Touch - Errorink Short Story Part 1

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  • @Sunflower_Sunrise98
    @Sunflower_Sunrise98 4 ปีที่แล้ว +126

    Okay so, putting aside this riveting story and the awe-inspiring art, can we please talk about how this music is perfect for the story?
    Error's a ghost, and the music itself amplifies it. It's whispy and mysterious. Floaty yet with a sad undertone.
    I can't express how wonderful this is, and I can't wait for Part Two.

    • @lemonadebytrade5041
      @lemonadebytrade5041  4 ปีที่แล้ว +25

      I was extremely lucky to find a song that fit so perfectly, and is distributed with a license that allowed me to use it in the video! The person who made is definitely worth checking out!
      soundcloud.com/pyrosion

    • @Sunflower_Sunrise98
      @Sunflower_Sunrise98 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      @@lemonadebytrade5041 Thank you very much! And I'm excited for not only Part Two, but for your upcoming masterpieces as well!

    • @crazyasavocados9158
      @crazyasavocados9158 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      The music for each one of the vids fits so perfectly.....I just cant

  • @romapalmer2810
    @romapalmer2810 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    "A scarf that was too long to be safe to wear."
    THAT SENTENCE WAS THE BEST I HAD HEARD THAT WHOLE DAY

  • @normalwaffles
    @normalwaffles 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    The fact the error is a ghost took me off guard in the beginning. Usually I can tell what is going to happen next but that was a great plot twist. I love your stories!

  • @khasis1419
    @khasis1419 4 ปีที่แล้ว +82

    Your stories are still as good as ever!

    • @vaughn5149
      @vaughn5149 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      I saw you in 100 vids now-

    • @rbizu3744
      @rbizu3744 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'VE ACTUALLY TRIED TO BE CALM BUT I. YOUR. EVERYWHERE

  • @chocokeeper1015
    @chocokeeper1015 4 ปีที่แล้ว +40

    You're so good at drawing QwQ like- right off the bat you see this AMAZING art of Ink-
    -and he's kinda hot-
    But like- Wow you make amazing stories and art. Like- i can't these just really make my day♡

  • @nameless095
    @nameless095 4 ปีที่แล้ว +21

    Damn! The moment I saw Ink looking out the window with a dreamy face I thought that he was looking at Error! 😂👌 Good episode btw! Nice dialogue, plot, and description!

  • @catwomanv3615
    @catwomanv3615 4 ปีที่แล้ว +43

    Oh my gosh, where to even begin?? I’m so amazed by your work! I found your channel recently with Errink and what you do is so touching. The beautiful art, the touching words, the way you build a relationship between your characters that makes it feel so fluid and real? I have no idea how you make each video feel like a separate novel and have them all work so well together! I’m so glad to have found this channel and I’m excited to see your future work in whatever content you choose to make (though please, take your time, it’s worth the wait!) Nonetheless, thank you for another great video! Take as much time as you need and have a great evening! :>

    • @lemonadebytrade5041
      @lemonadebytrade5041  4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Thank you so much!! Your words really mean a lot! I'm so glad to hear that the stories feel like separate novels. I always hoped they would feel like a complete adventures for the readers, even though they are so short. I'm glad you enjoy them, and I hope that you won't be disappointed in what I'm cooking next!

    • @catwomanv3615
      @catwomanv3615 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Lemonade by Trade Absolutely! You are 100% welcome! For the record, I mean every word! >:) They do definitely feel like adventures, and that’s what amazes me: your able to take something so short with the time you have and really make it last! I don’t mind at all if they are short, the story is just as great either way! By the way, I’m glad my words could mean so much to you. I’m certain I’ll enjoy and will most likely love whatever you have in store, though take all of the time that you need! Hope you have a great day!

    • @haneshin7260
      @haneshin7260 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      I sense a pun

  • @boonybon
    @boonybon 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Error when he saw the For Sale Sign:
    *That sign won't stop me 'cause I can't read.*

  • @theoku.
    @theoku. 4 ปีที่แล้ว +34

    Here we go again for the speech of TheokuTheHardcoreFan™ and oh my god I have so much to say.
    First of all, the drawing. The perspective is amazing. I love the colors of the wall, the slight dark around the corners of the picture, the ivy, how Ink's eyes glow in the dark and, the scarf, gosh, his SCARF IS SO BEAUTIFUL. Just something that I saw, Ink's nose isn't connected to his eyebrows, which it should, but it makes his eye glow even more so you know, we gain some we lose some. x)
    Then, the story. This is going to be very long, oh my it's so beautiful.
    - I love that dynamic. The ghost dynamic is something that I used to imagine a lot trough different stories and it's very dear to my heart. I'm home alone so I couldn't hold back a little scream when I understood who (what ?) Error was.
    - This story makes me think about a book I read, I don't remeber the name of it and it's french but it was a book where, and that reminds me of the tablet, the ghost protagonist could break bulbs, write on the mist of mirrors and communicate through a laptop keyboard. I don't know why I say this, I just really liked that book so take it as a compliment I guess ? :')
    - The pawns thing was adorable. I was surprised of it at first, because everyone has their own idea of what ghosts are capable of doing, I guess, but it was definitely cute.
    - When I heard the glass breaking noise, I startled a little and I immidiatly understood. And I swear to god, I whispered "no, no" and started to cry because DAMN IT NOT NOW ??? I felt it was coming and I was like "NO NO STOP DON'T DO THAT PLEAAAASE" :')
    - When they hugged, I started crying even harder. I'm very sensitive to the "oh everything is perfect now but I'm going to disapear for some reasooon", my heart broke :'D It was so cute, their arms must hurt now xD
    - When Ink said that Error wasn't supposed to be there anymore I felt so happy and relieved ! ...
    - ... But then the "to be continued" appeared and I let out a big gasp. I'm very expressive, even when looking at a screen or reading a book, so a scandalized look appierd on my face :') NOW I CAN'T WAIT TO KNOW WHAT'S HAPPENING HEELLP T_T
    This story is now my favourite, it's even better than "Spoon", it's one of the few short stories that made me cry and almost scream - mostly because I read it while the house was empty. x)
    Your style is golden. To be fair, I just finished reading a book for school that I really didn't like and this story was really great and made me feel so much emotions comared to it, I'm so happy that I could read an amzing story like this right after the one (500 pages god dammit) that I didn't like at all... Right timing, I guess ! :'D
    This is getting too long so I'll just wish you the best of luck with your stories and drawings (I saw somewhere that you stopped posting the speedpaint because you thought that no one cared about it : as an artist myself, I do, the way you color your drawings is interesting to watch !) and I hope that the next part will come up soon xD
    Have a good day !

    • @lemonadebytrade5041
      @lemonadebytrade5041  4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Thank you so, so much for the lovely comment!! ;W;
      When I was drawing this, I was struggling a lot. At some point I was like "lol Ink only this scarf makes you worthy looking at". I'm glad it turned out decent xD
      And you are right about that shadow! I missed that. Something to keep an eye on in the future :) Thank you!
      I love ghost dynamic so much too! I always wanted to make it into an actual story, so I guess this my wish finally came true! I hope that the reveal was a surprise! :D I wanted to bamboozle everyone.
      The book you mentioned sounds interesting! I think there is a lot ways a ghost can be portrayed, and it makes it all so much more interesting to see different people's ideas!
      And I'm glad I could stir so much emotion in you with the moment when the chain keeping Error on Earth broke! I want to get the second part out as soon as I can. I'm curious of everyone's reaction!
      Wow, a new favourite! I didn't expect that when I was posting this story! :D I hope that the next parts live up to your expectations!
      And I hated the boring books at school. I wouldn't read them at all. Teachers teaching subjects that required reading boring books hated me. So I can definitely relate ._. I'm so glad that you enjoyed the read!
      Thank you for the good luck wishes! I will consider the speedpaints, but it seems like the response wasn't that good and it requires a significant amount of work and hassle to record everything and put it together. I will still think about it!
      And have a lovely day yourself! :)

    • @theoku.
      @theoku. 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@lemonadebytrade5041 you know what now I hate you for making me translate "Hi. Good evening" in french because it's the same f.cking word

    • @lemonadebytrade5041
      @lemonadebytrade5041  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@theoku. Good evening good evening
      AND THANK YOU SO MUCH AAAAAAAAAAAA

  • @crazyasavocados9158
    @crazyasavocados9158 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    When ink said good evening I immediately thought of that one vine that has the dude skateboarding down a ramp.

  • @exemery7401
    @exemery7401 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    This was one of the best Errorink stories I have ever read.
    It has a unique plot, which makes it spectacular! Good Job!

  • @xllYumellxChan
    @xllYumellxChan 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    OMG! So good! It's heartbreaking! I just want them to be happy but already that's impossible with Error being dead! *extreme sobbing*

  • @potatoj6188
    @potatoj6188 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    YAS
    Just finish watching it, oh my the stories is just beautiful as always. The way you tell the the story just mmmhhh >

  • @ObsidianVampress
    @ObsidianVampress 4 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    I cried and I know that may not seem like a big deal but recently ive been feeling numb and I got really happy after realizing that I felt something. Thank you I really needed this

    • @lemonadebytrade5041
      @lemonadebytrade5041  4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      I'm glad to hear this, and I'm humbled that I could help you in this way. I wish you all the best, take care!

  • @emilysellers9294
    @emilysellers9294 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    AH! I can't wait for the next part! I always love your stories. You make it feel like the actual thing is happening! 💕💕

  • @HeavilyArmouredPuppies
    @HeavilyArmouredPuppies 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Amazing as always! I can't wait for the next part ^^

  • @my_characters_hate_me2693
    @my_characters_hate_me2693 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I have absolutely no words except HOLY F*CK THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!! and THE CLIFF HANGER NOOOO!! Though I know the fun of cliff hangers REALLY DUDE? But all in all lovely work. The art the story. Just how captivating it was in the short 8 minutes was amazing. Wow I guess I did have words.....anyways have a great day/morning/night/afternoon.

  • @TheDragonsDreamer
    @TheDragonsDreamer 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This is so good! I have a theory that Error some how bound himself to Ink, instead of the house. (I am hoping for this because then they can continue being friends.)

  • @mirandolux9813
    @mirandolux9813 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Holy shit this story is awesome it’s so well written and the art is amazing!

  • @gisselaalvarez3393
    @gisselaalvarez3393 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Pls continue the story i want to know what happens next

  • @tickalolo1606
    @tickalolo1606 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    OMG! That so beautiful!! The art , the music, the story everything nice!
    Thx you TH-cam for this recommandation that a master piece.
    I NEED MORE!! MORE!!!

  • @yerfruityfiona2612
    @yerfruityfiona2612 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    BDYDYDSSDF KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK- I- *SERIOUSLY THESE- ARE- AMAZING-*
    *DIES OF PERFECTION*

  • @thischannelisnotusedanymor7396
    @thischannelisnotusedanymor7396 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    This is amazing! I haven’t watched the video yet, but it’s amazing!

  • @softiiclouds9123
    @softiiclouds9123 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I love it! The music suits the story!🥺👑

  • @øłf-n9u
    @øłf-n9u 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Me also: whatever it is ima watch it!

  • @ellajones8449
    @ellajones8449 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    What is this song called it’s so soothing

  • @incognitomode1076
    @incognitomode1076 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is too underrated. You deserve way more subs :( when you get famous don’t forget us💗 I love your errorink stories and especially your art 💗✨✨

  • @em4581
    @em4581 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    AFDJKS THIS WAS AMAZING! YOUR SO TALENTED!!!
    Thank you for always cheering me up with your stories anytime I have a bad day :)

  • @avacoon629
    @avacoon629 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    NUUUUUUUUUU NOT TBC!! I NEED MOR THIS WAS SO GUD TwT

  • @krystalcornillia2265
    @krystalcornillia2265 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Why cliffhanger!?!?! QwQ (btw, love your stories and art!!!)❤️❤️

  • @-sleepywillow-
    @-sleepywillow- 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    You have a way with words my friend.

  • @theoku.
    @theoku. 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    ok so
    re-watching the video, heard the chain sound, nearly cried because of past me crying "PLEASE DON'T LEAVE" in my head

  • @RainerFalls
    @RainerFalls 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Okay question: Would you ever consider giving Ink and Error voice actors?

  • @Min-Chan565
    @Min-Chan565 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    I almost started crying because this was so precious

  • @Via_Chan24
    @Via_Chan24 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Nice story! i just ship it- i-
    I'm gunna die REEEEEEEE XD 👌❤️

  • @justwhy7584
    @justwhy7584 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    This almost made me cry it was so good!

  • @ellennaronice9163
    @ellennaronice9163 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is so good-

  • @Imjustpretend
    @Imjustpretend 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Bro how do you tell stories so well I suck at it

  • @Karma-gu1sm
    @Karma-gu1sm 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    dude you should be on wattpad youd ROCK it

  • @joelmaitland7739
    @joelmaitland7739 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow your story’s are the best in the world

  • @musketeer_deer8741
    @musketeer_deer8741 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Freaking amazing

  • @atidosamigos.8002
    @atidosamigos.8002 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    BRUH GIVE ME MORE! I want to know what happens!

  • @lanerge9904
    @lanerge9904 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Master peice UwU

  • @PastelxLost
    @PastelxLost 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I love it!! ❤

  • @huyenngo9328
    @huyenngo9328 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    I love it! Pls make more of this! Pls!!!!

  • @sushiloser3447
    @sushiloser3447 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    What's gonna a happen next???

  • @gloomy-waterflower926
    @gloomy-waterflower926 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Not going to lie I actually feel like a freaking game like you know one of those Story games kind of feels like that and I like Story games liking your story

  • @MoxT-o9j
    @MoxT-o9j 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    anyone else cry when ink told error he was moving on-

  • @rainboafternoons6281
    @rainboafternoons6281 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    they look so cannon

  • @dh7bwiwjhdsokwcore930
    @dh7bwiwjhdsokwcore930 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    That one is done as well!

  • @jianawilliams724
    @jianawilliams724 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    3:06 I'm already so happy😊

  • @x_x.scar.sans.x_x7221
    @x_x.scar.sans.x_x7221 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Your stories have inspired me so much that despite all I have to do I wanna ask:
    Is it okay if I also make short stories like you do? Maybe we could even create one together if thars alright with you? I just wanna do something like this- I always have, And I have been too scared to ask if I can also create stories like you and others because I usually get put down for everything I do. I have followed you on instagram for quite a while and just wanted to ask this to get it off of my mind

    • @lemonadebytrade5041
      @lemonadebytrade5041  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Of course, go for it! I can't just claim the whole Errorink short story industry :)

  • @danikalange281
    @danikalange281 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Roses are red,
    Violets are blue
    This video is awesome,
    Where is part 2??

  • @pawfast1091
    @pawfast1091 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    I cried ❤️

  • @HopeUnavailable
    @HopeUnavailable 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    👏👍

  • @Akiraww_455
    @Akiraww_455 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    hem aaa so cute

  • @3rr0rsanz38
    @3rr0rsanz38 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    it's so sad..

  • @chara9510
    @chara9510 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Перевод бы на русский сделали!А ТАК ШИКАРНО СОЯ ОЦЕНКА:4 1 ПРОБЛЕМА:нет перевода

  • @øłf-n9u
    @øłf-n9u 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Me: * scrolling through youtube than comes across this *: wtf is this?