when they try to make it interesting like they do with creepy. Becides you can usually skip them. What I do hate tho is when there in the middle. Omfg. The beginning or end is whatever but the middle totally breaks the immersion.
omg, elemntary counselor here, that opening line is 💯💯. whenver i come home not in the best of moods, my husband already knows, "it's the grown ups again huh?"
This was one of the better stories I've heard in a while but I'm just confused about one thing. How has an elementary school teacher never read the Monkey's Paw?
Maybe I'm crazy, but this feels like a prequel to "My Dad Shut Himself in Bunker. Three Months Ago, we Lost Contact." If I'm not mistaken, it's the same author.
This was great, just one problem: dude got stabbed in the lung and just slept it off? I'm really not sure what the point of that stabbing even was, it contributed very little and only served to make the end of that incident nonsensical - he went to the bathroom and passed out and then…what, woke up and was fine? I loved this story as a whole, it was all kinds of perfectly creepy, but that one point breaks the immersion for me, so I'm going to harp on it: If you get stabbed in the lung, you need IMMEDIATE medical attention, and even then your odds of survival are a toss-up, if you're coughing up blood right away you're going to run out soon - if you fight with a stab wound in your lung for several minutes and then pass out without a doctor at least on the way, you're not going to wake up. But he didn't call for medical aid, he just…slept it off? I'm sorry, that's just not how that works! And again, what was even the point of the stabbing??? What purpose did it serve, both to the characters (in universe) and to the story as a whole (for the writer)?! AAARGH, this story would have been basically flawless if not for this one plot point, it's so frustrating!
The injured older brother stabbed the protagonist because he was trying to kill him to prevent being sent back into the dark. I took the miraculous recovery as Greenwig having healed him. The fact he was watching from the shadows the entire time likely means the whole thing was all planned out as another 'game'.
I love the creativity and imagination that’s let loose in the stories!! I believe Hollywood could learn some lessons!! This could be a really great movie as well!!
@@KillM3Softly666I agree. It was seriously just a dig at the fact there is no imagination in Hollywood. Seems all they are capable of is remaking movies that really didn’t need a remake. They don’t seem to be able to come up with an original script much anymore.
This was “Bedazzled” only without the humor. It’s been done since “The Twilight Zone” the most Non-original story ever. Just the addition of the kids and the going around so many times.
I’m only 3 minutes in and I have a 10 year old. Yes they do know something isn’t right with the world. The toof fairy as my boy calls it. Is real and the mother of all promises is still THE PINKY PROMISE!!!
Thank you Creeps, this narration was great. Been watching you for years, I do miss the daily upload days. I would listen every night before bed, it was a bedtime ritual for me. Now in anticipation for the next upload I listen to older content and my favourites. All the best Creeps, thanks for what you do and hope you continue for the foreseeable future!
@@GrumpyForestHag Leaving you sleep deprived and traumatized. Honestly, it is a brilliant way for the wish grander to get someone to actually ask for some interesting "favors" other than just material goods. It wasn't being as hard on the kids, maybe because their reactions weren't as interesting as what the teacher did. Or maybe because it was afraid of breaking the kids? One did run away after their parents got killed after all. So maybe it choose to fuck with the teacher a bit more to see what would happen, and was really surprised by how much more fun he was, and that is why he ended up messing with him even further.
That story was great. I usually don't have my expectations high for creepy pastas, but this story was a good concept. Well done, Christian Wallis and narrator!
This story was so amazing!! The writing and character development was so good! It was scary enough, worldbuilding was super interesting! I’d love to hear more like this! Your page rocks!
If this was a game I would play it; great story, great narration, as always, I just really enjoyed this story. So much to where I feel if it had visuals it would be great. (If made by the right dev team)
YBGhosty I like Videogames and we need Creepypasta Videogames where Jeff Smile Jane Laughing Jack Ben and Sally and their friends are playable characters and unlockable with different story modes like in The Sonic Series.
Laughing Jack would be enjoying this since he's like a kid who is born a clown and he's funny and a good comic relief character he should be too. He fits the role of comic relief.
This story reminds me of Nanika from HxH. You have to play with her and obey her requests. If she's satisfied, then she'll grant you a wish. If you say no 3 times, you die a painful death.
I never believed in Santa or the tooth fairy past kindergarten. I have to give my mom mad respect for telling me the truth when I asked her. No one else told me either. I figured it out by watching TV and so right through my uncle's surprise imitation of Santa Claus visiting us since we had no chimney or fireplace. I can't believe that I was the only one I'm sure there are others that figured that out early on.
Just started listening, MC need to change jobs like years ago. I wouldn't want em teaching my kids. If you are that jaded about your job that involves people, then effing leave????
Coming from a whole family of public school teachers, I swore I’d never do it. I’d been thinking about it recently when life took a turn….I’m not so sure now. LOL
I read this title and laughed. We have invisible Bob in my class. They created him because there was an empty desk. They even ask me to pass things out to him.
That's how it starts 😅
just wait till someone does some occult shit and summons a demon who takes the spot of "Bob". it'd be funny if it just acts as a normal student, no demonic fuckery, just bob
How are Bob's grades?
Haha, same 😂
We had a bob, but our bob was a ghost 😂 our classroom was weird, markers flying cross the room randomly, projectors cutting on out of no where, sometimes even strange writing after no one had been in the class for a time
Protagonist broke the system with a simple trick and all the monsters hate him for it.
I love how the protagonist has a honorable character arch. I found myself disliking him in the beginning but wow, what a ending!!
Please , please never stop updating this channel. I paint and clean my house listening to this while terrifying my whole family and making them so concerned. I love it .
Best way to do house work am I right
@@MIKGO59 yes . Definitely .
Me too! I clean, craft, and make dolls to sell online while listening.
This is one of the best stories I've heard in quite awhile
@@jaredpowell4382facts
Absolutely!
It feels like an intentional retelling of The Monkey's Paw. And well done!
I've heard some great stories recently bit uts definitely one of the bettwr ones I've heard. McPasta nailed the narration.
Really scary but please leave a cushion between the end of the story and the first ad it comes blaring in and it’s so annoying
That was an ending i think i needed. After hearing stories like "The Third Parent", it's good to hear a story that resolves in an original and positive way. If the writer reads this, incredible well done.
That story broke me. Never again..
@@scruffy-thejanitor I still get upset when I think about that story.
Why was this one so good. The depth, the slice of his dimension. The constant weeks. I LOVED this one
The teacher started off sounding jaded and an ass, but that ending though, sublime gesture 🤔
I’m a big sucker for the story concept of the Eldritch creature being both dangerous but also sometimes helpful like some sort of wild card. Amazing story. One of the best I’ve heard in a long time.
This took me through all the emotions at once. Be advised this man right here is a hidden treasure in creepy pasta land. Cool beans.
Hidden? He has 2 million subs.
can't decide if the idea of an eldritch abomination with the mentality of a 3-year-old that grants wishes (that only *sometimes* go horribly wrong) in exchange for play is more wholesome or horrifying, probably a combination of both.
Monkey's Paw meets IT
It's kinda sad too if you think about it. It's like a kid who craves for affection and attention and know that the only way it could get it is to give things to these people who only show up if they want something.
What an ending!
Also, it's been a while since I screamed in my head at a story going "What were you THINKING?!"
yeah tbh like, I don't really understand *anyone* could think that wish was a good idea, especially given what Grenwig had done previously when it came to wishes for complicated things, but like even if every wish he granted had generally turned out as planned...getting a supernatural entity to bring a dead person back to life *never* goes well
I want to flirt with grenwick
@@maypole4003no
Omg yha what a dumbass. Why tf. Just ask for the money and call in a day.
@@maypole4003 two things could happen in that situation
1: it won't go well and you won't like the outcome
2: it will go too well and you STILL won't like the outcome.
This is one of your best. Love this story, the author is really good with the originality, horror and characterizations.
Monkey's Paw + IT
@@aislynnmari great way to put it. It’s a perfect scary Fair Folk type story. Like if rumplestiltskin and the wish you to the corn rows kid from twilight zone were rolled into one being and cosplayed as wish granters
I love how there are many recognizable building blocks to this story/character and yet it still comes across as totally fresh. Being rooted in familiarity makes it seem both more "real" and more "scary"
@@aislynnmari 💯
Originality? Ok, if you think so I wont argue that it’s a premise as old as time. But if you’ve never heard that any time you make any sort of deal with a malevolent force, it’s not going to go the way you want it to. I guess it’s a first time to everyone at some point.
1:41The delivery of "Kid don't care" is sending me
Kids care about more things than adults, I noticed. You get used to so many things as you get older.
Dear Creeps, I am having a horrible time without your 24/7 channel. Its the only way I can get any sleep. I have listened to every story you have ever read. You are my drug!
if you are looking for more creepypasta channels I definitely recommend the dark somnium
@@Vege-Table ooh yes he is incredible
26:38 caught me off guard!!
I was not expecting that. I was expecting a bulb to blow, or a lamp to fall over creating a dark area. I dind't consider _that_ dark area.
This will forever be the best creepypasta channel because of the lack of advertisements. Nothing more annoying than going to listen at work and hearing the words "before we begin todays story....."
Eh i don't mind it tbh. Everyone needs money so I get it. I apreshiate when they try to make it interesting like they do with creepy. Becides you can usually skip them. What I do hate tho is when there in the middle. Omfg. The beginning or end is whatever but the middle totally breaks the immersion.
This was one of your best yet! Beyond excellent! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
omg, elemntary counselor here, that opening line is 💯💯. whenver i come home not in the best of moods, my husband already knows, "it's the grown ups again huh?"
This was one of the better stories I've heard in a while but I'm just confused about one thing. How has an elementary school teacher never read the Monkey's Paw?
Tbf, most of my family members didn’t read it (and one of them taught elementary school students for years). And I didn’t read it until Middle School.
It is so awesome when you read a nosleep story and someone you watch posts them reading it
Excellent indeed!
Maybe I'm crazy, but this feels like a prequel to "My Dad Shut Himself in Bunker. Three Months Ago, we Lost Contact."
If I'm not mistaken, it's the same author.
All kids know "Not Me"! Poor "Not Me" Always in trouble, always breaking things and always doing the wrong thing!
Dude the part where it touched his lips and tried to put a finger in his mouth made me almost shiver
This was great, just one problem: dude got stabbed in the lung and just slept it off? I'm really not sure what the point of that stabbing even was, it contributed very little and only served to make the end of that incident nonsensical - he went to the bathroom and passed out and then…what, woke up and was fine? I loved this story as a whole, it was all kinds of perfectly creepy, but that one point breaks the immersion for me, so I'm going to harp on it: If you get stabbed in the lung, you need IMMEDIATE medical attention, and even then your odds of survival are a toss-up, if you're coughing up blood right away you're going to run out soon - if you fight with a stab wound in your lung for several minutes and then pass out without a doctor at least on the way, you're not going to wake up. But he didn't call for medical aid, he just…slept it off? I'm sorry, that's just not how that works! And again, what was even the point of the stabbing??? What purpose did it serve, both to the characters (in universe) and to the story as a whole (for the writer)?! AAARGH, this story would have been basically flawless if not for this one plot point, it's so frustrating!
The injured older brother stabbed the protagonist because he was trying to kill him to prevent being sent back into the dark. I took the miraculous recovery as Greenwig having healed him. The fact he was watching from the shadows the entire time likely means the whole thing was all planned out as another 'game'.
I love the creativity and imagination that’s let loose in the stories!! I believe Hollywood could learn some lessons!! This could be a really great movie as well!!
This would be a terrible Hollywood movie but a fantastic stop motion short or indie short
@@KillM3Softly666I agree. It was seriously just a dig at the fact there is no imagination in Hollywood. Seems all they are capable of is remaking movies that really didn’t need a remake. They don’t seem to be able to come up with an original script much anymore.
Like "The Monkey's Paw" short story. I feel like this is a reimagining of that same tale
This was “Bedazzled” only without the humor. It’s been done since “The Twilight Zone” the most Non-original story ever. Just the addition of the kids and the going around so many times.
I think Hollywood would still find a way to ruin it.
I really liked this one! I hope there's a part two coming :)
This really gave me chills A really good one!
I’m only 3 minutes in and I have a 10 year old. Yes they do know something isn’t right with the world. The toof fairy as my boy calls it. Is real and the mother of all promises is still THE PINKY PROMISE!!!
that ending is pretty wholesome, I thought the teacher only wanted money in the end but his true motives are pretty noble and considerate
Thank you Creeps, this narration was great. Been watching you for years, I do miss the daily upload days. I would listen every night before bed, it was a bedtime ritual for me. Now in anticipation for the next upload I listen to older content and my favourites. All the best Creeps, thanks for what you do and hope you continue for the foreseeable future!
How do you become a teacher without reading The Monkey's Paw?
geography teacher maybe.
Monkey's Paw was exactly what i thought too
See the problem is that the Monkey's Paw doesn't hang out in your house and terrorize you for a week.
@@GrumpyForestHag Leaving you sleep deprived and traumatized.
Honestly, it is a brilliant way for the wish grander to get someone to actually ask for some interesting "favors" other than just material goods.
It wasn't being as hard on the kids, maybe because their reactions weren't as interesting as what the teacher did. Or maybe because it was afraid of breaking the kids? One did run away after their parents got killed after all.
So maybe it choose to fuck with the teacher a bit more to see what would happen, and was really surprised by how much more fun he was, and that is why he ended up messing with him even further.
How the fuck do I go about watching other creepypastas now that I’ve listened to this absolutely perfect one that hit all the notes for me????
Well written, original spin on a classic trope. Instant classic, my favorite creepypasta playlist has a new entry
Gotta love how the thing at least gives you a gift after a week of just being an inconvenience
Cool! An imagery friend creepypasta. I like those.
The ending surprised me. I liked it. He went from hating the kids in the beginning to caring very much.
That story was great. I usually don't have my expectations high for creepy pastas, but this story was a good concept. Well done, Christian Wallis and narrator!
Absolutely Fantastic Story !
The narrator is a brilliant, talented and gifted storyteller that brought this story to life. ❤⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Great story to narrate! This was very well done! One of the best I’ve heard in a while!
This story was so amazing!! The writing and character development was so good! It was scary enough, worldbuilding was super interesting! I’d love to hear more like this! Your page rocks!
Just Great!
I hope Teacher gets his wish to build 'Gremwick' his playground.
If this was a game I would play it; great story, great narration, as always, I just really enjoyed this story. So much to where I feel if it had visuals it would be great. (If made by the right dev team)
YBGhosty
I like Videogames and we need Creepypasta Videogames where Jeff Smile Jane Laughing Jack Ben and Sally and their friends are playable characters and unlockable with different story modes like in The Sonic Series.
Very well written story with excellent narrstion as always, thoroughly enjoyable
Laughing Jack would be enjoying this since he's like a kid who is born a clown and he's funny and a good comic relief character he should be too.
He fits the role of comic relief.
Yesss ,’) long stories are my favourites. Can’t wait to listen to this later
This is done so much on the vein of H.P.Lovecraft it is like Christian Wallis was channeling his spirit.
✔
Someone should make the "Favor" Be that he never bothers anyone ever again.
Listening to this again gives me chills, imagine wishing for someone back but they are broken
That's cool. It's a happyish ending. I really like this one
This is one of my new favorites. I’ve listened to it twice already.
This story reminds me of Nanika from HxH. You have to play with her and obey her requests. If she's satisfied, then she'll grant you a wish. If you say no 3 times, you die a painful death.
That is a terrifying concept to be honest!
I never believed in Santa or the tooth fairy past kindergarten. I have to give my mom mad respect for telling me the truth when I asked her. No one else told me either. I figured it out by watching TV and so right through my uncle's surprise imitation of Santa Claus visiting us since we had no chimney or fireplace. I can't believe that I was the only one I'm sure there are others that figured that out early on.
Make a part two pls you and the writer
I was just thinking the same thing!!! I would love a part two of how the MC is handling being rich but the sole entertainment for Grenwick.
I was just thinking the same thing!!! I would love a part two of how the MC is handling being rich but the sole entertainment for Grenwick.
I wish you a great day ahead of you man, since you make my night peaceful everytime.
These length videos are the best & the ones a lil over an hour😁
Unreal story! amazing narration! 😁🙌
There are a few things you could call the ultimate sacrifice.
Interesting.
Very Lovecraftian.
I like it!
That tracks for any good teacher.
WOW. You outdid yourself with this one, CMcP ... I hope there's a part two coming along, someday....
This was an excellent story! Thank you to both narrator and writer!
My vivid imagination still looove the way you narrate it's so disturbingly calming, thank you Creeps you are the best!🫠❤️💯
Work of art.
Just started listening, MC need to change jobs like years ago. I wouldn't want em teaching my kids. If you are that jaded about your job that involves people, then effing leave????
Coming from a whole family of public school teachers, I swore I’d never do it. I’d been thinking about it recently when life took a turn….I’m not so sure now. LOL
Yes. Very good storytelling. Absolutely great story with a awsome Mr Grinwig.
Seriously good storytelling with a wholesome-ish twist at the end.
Holly hell that was good!
Thanks for the great narration!
This is one of the best creepy pastas I have ever heard.
Last few stories have neen absolute 🔥
Thank you 🖤🎧
yessss, the king is back with some good stories
Excellent work, both the story and narration
I loved this story. I love the monster concept.
Literally the best one iv ever heard!
Damn, that was excellent.
Get that boy to a hopsital, don't just sit there!
Really enjoyed this one! Thank you. : )
This is definitely one of my favorite stories of yours, great work 👍
Mcpasta's home for terrifying imaginary friends
Another long one thank you
This was terrifying. Excellent ending.
What happened to the live service? I can't sleep without it lol
Good story and awesome reading, as ever.
nice work had me n chills truly terrifyn
please bring back the 24 livestreams! i can’t sleep without it 🙏🏾
that was excellent! it would make a brilliant movie.
I NEED PART 2 ASAP🙏🙏🙏
Very good one.
This story was insanely good (pun intended). I loved this!!
Loved this one 🎉❤
3 days away from a 3 week no new episode hiatus 😢 I'm dieing for another
Loved this story..one of the best ive heard in a long time
Great story creeps! Keep posting :)
Awesome video creeps!
Cool story. It was an entertaining listen.
This feels like a combination of "It," and "Needful Things."
Great creepypasta!!
hes just a goofy little guy who gives you prizes for playing i would love a turn lol