I just finished eating and smoked heavens lettuce. Just got comfortable in bed. Now I’m blessed by the TH-cam lords 😂😂😂 with this amazing notification. God is good. Thank you dark cosmos!!!!!!!
" ..as I prepared to give her a sponge bath like I'd seen in the instructions. " I had this funny mental image with the baby coming out of it's mother clutching a little instructions manual lol! That was well written, i like the ending - hope! 👍
Nicely done! Liked and subbed... SPOILER! I would be VERY careful about that transmission -- it could be the aliens trying to trick survivors into coming out of hiding.
Really?? Aliens are invading but you wanna go to the hospital... Actually I'd want an epidural too lol And when did Pluto make planet status again? I lost track Great job with this. Loved the narrator choice
can I become a member? Y’all got a patreon? I’m so consistently and constantly impressed by the quality and creativity of what this channel produces that would like to throw any spare dollars I’ve got at you guys. Like, seriously. Y’all would be the first channel I even considered doing it for. These stories are so immersive I forget I’m only LISTENING and will look over to my phone to check on visuals and I’m not even disappointed when I remember it’s just the story. It’s almost like I’m listening to a video game play through minus the yelling and memes
This reminds me of all those Tech executive and WEF billionaires with their bunkers in New Zealand, Europe, and the Mid West. They stupidly did not consider that their own security and the contractors who built their places might be a risk. LOL.
Ah to throw stones from high places then hide in the deep that you believe to be secure. That's not all they didn't consider, that god should press a finger on the ground or throw a stone back.
I feel like this story undersold the threat of the alien invaders. If they're vulnerable to small arms fire, the US military, or any developed military at that, would wipe the floor with them, on the ground at least. Yeah, they had their death-beams, but those didn't seem terribly effective either, given they were only snatching up individual people. If whatever creates those beams isn't stationed on the big ships, we'd probably be able to hit them with some kind of missile and take them out of the fight. Even if we have no way of taking down the big ships, given the aliens' abysmal ground capabilities, we could just hold out until they decide it's not worth it, and leave. Realistically, humanity shouldn't have lost in this story.
When she said the food will expire, lady's never seen SteveMRE, I've seen that guy eat an almost 150 year old cracker, not to mention all the WWII rations packs he's ate/smoked lol
@@TheDarkCosmos1 I love the guy, just got such a wholesome attitude. And damn some of those WWII rations packs were top notch, i could get issue most packs and would be delighted XD
Who were the other narrators? I looked for their credits, but could not find any. I’d like to check their YT channels out, if of’course they have YT channels!! Spectacular story!! Just drop dead SPECTACULAR!!! Was listening while cleaning & just loved it!! Hoping like crazy there is more, I mean, THERE HAS TO BE MORE!! Thank you!!
Some of the word choices 23 minutes in are kinda off. Like, "we can use lead lined paint to ward off rays that are used for detection or destruction" (paraphrased) isn't something someone would normally say.
8:00 these telescopes record all the time. This is dumb. They would have had a recording, also, there’s protocols for detecting worm holes and spaceships. This is common sense, but I guess we’ll ignore that because the plot has to happen.
I liked this story a lot, but I do have some constructive criticism. The wife's dialog felt forced and unnatural. Her husband wants to spend their savings on a bunker because he swears he saw some aliens, and she just goes along with it, no questions asked? She acts too perfect (for the protagonist) and has almost no flaws. I would rather you spend more time describing the apocalypse than him delivering his daughter. The wife's water breaking on the same day as the invasion feels like an over-done trope. I literally rolled my eyes.
I just finished eating and smoked heavens lettuce. Just got comfortable in bed. Now I’m blessed by the TH-cam lords 😂😂😂 with this amazing notification. God is good. Thank you dark cosmos!!!!!!!
Heavens lettuce lol I haven't heard that one
11:59
420 😊
Heaven’s lettuce!? That’s amazing and I am 100% using that one 😅
Yep! I *will* be using "The Heaven's Lettuce" as much as possible for the rest of my life! Thank you, sir!
" ..as I prepared to give her a sponge bath like I'd seen in the instructions. " I had this funny mental image with the baby coming out of it's mother clutching a little instructions manual lol!
That was well written, i like the ending - hope! 👍
Nicely done! Liked and subbed...
SPOILER!
I would be VERY careful about that transmission -- it could be the aliens trying to trick survivors into coming out of hiding.
Mind blowing good narration man. Congrats for all the voice actors
And thank you for showing appreciation!
How the hell is this the first video i see of yours. Big into the stories channels and i just found you. What an amazing narration.
Welcome aboard!! Glad you've stumbled upon our community :)
Same here
Really?? Aliens are invading but you wanna go to the hospital... Actually I'd want an epidural too lol
And when did Pluto make planet status again? I lost track
Great job with this. Loved the narrator choice
Just found this channel and it is definitely already one of my favorite's
Welcome aboard!!
This was an outstanding story! I'm eagerly awaiting a follow-up. Well done 👏🏿!
Thank you so much!
Nice story and narration. Ginnanad this to my fav stories list.
Wow excellent story. I can feel myself scared shitless if that dark day comes.
This is my third time listening to the story, this needs a sequel !!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you for providing another Well narrated story. This one was another delight
Glad you enjoyed it!!
More from this story plzzzz DC !! That was Fantastic!!!
Glad you had a blast!
@@TheDarkCosmos1 I'm totally vested in baby girl now. And she didn't have but about 3 mins air time !! 🥺🥺
can I become a member? Y’all got a patreon? I’m so consistently and constantly impressed by the quality and creativity of what this channel produces that would like to throw any spare dollars I’ve got at you guys. Like, seriously. Y’all would be the first channel I even considered doing it for. These stories are so immersive I forget I’m only LISTENING and will look over to my phone to check on visuals and I’m not even disappointed when I remember it’s just the story. It’s almost like I’m listening to a video game play through minus the yelling and memes
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Amazing Story awesome VA! good Job guys
Absolutely loved this story… Right up until the pregnancy. Good stuff and wonderful reading, subscribed!
OOhh man I was geting a bit of Chicken Little vibes 2-3rds into it haha. Lovely narration!
Thanks! 😃
Finally a different story from the usual Chitty Chitty Bang Bang.
I liked.
For grey story definitely need a know what happens next
It really is a great story and narrated well. Would that I could afford to set up a safe place for my wife and daughter like the one in this story.
gdammit you made me cry when she died. my wife is pregnant and this terrifies me to death. such a great story and narration. keep it coming.❤
Fuck I was hoping she wouldn’t die from child birth that just kills me inside it makes me not wanna finish the last couple mins 😢😢
This reminds me of all those Tech executive and WEF billionaires with their bunkers in New Zealand, Europe, and the Mid West. They stupidly did not consider that their own security and the contractors who built their places might be a risk. LOL.
Ah to throw stones from high places then hide in the deep that you believe to be secure. That's not all they didn't consider, that god should press a finger on the ground or throw a stone back.
That was great!
Good job reading all those books on delivering babies.
This was amazing story I hope it will be a part 2
As usual...❤❤❤❤❤totally enjoyed it 👀100%!
So glad!
That dude rich enough for a deluxe bunker like that?!
he works at NASA
Lucky to have the uncle's head-start, cash and fore-warning...
Now That was Excellent 👏🏾 👏🏾👏🏾
That was great
Nah that was fucking beautiful
Great story loved it...
Ty D/C this story was Amazing l loved the end but! Please tell us is there a part2,! It left us hanging cliff style
😮 Finally u f o not from Mars ❤ the story keep it up 👍
More to come!
Loved it!! ❤❤❤
Love that story . Thank you for it
Glad you enjoyed it!!
I feel like this story undersold the threat of the alien invaders. If they're vulnerable to small arms fire, the US military, or any developed military at that, would wipe the floor with them, on the ground at least. Yeah, they had their death-beams, but those didn't seem terribly effective either, given they were only snatching up individual people. If whatever creates those beams isn't stationed on the big ships, we'd probably be able to hit them with some kind of missile and take them out of the fight. Even if we have no way of taking down the big ships, given the aliens' abysmal ground capabilities, we could just hold out until they decide it's not worth it, and leave. Realistically, humanity shouldn't have lost in this story.
Probably not the only person left because you can guarantee that the rich and the people in charge would have a bunker too
When she said the food will expire, lady's never seen SteveMRE, I've seen that guy eat an almost 150 year old cracker, not to mention all the WWII rations packs he's ate/smoked lol
HAHAHA it's been a while since I've watched that channel! But I was hooked a few years ago :)
@@TheDarkCosmos1 I love the guy, just got such a wholesome attitude. And damn some of those WWII rations packs were top notch, i could get issue most packs and would be delighted XD
Enjoyed the story.
Thanks great story
Thanks for listening!
I'm watching the movie extinction on Netflix just because it reminded me of this story lol
Great film!
Who were the other narrators? I looked for their credits, but could not find any. I’d like to check their YT channels out, if of’course they have YT channels!!
Spectacular story!! Just drop dead SPECTACULAR!!! Was listening while cleaning & just loved it!! Hoping like crazy there is more, I mean, THERE HAS TO BE MORE!!
Thank you!!
Woohoo! Their links are in the video description :) some of our team members don't have a bio link, fyi
that was amazing!!!
Will there be a continuation of this story I hope so
Some of the word choices 23 minutes in are kinda off. Like, "we can use lead lined paint to ward off rays that are used for detection or destruction" (paraphrased) isn't something someone would normally say.
Is there more to this story? Has this author written any other works?
Great story now im depressed.
Your audio is hard to hear. I don't know if you fix it but a really wish I could've heard you better.
Why was there not a video recording device on the telescope
What did he do with the moms body is it just rotting away in the bunker with them
8:00 these telescopes record all the time. This is dumb. They would have had a recording, also, there’s protocols for detecting worm holes and spaceships. This is common sense, but I guess we’ll ignore that because the plot has to happen.
Did author ever checked the point or meaning of the Boy-who-cried-wolf?
Is there going to be another one?
Omg... are you... are you jerry?!?!
I hate to admit it, but I'm really picky with narration and how it sounds. With that said, great job, Dark Cosmos.
We appreciate you!!
Pluto actually has two moons.
WTF. Is this an alien invasion or a home improvement ASMR?
33:00 if you want horror
They should've listened to him.! 😉 😉
On what parallel universe did this happen?!
Eddie winters fallout fan?
Oh I so hate how this story ended. So not OK!
Then they find you and eat your brains out haha.
I liked this story a lot, but I do have some constructive criticism. The wife's dialog felt forced and unnatural. Her husband wants to spend their savings on a bunker because he swears he saw some aliens, and she just goes along with it, no questions asked? She acts too perfect (for the protagonist) and has almost no flaws. I would rather you spend more time describing the apocalypse than him delivering his daughter. The wife's water breaking on the same day as the invasion feels like an over-done trope. I literally rolled my eyes.
Thanks for providing in-depth feedback! We strive to put out better content based on what our audience point out!
Who does the female voice?
It's our Teresa!
Lazy writing
Could you be more specific on your feedback? It's because we strive to improve on our future stories
Not very much science in this science fiction...
This is a horrid use and example of self centered narration disguised as a story. What a sad beta male perspective.
We continually improve upon our stories - thanks for the feedback!
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Boring af
Protaganist sounds too much like an unlikable soyjack redditor
Tf? How…? What’s unlikable about him?
Aw