Alien Students Unknowingly Bully a Deathworlder in Class, Instantly Regret It - SciFi Humanity

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All tell, no show.

[@tamarlindsay8382]

Reads like AI.

[@LC-lw4vy]

Ok the story needs a lot of work.

[@GuusRenirie]

Too much 3rd person

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