Is the lone human in the competitions one person or multiple people!!!!????? Your stupid AI keeps calling HIM,...."THEY". WTF!!!???? VERY ANNOYING to ALL of you whom posted this story.
@@elextech1Makes more sense when you take into account the different species. The other species may not be fully knowing of human genders, so “they” allows for an error free option.
@@elextech1 "dont mind them, they dont talk much" "That's their lunch don't eat it" "They're wrong that's not how you spell that" "They fell down the steps" A couple of examples for you
Drop the demented AI narration and equally moronic speech-to-subtitles algorithm and let a human reader at it. The result WILL be better than this. While you're at it, scrap the AI storywriter too. A second grader of normal intelligense could easily produce a story of equal or higher quality.
This would have been a far better story if humans were already established as the galaxy's pre-eminent warriors, and the challenge system existed as a way to qualify to face them. A way to put any cocky newcomers in their place, because all the elder races know not to screw with humans. Just something to change things up. I've seen a bunch of these stories lately, abd it feels like they are all basically the same. It gets pretty repetitive and boring.
How to destroy a very good story: 1. Use plural non-gendered pronouns where the reader has yet to establish a singularity or a plurality. 2. Use stress-toned voices at maximum volume [with reference to narrator] to make listening to the story nearly painful. 3. Apply said voices and volume menaces outside the actual dialogue. Yeah, great story. Allow the reader to participate in the story by applying his/her own imagination to the process.
@@stormwolf78--- 'They' has been used for centuries when the number or gender of the person is unknown or as a less formal version of 'one' in the sense 'One may do as one likes in this situation'. In this situation it's established that there is one competitor who is male. Use of 'they' to refer to him makes no sense and suggests there is another competitor/group of competitors that the reader somehow missed.
@ What silliness? Singular they? I hope you realize that singular they has been a thing since the 1300's. So given it's been a thing for over 700 years, why do you think it'll stop soon?
Yes thats the dictionary definition the common usage is still plural even though the correct usage is singular. This sentence alone would make most from the 1300s die of fright or simply be unable to understand the meaning being conveyed. @@stormwolf78 And regarding they does that not apply to an androgynous species?
This is clearly written by either an AI or an idiot. I knew the neutron star stuff was ridiculous, so I did ONE Google search, and a neutron star weighs 10^17 kg per cubic meter. For those who don't know math notation, that means a waist-high cube (1 meter on each side) weighs 100,000,000,000,000,000 kilograms, or 100 trillion tons. Furthermore, as everyone else has noted, the daemon program you're using to read the story keeps changing voices, often in the middle of a sentence. Get a better writer AND a better voice actor.
Well I rather hear them call them human. Then hear another one of these stories that make a woman the strongest person and can beat everything up. You know those stories we never wanna hear again.
Faster than a quantum particle can shift states is clearly the best line in the entire catalog
Stupid voice changes.
they need to just keep with one voice
Never leave home without your "Emergency Chocolate"!!!
Voice changes were offputting but still funny af
Is the lone human in the competitions one person or multiple people!!!!????? Your stupid AI keeps calling HIM,...."THEY". WTF!!!???? VERY ANNOYING to ALL of you whom posted this story.
The word they has been used as a singular pronoun for centuries
@@Rose-bg1by Not in this way. That's another lie from the left.
@@Rose-bg1by Do you have an example?
@@elextech1Makes more sense when you take into account the different species. The other species may not be fully knowing of human genders, so “they” allows for an error free option.
@@elextech1 "dont mind them, they dont talk much"
"That's their lunch don't eat it"
"They're wrong that's not how you spell that"
"They fell down the steps"
A couple of examples for you
This is one of the funniest and accurate depiction of Eartlings on in the Galaxy!!😅😅😊
Fucking brilliant. Still only outdone by Hold My Beer.
despite the constant voice changes a good story
So many complaints, please just enjoy the story. No one is perfect, that’s why we are humans, we learn by doing.
Really enjoyed the story but the constant voice changes were offputting.
Drop the demented AI narration and equally moronic speech-to-subtitles algorithm and let a human reader at it. The result WILL be better than this.
While you're at it, scrap the AI storywriter too. A second grader of normal intelligense could easily produce a story of equal or higher quality.
Why doES THE VOICE SUDDENLy go loud intermITTEntly?
Nope, couldn't finish it.
This would have been a far better story if humans were already established as the galaxy's pre-eminent warriors, and the challenge system existed as a way to qualify to face them. A way to put any cocky newcomers in their place, because all the elder races know not to screw with humans. Just something to change things up. I've seen a bunch of these stories lately, abd it feels like they are all basically the same. It gets pretty repetitive and boring.
The word you're searching for is "sophomoric".
or a Monday in New Mexico 😅
lool poor poor aliens i almost feel sorry fer them they should've done their homework on humans :)
The voice changes are terrible. Decennt story, some of it didnt make sense but alright for the most part
Agree with annoying voice changes. Otherwise an amusing story. Thanks.
How to destroy a very good story:
1. Use plural non-gendered pronouns where the reader has yet to establish a singularity or a plurality.
2. Use stress-toned voices at maximum volume [with reference to narrator] to make listening to the story nearly painful.
3. Apply said voices and volume menaces outside the actual dialogue.
Yeah, great story. Allow the reader to participate in the story by applying his/her own imagination to the process.
AI still has not learned past tense or what a name is
I don't like the use of "they" instead of "he."
Why?
@@stormwolf78--- 'They' has been used for centuries when the number or gender of the person is unknown or as a less formal version of 'one' in the sense 'One may do as one likes in this situation'.
In this situation it's established that there is one competitor who is male. Use of 'they' to refer to him makes no sense and suggests there is another competitor/group of competitors that the reader somehow missed.
I can't wait for that silliness to end!!!
And hope it is soon!!!
Yes I said that!!! And so what!!!!
@ What silliness? Singular they? I hope you realize that singular they has been a thing since the 1300's. So given it's been a thing for over 700 years, why do you think it'll stop soon?
Yes thats the dictionary definition the common usage is still plural even though the correct usage is singular. This sentence alone would make most from the 1300s die of fright or simply be unable to understand the meaning being conveyed. @@stormwolf78
And regarding they does that not apply to an androgynous species?
Lol
You people need to stop complaining, and start writing your own stories just enjoy the work that was put into it
This is literally no effort given it is AI written.
@ShadowManceri AI is in it's infancy at
Can I do your subtitles? Because whatever AI you're using is useless.
This is clearly written by either an AI or an idiot. I knew the neutron star stuff was ridiculous, so I did ONE Google search, and a neutron star weighs 10^17 kg per cubic meter. For those who don't know math notation, that means a waist-high cube (1 meter on each side) weighs 100,000,000,000,000,000 kilograms, or 100 trillion tons. Furthermore, as everyone else has noted, the daemon program you're using to read the story keeps changing voices, often in the middle of a sentence. Get a better writer AND a better voice actor.
Terrible narrator
Well I rather hear them call them human. Then hear another one of these stories that make a woman the strongest person and can beat everything up. You know those stories we never wanna hear again.
Galactic-tok. COOL!!!