On-the-Spot IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample (Band 9)

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  • @bimbimlopez
    @bimbimlopez 4 ปีที่แล้ว +36

    This is perhaps the most instructive and informative video ever for IELTS WT2. Every component a student needs to know about how this task is supposed to be done is compressed into a 30-minute video. Also, the use of sophisticated or grandiloquent words are not really necessary for the task; instead, simple words provided clarity to the whole essay.
    This video is a must-watch. I highly recommended this to anyone who are planning to take the IELTS soon, and also to those who are aiming for a higher band score for writing.
    Congratulations! This video is stupendous! ❤

  • @randyobas4547
    @randyobas4547 4 ปีที่แล้ว +20

    Wow! After watching this video, I suddenly see the light at the end of the tunnel. There's hope! THESE THREE ARE THE TRINITY OF IELTS.

  • @diealegendtv5410
    @diealegendtv5410 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Taray SIR Brian Godlike.. damn sana maging ganyan ako kagaling!!

  • @loressellannmacavinta3040
    @loressellannmacavinta3040 4 ปีที่แล้ว +27

    Everytime Sir Bryan starts to speak during my IELTS class my JAW DROPS!and when he does IELTS task letters??I drool!LOL ang galing talaga the BEST!!He’s not called DEMIGOD for nothing!so go for 9.0 Niners review center people!❤️they are the reason why i passed my english exam on first attempt!😊pero pag si sir Ervin combination na po ng dalawa ang reaction ko jawdrop+drooling effect na tlga🤪

  • @pasaykid6107
    @pasaykid6107 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    he makes it look so easy

  • @Pheelyp
    @Pheelyp 4 ปีที่แล้ว +91

    I hope this was helpful. :)

    • @vernabee09
      @vernabee09 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      This is awesome, Niner! More power! ❤️

    • @fndecierto
      @fndecierto 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      It is! There are people like you guys who were born with a gift to educate.

    • @Kirk_official
      @Kirk_official 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you for this, more power!

    • @mebellamebella8205
      @mebellamebella8205 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      It is sir. Thank you.

    • @ynaalfonso5778
      @ynaalfonso5778 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Your team is amazing! So helpful po.

  • @joemharmangi6842
    @joemharmangi6842 4 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    The best writing video I have ever watched

  • @nikkibrillante6626
    @nikkibrillante6626 4 ปีที่แล้ว +19

    Lakas maka UAAP Battle of English proficiency. From left to right.
    Sir Ervin Temporal (UP), Sir Brian Sioson (FEU), Sir Pheelyp Aytona (UST).

    • @tinmatos
      @tinmatos 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Sir Brian - UST

    • @nikkibrillante6626
      @nikkibrillante6626 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@tinmatos nursing course ni sir Brian, FEU.

  • @ColwinMusic
    @ColwinMusic 4 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    Keep it up. More power to 9.0 Niners! Thank you for creating this channel for everyone to learn.
    P.S. Pa-milk tea naman diyan, hahahaha. Hello, Macau Imperial Tea, the sponsor!

  • @gracedomingo2846
    @gracedomingo2846 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Sir brian knows what he is doing

  • @waggingthroughlife
    @waggingthroughlife ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Sir Philip articulates himself with such natural ease in English, and his fluency seems innate. Mapapa-sanaol nalang ako. You have this seamless control of the language Sir, which is both clear and sophisticated. Sir Brian's speech also reflects a similar effortlessness and confidence. Though we haven't met, I'm certain that your abilities as lecturers are unparalleled, and your humble, approachable nature is evident.
    Thank you for this video sir Ervin.

  • @allenhernandez6847
    @allenhernandez6847 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    One of a kind

  • @oybektemirkhujaev3433
    @oybektemirkhujaev3433 4 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    Your informative hints in terms of WT2 are gonna be fundamentally
    supportive for those who are in deep belief of those promising 9 band tips which , actually, are just mechanical writing. Thank verily much po

  • @ralphgeraldnacua6431
    @ralphgeraldnacua6431 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    BRAVO! worth sharing!

  • @graceamores4429
    @graceamores4429 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Amazing

  • @alexanderdelacruz3654
    @alexanderdelacruz3654 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Yes! Suggestion unlocked! Thank you for this sir!

  • @diealegendtv5410
    @diealegendtv5410 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Ive just enrolled sir... thanks dami ko natutunan sa inyo.. hope na maka usap ko kayo one on one... so I can practice my speaking skills..

  • @jennifermagcamit6198
    @jennifermagcamit6198 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    It really helpful talaga sa katulad kung hindi marunong gumawa ng essay at minsan yung question /or story lumalayo na sa topics

  • @gandangbaye
    @gandangbaye 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I really admire Sir Brian when he writes essay on the spot with his laptop. :) so satisfying :) and so inspiring mapapa - "SANA ALL" kana lang talaga when you read his final output. I really hate writing essays but when I took my IELTS exam way back in 2016, I was surprised when I learned that I got 7 on this subtest. Sir Brian and the other 9.0 NINER lecturers really was a great help to me way back then. :) GODBLESS! and MORE POWER!

  • @kithobongcawel9735
    @kithobongcawel9735 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Great

  • @mryoutuber7113
    @mryoutuber7113 4 ปีที่แล้ว +19

    I want to know the essential routines needed to replicate even just a small fraction of their abilities. As stated by Sir Pheelyp , you can't give what you don't have , that is why he emphasized the crucial role of reading for us to get prepared to whatever topic that might be asked in the actual IELTS exam. It is not enough to know all the grammar rules , or even ways on how to structure your paragraphs. What matters most is the content of your essay and how relevant your arguments are based on the given questions.

  • @ecarglaropmet1647
    @ecarglaropmet1647 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    I watched it until the end

  • @Davincsky
    @Davincsky 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Wow!

  • @nefariousnymph4808
    @nefariousnymph4808 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    simply the best!

  • @lynpahang7413
    @lynpahang7413 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Exactly we can't give when don't have..

  • @lynpahang7413
    @lynpahang7413 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I want to get perfect 9.0 that's why I'm here listing you do amazing!

  • @johnremigio9938
    @johnremigio9938 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    The best review center in action. Thank you for sharing this.

  • @dessaoliverio6203
    @dessaoliverio6203 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Passionate Coaches are here! Bravo!

  • @rodessaoliverio1006
    @rodessaoliverio1006 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Speechless! The best review Center!

  • @wandering_gal
    @wandering_gal ปีที่แล้ว

    This is very informative. It can be used not only for IELTS exam but also for making an essay/documents in general. Very helpful. Thank you.

  • @diskartengpusa5807
    @diskartengpusa5807 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I am always wondering how is it like in the ielts actual writing exam. Thank you for this brilliant video. Nobody made like this in youtube. More videos for the actuals in all 4 parts of the ielts. Thank you!

  • @dandansoy9
    @dandansoy9 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    i need to read more... very useful.. thank you for this video

  • @bryansbest
    @bryansbest 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Thanks for this video. It's really help people to get a higher score for the exam

  • @dreadenise7692
    @dreadenise7692 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you for your IELTS writing videos! My results came out three days ago and I went from a band 7 to a band of 8.5 (9 Speaking, 8.5 Reading, 8 Writing, 8.5 Listening) in just two and a half weeks.

  • @dessmaliwat5963
    @dessmaliwat5963 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    one of the best coaches thank you sir for sharing

  • @rodylynroxas5133
    @rodylynroxas5133 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Great! It is a very helpful video.

  • @quinhizon8127
    @quinhizon8127 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Excellent!! Grabe!! Sir I hope you will cover the tips for IELTS READING too. I really have a hard time in that part 😥

    • @mitaplacemacapagal7025
      @mitaplacemacapagal7025 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Meron akong FREE IELTS Reading Masterclass for two hours po, nakapost po sa Fb page ng Nurse Hokage po

    • @trishaisip2396
      @trishaisip2396 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@mitaplacemacapagal7025 Hi po, is it still accessible? 😊

  • @davidduran4356
    @davidduran4356 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Keep it up, 9.0 Niner really supports everyone to learn!

  • @chiaralipaladin5452
    @chiaralipaladin5452 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Amazing!!! Keep it up✌🏻😀🎉

  • @johnpauljosephvillas4149
    @johnpauljosephvillas4149 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Quite impressive. I’m excited for our coaching sesh. 😍

  • @rodessatolentino9048
    @rodessatolentino9048 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Informative and easy to understand! Very nice!

  • @michelgianoliva563
    @michelgianoliva563 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    On the spot Writing, subok na si Sir Brian dyan. 👍

  • @happyheartlalaniichan4797
    @happyheartlalaniichan4797 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great outline and it delivers quick and easy execution in IELTS. I will apply this for my writing and speaking as well. ❤

  • @desstolentino8965
    @desstolentino8965 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you Sir Brian for sharing your expertise!

  • @gabrielmanlapaz8547
    @gabrielmanlapaz8547 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you for this very informative and instructive tutorial! This really helps especially for us students.

  • @marilettethereseescalante9953
    @marilettethereseescalante9953 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Indeed helpful. Thank you Sir

  • @urielsanchez7691
    @urielsanchez7691 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is really a big help especially for students!

  • @mauiwindang8161
    @mauiwindang8161 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Correct me if i'm wrong mam/sir , Is Dr.Aguas still a coach or related to your company?

    • @mauiwindang8161
      @mauiwindang8161 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Dr.Generosa Aguas to be specific sir.

    • @ninerenglish
      @ninerenglish  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      She was a previous coach, but she is no longer connected with 9.0 Niner. :)

  • @crisailaperez5988
    @crisailaperez5988 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is very helpful, thank you!

  • @akosinans9023
    @akosinans9023 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you sir. This would really help a lot.

  • @lainebindolo
    @lainebindolo 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    This was really helpful for me. Got the chance to watch this episode 2 days before my ielts test. Thank you so much! Target score aimed😉

  • @pearlmaemil7367
    @pearlmaemil7367 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Amazing as always. Thank you Sir Brian, Sir Pheelyp and Sir Ervin! ♥️

  • @anthonyperez2235
    @anthonyperez2235 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you Niner!

  • @jjamppong001
    @jjamppong001 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    thank you niner!

  • @johnmiguelfalcon8789
    @johnmiguelfalcon8789 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow! On the spot writting 😱😱

  • @ramilcalderon2286
    @ramilcalderon2286 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Are you selling books fo IELTS? please notice me

  • @amynacua1276
    @amynacua1276 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    "You cannot give what you do not have"
    The Legend Sir Pheelyp Aytona👏👏👏

  • @lalabentaue1195
    @lalabentaue1195 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much, I learned a lot from this,

  • @sheniahmarquez8433
    @sheniahmarquez8433 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Worth to watchhhh💖

  • @kenpaglinawan4697
    @kenpaglinawan4697 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Very helpful!! Thank you niner! ✨💓

  • @olivamiengenelleangelid.2056
    @olivamiengenelleangelid.2056 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is very helpful!🙌

  • @hnnhrie6391
    @hnnhrie6391 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This video is very comprehensive 🤩 thank you, Niner team

  • @nicolehernandez3189
    @nicolehernandez3189 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This would be a big help!

  • @Sam-wf8pf
    @Sam-wf8pf 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is indeed helpful, thank you Sir Erwin, Sir Brian, and Sir Pheelyp 🥰

  • @princeeduardcatindig4039
    @princeeduardcatindig4039 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Worth watching

  • @Riffat_Choudhary
    @Riffat_Choudhary 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Exceptional legends ....Sir i have two requests, first, can you please speak louder while sir Brian & Phlip do editing also kindly ask them to mute their mic or speak slower while you are discussing the writing criteria etc. Secondly, ask Sir Philip to do editing and discuss it too in front us , so we can get better understanding about it ?

  • @kenpaglinawan3157
    @kenpaglinawan3157 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you sir for sharing this! Love it! 💓🥰

  • @joycalagui6597
    @joycalagui6597 4 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    Hi.. I am currently living in Qatar.. And I am interested in doing my IELTS review with 9.0, however, do you accomodate it with your online review? Appreciate your feedback sir.. Thanks and Godbless..

    • @ninerenglish
      @ninerenglish  4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Joy Calagui yes, we do. We have classes from 9am to 9pm every day and even recorded versions of our most important classes accessible through our website or mobile app. :)

    • @joycalagui6597
      @joycalagui6597 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@ninerenglish thank you.. I will check your website.. Godbless..

    • @ninerenglish
      @ninerenglish  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@joycalagui6597 you can check our promos at www.nineronlinereview.com/pages/promos

  • @shaynaheart2093
    @shaynaheart2093 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    galing nman ni sir

  • @kenjalandoni1249
    @kenjalandoni1249 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you for this sir! ☝️✨

  • @ziggypaglinawan7100
    @ziggypaglinawan7100 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Love it!! 💓

  • @septemberlove8753
    @septemberlove8753 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    galing mag organize ng words

  • @rodolfocasano8341
    @rodolfocasano8341 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Philippine Basketball Legend=Robert Jaworski
    IELTS Writing LEGEND = Brian Martin Sioson👏👏👏

  • @OppoMarie
    @OppoMarie ปีที่แล้ว

    hi sir this is so informative. i just have one question, are we not supposed to only include one topic sentence for each body paragraph?

  • @kyuel09
    @kyuel09 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    How can we count the words in the exam? We count manually?

  • @hannaniahmontances8968
    @hannaniahmontances8968 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I want to be this skilled huhu, sana all po 😩

  • @mitaplacemacapagal7025
    @mitaplacemacapagal7025 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    🥰

  • @yanasakunosuke6736
    @yanasakunosuke6736 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    My biggest struggle when it comes to writing is that I can't seem to express my thoughts....like I have some ideas or thoughts that I can't put into words-can't say it or write it down.....it's as if I forgot how to speak or write in english...... I'm assuming it may be because I don't read a lot (lack of knowledge/general info) and I may have a very limited vocabulary...... 😭I will be taking the IELTS soon.....I really need some more tips to pass it....for now I am doing a self-study self-review cause we can't afford to enroll at a learning center...and it's hard for someone who hasn't been to school and is only a GED graduate...... by the way I was homechooled (I never had a teacher or supervisor of my own...which made studying less motivating and challenging... more like boring) I only reached 7th grade then took a GED test....luckily, I passed and got the opportunity to attend a uni and then boom!!!.... I suffered from culture shock and well other things such low self-confidence and well having a feeling that you're the dumbest person in the world.....I don't even know how to do paperworks......I always had to bother my classmates to teach me how to do every little thing and of course my profs didn't care.... (they say that's normal for college students) so yeah....good luck to me.....

    • @royzel165
      @royzel165 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      how was your ielts exAM?

  • @nikkimargaja1168
    @nikkimargaja1168 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    This helps a lot. Thank you.

  • @sandramanalili6645
    @sandramanalili6645 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    is it okay to state your opinion even if it is not being asked? Am I expected to write my opinion if it is an open-ended question?

  • @reylitaedo6926
    @reylitaedo6926 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    perfect writing.. 9 as in niner...

  • @mebellamebella8205
    @mebellamebella8205 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you for the share. How to enroll? Thanks.

    • @ralphgeraldnacua6431
      @ralphgeraldnacua6431 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Payment options are BDO, BPI, Gcash and Paypal. Thanks!

  • @princetoniepaygane7204
    @princetoniepaygane7204 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Amazing! How to be you po sir Brian? 😄

  • @nursesalvee
    @nursesalvee 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    WOW!

  • @charmainecorregidor7608
    @charmainecorregidor7608 ปีที่แล้ว

    How to be like you Sir Bryan

  • @noahguinto6960
    @noahguinto6960 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Its helpful

  • @havadaeedo4090
    @havadaeedo4090 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    how to entroll writing sir?

  • @mirzabeknurullayev2306
    @mirzabeknurullayev2306 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Can you check essays?

  • @yamuupaglinawan7768
    @yamuupaglinawan7768 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wooow!! ✨

  • @kicesxerinepanganiban294
    @kicesxerinepanganiban294 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    3000 views in 3 weeks

  • @josemicheloliva1297
    @josemicheloliva1297 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Learn only from the IELTS experts!

  • @isaacbataan2072
    @isaacbataan2072 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    😲😲😲😲

  • @eriqsworld6096
    @eriqsworld6096 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Correct me please if I am wrong but I think it should be : There are number of factors and not, There are A number of factors? Kindly shed light thanks