Thanks for the review! I will take the tips and try to improve. I will definitely consider adding more trees on the outside and letting them fade! Thank you all for your kind words!
The park is great, you have nailed the path work and buildings. But i do agree with people saying this has an identity crisis. I think what could of worked better in my opinion is either done a wild west theme, or maybe a dis-used mine maybe. Everything is great thou, well done.
This is another great mini-park! I swear, this beginner bracket is insane; a lot of these submissions so far are a similar or even, better quality than the top bracket of the boomerang contest! So much has changed since then... Anyways, for this park, I love the unique build style, I haven't seen any planco park look like this before! Most of the buildings were nicely detailed, and the overall park seemed mostly, very realistic. Although, for feedback, I feel like the coasters were more extreme than they needed to be. By that, I mean that some of the elements and transitions looked very harsh, and could have been tamed a bit, especially on the last coaster shown. This is the only thing detracting from the realism factor of this mini-park. But the coasters aside, this is a really good beginner submission!
Xellixors german is really good! Johnnys is not so good, lol. I can understand why people say it doesn't look like a German park, but I'm glad it's not the Bavarian German park that everyone always does when they hear Germany. Because Germany is not just Bavaria. So I love the colour palette at this park. The coaster are short but nice, so good job on this park!
Same. I do feel the same way since I'm also in the beginner bracket, impressed with my own submission yet, just about every submission we have seen so far has surpassed my quality (well, it was also my first time building something seriously).
This park is very nice! The colors are weird but they go well together! Quick suggestion: I would spend a little bit more time on the smoothness of the coaster, while they weren't nearly as rough as many coasters I've seen... it definetely could have been smoother. Other than that, the park was beautiful, and very unique
Hey amazing park! And Xellixors pronounciation and translations of the german words were pretty much on point. Really impressed that he can say Rutsche (Slide) correctly :D
While the buildings are great, the pathwork is top-notch and the rides are fun, this park has an identity crisis going on. It did not even feel German at all. I was also confused with the steampunk elements. That combined with the scenery outside of the park I would have said this was a modern western type park. I'm confused.
Actually, the coaster track was kind of jerky sometimes and unsmooth. It's not a great sign when you hear the wheels squealing so much. It just needs some good smoothing. Like I notice that some people are really good at making the parks and themeing, but the rides themselves are questionable quality.
I think the creator was trying to go for a former German African colony city look? This looks like something you'd find in former colony cities like Swakopmund and Windhoek in Nambia.
My tip for this creator. If you want to create something German, look for stuff on Google first because this is nothing German at all. On the other hand, it looks pretty cool al together. If you say it was African mine, then I got it.
For me, it is far more than a beginner park and i think the style is unique, too. The coaster are compact but yeah, could need some fine tuning. It is amazing that even now, creative people come up with something i´ve never seen before. This contest is going to be epic! :D
Sorry, but I am german and I have never seen buildings like this here before. Only the names of the rides are german. The Village looks like spanish-western crossover. :D
It was the “dig site” for me lol. I like this park. The motorcycle coaster was deff the main attraction. Johnny thought it was weird, but I like the intricate design of the building. I see what you went for. The buildings are great and the park is well themed.
This is a great little park. It feels quaint and believable. There is a high level of polish. The only downside is there wasn't anything standout to make it memorable. could do with an iconic ride like Baron at Efteling. But if this park existed I'd love to visit!
for me its a 5/10 GOOD THINGS -buildings design -good looking queue lines -landscape around the park -the slide BAD THINGS -coasters not smoth -guest bug trough a lot of things like in queue lines and paths
nice park loves it as I only saw it for 5 mins haha but a little feedback the Park nice and big as a saw in the video and the coaster were smoothed and all that. and jonny my park spotlight hmmm I bet its in that 100 places lol.
If these roller coasters were real life, I believe Juwel Grube would be manufactured by Intamin, Gruttenblitz would be built by Schwarzkopf, and Hauptplatz would be built by Vekoma.
Juwel Grube is a intamin multi launch, Gruttenblitz is a vekoma space warp, like formula in energylandia, the schwarzkopf track looks like it and it's the best type in the game to make that coaster, Hauptplatz is a gertslaur bobsled :)
I’m not trying to be annoying but I am thinking of entering the competition and I want it to be a good park so I need feedback on it. I uploaded a video showcasing the park. This will be helpful as as well as it being the first time I have entered the competition it is also my first park I have built in planet coaster. So feedback will be appreciated. Thx
Thanks for the review!
I will take the tips and try to improve.
I will definitely consider adding more trees on the outside and letting them fade!
Thank you all for your kind words!
The park is great, you have nailed the path work and buildings. But i do agree with people saying this has an identity crisis. I think what could of worked better in my opinion is either done a wild west theme, or maybe a dis-used mine maybe. Everything is great thou, well done.
This is another great mini-park! I swear, this beginner bracket is insane; a lot of these submissions so far are a similar or even, better quality than the top bracket of the boomerang contest! So much has changed since then...
Anyways, for this park, I love the unique build style, I haven't seen any planco park look like this before! Most of the buildings were nicely detailed, and the overall park seemed mostly, very realistic. Although, for feedback, I feel like the coasters were more extreme than they needed to be. By that, I mean that some of the elements and transitions looked very harsh, and could have been tamed a bit, especially on the last coaster shown. This is the only thing detracting from the realism factor of this mini-park. But the coasters aside, this is a really good beginner submission!
Thank you! And I will try working on the coasters!
Xellixors german is really good! Johnnys is not so good, lol.
I can understand why people say it doesn't look like a German park, but I'm glad it's not the Bavarian German park that everyone always does when they hear Germany. Because Germany is not just Bavaria.
So I love the colour palette at this park. The coaster are short but nice, so good job on this park!
Wow, I was feeling pretty confident in the beginner bracket.... now I'm not so sure :P Some seriously great builds so far!
Same. I do feel the same way since I'm also in the beginner bracket, impressed with my own submission yet, just about every submission we have seen so far has surpassed my quality (well, it was also my first time building something seriously).
Another lovely beginner bracket park! And another unique park - it's so wild to see the ideas people have made in this contest! :)
This park is very nice! The colors are weird but they go well together! Quick suggestion: I would spend a little bit more time on the smoothness of the coaster, while they weren't nearly as rough as many coasters I've seen... it definetely could have been smoother. Other than that, the park was beautiful, and very unique
Thank you and I will have a look on them!
Hey amazing park! And Xellixors pronounciation and translations of the german words were pretty much on point.
Really impressed that he can say Rutsche (Slide) correctly :D
While the buildings are great, the pathwork is top-notch and the rides are fun, this park has an identity crisis going on. It did not even feel German at all. I was also confused with the steampunk elements. That combined with the scenery outside of the park I would have said this was a modern western type park. I'm confused.
Actually, the coaster track was kind of jerky sometimes and unsmooth. It's not a great sign when you hear the wheels squealing so much. It just needs some good smoothing. Like I notice that some people are really good at making the parks and themeing, but the rides themselves are questionable quality.
LETS GO PENSSS
I think the creator was trying to go for a former German African colony city look? This looks like something you'd find in former colony cities like Swakopmund and Windhoek in Nambia.
My tip for this creator. If you want to create something German, look for stuff on Google first because this is nothing German at all. On the other hand, it looks pretty cool al together. If you say it was African mine, then I got it.
I watched two pictures but probaly not very good ones, thanks!
@@XboxgamerZ No problem men. If you want some tips, just ask the community. It helps a lot if you share a screenshot and ask about opinions.
@@AllOfJas thank you and I will do that!
For me, it is far more than a beginner park and i think the style is unique, too. The coaster are compact but yeah, could need some fine tuning. It is amazing that even now, creative people come up with something i´ve never seen before. This contest is going to be epic! :D
Sorry, but I am german and I have never seen buildings like this here before. Only the names of the rides are german. The Village looks like spanish-western crossover. :D
I searched 2 pictures from it and found it, probaly had bad pictures
@@XboxgamerZ what did you find?
It was the “dig site” for me lol. I like this park. The motorcycle coaster was deff the main attraction. Johnny thought it was weird, but I like the intricate design of the building. I see what you went for. The buildings are great and the park is well themed.
Thanks! :D
Gracias you’re very welcome!
This is a great little park. It feels quaint and believable. There is a high level of polish. The only downside is there wasn't anything standout to make it memorable. could do with an iconic ride like Baron at Efteling. But if this park existed I'd love to visit!
Yes that's the same thing I was thinking, it needs a stand out ride but my next zone will have it, thank you!
I'm on a park spotlight binge
Top notch buildings!
for me its a 5/10
GOOD THINGS
-buildings design
-good looking queue lines
-landscape around the park
-the slide
BAD THINGS
-coasters not smoth
-guest bug trough a lot of things like in queue lines and paths
Ride coaster in track view, it's made with 4m technique
nice park loves it as I only saw it for 5 mins haha but a little feedback the Park nice and big as a saw in the video and the coaster were smoothed and all that. and jonny my park spotlight hmmm I bet its in that 100 places lol.
Thank you!
A great park! I'd slow down coasters more before making them go through lift hills or tires, but that just feels like me nitpicking.
Yeah I do agree that this has no identity
It's definitely an interesting concept. Doesn't really look German though. Maybe more like a Germany in an alternate universe. :D
If these roller coasters were real life, I believe Juwel Grube would be manufactured by Intamin, Gruttenblitz would be built by Schwarzkopf, and Hauptplatz would be built by Vekoma.
Juwel Grube is a intamin multi launch, Gruttenblitz is a vekoma space warp, like formula in energylandia, the schwarzkopf track looks like it and it's the best type in the game to make that coaster, Hauptplatz is a gertslaur bobsled :)
Johnny, as a rought guess, how many promotions are coming from the beginner bracket?
Really unique park! I like it! ;)
you are going to do spotlights that are not part of the contest during the contest??
These mini parks needs transportation rides to give a tour around the park.
Love the buildings & the park layout but the flats need a lot more work & the theming for the the coaster felt a bit thrown together IMO
I’m not trying to be annoying but I am thinking of entering the competition and I want it to be a good park so I need feedback on it. I uploaded a video showcasing the park. This will be helpful as as well as it being the first time I have entered the competition it is also my first park I have built in planet coaster. So feedback will be appreciated. Thx
I like it, but like some said, I agree that it doesn't really say German. That being said, you're a beginner, and it's impressive what you pulled off.
Definitely one of the best parks so far just because it’s so weird 😂
Thanks :P
Interesting, I like it
I definitely got DQed
The mix of color and scenery is so weird, but it looks so cool.
Thank you! :D
Johnny lets not do another one I don't have another six months, also Johny mini park contest 2 lmao
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Early
Maybe Nambia
D**k site 💀
so y u here?
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