It's a cute story but there are rules about doctors dating patients. There have to be a delay between the last treatment and any romantic or intimate relationship. The doctor must sever the professional relationship before dating a patient, and often are expected to wait six months to a year.
Being a writer, I would have added some real mystery. Then the male character would have worked hard to find out what the mystery was. You used the previous meeting at the bar, but maybe something that happened when both were in school, or maybe having met during a trip to expand the story. In my book Norman and Rhodie, two children grew up in a coal mining town in Alabama, and the boy told the girl that someday she would marry him. As the story goes, he went to WWII and she became a dean at UAB. They were in their forties when they met again during a May cemetery cleaning and afternoon meal. Even though they never had children, they lead a rich and happy life.
It still hurts: pain is subjective rather than objective and I try to use a objective scale. 1-2 I have to think “Am I hurting?” 3-4 “Am I hindered from pain?” (No-Yes) 5-6 “Am I thinking about controlling the pain and still hindered?” (No-Yes) 7 “Am I focusing on the pain and only functioning at 85%”? 8 “Am I in ‘War Emergency’ and only functioning at35%?” (Bucking hay on a cracked thigh bone.) 9 can’t control the pain. ( Ankle hurt to the point that I couldn’t endure anything touching my foot.) 10 fighting to stay conscious. (Never been here.)
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It's a cute story but there are rules about doctors dating patients. There have to be a delay between the last treatment and any romantic or intimate relationship. The doctor must sever the professional relationship before dating a patient, and often are expected to wait six months to a year.
People break rules all the time.
I want my 20 minutes back.
Being a writer, I would have added some real mystery. Then the male character would have worked hard to find out what the mystery was. You used the previous meeting at the bar, but maybe something that happened when both were in school, or maybe having met during a trip to expand the story. In my book Norman and Rhodie, two children grew up in a coal mining town in Alabama, and the boy told the girl that someday she would marry him. As the story goes, he went to WWII and she became a dean at UAB. They were in their forties when they met again during a May cemetery cleaning and afternoon meal. Even though they never had children, they lead a rich and happy life.
It still hurts: pain is subjective rather than objective and I try to use a objective scale.
1-2 I have to think “Am I hurting?”
3-4 “Am I hindered from pain?” (No-Yes)
5-6 “Am I thinking about controlling the pain and still hindered?” (No-Yes)
7 “Am I focusing on the pain and only functioning at 85%”?
8 “Am I in ‘War Emergency’ and only functioning at35%?” (Bucking hay on a cracked thigh bone.)
9 can’t control the pain. ( Ankle hurt to the point that I couldn’t endure anything touching my foot.)
10 fighting to stay conscious. (Never been here.)
I was trained to set the scale relative to ths patient's experience: 1 being barely there, to 10 being the worst ever.
Maybe start out being nice to others from start.
omg, this is so slow.... I gave up
Guy has a bit of an attitude towards woman
must be a short person or a tall car if they were grazed around the waist. .
The story is good but the delivery is pathetic.
This is a stupid story