Reading & Performing the First Movie Script I Wrote... *i'm scared*

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  • @MakaylaLysiak
    @MakaylaLysiak  2 ปีที่แล้ว +215

    Which script was your favorite? 1 or 2?🤔💭

  • @veronicavidal5335
    @veronicavidal5335 2 ปีที่แล้ว +71

    Locker! Script #2 was my fav, I mean how could u not love that AmAziNg Girl scout flashback scene?! They were like "GET HER!!!!" *SLAP SLAP SLAP SLAP, RANDOM FLYING GIRL SCOUT COOKIE BOX!* 😅Also those bloopers were so funny!🤣🤪 BLOOPER GANG!!!!

  • @MauraHayden
    @MauraHayden 2 ปีที่แล้ว +208

    The re-enactments were so funny! Love watching this and your editing is so good! Great work Makayla! Literally am obsessed 🤩 (locker)

  • @christahailey4730
    @christahailey4730 2 ปีที่แล้ว +85

    “LOCKER”🔒A part two definitely needs to come, This was very entertaining and we can see your acting skills come into play. I think the second script was my fav, It is HILARIOUS 😆

  • @mellamojami
    @mellamojami 2 ปีที่แล้ว +48

    Editing and acting on point. So entertaining! As a girl who used to write a lot of unfinished stories in middle school, this is very reminiscent of the kind of content a young girl would create

  • @s4raa_xz
    @s4raa_xz 2 ปีที่แล้ว +154

    You're a really amazing actress and i've always loved to act and i finally asked my mum to enroll me to acting classes!! Is there any tips that you would give to someone who wants to start acting or just someone thats practicing acting?

    • @s4raa_xz
      @s4raa_xz 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Also, locker

    • @s4raa_xz
      @s4raa_xz 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      BLOOPER GANG

    • @yasminelena7191
      @yasminelena7191 2 ปีที่แล้ว +14

      be confident, pretend like nobody is watching and try your best

    • @s4raa_xz
      @s4raa_xz 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@yasminelena7191 thanks! I’ll try my best😅

    • @baygurl29
      @baygurl29 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      @@s4raa_xz you got this! Make sure for lines you might have a friend that acts like that character, If so, study their speech and body movement.

  • @like.clarkwork
    @like.clarkwork 2 ปีที่แล้ว +20

    Oh. My. God. I could never look at my first scripts LMAO. I applaud you not only reading, but PERFORMING all of these.

  • @mellowyellow5865
    @mellowyellow5865 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Don’t worry my first script was so bad… I wrote a full length movie, on good docs. 100 pages, on Google docs, all in the wrong format😅 I was 14, and uhh, I based it roughly on my band section, not in the people, but the concept, and one of the guys read it. He decided this one character was this girl in the group (it wasn’t her) and that character died at the end (I was bored). So this girl HATED me. She was my section leader the next year too, and she was already trying to get me to quit, but then she started to full on harass me, like badly. Like very badly. She spread rumors, got my band directors to hate me too, and also made fun of my writing that she had never read. Yeah, uh, it was so bad. She was also like over two years older than me, which made it even worse, but safe to say, after a lot of pain and crying, I quit band and decided to only write fantasy from then on. Yours are so good, honestly that and your acting too. Idk how good mine would be acted out, but definitely not as good as what I just watched here.

  • @foreverrsage
    @foreverrsage 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    this was so amazing! please keep up the good work!

  • @CoraniYT
    @CoraniYT 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    great video 😄💯 def make a part 2 and script 2 was my favorite 🤩

  • @baileythefilmmaker
    @baileythefilmmaker 2 ปีที่แล้ว +23

    Honestly, these are better than a lot of sitcoms I've seen,

  • @iiminty9230
    @iiminty9230 2 ปีที่แล้ว +24

    I loved this. Please make a part 2, maybe including one of your newer scripts for a comparison? The bloopers were very funny. Also Locker ☺

  • @neoreulboyeojweooooooooo
    @neoreulboyeojweooooooooo 2 ปีที่แล้ว +24

    I find so funny to comeback to the stories i wrote when i was younger so this video was definitely entertaining. I relate so much to the thoughts like "why did i wrote this" or "what went through my mind" lmao
    (also, blooper gang)

  • @tahirahaa6982
    @tahirahaa6982 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    this was too funny o loved that this is out of your normal videos but i feel like you should do this more! Love this and also your amazing!

  • @IwishyouRoses444
    @IwishyouRoses444 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Locker 🔐
    Script twos fight scene was so funny 😂
    I want to see some more of script two.
    The bloopers 🤣

  • @AnthonyPOG
    @AnthonyPOG 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    script 2 HAS SOOO MUCH potential *(video Idea - rewritting my old scripts and preforming them) I think this would so great to watch. This video was amazing overall and really innovative I haven't seen anyone do this on TH-cam yet I loved it

  • @racheldeschaine
    @racheldeschaine 2 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    I like how quickly the Girl Scout scene escalated 😂

  • @lizaestaquasela
    @lizaestaquasela 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    MAKAYLA!!!! I need another video with you reacting to RECENT scripts, like ASAP.
    I can comment any words you want, apple, locker, but please, POST MORE!!!! I want more videos of my fav youtuber

  • @jemimawilley4572
    @jemimawilley4572 2 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    That was so cool! seeing you reading your old script encouraged me to break out some of my older novels - and just like you, my younger self would dieeee if she saw my writing today! Loveee always (locker!!)

  • @kadee7149
    @kadee7149 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please give a part two you might think there sorta bad but I think your really talented

  • @FantasyFreakTrin
    @FantasyFreakTrin 2 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    This was a great video! I’m just starting out in my career, so in a few years, I’ll come back and look over some of my stuff too. It’s so awesome to see how far we’ve come as people and actors. Wade is the man, and also, LOCKER!

  • @loisstoger5571
    @loisstoger5571 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    BLOOPER GANG !!! Amazing video Makayla ! Actually I think all of your videos are amazing ✨

  • @mae4780
    @mae4780 2 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    This is hilarious! I can see how much you’ve improved with your screenwriting.
    (Locker)

  • @iamkentrrize
    @iamkentrrize 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Your videos are always helpful 👍.. it makes me work instantly on my craft

  • @madej4118
    @madej4118 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    This was my favorite video of your by far 🤣🤩( all of them are amazing though💜) The time you put into editing this definitely paid off, and it was so good!🥰 A part 2 would be so fun to see! And all of your acting videos are so helpful!
    locker
    Blooper gang😂

  • @c0smicchelsea
    @c0smicchelsea 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Lockerrr also I really liked script 2. It’s was pretty interesting. I find the scene about 3, 8 year olds piling on a highschooler pretty funny

  • @optimalinheritance1008
    @optimalinheritance1008 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Such amazing content! You’re so inspiring. Love watching your journey! You’re a gift to many. 💕

  • @theharmonyoftwo
    @theharmonyoftwo 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Love this video💜
    (locker) i would like to see a part 2💜💜

  • @Swaggysausage
    @Swaggysausage 2 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    I already this video is gonna be great it’s amazing to see your growth as an actress/screen writer! Ur so inspirational!

  • @lynnietv
    @lynnietv ปีที่แล้ว

    LOCKER , i cant get enough of ur vids 😭

  • @jermainegrundyyoutubechann7650
    @jermainegrundyyoutubechann7650 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    This video was amazing and embarrassingly relatable Trust me I’ve written my own movie on Google docs too so don’t be embarrassed honestly it’s funny to someone did the same thing and is teaching others how to act, screenwriter, and more I absolutely love your channel and hope you do this more 😂🥰
    Edit: script two was more funny I want myself to make it lol 😭😂
    Edit 2: PART 2 NOW 😡! Hehe 🤪

  • @Caazzii0
    @Caazzii0 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I LITERALLY LOVE YOUR CONTENT ITS HELPED ME SO MUCH!!

  • @racheldeschaine
    @racheldeschaine 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    This video is brilliant oml pleaaase do more of these the editing is so impressive-I laughed so hard at the pick me girl😂

  • @oliviab8550
    @oliviab8550 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Locker🔒📚, i love what you did at the end and I can’t imagine how long it took for you to film all of the parts

  • @oliviajoyorange
    @oliviajoyorange 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    That made me smile so much! Brilliant as always! I especially loved the blooper reel! Locker and BLOOPER GANG!!!

  • @isabelladowney8160
    @isabelladowney8160 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Locker🔒📚🎒! But I like the second one better!

  • @emi_2811
    @emi_2811 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Hi Makayla! Loved the video :) I’m not an actor myself… But your videos are so inspiring, and always makes my day better! The bloopers were so funny, thanks for including them!! Locker, and blooper gang

  • @Mieka8910
    @Mieka8910 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I LOVE this video 😂 I literally laughed out loud so many times, you have no idea. ~locker~ and of course, BLOOPERS GANG

  • @MillisThings
    @MillisThings 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Locker 📚 I would love to see a part 2! Your reenactment was really funny and cool to watch! Great job!

  • @KeilaniMartinez101
    @KeilaniMartinez101 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    I’m the 9th like

  • @anisia-rachel
    @anisia-rachel 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    i can't wait to see and hear your progress from your very first scripts to your most recent ones!! LOCKER🔒📚🎒
    edit: also i was laughing so much during the bloopers that i almost choked on my food

  • @KDLOVE-j1i
    @KDLOVE-j1i 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Oh my gosh😂 this is one of my favorite videos you’ve made😂 absolutely love!!! Locker📚🎒❤️ and Blooper Gang😂😂 you’re so funny😂😂😂

  • @lauraguevera3423
    @lauraguevera3423 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    While watching this I was laughing so hard 🤣 best content ever .

  • @Lilferdi
    @Lilferdi 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    That school script reminded me of Zendaya on Disney Channel I don’t know if it’s KC undercover or Shake it up though

  • @Sageeex
    @Sageeex 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I love your videos! You're a really funny and talented person :)
    I'd love to see more of these!

  • @gabby6080
    @gabby6080 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    not the "Wade" note on Wade's chest 😂was Scene A based on real life at all? Was Kimberly based on a real bully in school? The girl scouts one was hilarious! your facial expressions for each scout were hilarious! Locker!

  • @sydniegd
    @sydniegd 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I wrote a script with my friend Carys once about a girl named Angela that goes by Angie getting a letter in the mail and it was meant for her neighbors bc it was their niece and she wrote back to the girl that sent the letter and they kept writing back to each other and started kinda getting feelings the parents and friends of Angie was teasing her about having a bf that's a important factor but then one day the girl that wrote the letter aka Kim was staying at her aunt and uncle's which is her neighbor next door and they hung out and eventually really really liked each other but then one day Kim had written a love poem about Angie and her aunt found it and called Angie's mom and they where mad at them bc this was in the 70s so they told them to stop talking so that night Kim and Angie Elop if your wondering why her name is Angie I was listening to songs .from the 70s and one called Angie from the rolling stones came on about a sad girl named Angie and in the story Angie's sad it makes more sense if u read the script bc her dad left and her brother died in a car crash last year then she came home one day from roller skating with her friends and her mom had a new boyfriend that was a drunky and stuff anyways and I said maybe her name can be Angela since it's a popular name in the 60s-70s and Angie could be her nick name but then I googled the song and the girls original name was Angela so it went perfectly Idk why I did this I was really bored one day it's called call me Angie btw nobody copy it bc I'm almost done the script

    • @L4xuryN
      @L4xuryN 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      No body wants to copy you

    • @camillestaes6991
      @camillestaes6991 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Please use some punctuation marks..

    • @berniceahortor9578
      @berniceahortor9578 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      ​@@camillestaes6991 True

    • @berniceahortor9578
      @berniceahortor9578 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      ​@@L4xuryN Understand me here when I say that's not really nice. I'm not trying the be mean. I'm also ten so like, understand 🥺

    • @L4xuryN
      @L4xuryN 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@berniceahortor9578 Now k understand why the script was so bad

  • @liyaqua
    @liyaqua 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Locker n blooper gang woooo 🤡
    I just had to write a screenplay for my Film class. It was such a mess, but I am very proud of it.
    It's crazy how u started when u were 12 oml girl-

    • @MakaylaLysiak
      @MakaylaLysiak  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you for watching and good luck with your screenplay!

  • @germanshepherd9578
    @germanshepherd9578 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    So happy to be apart of blooper gang 😹😹😹

  • @brunomartinsonline
    @brunomartinsonline ปีที่แล้ว

    Fantastic thank you so much for the content!

  • @Maddy_lx
    @Maddy_lx ปีที่แล้ว +2

    STOP HER TRYING TO FIND HER SCRIPT WHILE THE GIRLS “BEAT HER UP” WAS SO FUNNY

  • @laurieblain-dumas6806
    @laurieblain-dumas6806 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I love your content! Locker :)

  • @hjsniff
    @hjsniff 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    locker (also script 2 was hilarious. I love your content!!!) JK blooper gang!!!!

  • @rachelfitnesss
    @rachelfitnesss 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    yasss i love it 😍

  • @zoefears1968
    @zoefears1968 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    locker :) love ya makayla. blooper gang

  • @jaleelnyela
    @jaleelnyela 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Locker🔒📚🎒

  • @pepperminttree
    @pepperminttree 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    you literally put so much effort into ur vids🤯

  • @gamingtips6868
    @gamingtips6868 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Why didn't u put your backpack in your LOCKER during those scenes? I'm sure that LOCKER was hungry.
    Ok, that made no sense.

  • @yukno_stretch
    @yukno_stretch ปีที่แล้ว +1

    It makes perfect sense. U were basically saying the cafeteria is fake/terrible/simple/nasty or all the above.. Ex: Schools with tater-tots u can say they're bad and make a joke of them being microwaved..
    Microwaves tater-tots are actually👆🏽😋good, but u get the point..

  • @Aveeruth
    @Aveeruth ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This video really inspired me! I’m going to go work on a script right now! I would love it if you made a part 2! “Locker”

  • @ioanevlog6889
    @ioanevlog6889 ปีที่แล้ว

    BLOOPER GANG

  • @RicardoFilmsTM
    @RicardoFilmsTM ปีที่แล้ว

    BLOOPER GANG

  • @sofiatufts3345
    @sofiatufts3345 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    BLOOPER GANG

  • @stefanross8129
    @stefanross8129 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    ...... Good job and kudos for just completing a first draft of a script!! Bravo!!

  • @ManaKhorshidi
    @ManaKhorshidi ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thw way that they shoved Jordan in her LOCKER, and when James said SECRET BLOOPER GANG for no reason at ALL

  • @saffiregoat6432
    @saffiregoat6432 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    “ GET HER GIRLS” 🤣🤣🤣 omg these scripts r Hilarious
    Locker

  • @al_thebrownie
    @al_thebrownie 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    *Me: watching the principal talk*
    *Principal randomly says: SUBSCRIBE...... NOW*
    *Me: girl wtf-*

  • @Prabodhwagh
    @Prabodhwagh 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Congratulations 🎉🎉you have gotten a new follower
    Edit :ahh I got my first like

  • @edits.by_clove
    @edits.by_clove ปีที่แล้ว +1

    “Locker”
    We need a part 2!!!
    I need more!
    I watched the BLOOPERRRRS

  • @callmenonku
    @callmenonku 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Apple 🍏 and thank you for posting again, love you like always and may God bless you hun❤️

  • @samens9924
    @samens9924 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You're such a good actor and I love you. You are DEFINITELY my idol. ❤ love you

  • @nnamudifrank3608
    @nnamudifrank3608 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Please I have I question. I just finished writing a script, do I need editor to edit the script before it been acted because I might have used some wrong English in the script.

  • @Alivialiversedge
    @Alivialiversedge ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I'm currently writing my very first script to perform to my parents with my sister. I'm writing it with a pencil and paper🤣

  • @Blxzzoms
    @Blxzzoms ปีที่แล้ว

    8:05 that’s me when my friends say I’m to sassy

  • @Madib10
    @Madib10 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Not the 8 year olds beating her up 😂☠️😭
    I would watch that show 😂🫠

  • @meherrawlley7381
    @meherrawlley7381 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Locker anddd apple! 🔒🍎

  • @Wonderingabouttwd
    @Wonderingabouttwd ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I see its alot of cliche stuff in movies period but its really helpful on how to do a script a bit and i love how you would tell us if its something not to do in a script so its really helpful because im making a mini movie on my channel that will show my face the only bad news is i play every character but i have the clothes and stuff for that-

  • @brisbackup
    @brisbackup ปีที่แล้ว +1

    oh, and PLZ PLZ part to the suspense is KILLING ME!!!!!!!

  • @Grace-tg2uz
    @Grace-tg2uz ปีที่แล้ว +1

    My parents would let me be an actor and becoming an actor was the one dream I had when I was growing and they want me to do something I don't want so I am always just watching these videos

  • @maslenka3558
    @maslenka3558 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    locker, blooper gang! i loved the bloopers too much! and the whole video, i needdddd part two 🤍

  • @charlottem4849
    @charlottem4849 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Your videos are literally so entertaining to watch!! I dream of becoming a screenwriter one day too, and you've inspired me so much, here on youtube. I think your scripts are so funny and creative; how old were you when you wrote them? I can barely imagine how good your scripts must be today if these ones are old!!! Thanks for making me smile and laugh today 😄😂😂❤❤ *LOCKER*!!!

  • @Skz_froggi
    @Skz_froggi 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I Liked 1 but 2 seems interesting maybe part 2 will make me like 2 better (locker)

  • @tianacollins9070
    @tianacollins9070 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Part 2 pleasseee 🤍🤍🤍ooh and locker hehe

  • @JonathanHoFILM
    @JonathanHoFILM 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I can’t stop laughing from the start! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • @kyxlay
    @kyxlay 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Locker
    Yes please do a part two I love how she takes time to act out each Character
    Like if u agree 👍
    👇

  • @elliepapadopoulos5453
    @elliepapadopoulos5453 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Blooper gang 😅yes I would definitely like a part two!

  • @starstable3573
    @starstable3573 ปีที่แล้ว

    Locker BLOOPER GANG 👹

  • @CoraMB
    @CoraMB 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Uhhh locker.
    BTW I loved the bloopers 😆 🤣 😂

  • @leonidas746
    @leonidas746 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    2nd!!

  • @waidiasakoraevans2190
    @waidiasakoraevans2190 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    they were hilarious especially the second act with the girl scouts🤣

  • @imhannahbrooks
    @imhannahbrooks 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Yayy!! This is so exciting!

  • @galacticagamer2000
    @galacticagamer2000 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You should do a recent script and compare them, for me I have been writing not movie scripts but novels since I was nine and its great to see the improvement. (Locker)

  • @zakiyawiltz
    @zakiyawiltz 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I’ve always wanted to do little acting screens like this but I have no idea how to do these🤣😭but this was really good!♥️btw locker

    • @MakaylaLysiak
      @MakaylaLysiak  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you for watching!💕🎬

  • @BookwormEdits
    @BookwormEdits ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I WAS ACTUALLY LAUGHING SMM AND I COULDNT STOP. LMFAOOOOO

  • @vladalenavornic6689
    @vladalenavornic6689 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi ! I wanted to ask, is it wrong to look in mirror while acting???

  • @katelynsedits8054
    @katelynsedits8054 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee do part 2!!!!!!

  • @Rdvtbhnyve
    @Rdvtbhnyve 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Locker (blooper ganggg) ❤️

  • @mae4780
    @mae4780 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Incredible! I know you will reach your goal, soon I will be hearing your own movies everywhere 😊
    (Locker)

  • @noe2toes
    @noe2toes 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    yas we need a part2 !!!! and I love the re-enactments, (locker) the bloopers were literally so funny though

  • @ilaynaa
    @ilaynaa 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I saw the green screen on your instagram, I guess I’m about to find out what’s about to go down 🤪