Apocalyptic Horror Story: "The Day The Moon Disappeared" | Sci-Fi Horror Story 2023

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  • Artemis 3 landed on the Moon in the first manned mission since the 1970s. However, what they found was unlike anything ever before seen on Earth's satellite or even expected to be found there. Awakening an entity that had laid dormant for eons, Artemis 3 had started a devastating chain of events that would define the future of all life on Earth. The entity did not take kindly to being raised from its peaceful slumber.
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  • @bubbafrump74
    @bubbafrump74 ปีที่แล้ว +29

    There was just one part of this story, that I ABSOLUTELY HATED! That's the part where it's over!!! AMAZING STORY! I wish it were a series instead of a shorty. Thank you so much!

    • @TheDarkCosmos1
      @TheDarkCosmos1  ปีที่แล้ว +3

      hahaha we're glad you truly enjoyed this tale, Jake!!

    • @rexmgaming362
      @rexmgaming362 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Same

    • @WhiteUnicorn82
      @WhiteUnicorn82 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I'd bet he's over the moon, reading that.

  • @jonathanharris4871
    @jonathanharris4871 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    I like this one. It reminds me of Mr Starman & Advice from the End of Eternity.
    A momentary lapse of judgment, a loss of control, lead to far reaching and long lasting consequences that even a godlike being couldn't undo.
    A eternity of regret.

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska ปีที่แล้ว +4

      The writer here... Exactly what I was trying to portray! I'm glad you liked it 🙂

  • @firebornliger
    @firebornliger ปีที่แล้ว +8

    "Are you a demon?"
    "No, but also very yes. And I'll destroy you all for the insult."

  • @DarkKnightCap
    @DarkKnightCap ปีที่แล้ว +25

    Seriously incredible writing.

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Hey! The writer here... Thank you very much! ☺

  • @malicious81
    @malicious81 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    I absolutely love everything about this.
    The storytelling, the emotion of the narration. And last but not least;
    the sound design is top notch!
    Thank you to everyone involved in the making of this!

    • @TheDarkCosmos1
      @TheDarkCosmos1  ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Thank you for taking time to leave such kind words and compliments!

    • @bominablebominations
      @bominablebominations ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Narrator and sound arranger here. Thank you so much for taking the time to comment.

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska ปีที่แล้ว +4

      And author. Thank you!

  • @dlowry27
    @dlowry27 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    This is a very underated story, cosmic horror of Lovecraft turns in to a humanity in the gods. Loved it.

    • @TheDarkCosmos1
      @TheDarkCosmos1  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Glad you found this amazing!

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Author here. Thank you for your comment! I'm happy you loved it :)

  • @annicoyne2983
    @annicoyne2983 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Best narrator so far from the dark Cosmic team... Great balance of drama & allowing us to get lost in the story rather than the noises & voices.
    Please, please read more.

  • @rayzorrayzor9000
    @rayzorrayzor9000 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Brilliant story and narration . My only confusion was over the journey in the “Rover” , seeing as they were moving forwards they would’ve been passing any dust that was kicked up before it could effect the windshield and forward facing camera - both should’ve been clear whilst the ‘Rover’ stayed in motion , no matter how much dust was kicked up .😂😂😂

  • @aggromando7323
    @aggromando7323 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    This was intense. Great story once again.

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska ปีที่แล้ว +1

      The writer here 🙂 Many thanks!

  • @sreed8570
    @sreed8570 ปีที่แล้ว +32

    I used to read voraciously but over time my eyesight has made it painful to try and focus. That's why I really appreciate websites like this one. Thanks for narrating a wonderful story.

    • @tomdevlin5412
      @tomdevlin5412 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      I’m with you, now I just eat voraciously when my eyes are good enough to see what’s in the fridge.

    • @sreed8570
      @sreed8570 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@tomdevlin5412 lol

  • @johnbarriball4257
    @johnbarriball4257 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Love the story, it the transmissions from earth to the commander were difficult to understand

    • @bominablebominations
      @bominablebominations ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Thanks for the feedback. It's a tricky thing to get right and I'll definitely admit, sometimes when I'm working on sound and have the script in front of me, you can forget that clarity needs to come first.

    • @johnbarriball4257
      @johnbarriball4257 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@bominablebominations no yeah that’s totally understandable! Love all the effort put in to it though. It’s definitely noticeable and appreciated

  • @-DEATHSTROKE
    @-DEATHSTROKE ปีที่แล้ว +8

    I've got a soft spot for sci fi creepy pastas 👌🏻👌🏻

    • @TheDarkCosmos1
      @TheDarkCosmos1  ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Thank you for being a long-time avid listener man!

    • @-DEATHSTROKE
      @-DEATHSTROKE ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@TheDarkCosmos1 thanks for the great content, I've said it before and I'll say it again, the channel definitely deserves alot more love, give it time and it will grow 🙏🏻🇦🇺

  • @ParaisoAbandonware
    @ParaisoAbandonware ปีที่แล้ว +5

    This was a great one.

  • @paulking6572
    @paulking6572 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thanks again Kiwi Thomas! Another amazing narration!

  • @justindunlap1235
    @justindunlap1235 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    So I've always enjoyed the great sound design on the channel, but I just started using good headphones rather than my phone speaker, and I must say that I now realize that Claire does such an amazing job that these stories sound better than allot of big Hollywood movies. Please keep bringing us this premium content.

    • @bominablebominations
      @bominablebominations ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Thanks Justin but... Claire?! This was all me babeee! But yes, Claire's great 😂

    • @justindunlap1235
      @justindunlap1235 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@bominablebominations my apologies and great job. It's the sound design on this channel that really allows for a fully immersive experience.

    • @bominablebominations
      @bominablebominations ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@justindunlap1235 No apology necessary! Really appreciate anyone taking the time to leave a comment.

    • @andralyndavenport7930
      @andralyndavenport7930 ปีที่แล้ว

      😊

  • @mattymayhem1232
    @mattymayhem1232 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    You are more in my top 3 narrators. I love it. You got my sub!

  • @virginiawilson-xu2er
    @virginiawilson-xu2er ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Wow! Awesome story and awesome narrating too! This channel is really underrated! Thank you, TDC for an awesome channel I just recently discovered. More power!

    • @TheDarkCosmos1
      @TheDarkCosmos1  ปีที่แล้ว

      Glad you enjoy it! Welcome to our community, Virginia!

  • @loripeters3133
    @loripeters3133 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    ‘Eons’ ago I read a book called Dust, (I think 🤔). This story reminds me of that book 📖. I think I’ll try to find another copy of it. Great story and narration ☺️🙋🏽‍♀️🌻💜

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Writer here. Thank you! I'd love to know the author of the book you mentioned. I'm always on the hunt for sf book recommendations 🙂

  • @W-C-F-o1k
    @W-C-F-o1k ปีที่แล้ว +2

    What an amazing experience. Magical yet horrifying.

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      😯 Author here. Thank you so much!

  • @crytlmeen
    @crytlmeen ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Excellent production!👌💯👌I love how the story evolved, unexpected and very engaging!

    • @TheDarkCosmos1
      @TheDarkCosmos1  ปีที่แล้ว

      Glad you enjoyed it!

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Author here. Many thanks!

  • @Rizoof1
    @Rizoof1 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Now that's cosmic horror!

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska ปีที่แล้ว

      👽😱

  • @davidaa2521
    @davidaa2521 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Great writing and a really good reading.
    Keepem comin.

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you! 🤩

  • @marilynhands1859
    @marilynhands1859 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    So great to be here 👍👍👍👍❤️

    • @TheDarkCosmos1
      @TheDarkCosmos1  ปีที่แล้ว

      Woohoo Marilyn!

    • @spudlee3547
      @spudlee3547 ปีที่แล้ว

      CHeerS Mates 🍺 I'mma Gunna enjoy this ❤️🇦🇺💪

  • @RandolphTheWhite1
    @RandolphTheWhite1 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Great content. Surprised this isn't more popular

  • @otterrivers3765
    @otterrivers3765 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Like .... Why would ground control broadcast sound anything like that?

  • @mikeyvee401
    @mikeyvee401 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    This was dope as fuck. I loved the Enki bit the most though. The whole story was 1 in a million perfectly what i wanted. Aliens, ancient history, reckoning, day after, peace, the end. Loved it writer.

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      That makes me really happy! Thanks!

  • @Uknowho9967
    @Uknowho9967 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Magnificent piece of art and wonderful to hear!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  • @stevesyncox9893
    @stevesyncox9893 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Ya, good stuff man, great reader… very engaged. Thanks.

    • @TheDarkCosmos1
      @TheDarkCosmos1  8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Glad you enjoyed it!!

  • @spudlee3547
    @spudlee3547 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    VERY moving indeed Thankyou

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hi! The writer here. Thank you for your comment! I'm glad this story moved you!

    • @spudlee3547
      @spudlee3547 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thankyou for sharing your story with us teeennnaaanaa

  • @gavinkurn
    @gavinkurn ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This is brilliant 👍

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Author here. Many thanks!

  • @loch1957
    @loch1957 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Amazing story.

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Author here. Many thanks!

  • @BingoTheBull
    @BingoTheBull ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thanks

  • @Lmr6973
    @Lmr6973 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Would love to listen but I can't understand what ground control is saying. Can't understand why it would be distorted so much anyway.

  • @beagle3247
    @beagle3247 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    The radio effect made the narrator sound like biv the drunk robobrain from fallout 76 and now I want to sound like that

  • @evazauner
    @evazauner ปีที่แล้ว +2

    oh my gosh.......

  • @wikikomoto
    @wikikomoto ปีที่แล้ว +1

    "royalty free" music!? this is the black prophecy soundtrack!! great use of it though, i'm amazed anyone else even REMEMBERS black prophecy. what a fantastic game. star citizen before star citizen...

    • @bominablebominations
      @bominablebominations ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Well I'll give you this - you caused me to look up Black Prophecy. At least it got released for a year... unlike... you know. Also - as the person who voiced and put together all the audio for this story? I can swear on a stack of Bhagavad Gitas that the music is from independant creative sources, despite any coincidental resemblance that game that was out between 2011 and 2012. Did you play it? Was it like?
      Yours truly,
      Thomas B - host of 'Bominable 'Bominations

    • @wikikomoto
      @wikikomoto ปีที่แล้ว

      @@bominablebominations the song in this video at about 23:40 is SEARED into my mind!! its one of the "epic battle" themes from black prophecy, epic battle 2 to be exact
      th-cam.com/video/7136BzE7ca4/w-d-xo.html
      oh i even found it on youtube!! thats confirmed, you can hear for yourself!! its a BEAUTIFUL soundtrack, and the give away is that the main black prophecy theme motif is used throughout the song too, all the songs have the reoccurring motif from the main theme in them, which is AMAZING!! the opening cutscene has always stuck with me..
      th-cam.com/video/1ls0BxgE8HQ/w-d-xo.html
      here is the opening cinematic!! you can get a feel for the world from this, it also includes the theme song which is such an earworm, once you hear it, you can't help but notice it in all the other songs
      as for the game itself, it was fantastic !!! it was a space shooter in the vein of freelancer, but it was actually designed to work with flightsticks (unlike most modern space games which are mouse and keyboard first, stick second) the game was super open and just let you do what you wanted. everything from ship customization to character customization was crazy in depth. and there was so much fun just going from system to system and manually landing on each station, and leaving your ship and walking around inside was just... so ahead of its time.
      its still such a shame that games like this are just... gone forever now. its the first game in my memory that shut down, where most of the in game data was server side. so fans couldn't re-create private servers.... it seems like more and more online games are just becoming lost media, and it KILLS me. especially for something like black prophecy which just OOOOOZZED atmosphere and had such deep lore and such an incredible and well realized universe... i could go on and on about it, about the transhumanism, the weird lovecraftian cult that rules humanity (oh you should look up the cathedral theme from the game its played on a real organ and its beautiful) and the... maybe?? aliens??? or maybe false flag aliens that just exist to start a new war?? oh man, the story had so many layers...
      ANYWAYS LOL yeah, beautiful game. thanks for your story though

  • @InvasionAnimation
    @InvasionAnimation ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The Day The Moon Disappeared...
    900 YEARS LATER!

    • @TheDarkCosmos1
      @TheDarkCosmos1  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      LOL it disappeard in the first act of the story

  • @charlenebarron1789
    @charlenebarron1789 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Love all your stories 🖤❤️💜💙😈💖

  • @andrzejbejnar8696
    @andrzejbejnar8696 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Close enough to NOT see the curve or FAR enough to see the curve.

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska ปีที่แล้ว

      Semantics. Just at the right place where they would be able to see the curve. Close enough and far enough 😁

  • @WarriorsCherub999
    @WarriorsCherub999 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Beware the beast man for he is the harbinger of death. "Planet of the apes"

  • @pamrice6359
    @pamrice6359 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    sounds like it's probably a good story. too bad sound effects make it impossible to hear half of what is being said by the alien

  • @remy5347
    @remy5347 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Bro doomed civilization by asking a god if it was a demon

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      😅

  • @blowitoutyourcunt7675
    @blowitoutyourcunt7675 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    The distortion you use for some of your voices is often too distorted for me to discern what is being said, if you could pull back on that - that would be great! Other than that your selection and narration of stories is smegging awesome!!!
    Love your productions! Cheers mate!

    • @bominablebominations
      @bominablebominations ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Fair feedback. After reviewing with 'phone speakers and headphones, I sometimes forget the fact that I've aleady read the script, and as such, favour a good effect over clarity. Thanks.

  • @ceceliachristy8785
    @ceceliachristy8785 12 วันที่ผ่านมา

    How sacrilegious using Ya as the creature.

  • @colettenewton1959
    @colettenewton1959 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

    It's unfortunate that you felt compelled to so distort Mission Control's voice as to make difficult to understand. Hardly a safe or practical situation given the supposed circumstance.

  • @gerry5134
    @gerry5134 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Why does Gib/Zameck speak with a German accent !

  • @sirensteel
    @sirensteel ปีที่แล้ว

    I'm sure I am not sure what happened with the audio or whatever but I couldn't finish it cuz everytime command control or whatever with talk you guys started using a weird audio effect so I just stopped like a minute into it

  • @kellysavage7073
    @kellysavage7073 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    the day the moon disappeared was the date Sept 13, 1999 lol

  • @Aj-dq6fe
    @Aj-dq6fe 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Couldn't hear a word control or alien said, just echoing noise

  • @phillipjohnson4156
    @phillipjohnson4156 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    New subscriber. Great videos man, I appreciate you

  • @SaiaKittys
    @SaiaKittys ปีที่แล้ว

    It's hard to hear God's voice his voice is so much quiter than the narrative. Love story but voices need to be more even

  • @jonathangraham8904
    @jonathangraham8904 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    The voices of ( mission control) and the ( moon beings) is almost unintelligible! Very poor ! Ruined the programme for me, so for that reason I'm afraid its a 👎 from me .

    • @TheDarkCosmos1
      @TheDarkCosmos1  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      That's alright Jonathan. We always strive to put out better stories with feedback like yours.

  • @boxfox2945
    @boxfox2945 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    😂 ghostbusters' - are u a god? "Well" no' "Then Die'!" "Ray'! The next time' someone ask' if your a "god" yo say' "YES"!!

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      🤣🤣🤣

  • @vladimirjackson2237
    @vladimirjackson2237 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    A female leader? that's an even worse future then the disappearance of the Moon.

  • @pisyfsh7810
    @pisyfsh7810 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Boy oh boy...for me, this was crap... really can't see what others have seen in this...🤨

  • @riven241
    @riven241 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Like the story, had a problem with the over bass voices and muffled talking in places.

  • @tijanska
    @tijanska ปีที่แล้ว +41

    Thomas, if you're reading this, my expectations were already pretty high, and you managed to surpass them! Thank you! And Kian, thank you for trusting me with this story! Stay cosmic everyone! 🤩 I hope you enjoyed listening to this story, as much as I enjoyed writing it for you and TDC.

    • @TheDarkCosmos1
      @TheDarkCosmos1  ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Woohoo!! Lotsa people are loving it!

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@TheDarkCosmos1 🥳🤩

    • @debacofzomb9889
      @debacofzomb9889 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      NGL took me about 5 seconds to subscribe. 👍😁

    • @rtempest12
      @rtempest12 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Fabulous Job to Yöu All..!!
      Thank Ü.. 😳 From Ont, 🇨🇦

  • @sheldonshniklefritz95
    @sheldonshniklefritz95 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    If reality is stranger than fiction, just imagine the possibities...

    • @joejp1007
      @joejp1007 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      No such thing as a moon god

  • @xscape18
    @xscape18 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Ok I Loooooooove stories like theese with ancient gods and historical moments even I'd they where made up. Thanks for story it was awesome 👌 👍👍

  • @otterrivers3765
    @otterrivers3765 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Enjoying the story. Not the voice effects tho

  • @cloudyjane2694
    @cloudyjane2694 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Awesome story! Beautiful yet horrifying at the same time😁 this is a great example of why sci fi / cosmic horror is the best horror🖤💜🖤💜🖤

  • @awaren8375
    @awaren8375 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    👍👍I enjoyed this story,thank you !!
    I guess TH-cam actually suggests decent content sometimes.sub& like.

    • @TheDarkCosmos1
      @TheDarkCosmos1  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Welcome to our community, A Waren!

  • @snowjohnson8095
    @snowjohnson8095 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Took me 11 hours but noe that id lunch break i can watch this video

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'm happy you finally watched it! How was it? 🙂

    • @snowjohnson8095
      @snowjohnson8095 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@tijanska i liked it,altho their robotic voice wasnt good to understand so some things might have been slipped past me 😅

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@snowjohnson8095 Thanks for your input! Don't worry btw, you didn't miss much, it was the mood which was conveyed that counts!

  • @mjskinner9288
    @mjskinner9288 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank you

  • @dcorgard
    @dcorgard ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thanks! Awesome! And that shadow on the Moon animation is very... odd.

  • @kasey9067
    @kasey9067 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    This is a fabulous story, I love it! This narrator is wicked good too. Thank you for posting this, I thoroughly enjoyed it! 👍

    • @TheDarkCosmos1
      @TheDarkCosmos1  10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      You're very welcome!

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Author here. Many thanks!

  • @fashiondollshoes
    @fashiondollshoes ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I don't know why TH-cam originally recommended this channel for me, but I'm glad it did. I've listened to a couple of stories and I enjoyed this one very much. Even though it's totally different, the story reminded me of one of my favorite books, Childhood's End. I've always liked the approach of a story spanning very long time periods, being more about the civilization than the individuals.

    • @TheDarkCosmos1
      @TheDarkCosmos1  ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks a lot for taking to show appreciation!!

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Author here. Many thanks!!! And the comparison to Clarke... I'm not worthy. Love him too. My fav is "Rendezvous with Rama" though.

  • @beyond_the_tequila_rift3194
    @beyond_the_tequila_rift3194 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    This is a way netter representation of gods, godhood, mere mortals, and how creation can be cyclic in a fermi paradox type of manner. I liked this story alot!!!

  • @warrencromwell4282
    @warrencromwell4282 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I had to throw on my closed caption. Could not understand the transmissions from Earth.

  • @stevenmack8913
    @stevenmack8913 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Great story!

  • @benjaminharper2983
    @benjaminharper2983 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Pure art

  • @CarpeDiem-ii5fu
    @CarpeDiem-ii5fu 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Good story

  • @timothyfreeby1031
    @timothyfreeby1031 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Enjoyed the tale but was curious at what the wraiths became.

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hi! Writer here. First, glad you enjoyed the tale! And secondly, the wraiths would eventually become as weak as the group from the cave and die out. But when I was writing them, I imagined them to be similar to werewolves. Hope this quenches your curiosity somewhat 🤩

    • @colleennewholy9026
      @colleennewholy9026 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      ​@@tijanska hello!
      I'm Native American, and I sort of interpreted them looking like what we believe Windi (my peoples term for Wendigo) look like lol

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska ปีที่แล้ว

      @@colleennewholy9026 Hello! I love that! Thanks for sharing 🙂

  • @chriscooper3985
    @chriscooper3985 18 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Why does Mission Control sound like the borg

  • @NotLazySelectivelyMotivated
    @NotLazySelectivelyMotivated ปีที่แล้ว

    A little off balanced.

    • @TheDarkCosmos1
      @TheDarkCosmos1  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Can you be more specific?

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska ปีที่แล้ว

      Writer here. I'd like to know why you felt like that too. Is it the difference between the two parts? Or the shift in perspective that happens in part 1?

  • @warrencromwell4282
    @warrencromwell4282 ปีที่แล้ว

    In 1969, the movie,
    "2001 Space Oddity"
    Was the set for the moon landing. Sorry....

  • @ivanadragmire2873
    @ivanadragmire2873 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Space god: hasn't spoken with humans in thousands of years
    humans: forgot space god existed
    space god: >:(

  • @10PcMcfuggit
    @10PcMcfuggit 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Phenomenal story right here

    • @tijanska
      @tijanska 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Author here. Many thanks!