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Lowkey fire but can you use more variety of voices and sound effects? Like this is awesome but it can get better

This is very articulately and thoughtfully written and could likely spawn several sequels, but it also seems somewhat hollow near its heart. The masseuse seems more like a sperm donor than a father and his tone suggests he treats the conception as an accident rather than a miracle. The universe at large finds the child to be a curiosity. Only his mother, as nearly all mothers do, see him as a gift. If you were to continue this narrative, it would be nice to see some parental bonding, even if the parents do not remain a couple. Just my thoughts.

Is there more to the story? You might want a new AI reader

Surprise! “My name is Lira”

They don't look that ugly.

RULE 34, my friends, had prepared you for this, now accept it, if we, at some point reach another species and discover we can impregnate them, god bless humans because we will go rampage

WARNING! Title has nothing to do with the story, no mention of his room at all! No alien girl coming to his place.

what a boring story

When writing sifi, the author should make it scifi believable. The author needs to read some old classic scifi space operas, which are not published anymore.

If I have £1.00 for every story the human ship is Prometheus I’d be rich, no imagination kinda pathetic

There was NO Dying Alien or two wives in this story ! LIKE DA ! What you smoking over there !

Good start. A few plot holes to fill. Otherwise at 13:24 it is still good. Let me know if you need editorial help. I have authored/coauthored/edited 6 books on Humanities and 6 more on computer science. Keep up The good work!

Good start. A few plot holes to fill. Otherwise at 13:24 it is still good. Let me know if you need editorial help. I have authored/coauthored/edited 6 books on Humanities and 6 more on computer science. Keep up The good work!

Children are the blessing of the Lord, the fruit of the womb is His reward. Dishonest titles are a perversion and evidence of moral corruption.

yeah, sure... messing with the past so much is containable... right...

what happened with the engines room??

My alien nurse went into a WHAT? 💀

I am looking forward to part two of this tail.

Could of been a good story but a lot of Bla Bal with no ending It failed the listener ! Rate the story D +

Lmbo cracked me up

This fantasy is about a humanity that denies the Creator of all things. This is godless, that is, atheistic pride, is evidence of reprebate delusions.

wheres part 2....kind of ended abruptly.

Good story. But, not even any hand holding.

The title of the story does not fit the story itself. The title was meant for another story. There is no alien slave and her human savior in the story, as indicated in the title.

Looks like the large planet is Jupiter with a red spot and his father, God Saturn, is tilted towards him. What is the message?

Are there messages in this graphics? The translucent aura on the back of Zilron's head and falling to the sides, looks more like a wedding veil.

The graphic image of an alien, Zilron, in female form and referring to Zilron as male - he, him and his - does not match up.

thumbs down for the misleading clockbait header that had nothing to do with the content. shame on you.

Come get it

Are you hiding messages within the graphics? It seems like I have seen recent astronomy photo of a swirling galaxy with three bright stars on back-outer edge, as it appears on Queen's eye-level to the left side. I suppose the round green-blue ball near the three bright star is the earth?

Come and get it

Let's go to bed then

good job

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Lets go to bed then

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cool stuff

they don't even have the decency of saying where they stole this story from

Clickbait title. Nice story. But, she didn't experience Love/connection. The greatest emotion.

This story is so very insightful and meaningful. It really can make one think more clearly about the seeming small things of our lives. Bravo.

Oh come on! A universal translator isn't a problem. Heck their are 100 languages/dialects just on Earth. Clickbait title. Another male scientific incel.

Wait wait wait ... the alien artifact, which means it has been there more then a few years, was of Zeltron origin? And the human stealth investigation crew who traced the coordinates back to an abandoned based were so completely familiar with Gorgax technology they were able to identify it as Zeltron in origin, even if they had know idea the name of the species who left it there? And if the Gorgax and Zeltron were acting independently and earlier it said the probe was relaying data across the galaxy to the Galactic Council (6:34) . . . . And back to the alien artifact, apparently it had sparked a renaissance of innovation?

fuck them xeno humens come first

Nice character design of these alien girls I really like it good work

Title & artwork so misleading

You what I t its your s

I noticed that Xylix is always referenced by non-specific pronouns. Is this entity genderless or androgynous?

Yes I will help you

Im all yours tonight

Stopping at t7:26. Have a great day.