A more hopeful version of an ending. I'm glad that Yukari is showing her real self in this. One that doesn't give up even when losing just about everything she built.
Plot twist: Fraston was Sentaku-bune all along, he just moved to Texas so the Scarlet Police doesn't catch him after creating an emotionally destructive piece of media
Dude, Sentaku-Bune would have to’ve lost all his drawing skill and started over in 2020 (when I began making any kind of digital art and improving) to stoop to my level of scuffed
That's what I'm proud of. I have such little to be proud of, and my unfairly self-deprecating lens diminishes my accomplishments further, but I have at least a small leg over the other continuations since I wrote the script to have as little plot BS as possible while still having neat things to explore in-universe.
Very good! i love this Fraston version of fanmade KKHTA, you made a good continuing plot of Koishi's opened 3rd eye and almost able to communicate to Satori I wasn't expecting Yukari's personality change, you changed her personality alot I love it when you release the next chapters and the fight scenes are epic and gorier than the original Im looking forward for the next chapter
Her personality wasn't really changed, just taking her glossary at the end of 19/8 Unlike in 19/8 she doesn't have a whole lot to cry about since this picks up at a rekindling of previously dashed hopes. Also living in a world after a soft apocalypse with Koishi of all people as your only companion tends to get to you in the mental health department. Gore is about as tasteful and conservative as you can get for violence, but there will be multiple occasions where the red shall fly, so don't think I've turned this into some babied down version.
Thank you very much! There will unfortunately be a considerable time between now and the next chapter. In order to not become a non-committal quitter like Drookup or Sentaku-bune himself, I have paused other drawings and MMD videos for an indeterminate time. (This aged poorly)
Despite Yukari being one of the sages, it shows that there are even things she's not above, even in "her" gensokyo. This series hadn't been updated since 2016 and doesn't exist past touhou 14, so the story's probably not getting ended officially, but that's alright. Love this continuation, Fraston.
Frankly characters existed beyond TD (it goes as far as TH19) either wont survive long or they eventually got killed off by the Lunarians, you can be as safe in underground (Rainbow Dragon Cave, Former hell, Hell) but eventually if one Moon rabbit snitched, any remaining youkais in Gensokyo will just get fucked with the planet worth of Moon rabbit armies Toyohime can send to you. Not to mention the usual challenges of survival like starvation, sanity deterioriating, supplies dwindling. It's a one sided battle no matter if you were a Great Tengu, Amanojaku allying with an Inchling, Former Lunarians, Oni Sage, Goddesses, it won't matter for anyone still stuck in Gensokyo.
@@redactedgamersgd1788 Not really? Purity is their main weapon against Gensokyo. There are tons of gods intorduced which are pure by base. And purity is a double-edged sword. If you get hit bya dense impurity, you're done. Gensokyo can easily make humans seek help from the calamity god that Reimu used against Yorihime before. The events of KKHTA are most likely impossible to occur anyway when there are Hecatia, Junko, Eirin, Okina, Yukari, the Heaven, the Yama.
Ayo this is sick, I really liked the surreal scenes you put towards the beginning, musical vibe is great here, all of this got me curious enough to think how the story evolves further Though I think the pacing is a bit too fast - had to pause to read text at parts. I feel like Yukari is a bit too jokey here considering she's broken beyond all belief from mourning Gensokyo (unless she is going insane, then ignore this lol), otherwise, kudos 🍻
Much thanks! The reading issue is something I never really encountered, but it must be because I'm both a lightning-fast reader and know the text (it’s _my_ writing, after all). I tried to mimic the pacing of the 19/n parts in that they weren't a positive integer percentage of C like many, MANY of the prior parts, but that's good to know. I took Sentaku-Bune's writing of Yukari to be a telling towards being sarcastic and grouchy, and the glossary in the final frame of 19/8 further reinforces this with her "Curs[ing] everything around her" and I used that her as being a petty object of pity now that she can't let the rawest lines in the work out of her mouth in earnest. Yukari also doesn't have very much to cry about here since there's now hope for the both of them. The very beginning of the kitchen scene, however, I did go for her embracing the crazy since she still thinks that Koishi has her third eye closed. Otherwise, the mood now presents an attitude of more casual situational dysphoria, at least over her weeping grief and regret in 19/8.
Hey I gotta say, this is pretty good! Always interesting to see how other people make their own takes on continuations for KKHTA, and I'm curious on the plot hooks set up in this first chapter. To offer some constructive criticism that Wendroners haven't mentioned in his comment, the sound at 8:30 is just a bit too loud in comparison to the rest of the video.
It's great dude im not very familiar with the graphic cause it's way different than the original and it's hard for me but still good work for trying to make an end to this series that really trouble me at some points the fact that it would never be an ending😢😢
I really loved this, the only gripe I have is the text moves a bit too fast for me to read, meaning I have to pause or rewind. otherwise everything was fantastic, your art style is wonderfully fitting to this story. Thank you for such a wonderful passion!!
A hazy representation of a third eye radar, starting at strongest concentration of minds (lowest strength) to becoming less selective (highest strength)
2:58 I've said this in the document but I'll say it one last time. "I nearly forgot you shared this miserable corner of this miserable world with me" Repeating words too often can become repetitive to the reader. As writing tip, I suggest using synonyms and increasing your vocabulary so as using diverse set of words so the dialogue can remain interesting. Let me give you an example. As you see I find your script to be *facinating* this is the second time I wanted you to write a *intriguing* storyline since I want to the plot to *captivate* the audience ao they can remain *engrossed* until the ending, I know critic can cause some *annoyance* but I reassure you I have intention to be emotionally *provocative*, My desire to *assist* you is byproduct to *help* society as a whole. Notice how my paragraph was able to keep you *engaged* since it used sundry terms to cultivate *interest*? I would recommend replacing the of dialogue with "I nearly forgot you shared this miserable corner of *our dejected* world with me" Hope this inspires you to make revisions whenever needed. Good luck with the project, I'll give you constructive pointers whenever I can.
Thank you! I will say that this specific use case you based the comment off of was _intentional_ , rhetorically stressing the adjective by duplicating it. And in case anyone thinks this is me being defensive against constructive criticism and pulling things out of my ass, I vividly remember coming up with this line.
Even though I'd say it's not very well drawn (mostly the faces and the huge eyes), this version of a Part 19 really warms my heart. The other fanmade one on TH-cam is based on this hideously overblown fanfiction, and the smaller stakes and sense of hopeful progress in this one are very appealing. I look forward to what happens next.
Also, I ask for an honest opinion: Do you prefer my dumpster fire drawings over Arcades_fan’s on Sketchers United (like would you prefer him making and drawing a script instead of me)
I thought in the beginning it was playing the song No surprises of Radiohead LMAO, by the way it was perfect perfect everything down to the last minute details
Would be kinda funny if you ended up dropping the series at chapter 8 and some other fan went on to create "KKHTA part 19 [9/9] (chapter 9/9) {section 1/9}". Like the webseries equivalent of Zeno's paradox of motion, eventually somebody would be uploading individual frames from the finale.
@@TheRealFrastonI did some digging earlier lol, I actually followed you on pixiv so it's no wonder the vid gave some sense of familiarity. Love your posts btw.
![KKHTA Fanmade Part 19 [9/9] (Chapter 2.1/9)](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/UxT1xKfQNtM/mqdefault.jpg)
![KKHTA Fanmade Part 19 [9/9] (Chapter 2.1/9)](/img/tr.png)
![【東方】 Koishi Komeiji's Heart-Throbbing Adventure Part 19 [7/9] (English)](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/jGfo1AMxtXE/mqdefault.jpg)
I don't care if this a fanmade, we are finally getting an actual ending, thanks my dude 😭
A more hopeful version of an ending. I'm glad that Yukari is showing her real self in this. One that doesn't give up even when losing just about everything she built.
"But i dont have a fishing rod!"
"...i dont need a fishing rod?"
*intense flashbacks*
"Oh. Whoops."
More that, _now that she’s opened her third eye_ , she doesn’t need a fishing rod anymore.
Plot twist: Fraston was Sentaku-bune all along, he just moved to Texas so the Scarlet Police doesn't catch him after creating an emotionally destructive piece of media
Dude, Sentaku-Bune would have to’ve lost all his drawing skill and started over in 2020 (when I began making any kind of digital art and improving) to stoop to my level of scuffed
@@TheRealFraston Looks scuffed, but not gonna lie, it stands out. The uncanniness makes it quite fitting.
Wow. This looks pretty good so far.
I have seen other kkhta fan continuations and all of them were time travel storys.this one tho so far looks great good luck with the next parts
That's what I'm proud of. I have such little to be proud of, and my unfairly self-deprecating lens diminishes my accomplishments further, but I have at least a small leg over the other continuations since I wrote the script to have as little plot BS as possible while still having neat things to explore in-universe.
Never like the time travel, I want to see the characters deal with the Lost and learn to be happy again.
This is awesome, will be sure to watch with great interest for how this unfolds!
oh my god i love it, a really good way to continue the plot and that shot with toyohime over the window was blood chilling
Very good! i love this Fraston version of fanmade KKHTA, you made a good continuing plot of Koishi's opened 3rd eye and almost able to communicate to Satori
I wasn't expecting Yukari's personality change, you changed her personality alot
I love it when you release the next chapters and the fight scenes are epic and gorier than the original
Im looking forward for the next chapter
Her personality wasn't really changed, just taking her glossary at the end of 19/8 Unlike in 19/8 she doesn't have a whole lot to cry about since this picks up at a rekindling of previously dashed hopes. Also living in a world after a soft apocalypse with Koishi of all people as your only companion tends to get to you in the mental health department.
Gore is about as tasteful and conservative as you can get for violence, but there will be multiple occasions where the red shall fly, so don't think I've turned this into some babied down version.
@@TheRealFraston im so excited to see gore in your next chapters
As soon as yukari said we need something to eat i knew where this was going
The prophecy have finally come true
Great work dude
wow, you do a amazing work !!!
Even if this is fanmade, it has my heart throbbing for this adventure.
9/9 will never be real-
It will someday...
You had to jinx it
Well I got some news for you
@@DeadMedia-vf4je 👀
Update: Look At The Community Post
HES BACK
I look forward to see where you go with this.
Definitely going to be waiting for the next chapters!!
Really hoping for the best turn-around
Got nothing to contribute, just wanna say thank you for making this
Wow, looks like it's another timeline to an ending :) (also, hope for the best)
i'm in love with this, i love u so much for continue this!
Please, don't leave this in a break!
Thank you very much!
There will unfortunately be a considerable time between now and the next chapter. In order to not become a non-committal quitter like Drookup or Sentaku-bune himself, I have paused other drawings and MMD videos for an indeterminate time.
(This aged poorly)
Update:
Still chugging along. I should have this behemoth undertaking of a next episode done before year’s end.
Despite Yukari being one of the sages, it shows that there are even things she's not above, even in "her" gensokyo.
This series hadn't been updated since 2016 and doesn't exist past touhou 14, so the story's probably not getting ended officially, but that's alright. Love this continuation, Fraston.
Frankly characters existed beyond TD (it goes as far as TH19) either wont survive long or they eventually got killed off by the Lunarians, you can be as safe in underground (Rainbow Dragon Cave, Former hell, Hell) but eventually if one Moon rabbit snitched, any remaining youkais in Gensokyo will just get fucked with the planet worth of Moon rabbit armies Toyohime can send to you. Not to mention the usual challenges of survival like starvation, sanity deterioriating, supplies dwindling. It's a one sided battle no matter if you were a Great Tengu, Amanojaku allying with an Inchling, Former Lunarians, Oni Sage, Goddesses, it won't matter for anyone still stuck in Gensokyo.
@@redactedgamersgd1788 Not really? Purity is their main weapon against Gensokyo. There are tons of gods intorduced which are pure by base. And purity is a double-edged sword. If you get hit bya dense impurity, you're done. Gensokyo can easily make humans seek help from the calamity god that Reimu used against Yorihime before. The events of KKHTA are most likely impossible to occur anyway when there are Hecatia, Junko, Eirin, Okina, Yukari, the Heaven, the Yama.
GUESS WHO IS BACK??????
Back again?
Guess who’s back?
Tell a friend?
finally, a fan-made sequel to the critically acclaimed masterpiece koishi komeji heart throbbing adventure, this will be amazing, thank you for this
Dammit I missed this in my sleep!
Thank you Fraston.
Ayo this is sick, I really liked the surreal scenes you put towards the beginning, musical vibe is great here, all of this got me curious enough to think how the story evolves further
Though I think the pacing is a bit too fast - had to pause to read text at parts. I feel like Yukari is a bit too jokey here considering she's broken beyond all belief from mourning Gensokyo (unless she is going insane, then ignore this lol), otherwise, kudos 🍻
Much thanks!
The reading issue is something I never really encountered, but it must be because I'm both a lightning-fast reader and know the text (it’s _my_ writing, after all). I tried to mimic the pacing of the 19/n parts in that they weren't a positive integer percentage of C like many, MANY of the prior parts, but that's good to know.
I took Sentaku-Bune's writing of Yukari to be a telling towards being sarcastic and grouchy, and the glossary in the final frame of 19/8 further reinforces this with her "Curs[ing] everything around her" and I used that her as being a petty object of pity now that she can't let the rawest lines in the work out of her mouth in earnest. Yukari also doesn't have very much to cry about here since there's now hope for the both of them. The very beginning of the kitchen scene, however, I did go for her embracing the crazy since she still thinks that Koishi has her third eye closed. Otherwise, the mood now presents an attitude of more casual situational dysphoria, at least over her weeping grief and regret in 19/8.
Mein gott... this is actually perfect. Its like the perfect follow up to the story, thank you so much Mr. Fraston. Please do contiune.
Thank you and you’re very welcome! A second chapter is in the works and I will be glad to release it when done.
An interesting idea, to be sure
Dialog moved a bit too fast sometimes, and you could probably use SFX more to indicate what's happening. Overall pretty good!
Hey I gotta say, this is pretty good! Always interesting to see how other people make their own takes on continuations for KKHTA, and I'm curious on the plot hooks set up in this first chapter.
To offer some constructive criticism that Wendroners haven't mentioned in his comment, the sound at 8:30 is just a bit too loud in comparison to the rest of the video.
I went a bit overboard making it sound as uncomfortable as a mental scream that blows your brains out should
Part 19 9/9 (1/9) just great.
Turns out she didn't need a fishing rod at all.
YOOOOOOOOOOOO LFG
Wow that's awesome very good work 😼
It's great dude im not very familiar with the graphic cause it's way different than the original and it's hard for me but still good work for trying to make an end to this series that really trouble me at some points the fact that it would never be an ending😢😢
oh nice amazing work
Koishi's eye really said "off to visit your mother!"
"19 9/9" You have my full attention. :)
Thank you for this
I really loved this, the only gripe I have is the text moves a bit too fast for me to read, meaning I have to pause or rewind.
otherwise everything was fantastic, your art style is wonderfully fitting to this story.
Thank you for such a wonderful passion!!
I hope I was able to fix the text issue in 2.1, but I haven’t gotten too much feedback on that video yet.
@@TheRealFraston Yes!!! I actually just left a comment on that one too, hope you like it!!!
Thanks for replying!!
It's even more sad because yukari couldn't even save a single person
If you don’t mind my asking what exactly are we looking at from 7:54 to 8:02? Refering to the empty space with a slight greenish a hue and dots.
A hazy representation of a third eye radar, starting at strongest concentration of minds (lowest strength) to becoming less selective (highest strength)
Late but this is amazing to see
The pharaoh’s curse will happen again. You’ll stop at chapter 8/9, and the KKHTA community will rot away.
Thank You
2:58 I've said this in the document but I'll say it one last time.
"I nearly forgot you shared this miserable corner of this miserable world with me"
Repeating words too often can become repetitive to the reader.
As writing tip, I suggest using synonyms and increasing your vocabulary so as using diverse set of words so the dialogue can remain interesting.
Let me give you an example.
As you see I find your script to be *facinating* this is the second time I wanted you to write a *intriguing* storyline since I want to the plot to *captivate* the audience ao they can remain *engrossed* until the ending, I know critic can cause some *annoyance* but I reassure you I have intention to be emotionally *provocative*, My desire to *assist* you is byproduct to *help* society as a whole.
Notice how my paragraph was able to keep you *engaged* since it used sundry terms to cultivate *interest*?
I would recommend replacing the of dialogue with "I nearly forgot you shared this miserable corner of *our dejected* world with me"
Hope this inspires you to make revisions whenever needed.
Good luck with the project, I'll give you constructive pointers whenever I can.
Thank you!
I will say that this specific use case you based the comment off of was _intentional_ , rhetorically stressing the adjective by duplicating it. And in case anyone thinks this is me being defensive against constructive criticism and pulling things out of my ass, I vividly remember coming up with this line.
Even though I'd say it's not very well drawn (mostly the faces and the huge eyes), this version of a Part 19 really warms my heart. The other fanmade one on TH-cam is based on this hideously overblown fanfiction, and the smaller stakes and sense of hopeful progress in this one are very appealing. I look forward to what happens next.
Finally someone who has the balls to call me out on my drawings
Also, I ask for an honest opinion:
Do you prefer my dumpster fire drawings over Arcades_fan’s on Sketchers United (like would you prefer him making and drawing a script instead of me)
@@TheRealFraston Yes. Please don't stop drawing/writing this.
@@streamsofconsciousness8519 I’ll admit I just asked that to see if you were worth receiving criticism and praise from, and your threshold for cringe
Wow, surprised this exists.
I love this....❤
I thought in the beginning it was playing the song No surprises of Radiohead LMAO, by the way it was perfect perfect everything down to the last minute details
I wanted to put the lyrics to the first 8 lines of _Trial of Tears_ by Dream Theater as an epigraph, but I nixed it last minute.
How many parts of a part is there gonna be
9 chapters, further subdivided until a plot threshold in the present day is met.
all i have to say about this is Great
It would be some interesting idea that Yukari got more younger if she don't eat well
Hey imagine the creator of KKHTA approved your work it would be great
First? This gonna be good
This is all a D&D Campaign and Koishi was just being a Murder Hobo
when the heart throbs on an adventure
Would be kinda funny if you ended up dropping the series at chapter 8 and some other fan went on to create "KKHTA part 19 [9/9] (chapter 9/9) {section 1/9}".
Like the webseries equivalent of Zeno's paradox of motion, eventually somebody would be uploading individual frames from the finale.
I'll try not to be a let down like that. I wouldn't want to wait another half decade for anyone to do anything about it.
There are two ways 1) we will get 2 hours episode or 2) pills finally helped
This art seems kind of familiar, it's like I have seen this from before.
I run a Pixiv, and post my own drawings here on community posts as well. I’m not sure what you mean here…
@@TheRealFrastonI did some digging earlier lol, I actually followed you on pixiv so it's no wonder the vid gave some sense of familiarity. Love your posts btw.
lettssss goooo
Ooo Is this real ?
Is this h h hope ?
Это прекрасно
I like this i want to see how will end
Rewatching thjs before the 2.1 one (≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)
Why did the beginning feel like a analog horror
Oh shitttt its real the 9/9 IS REALLLL.
Amazing sadly the Japanese bros won't be able to enjoy this
What's about Sakuya, Patchouli and Koakuma?
I’m setting stuff up. Don’t worry.
Shhhh 🤫
I'm almost sure that KKHTA Episode 19 (9/9) (Chapter 1/9) will never arrive
I was 30 years old and this is the year is 2029? My god my mom dad and grandma are passed away. It’s a fanmade.
???
@@TheRealFraston Irl ok ➖〰️➖✨ take a easy.
@@supersaiyaninfinityunivers7193
You don't know how to socialize, do you?
@@Caughtintheinterweb I do
brooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
wow
Siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Very sad
NO! NO MORE!!
Too bad.