GI Joe Classified Photography - Copperhead’s Problem

[@ratface44]

Cool!

[@cyberfrank-bx2nv]

good pic montage bro
ok, the pace seem a bit better, I feel I had more time to see what s going on
there s a problem with the music, only starting late in the shoot
I ll need to watch another time, as I m not exactly sure of the situation
it s copper head who plays cards, and it somehow causes problems?
Favreau rips eyes off, like he s a killer or something...
another guy pays copper head?
I m working with you to tune this art bro, it s important you hit for me,
when someone finally makes a hit with this.... it will revolutionise the reason why people buy figs
of course, I m always distracted by things like Favreau, ha, ha, and the last guy,
I know him from somewhere...
and by the time I recover, it s 2 pics later, and I miss details
the music is so, so, it works, but it could be more dynamic, or funny
the greatest part and why it s worth hoping, is your scenes, they look good and convincing, excellent!
and, your choice of figs, type, colours, they fit! you have an eye for design, colours,
those are your real strengths here, and... it hits hard man!
so now you know...
good show bro, this is very promising!

[@completecarnage]

Thanks bro. I always appreciate your comments.
My idea was to try to emphasize copperheads gambling problem, ensuing debts. Cobra commander has warned him. I won’t help you again so copperhead has had to take other more dangerous work to try and make his debt right.
I didn’t realize there was an issue with music. I may need to re-upload this video.
He’s got a son and a nagging wife and lots of trouble at home . It’s a rough time for old copperhead.

[@cyberfrank-bx2nv]

@@completecarnage ok, I kind of felt that, ok, it s actually cop s kid and wife? ha, ha, ha, pff no way we can guess that bro. ok, to convey that, we d need a CC pic reference, say... with a phone in another location. and we d need to see cop at home with kid and wife earlier. the story is AWESOME! but it misses crucial pics - scenes to work, ok, now were getting there I think. yeah cop s home problems with his gambling, and with the boss.. it s expected for pros like me who read the files, but... would work with anyone as gambling is a common problem. ok, I hope it s not too uphill for you to up your game and get to the hit bro, you deserve it!

[@cyberfrank-bx2nv]

ok, I m looking carefully, and think we should get an 'intro' of action coming with Favreau
just one pic more, to see something coming before her rips eyes.
it d still be a surprise, but it would 'flow' better.
also, the 'effects' when switching pics is a little distracting,
you d save time and effort skipping them, as they don t really add style,
something s off somehow, I liked it better before.
I like the pic with the kid, but don t understand why the girl shouts...
0.40 this pic angle - take with the cards..ahh, superb!
ok, the blond guy seem to be with Favreau, and then Favreau deals with the black guy...
and then, the kingpin [or a crime boss] who played the arcade before,
has a gun.
this is what I see
because I ve been in your place, and had people like me commenting,
it should help you define action better, so that people understand what s going on
it s frustrating at first to see people don t get it, as you saw it yourself
but, we should find the details that help to make it universally comprehensible
in min pic frames
it can t be helped, there has to be pics that lead the audience step by step
when one is missing, we loose touch with what s happening
since you have and develop your own style [art] it will take people time to follow your ideas and perspective
I think that because there are many factions involved, it raises difficulty a lot
by keeping the script simple, we should spot a base that works quickly
I m with you on this.
comment, and I ll coop fully bro
and even push your channel art, I want this!
good luck bro!

[@completecarnage]

After I edited this video I found additional shots that help explain the story and give a bit more context. I’m gonna a have to take a second swing at this and start really thinking about what I’d like to do going forward. I’ve honestly been overwhelmed when I think about a project like this but it’s time to dive in. Have you seen Mike The Hunter’s videos?
I appreciate you bro!

[@cyberfrank-bx2nv]

@@completecarnage mmm, maybe, but I m not sure, worth checking?

[@completecarnage]

@@cyberfrank-bx2nv Mike The Hunter is doing great work do check him out