Wounded and Abandoned, Until the Human Found Her | HFY Full Story

Wounded and Abandoned, Until the Human Found Her | HFY Full Story
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[@Scot_WestTexas]

It’s obvious these dialogues aren’t done by Americans. The stories are sometimes good, but the rest really sucks. I could take it and correct it in 20 minutes. Why don’t you guys use actual Americans to put out the final text? You guys suck at it 🤷‍♂️

[@ReneMiller-si3py]

Is Jack the most common name in the future?

[@williamthompson1109]

It’s an extremely common name now, so it makes sense that a lot of people will name their characters that

[@Rick-s5g]

Too many inconsistencies- they couldnt communicate then they could? Its a survival situation and laughing?

[@lizakelly43]

Stopping it like that, not good

[@alcarrillo]

Well done. Not great but vastly superior to most of what's out there. A definite step in the right direction for these types of stories on TH-cam.

[@EpicSci-FiStory]

Thanks man!❤️‍🩹

[@brookschrls007]

What happened next more please

[@Rick-s5g]

I listened to about 2 minutes

[@FeralPreacher]

Good story but the abrupt ending sucked.
Good narration and meaningful dialog.

[@drkirish]

You sir are a wordsmith . I can listen to this story and see it play out.