What a fun mini-park! I really liked the dark ride in this one, some of the scenes were really detailed! The log flume was quite nice too! What was done with the firework display was pretty cool, I liked how it was more of a show, rather than a few random fireworks. For feedback, I feel like the coaster needed a few major adjustments. Everything up to and including the vertical loop was nice, but everything else after that just felt a bit clunky and rushed. There could have been a much better break run at the end instead of that weird flat turn at full speed with the bump up after slowing it down. I also think some of those giant trees looked a little bit odd. Other than that, I really like this mini-park, it's another great beginner submission!
I like that he looks at the parks independently from Jonny's screen. That way he picks up on stuff Jonny would probably miss (like the dark ride here).
Hey Johnny, hey Xaphor, thanks for the spotlight and the feedback! The Freefalltower should have been ridden in Seat 20, then you would have seen more:) Oh and you missed a few pirate scenes who tell the story of the sunken ship at 8:46 near the balloon ride :) -whosthatChris aka -thisChris :P
"Have you ever switched poison for your herbs?" Happens to me all the time.... really, I shouldn't keep'm all on the same shelf. You coming for dinner next week right? Jokes apart, we can't name that newbie WhosThatChris anymore, after a park like this everyone's gonna remember their name. Well done.
That witch is definitely evil... :P Seriously though, great park! I think the lighting can be improved (4m floodlights for the win!!!) and the coaster layout, but I loved how cute everything was otherwise!
It was definitely the fireworks for me lol. Beautiful display. I love the story that goes with you. You put a lot of work with the theme. The lighting is spectacular and all. Great job.
Uhhh.... yeah I think it was an accident with using the wrong herb. Twice in a few months time I’ve done this grabbing cayenne pepper for chili powder for my chili! (It was definitely HOT!) & using a crap ton of pepper instead of oregano - so honestly I think this witch deserves a fair, second chance from the villagers. ✌️😉 SmilingGrandma333
whosthatChris: Hey Jonny! Please start on the left side of the park and ride SwitchWitch Kitchen first. (Later) Jonny: And that's the whole park! Xaphor: Well actually we missed that huntsmant darkride Chris said to ride first...... *facepalm*
Really like the theming and all the details. I would’ve preferred to see the park in daytime - it’s easier to catch all the details and I wasn’t a huge fan of the lighting. But great for a beginner bracket with paths all integrated and lots of details on the buildings.
ARGH! Now I'm kicking myself for not adding in the fireworks. I was going to but they are very time consuming to make. Plus, I thought nobody was going to do them. Oh well. Whenever I submit my next park, I'll add them in.
I like to think the witch did kill everyone by accident. Way funnier if she did! Great park! No idea how you found time to cram in all the little details.
I'm really impressed with this park. The theming is so fun and vibrant and there are so many hidden areas, which makes ist really fun to explore, despite being just a mini park. Well done!
Wonderful park. Very playful. Loved the firework show with the witch casting it. As for the dark ride story, The witch is gaslighting the story. She is flat out evil! Great job WhosThatChris .
Witch just can't cook... must be my mother or sister.... so not evil! Love the firework show. The log flume is well designed, but I agree with Xaphor: a bit lackluster; however, I can guess that might be the design for a more kiddie-friendly log flume. This park does leave me wanting more, though. I think more story development could have been taken and planning to execute it so it's not so all over the place. That being said, what IS present is very very smartly themed and has some unique never-before-seen elements from queue design to just one little themed item that sets things apart. I have a feeling this creator is going to do even better with more space, and not being restricted on a timeline. I got the impression this might have gotten rushed, which is expected for a contest and being a newer builder. So overall, great park, want more!
Glad i did not submit mine, night elf themed val'shara park with shaladrassil in the middle that holds a freefall tower too. I decided to hold the submission back tho cuz I am currently turning it into a larger park
@@whosthatchris8149 youre the creator of that park?!?!? Wow, great job, the only issue was the ride inside the tree, it didnt have a view of the park, amd maybe inside the tree trunk meanwhile going up you should uave put some effects or animatronics. But even that was great
Lots of boxes ticked here for me. Love a fantasy/fairytale theme, great buildings, bad ass sign work, funny storytelling, some cool ideas - especially with the witch casting the fireworks. Excellent work 👍
All the parks had a pre-check before recording to make sure they followed the rules from what I understand so they didn't have to waste time recording parks that got DQ'd.
Vertical requirement was also variable. After we set the height we quickly found out the tallest flatride in the game actually broke the height requirement set. So we allowed people to go slightly above that if needed. Generally speaking the height requirement was to avoid people making never ending stacked parks. Not necessarily something we will DQ for not being perfect on. Unless they went absurdly high. The main requirement is 40x40, which is plenty of challenge!
What a fun mini-park! I really liked the dark ride in this one, some of the scenes were really detailed! The log flume was quite nice too! What was done with the firework display was pretty cool, I liked how it was more of a show, rather than a few random fireworks. For feedback, I feel like the coaster needed a few major adjustments. Everything up to and including the vertical loop was nice, but everything else after that just felt a bit clunky and rushed. There could have been a much better break run at the end instead of that weird flat turn at full speed with the bump up after slowing it down. I also think some of those giant trees looked a little bit odd. Other than that, I really like this mini-park, it's another great beginner submission!
This contest is really ramping up, enjoying every park spotlight! Only 200 more or so to go (:
Best park until now! Xaphor makes everything so much more fun, though lol
I like that he looks at the parks independently from Jonny's screen. That way he picks up on stuff Jonny would probably miss (like the dark ride here).
Hey Johnny, hey Xaphor, thanks for the spotlight and the feedback! The Freefalltower should have been ridden in Seat 20, then you would have seen more:) Oh and you missed a few pirate scenes who tell the story of the sunken ship at 8:46 near the balloon ride :) -whosthatChris aka -thisChris :P
Your park looks very nice
"Have you ever switched poison for your herbs?" Happens to me all the time.... really, I shouldn't keep'm all on the same shelf. You coming for dinner next week right? Jokes apart, we can't name that newbie WhosThatChris anymore, after a park like this everyone's gonna remember their name. Well done.
That witch is definitely evil... :P Seriously though, great park! I think the lighting can be improved (4m floodlights for the win!!!) and the coaster layout, but I loved how cute everything was otherwise!
It was definitely the fireworks for me lol. Beautiful display. I love the story that goes with you. You put a lot of work with the theme. The lighting is spectacular and all. Great job.
Uhhh.... yeah I think it was an accident with using the wrong herb. Twice in a few months time I’ve done this grabbing cayenne pepper for chili powder for my chili! (It was definitely HOT!) & using a crap ton of pepper instead of oregano - so honestly I think this witch deserves a fair, second chance from the villagers. ✌️😉 SmilingGrandma333
I like this! A lot of thought went into this and it shows. Another great park in the beginners bracket. Good luck!
whosthatChris: Hey Jonny! Please start on the left side of the park and ride SwitchWitch Kitchen first.
(Later) Jonny: And that's the whole park!
Xaphor: Well actually we missed that huntsmant darkride Chris said to ride first...... *facepalm*
Thanks for feeling with me haha
Really like the theming and all the details. I would’ve preferred to see the park in daytime - it’s easier to catch all the details and I wasn’t a huge fan of the lighting. But great for a beginner bracket with paths all integrated and lots of details on the buildings.
This is an amazing park, you did a great job. Think he needs to move up the ranks for sure.
ARGH! Now I'm kicking myself for not adding in the fireworks. I was going to but they are very time consuming to make. Plus, I thought nobody was going to do them. Oh well. Whenever I submit my next park, I'll add them in.
This is one of the coolest parks I’ve seen and it’s from a new builder great build
Best one so far. That was fun and well designed.
Hi Johnny
The witch chose the wrong herb on purpose so she would have an excuse to burn everything when the town retaliated. #deepLore
I like to think the witch did kill everyone by accident. Way funnier if she did!
Great park! No idea how you found time to cram in all the little details.
Great park but that loopin coaster went outside the park boarder otherwisw the theme was great and the lighting and everything was great
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I'm really impressed with this park. The theming is so fun and vibrant and there are so many hidden areas, which makes ist really fun to explore, despite being just a mini park. Well done!
There are even more than Johnny visited! Feel free to check it out steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2175199914
I love how much video’s we get because of the contest!!
Is Xzafour's kid going to have Xzafive as a handle?
Wonderful park. Very playful. Loved the firework show with the witch casting it. As for the dark ride story, The witch is gaslighting the story. She is flat out evil! Great job WhosThatChris .
Thanks a lot Websearcher!
A great detailed park, really enjoyed it 👍🏻
Witch just can't cook... must be my mother or sister.... so not evil!
Love the firework show. The log flume is well designed, but I agree with Xaphor: a bit lackluster; however, I can guess that might be the design for a more kiddie-friendly log flume. This park does leave me wanting more, though. I think more story development could have been taken and planning to execute it so it's not so all over the place. That being said, what IS present is very very smartly themed and has some unique never-before-seen elements from queue design to just one little themed item that sets things apart. I have a feeling this creator is going to do even better with more space, and not being restricted on a timeline. I got the impression this might have gotten rushed, which is expected for a contest and being a newer builder. So overall, great park, want more!
Hi, thanks for that awesome feedback! I‘m gonna do more planning on future projects. And yes: story telling might be developed more in another park!:)
I actually love the nighttime lighting 😍
Lovely! really colourful! well done!
Sup Johnny 5!!!!
If the Wicked Witch coaster in this park was real life, I am unsure of which manufacturer would create it. My best guess would have to be Intamin.
No one would even attempt it except for six flags and intamin cause they are the wild cards
Glad i did not submit mine, night elf themed val'shara park with shaladrassil in the middle that holds a freefall tower too. I decided to hold the submission back tho cuz I am currently turning it into a larger park
Hit me up when it‘s done! -whosthatChris
Hey, Planet Coaster!
I honestly liked it at night
I like the giant trees
This park is so much fun. Love all the colors at night and the little notes everywhere.
Thanks Denies!
Who says the intro with him
I found the rides to be kinda "meh" minus that dark ride. The general theming however was FANTASTIC
3:53 thats what she said
Amazing
hey johnny. your the best dude.
93
lol
The princess is the real witch. She accidentally killed her family and blamed it on the witch. The witch then got mad and tried to destory everyone
Uh somebody‘s on the witchs side! :D who knows? Maybe the story will continue in my next park! -whosthatChris
@@whosthatchris8149 youre the creator of that park?!?!? Wow, great job, the only issue was the ride inside the tree, it didnt have a view of the park, amd maybe inside the tree trunk meanwhile going up you should uave put some effects or animatronics. But even that was great
uri mascka yes i am :) yeah i know, xaphor and johnny were right. The one view was good, bit all other sided were rather boring
Lots of boxes ticked here for me. Love a fantasy/fairytale theme, great buildings, bad ass sign work, funny storytelling, some cool ideas - especially with the witch casting the fireworks. Excellent work 👍
thank you kind stranger! -whosthatChris
Am I the only one noticing that they are not checking the vertical requirements for these? Or did that change and no longer a rule?
All the parks had a pre-check before recording to make sure they followed the rules from what I understand so they didn't have to waste time recording parks that got DQ'd.
@@troopermatthew9106 Thank you! This park looks really tall so I was curious. Thanks!
Vertical requirement was also variable. After we set the height we quickly found out the tallest flatride in the game actually broke the height requirement set. So we allowed people to go slightly above that if needed. Generally speaking the height requirement was to avoid people making never ending stacked parks. Not necessarily something we will DQ for not being perfect on. Unless they went absurdly high. The main requirement is 40x40, which is plenty of challenge!
@@Channel5Gaming thank you for the clarification!
Bruh this is so good I want this game so bad.
Hey guys Rascal 5752 here in case ur wondering. Very nice theming! THis was a great build. I would go here 100%!