I used to read voraciously but over time my eyesight has made it painful to try and focus. That's why I really appreciate websites like this one. Thanks for narrating a wonderful story.
Thomas, if you're reading this, my expectations were already pretty high, and you managed to surpass them! Thank you! And Kian, thank you for trusting me with this story! Stay cosmic everyone! 🤩 I hope you enjoyed listening to this story, as much as I enjoyed writing it for you and TDC.
There was just one part of this story, that I ABSOLUTELY HATED! That's the part where it's over!!! AMAZING STORY! I wish it were a series instead of a shorty. Thank you so much!
I like this one. It reminds me of Mr Starman & Advice from the End of Eternity. A momentary lapse of judgment, a loss of control, lead to far reaching and long lasting consequences that even a godlike being couldn't undo. A eternity of regret.
Best narrator so far from the dark Cosmic team... Great balance of drama & allowing us to get lost in the story rather than the noises & voices. Please, please read more.
Brilliant story and narration . My only confusion was over the journey in the “Rover” , seeing as they were moving forwards they would’ve been passing any dust that was kicked up before it could effect the windshield and forward facing camera - both should’ve been clear whilst the ‘Rover’ stayed in motion , no matter how much dust was kicked up .😂😂😂
I absolutely love everything about this. The storytelling, the emotion of the narration. And last but not least; the sound design is top notch! Thank you to everyone involved in the making of this!
This was dope as fuck. I loved the Enki bit the most though. The whole story was 1 in a million perfectly what i wanted. Aliens, ancient history, reckoning, day after, peace, the end. Loved it writer.
I don't know why TH-cam originally recommended this channel for me, but I'm glad it did. I've listened to a couple of stories and I enjoyed this one very much. Even though it's totally different, the story reminded me of one of my favorite books, Childhood's End. I've always liked the approach of a story spanning very long time periods, being more about the civilization than the individuals.
This is a way netter representation of gods, godhood, mere mortals, and how creation can be cyclic in a fermi paradox type of manner. I liked this story alot!!!
Thanks for the feedback. It's a tricky thing to get right and I'll definitely admit, sometimes when I'm working on sound and have the script in front of me, you can forget that clarity needs to come first.
@@TheDarkCosmos1 thanks for the great content, I've said it before and I'll say it again, the channel definitely deserves alot more love, give it time and it will grow 🙏🏻🇦🇺
So I've always enjoyed the great sound design on the channel, but I just started using good headphones rather than my phone speaker, and I must say that I now realize that Claire does such an amazing job that these stories sound better than allot of big Hollywood movies. Please keep bringing us this premium content.
Wow! Awesome story and awesome narrating too! This channel is really underrated! Thank you, TDC for an awesome channel I just recently discovered. More power!
‘Eons’ ago I read a book called Dust, (I think 🤔). This story reminds me of that book 📖. I think I’ll try to find another copy of it. Great story and narration ☺️🙋🏽♀️🌻💜
It's unfortunate that you felt compelled to so distort Mission Control's voice as to make difficult to understand. Hardly a safe or practical situation given the supposed circumstance.
"royalty free" music!? this is the black prophecy soundtrack!! great use of it though, i'm amazed anyone else even REMEMBERS black prophecy. what a fantastic game. star citizen before star citizen...
Well I'll give you this - you caused me to look up Black Prophecy. At least it got released for a year... unlike... you know. Also - as the person who voiced and put together all the audio for this story? I can swear on a stack of Bhagavad Gitas that the music is from independant creative sources, despite any coincidental resemblance that game that was out between 2011 and 2012. Did you play it? Was it like? Yours truly, Thomas B - host of 'Bominable 'Bominations
@@bominablebominations the song in this video at about 23:40 is SEARED into my mind!! its one of the "epic battle" themes from black prophecy, epic battle 2 to be exact th-cam.com/video/7136BzE7ca4/w-d-xo.html oh i even found it on youtube!! thats confirmed, you can hear for yourself!! its a BEAUTIFUL soundtrack, and the give away is that the main black prophecy theme motif is used throughout the song too, all the songs have the reoccurring motif from the main theme in them, which is AMAZING!! the opening cutscene has always stuck with me.. th-cam.com/video/1ls0BxgE8HQ/w-d-xo.html here is the opening cinematic!! you can get a feel for the world from this, it also includes the theme song which is such an earworm, once you hear it, you can't help but notice it in all the other songs as for the game itself, it was fantastic !!! it was a space shooter in the vein of freelancer, but it was actually designed to work with flightsticks (unlike most modern space games which are mouse and keyboard first, stick second) the game was super open and just let you do what you wanted. everything from ship customization to character customization was crazy in depth. and there was so much fun just going from system to system and manually landing on each station, and leaving your ship and walking around inside was just... so ahead of its time. its still such a shame that games like this are just... gone forever now. its the first game in my memory that shut down, where most of the in game data was server side. so fans couldn't re-create private servers.... it seems like more and more online games are just becoming lost media, and it KILLS me. especially for something like black prophecy which just OOOOOZZED atmosphere and had such deep lore and such an incredible and well realized universe... i could go on and on about it, about the transhumanism, the weird lovecraftian cult that rules humanity (oh you should look up the cathedral theme from the game its played on a real organ and its beautiful) and the... maybe?? aliens??? or maybe false flag aliens that just exist to start a new war?? oh man, the story had so many layers... ANYWAYS LOL yeah, beautiful game. thanks for your story though
Hi! Writer here. First, glad you enjoyed the tale! And secondly, the wraiths would eventually become as weak as the group from the cave and die out. But when I was writing them, I imagined them to be similar to werewolves. Hope this quenches your curiosity somewhat 🤩
I'm sure I am not sure what happened with the audio or whatever but I couldn't finish it cuz everytime command control or whatever with talk you guys started using a weird audio effect so I just stopped like a minute into it
Writer here. I'd like to know why you felt like that too. Is it the difference between the two parts? Or the shift in perspective that happens in part 1?
The voices of ( mission control) and the ( moon beings) is almost unintelligible! Very poor ! Ruined the programme for me, so for that reason I'm afraid its a 👎 from me .
We don't "fear judgement day" we patiently await Jesus' return because grace is free and we already dwell with him and rest in his Father's shadow psalm 86 and psalm 91.
I used to read voraciously but over time my eyesight has made it painful to try and focus. That's why I really appreciate websites like this one. Thanks for narrating a wonderful story.
I’m with you, now I just eat voraciously when my eyes are good enough to see what’s in the fridge.
@@tomdevlin5412 lol
Thomas, if you're reading this, my expectations were already pretty high, and you managed to surpass them! Thank you! And Kian, thank you for trusting me with this story! Stay cosmic everyone! 🤩 I hope you enjoyed listening to this story, as much as I enjoyed writing it for you and TDC.
Woohoo!! Lotsa people are loving it!
@@TheDarkCosmos1 🥳🤩
NGL took me about 5 seconds to subscribe. 👍😁
Fabulous Job to Yöu All..!!
Thank Ü.. 😳 From Ont, 🇨🇦
There was just one part of this story, that I ABSOLUTELY HATED! That's the part where it's over!!! AMAZING STORY! I wish it were a series instead of a shorty. Thank you so much!
hahaha we're glad you truly enjoyed this tale, Jake!!
Same
I'd bet he's over the moon, reading that.
I like this one. It reminds me of Mr Starman & Advice from the End of Eternity.
A momentary lapse of judgment, a loss of control, lead to far reaching and long lasting consequences that even a godlike being couldn't undo.
A eternity of regret.
The writer here... Exactly what I was trying to portray! I'm glad you liked it 🙂
"Are you a demon?"
"No, but also very yes. And I'll destroy you all for the insult."
Best narrator so far from the dark Cosmic team... Great balance of drama & allowing us to get lost in the story rather than the noises & voices.
Please, please read more.
Brilliant story and narration . My only confusion was over the journey in the “Rover” , seeing as they were moving forwards they would’ve been passing any dust that was kicked up before it could effect the windshield and forward facing camera - both should’ve been clear whilst the ‘Rover’ stayed in motion , no matter how much dust was kicked up .😂😂😂
I absolutely love everything about this.
The storytelling, the emotion of the narration. And last but not least;
the sound design is top notch!
Thank you to everyone involved in the making of this!
Thank you for taking time to leave such kind words and compliments!
Narrator and sound arranger here. Thank you so much for taking the time to comment.
And author. Thank you!
Seriously incredible writing.
Hey! The writer here... Thank you very much! ☺
Pure art
This is a very underated story, cosmic horror of Lovecraft turns in to a humanity in the gods. Loved it.
Glad you found this amazing!
Author here. Thank you for your comment! I'm happy you loved it :)
Awesome story! Beautiful yet horrifying at the same time😁 this is a great example of why sci fi / cosmic horror is the best horror🖤💜🖤💜🖤
Ya, good stuff man, great reader… very engaged. Thanks.
Glad you enjoyed it!!
This was dope as fuck. I loved the Enki bit the most though. The whole story was 1 in a million perfectly what i wanted. Aliens, ancient history, reckoning, day after, peace, the end. Loved it writer.
That makes me really happy! Thanks!
I don't know why TH-cam originally recommended this channel for me, but I'm glad it did. I've listened to a couple of stories and I enjoyed this one very much. Even though it's totally different, the story reminded me of one of my favorite books, Childhood's End. I've always liked the approach of a story spanning very long time periods, being more about the civilization than the individuals.
Thanks a lot for taking to show appreciation!!
Author here. Many thanks!!! And the comparison to Clarke... I'm not worthy. Love him too. My fav is "Rendezvous with Rama" though.
If reality is stranger than fiction, just imagine the possibities...
No such thing as a moon god
This was a great one.
This was intense. Great story once again.
The writer here 🙂 Many thanks!
This is a way netter representation of gods, godhood, mere mortals, and how creation can be cyclic in a fermi paradox type of manner. I liked this story alot!!!
This is a fabulous story, I love it! This narrator is wicked good too. Thank you for posting this, I thoroughly enjoyed it! 👍
You're very welcome!
Author here. Many thanks!
Would love to listen but I can't understand what ground control is saying. Can't understand why it would be distorted so much anyway.
Love the story, it the transmissions from earth to the commander were difficult to understand
Thanks for the feedback. It's a tricky thing to get right and I'll definitely admit, sometimes when I'm working on sound and have the script in front of me, you can forget that clarity needs to come first.
@@bominablebominations no yeah that’s totally understandable! Love all the effort put in to it though. It’s definitely noticeable and appreciated
Thanks again Kiwi Thomas! Another amazing narration!
Cheers!
New subscriber. Great videos man, I appreciate you
Welcome to our community!
I've got a soft spot for sci fi creepy pastas 👌🏻👌🏻
Thank you for being a long-time avid listener man!
@@TheDarkCosmos1 thanks for the great content, I've said it before and I'll say it again, the channel definitely deserves alot more love, give it time and it will grow 🙏🏻🇦🇺
Thanks! Awesome! And that shadow on the Moon animation is very... odd.
I know, right?😊
You are more in my top 3 narrators. I love it. You got my sub!
Welcome aboard!
So I've always enjoyed the great sound design on the channel, but I just started using good headphones rather than my phone speaker, and I must say that I now realize that Claire does such an amazing job that these stories sound better than allot of big Hollywood movies. Please keep bringing us this premium content.
Thanks Justin but... Claire?! This was all me babeee! But yes, Claire's great 😂
@@bominablebominations my apologies and great job. It's the sound design on this channel that really allows for a fully immersive experience.
@@justindunlap1235 No apology necessary! Really appreciate anyone taking the time to leave a comment.
😊
Excellent production!👌💯👌I love how the story evolved, unexpected and very engaging!
Glad you enjoyed it!
Author here. Many thanks!
Thank you
What an amazing experience. Magical yet horrifying.
😯 Author here. Thank you so much!
Wow! Awesome story and awesome narrating too! This channel is really underrated! Thank you, TDC for an awesome channel I just recently discovered. More power!
Glad you enjoy it! Welcome to our community, Virginia!
Magnificent piece of art and wonderful to hear!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Many thanks!!
Great writing and a really good reading.
Keepem comin.
Thank you! 🤩
Ok I Loooooooove stories like theese with ancient gods and historical moments even I'd they where made up. Thanks for story it was awesome 👌 👍👍
Great content. Surprised this isn't more popular
We're about to be this 2023 :D
How sacrilegious using Ya as the creature.
‘Eons’ ago I read a book called Dust, (I think 🤔). This story reminds me of that book 📖. I think I’ll try to find another copy of it. Great story and narration ☺️🙋🏽♀️🌻💜
Writer here. Thank you! I'd love to know the author of the book you mentioned. I'm always on the hunt for sf book recommendations 🙂
Now that's cosmic horror!
👽😱
This is brilliant 👍
Author here. Many thanks!
So great to be here 👍👍👍👍❤️
Woohoo Marilyn!
CHeerS Mates 🍺 I'mma Gunna enjoy this ❤️🇦🇺💪
VERY moving indeed Thankyou
Hi! The writer here. Thank you for your comment! I'm glad this story moved you!
Thankyou for sharing your story with us teeennnaaanaa
Amazing story.
Author here. Many thanks!
Good story
Thank you! 🙂
Thanks
sounds like it's probably a good story. too bad sound effects make it impossible to hear half of what is being said by the alien
Great story!
Took me 11 hours but noe that id lunch break i can watch this video
I'm happy you finally watched it! How was it? 🙂
@@tijanska i liked it,altho their robotic voice wasnt good to understand so some things might have been slipped past me 😅
@@snowjohnson8095 Thanks for your input! Don't worry btw, you didn't miss much, it was the mood which was conveyed that counts!
The Day The Moon Disappeared...
900 YEARS LATER!
LOL it disappeard in the first act of the story
It's unfortunate that you felt compelled to so distort Mission Control's voice as to make difficult to understand. Hardly a safe or practical situation given the supposed circumstance.
The radio effect made the narrator sound like biv the drunk robobrain from fallout 76 and now I want to sound like that
LOL!
Bro doomed civilization by asking a god if it was a demon
😅
Enjoying the story. Not the voice effects tho
Why does Mission Control sound like the borg
Like .... Why would ground control broadcast sound anything like that?
I had to throw on my closed caption. Could not understand the transmissions from Earth.
Love all your stories 🖤❤️💜💙😈💖
We love you back!
Close enough to NOT see the curve or FAR enough to see the curve.
Semantics. Just at the right place where they would be able to see the curve. Close enough and far enough 😁
Beware the beast man for he is the harbinger of death. "Planet of the apes"
"royalty free" music!? this is the black prophecy soundtrack!! great use of it though, i'm amazed anyone else even REMEMBERS black prophecy. what a fantastic game. star citizen before star citizen...
Well I'll give you this - you caused me to look up Black Prophecy. At least it got released for a year... unlike... you know. Also - as the person who voiced and put together all the audio for this story? I can swear on a stack of Bhagavad Gitas that the music is from independant creative sources, despite any coincidental resemblance that game that was out between 2011 and 2012. Did you play it? Was it like?
Yours truly,
Thomas B - host of 'Bominable 'Bominations
@@bominablebominations the song in this video at about 23:40 is SEARED into my mind!! its one of the "epic battle" themes from black prophecy, epic battle 2 to be exact
th-cam.com/video/7136BzE7ca4/w-d-xo.html
oh i even found it on youtube!! thats confirmed, you can hear for yourself!! its a BEAUTIFUL soundtrack, and the give away is that the main black prophecy theme motif is used throughout the song too, all the songs have the reoccurring motif from the main theme in them, which is AMAZING!! the opening cutscene has always stuck with me..
th-cam.com/video/1ls0BxgE8HQ/w-d-xo.html
here is the opening cinematic!! you can get a feel for the world from this, it also includes the theme song which is such an earworm, once you hear it, you can't help but notice it in all the other songs
as for the game itself, it was fantastic !!! it was a space shooter in the vein of freelancer, but it was actually designed to work with flightsticks (unlike most modern space games which are mouse and keyboard first, stick second) the game was super open and just let you do what you wanted. everything from ship customization to character customization was crazy in depth. and there was so much fun just going from system to system and manually landing on each station, and leaving your ship and walking around inside was just... so ahead of its time.
its still such a shame that games like this are just... gone forever now. its the first game in my memory that shut down, where most of the in game data was server side. so fans couldn't re-create private servers.... it seems like more and more online games are just becoming lost media, and it KILLS me. especially for something like black prophecy which just OOOOOZZED atmosphere and had such deep lore and such an incredible and well realized universe... i could go on and on about it, about the transhumanism, the weird lovecraftian cult that rules humanity (oh you should look up the cathedral theme from the game its played on a real organ and its beautiful) and the... maybe?? aliens??? or maybe false flag aliens that just exist to start a new war?? oh man, the story had so many layers...
ANYWAYS LOL yeah, beautiful game. thanks for your story though
Enjoyed the tale but was curious at what the wraiths became.
Hi! Writer here. First, glad you enjoyed the tale! And secondly, the wraiths would eventually become as weak as the group from the cave and die out. But when I was writing them, I imagined them to be similar to werewolves. Hope this quenches your curiosity somewhat 🤩
@@tijanska hello!
I'm Native American, and I sort of interpreted them looking like what we believe Windi (my peoples term for Wendigo) look like lol
@@colleennewholy9026 Hello! I love that! Thanks for sharing 🙂
👍👍I enjoyed this story,thank you !!
I guess TH-cam actually suggests decent content sometimes.sub& like.
Welcome to our community, A Waren!
Couldn't hear a word control or alien said, just echoing noise
oh my gosh.......
the day the moon disappeared was the date Sept 13, 1999 lol
Why that date?
Why does Gib/Zameck speak with a German accent !
I'm sure I am not sure what happened with the audio or whatever but I couldn't finish it cuz everytime command control or whatever with talk you guys started using a weird audio effect so I just stopped like a minute into it
Thanks for the feedback!
It's hard to hear God's voice his voice is so much quiter than the narrative. Love story but voices need to be more even
😂 ghostbusters' - are u a god? "Well" no' "Then Die'!" "Ray'! The next time' someone ask' if your a "god" yo say' "YES"!!
🤣🤣🤣
A little off balanced.
Can you be more specific?
Writer here. I'd like to know why you felt like that too. Is it the difference between the two parts? Or the shift in perspective that happens in part 1?
The voices of ( mission control) and the ( moon beings) is almost unintelligible! Very poor ! Ruined the programme for me, so for that reason I'm afraid its a 👎 from me .
That's alright Jonathan. We always strive to put out better stories with feedback like yours.
In 1969, the movie,
"2001 Space Oddity"
Was the set for the moon landing. Sorry....
We don't "fear judgement day" we patiently await Jesus' return because grace is free and we already dwell with him and rest in his Father's shadow psalm 86 and psalm 91.
Loving this story so far (im about halfway) but making Yah genderless (i do get that) and referring to Yah as "they" all the time is super-confusing.
A female leader? that's an even worse future then the disappearance of the Moon.
Lol
Space god: hasn't spoken with humans in thousands of years
humans: forgot space god existed
space god: >:(