Stories From a Traveler - Those Aren't Wendigos

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ความคิดเห็น • 153

  • @mindyyounker2184
    @mindyyounker2184 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +221

    I'm a lonely old lady, lost most of my family so for me this is my highlight for the day. Thank you

    • @mandyboozan
      @mandyboozan 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +24

      If you ever need a friend to talk to, I too enjoy these stories

    • @SageReacher-ot8bu
      @SageReacher-ot8bu 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      ❤ I like these stories just as much as the next person BUT this one is practically identical to another one the only exception is the other one is a guy and his wife instead of a gay couple it's the same Punch to the face the same deer collision same revenge plot...
      Ps. I can only imagine how hard it is coming up with ideas for these stories can be at times BUT having a story that's almost identical to another doesn't really feel like your really trying hard to come Up with a new one....😅 The first story wasn't half bad even though it was a almost copy of another....🤔

    • @jenniferspoon5143
      @jenniferspoon5143 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +16

      You have this community as your family. You only need to post a need for conversation and I believe with all my heart that someone will see and offer companionship. I have recently had a stroke and I'm temporarily bedbound so I get it. I am usually on Dr Plague's channel, just post a need for companionship and know I will come runnin when I see it. Or any other fan will offer conversation.

    • @jefferyhill4932
      @jefferyhill4932 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

      @@jenniferspoon5143 I agree, and am here as well if you ever need an ear.

    • @BOMBPOP-n4i
      @BOMBPOP-n4i 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

      @@mindyyounker2184 I'm with you on that, my family has either passed away or abandoned me so I know about loneliness, no parents so left as I feel an orphan so these stories are my highlight as well, much Love dear

  • @RashadHoward-dg3dg
    @RashadHoward-dg3dg 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +64

    “ meet me at a hotel at 8”.. sounds like Jake just wanted to do the monster mash with him

    • @jeffjames4064
      @jeffjames4064 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

      I like where this is heading... Is that wrong?😅

    • @RashadHoward-dg3dg
      @RashadHoward-dg3dg 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@jeffjames4064 lmao

    • @RashadHoward-dg3dg
      @RashadHoward-dg3dg 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@jeffjames4064 I mean hm dudes can say they banged a supernatural creature

    • @arlesthegreat
      @arlesthegreat 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

      Help step-monster I’m stuck!

    • @nemesisastraea6659
      @nemesisastraea6659 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      My thoughts exactly

  • @froginprogress8510
    @froginprogress8510 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +30

    Jake sounds like an odd... creature... Fae? As soon as "anything" was spoken, you know it goes sideways.

    • @TrevorCunningham-wl1jx
      @TrevorCunningham-wl1jx 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      It's possibly a mix between like a demon and a ghoul the waves able to survive being gutted and Deals as in deals with the Devil and using Fire based attacks reminds me even more of demons or Jake could be a manifestation of fear by the people who have died by the Cryptids sound like a concentration of negative energy kind of like how negative and negative to make a positive

    • @ToasterToastMan
      @ToasterToastMan หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@TrevorCunningham-wl1jx Either or I'm simpin 🤣

  • @markbirchette8740
    @markbirchette8740 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +58

    I hpoe to be here today, dealing with a brother's death is never easy. Thanks Jordan, the stories help so very much, and all the great people in chat too!🙏🇺🇲🦅🥃

    • @mariahoekstra370
      @mariahoekstra370 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      ✝️Our most heartfelt sympathy goes out to you. We are here to listen if 🐑 need to vent or just know we are sending long hugs.

    • @claudekidder7280
      @claudekidder7280 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      You have my sympathy and condolences.

    • @BOMBPOP-n4i
      @BOMBPOP-n4i 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      I know u don't know me but we share in a sadness that only those that have lost a brother would relate to...I too have lost my brother Sgt. David Backus, he was my best friend and it's a heartbreak truly undescribable, we don't have memories, memories have us...but I promise u that the same memories that make you sad will in time bring a smile to your face because of the fact u shared time that noone can ever take from u, forever in your soul... take care

    • @aggromando7323
      @aggromando7323 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      We’re all a a community here and you have our deepest sympathy. I’m so sorry for your loss.

    • @michellej7831
      @michellej7831 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      Aw I'm so sorry. I wish you strength and lots of support in your terrible time of grief. I hope the stories help to give you space from your grief.x

  • @kxngthrone9106
    @kxngthrone9106 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +16

    Narrator sounds like that one dude that lives in the lighthouse in the purge episode from rick and morty

    • @winstonwins1096
      @winstonwins1096 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Except people actually want to hear Jordan's stories.

  • @CLCinflorida
    @CLCinflorida 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +19

    Fantastic Writing, awesome Story, Love the deer revenge ❤👏👏👏👍

  • @Absolute_Goblin
    @Absolute_Goblin 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Can't even get into it because so many minutes were wasted with drama. Idc about your relationship get to the skinwalkers ffs

  • @malachigamingandtalk9970
    @malachigamingandtalk9970 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    Omg it's jake from state farm

    • @Site13.
      @Site13. 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      WAIT IT IS

  • @Bluesit32
    @Bluesit32 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    Ah, ah. Wording matters. "Any THING" As in, one act. Jake cashed in her debt whether it was for their sake or not. Since she doesn't play fair, however, she was able to trick them into making a different deal.

  • @ZedMazaus480
    @ZedMazaus480 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +20

    These were some really fantastic stories. I'd love to hear more tales like these 2. Especially about Jake. Did she actually eat the older brother, or did she drag him off somewhere to start helping her do things to repay his debt.? So many questions and possible tales yet to be answered and heard.
    JAKE 2: Sigh... Damb it are you ever going to repay your debt?
    😮😮😮

    • @Site13.
      @Site13. 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Or maybe they smashed

    • @ZedMazaus480
      @ZedMazaus480 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@Site13. I'll ship that. LOL

    • @Site13.
      @Site13. 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@ZedMazaus480 FR

  • @CNinjaa
    @CNinjaa 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    That truck driver was a deer 😠

  • @PhilieBlunt666
    @PhilieBlunt666 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    Hes treating his poor brother like hes 4 not 13...

    • @1ronw1ll78
      @1ronw1ll78 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      He's like a huge bag of anxiety about to explode.

    • @PhilieBlunt666
      @PhilieBlunt666 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@1ronw1ll78 Oh most definitely my dude!!!

  • @mojofier1909
    @mojofier1909 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    Oh I love that story with those 2 kids and the 'you're a girl?' monster hahha

  • @OveltineJenkins
    @OveltineJenkins 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    Two stories in one. Sounds like we got the deal not Jake

  • @daniell1483
    @daniell1483 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    I especially enjoyed the final story. I like Jake, based on what we saw here at least. I'm not sure why but I can't help but feel that if I were in her position in this story I would have made the same decisions. Since the narration mentions further possible stories including Jake, I hope we get to hear those soon. Maybe something like an origin story?

  • @lindaarrington9397
    @lindaarrington9397 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Just starting
    Tnx dude😊❤❤

  • @agathacamilladcruz4938
    @agathacamilladcruz4938 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Freaky and Fabulous!
    KUDOS to both Author & Narrator!

  • @Tugoose
    @Tugoose 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Been waiting for a long one. I just can’t handle the sub 20min stories

  • @AmyHelenHughes
    @AmyHelenHughes 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    I have been waiting for this 🖤 best wishes, Jordan, from Scotland 🏴󠁧󠁢󠁳󠁣󠁴󠁿 🖤

    • @BeamMeTheFeckUpPlease
      @BeamMeTheFeckUpPlease 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Which part of Scotland are you fae? I'm a Fifer unfortunately 😢, bloody dump.

  • @agathacamilladcruz4938
    @agathacamilladcruz4938 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Need a series of its own.

  • @GamerGod353
    @GamerGod353 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    You sound like you are going to tell me you have aurora borealis entirely within your kitchen

    • @Site13.
      @Site13. 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Damb

  • @jblask2
    @jblask2 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    "what do you think you made a deal with?" I'm gonna guess anime reject character lol

  • @earlgibson6492
    @earlgibson6492 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    We need more stories with Jake!!

  • @jenniferspoon5143
    @jenniferspoon5143 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    OOOO SNAP,! I just read the first story on Reddit about an hour ago.

  • @jakethegoat1028
    @jakethegoat1028 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Hey so the depiction for the wendigo is more like a starving human not a deer creature. I was wondering if anyone had the actual correct name for the deer creature. I think it starts with a C in the name I could be wrong. If anyone can tell me the name or if I am thinking of a different creature all together please lettering me know.

    • @Samagryn
      @Samagryn 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      To my knowledge, the closest thing to that depiction is a wechuga. There's not really a proper 1 to 1 with the pop culture wendigo (the deer thing), as they've taken multiple myths and sorta twisted them together.

    • @AnomalyINC
      @AnomalyINC 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      You might be thinking of Cernunnos, the Celt god of the hunt. He's often depicted with antlers.

  • @ianhutchinson7358
    @ianhutchinson7358 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    This sounds like it fits right into the Worstverse. Fun story

  • @EvelynWade-k6w
    @EvelynWade-k6w 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    👍👍fantastically unsurpassed, both stories were thrilling and exciting. I loved and enjoyed them. Thanks Jordan. 😇💖

  • @shakycameratheater
    @shakycameratheater 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Are every one of these stories abusive relationships. At this point tell the authors to change hair color from blonde every now and then.
    So let's guess. Mr wife beater won't outrun the bi-peadal deer.
    At least this is a human narrator. Thanks for that. Yes I already know not to hit women. My family taught me that wisdom

    • @StephanieGaelan
      @StephanieGaelan 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Perhaps the author is female, women tend to seek to establish themselves as a victim while men tend to establish themselves as worthless for sympathy. So in a lot of these stories the guy is a recovering addict, fresh out of prison, or dumb. The girl is usually a victim of violence, has evil parents or just got cheated on.

    • @toast6375
      @toast6375 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Yea lol, this is a good narrator though, he has plenty of non abuse stories including the majority of the stories he writes. There’s a playlist (my favourite series of his is hallows end)

  • @naji_aka_Tracey
    @naji_aka_Tracey 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    These were great stories 👍🏻

  • @sirbig8292
    @sirbig8292 หลายเดือนก่อน

    "Those aren't Wendigos" wasn't what I was expecting, but it was pretty entertaining in its own way.
    I'd watch the Jake anime.

  • @chipdipleraka7343
    @chipdipleraka7343 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    She’s worried that since his friends sell drugs they might start selling drugs out of the bathroom while at their wedding. Like what ?! Hah

  • @andylipsco9783
    @andylipsco9783 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +13

    I don't do stories with abuse in them I'll pass every time

    • @Hy-Brasil
      @Hy-Brasil 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      thanks for the heads up.

    • @1ronw1ll78
      @1ronw1ll78 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      Not many creepypastas without some type.. these are Horror stories not bedtime stories

    • @dirkz.duggitz1567
      @dirkz.duggitz1567 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@1ronw1ll78little bit of both for me homie

    • @silverdrag0n_
      @silverdrag0n_ 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      ​@@1ronw1ll78 maybe they just don't like hearing about domestic abuse because it hits too close to home

    • @jeffjames4064
      @jeffjames4064 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Domestic violence, but with a satisfying ending.

  • @Shadowstar1311
    @Shadowstar1311 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    Happy Canada Day 🇨🇦
    I knew as soon as he offered anything as a bargain, it was going to be bad. The only entity you should offer anything to is a benevolent deity like Christ, Buddha, Creator, Great Spirit, Aradia, Nature, Thoth/Hermes, or an Archangel. Anyone who represents wisdom, love, kindness, altruism, etc. Because anything you’re asked to do or give will be for your greater good as well as the greater good in general. Of course, with benevolent beings, you won’t always get what you ask for, because it’s a detriment to be able to have whatever you want whenever you want.

    • @mattcat0608
      @mattcat0608 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Happy Canada Day from a fellow Canadian

    • @residentidiot9694
      @residentidiot9694 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Christ does not offer such faustian bargains and the other entities you mentioned are all different ranking demonic entities.

  • @teotarver3769
    @teotarver3769 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Title need to be cut in half. Just like the story. Turned anime in the second part.

  • @gunraptor
    @gunraptor หลายเดือนก่อน

    Theory about all of the eyes on the giant deer head: each one controls / empowers a separate undead deer.

  • @creepypastaarchiver3088
    @creepypastaarchiver3088 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I thought this entire story was gonna be based on the first story just extended due to more events transpiring but its multiple stories

  • @greekstyle5788
    @greekstyle5788 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Oooooh sh*t i think I've heard this one before in a fever dream and couldnt ever find it again ❤

  • @inthegloaming5318
    @inthegloaming5318 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Loved the stories, hope the last one has more to it.

  • @Dumpsterfiregrace
    @Dumpsterfiregrace 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    3:25 oh this relationship is off to a great start ...

  • @claudekidder7280
    @claudekidder7280 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Great story Jordan. Thanks for this one.

  • @dollarsignmexican
    @dollarsignmexican 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Anyone have a link to the second story?

  • @tinynekoking6488
    @tinynekoking6488 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I feel weirdly attracted to jake 😂

  • @oh-hey-a-handle
    @oh-hey-a-handle 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Huh. Anyone else notice somethings just a little off with Jordans voice? Or is that just me?
    Like the tones flat when normally they would end on a lower note.

  • @flappy7373
    @flappy7373 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    i feel like when jake asked the guy what he'd give her for saving him, if the guy said "i'll.. uh.. i'll make you my girlfriend!" to her, she would've blushed and accepted.
    i mean, why did she save him? why the weird rule about having to call her when she was right there anyways? because he was the only one with a cell phone, and she had a crush on him, obviously! she wanted to woo him with her awesome powers but she scared him instead. that's why she got so annoyed!
    clearly this is what part 2 will be about ;D

    • @ЕвгенийБикбов-т2з
      @ЕвгенийБикбов-т2з 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Bro is down bad for monstrussy

    • @bournelucid
      @bournelucid 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      He should have said "ill give ya 20 bucks"

    • @JhadeSagrav
      @JhadeSagrav 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      "She told me to meet her at a motel at night. Clearly this means something terrible and not what people usually want when they ask you to meet them at a motel at night."
      Bro, read the SIGNS! 😂😂😂

    • @flappy7373
      @flappy7373 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@JhadeSagrav exactly!

  • @JeditHawkfury
    @JeditHawkfury 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Would love to hear more about Jake. She sounds kinda sexy.

  • @mikek2824
    @mikek2824 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    One thing that would make these stories better is different voices for each character!

  • @aricchio7222
    @aricchio7222 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I'm wondering what happened now damn IT.

  • @bluefirefoxowo
    @bluefirefoxowo 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Honestly I'd help the dear at that point

  • @XAntiHeroXDD
    @XAntiHeroXDD 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I need more of Jake, jeeze Louise

  • @chillimack
    @chillimack 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Kill Bill III: Pain Deer.

  • @dravenbladesong1
    @dravenbladesong1 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Follow up, please

  • @j0917DW
    @j0917DW 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Good stuff

  • @WhitneyDahlin
    @WhitneyDahlin 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I want more of Jake!!

    • @nathanc5108
      @nathanc5108 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Same honestly

  • @dantekinkade8765
    @dantekinkade8765 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Jake is one of those things that is evil and horrible on every level, but because it comes in the form of a girl you just know people are going to like the horrible thing.

    • @JhadeSagrav
      @JhadeSagrav 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      i mean, it also saves people (when it wants to). People tend to like that too.

    • @dantekinkade8765
      @dantekinkade8765 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@JhadeSagrav it does not save, it turns things into hosts and destroys them, it is a evil monster. idiots tend to support creatures like this and become food

  • @WilliamHewitt-mv3xe
    @WilliamHewitt-mv3xe 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    IV the hight of respect for you taking care of your siblings your sincerely a good person may god bless your soal you seem like a really good person

  • @claydragon6055
    @claydragon6055 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Did I miss something? Isn't the brother 13? The story treats him like he is a frigging baby it's kinda annoying. I mean shit the crap that i had already seen and been through by the time I was 13 was insane.

    • @JhadeSagrav
      @JhadeSagrav 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      🥺 i'm sorry you went through trauma at such a young age. 🫂
      About age in these stories, i've noticed sometimes writers are very bad at understanding developmental stages. 😄 I guess they don't remember what it was like to be that age.
      So you get 13 year olds that need babysitting like they're 10, or, like my biggest gripe in the Witcher series, a girl hitting puberty that talks like she's 7 years old. Not sure why that happens, but i just re-write the age in my head to match what the behavior shows and then continue enjoying the story. E. g. in the Witcher, i guess she just starts menstruating at 7 because fantasy.