You have talent in beats, but you add too much unnecessary bass, try to lower it, it really covers all of your nice beat. and there the bass is too outstanding, I would try making it lower volume and not on the first place in beat + a lower note for the bass, on like 1 or 2. Still it's better than what you were doing before. This style fits your beats very good.
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You have talent in beats, but you add too much unnecessary bass, try to lower it, it really covers all of your nice beat. and there the bass is too outstanding, I would try making it lower volume and not on the first place in beat + a lower note for the bass, on like 1 or 2. Still it's better than what you were doing before. This style fits your beats very good.